as your req
lol dat face
[general]
*in A r M i N's easy русский Дмитрий YouTube are missing from tags make sure to add them
*all difficulties end at different spots rip
*disable widescreen support since there's no any sb nor video
*from 00:00:244 - to 00:16:244 - you could've mapped this section because of the guitar and of the hihats so this section is mappable to be honest (it applies for all difficulties)
[A r M i N's Easy]
*00:46:244 (3) - in this section you used 2/1 slider + note + 2 1/1 sliders and suddenly you're changing the rhythm structure, when the vocal is exactly stronger like the previous ones to be honest you can split this 2/1 slider into an 1/1 slider and an 1/1 note so you will follow much better the vocal and also you'll keep the consistency throughout the whole section before the song's chorus
*00:59:744 (4) - this should be a hitclap not a hitwhistle since here's a snare
*01:00:244 (1) - it would fit more with the song's final cymbal if you'll move the spinner's end to the 1/1 tick (i mean to 01:01:244 -) also you can add an inherited line there with 5% volume since the song is not really loud there imo
clean diff
[M a r v o l l o's Normal]
*it has the same HP as Easy do so better increase the hp to 4
*better change it to Shmiklak's Normal let's don't make dirty jokes pls
*00:23:244 (3) - missing hitclap on tail
*00:48:244 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - copypasta aaaaa
*01:00:244 (1) - missing hitwhistle plus you can change this note with an 1/2 slider and then add another 1/2 slider but with a reverse arrow like in this picture https://puu.sh/wD1JW/6af32c5e29.jpg i know it sounds a bit off but also you can not add a reverse arrow and add another 1/1 note after the 2nd 1/2 slider if you want
nice one
[Hard]
*00:36:244 (1,2)- maybe space them a bit more? just to look like they have their spacing increased visually speaking since they're supposed to emphasize the stronger vocal // 00:44:244 (1) - same goes here // 00:48:244 (1,2) - and so on
*00:39:744 - here's the a sound which is the vocal and is pretty prominent but you did not add anything here you can add a note here to give emphasis to that vocal instead of ignoring it, even if you wanted to leave a gap between the slider and the next note but not like this ignoring the prominent sound (i mean the vocal)
*00:45:994 - and 00:46:244 - even if you wanted to leave a gap here you can at least to add a note on that 1/2 tick and 1/1 tick to emphasize properly the vocal instead of ignoring it // 00:59:994 - and 01:00:244 - same here
[Charasho]
*00:25:244 (3,4,5) - i don't know why the spacing between (3)- and (4)- is bigger than (4)- and (5)- since there the vocal is more stronger than the first pair to be honest the spacing between (4)- and (5)- should be bigger than (3)- and (4)- in order to emphasis the stronger vocal // 00:27:244 (3,4,5) - same goes here
*00:39:744 - same as I said in Hard
*00:40:244 (1,2,3) - that's literally the same thing as I said for 00:25:244 (3,4,5) - // 00:43:744 (8,9) - and here aaa
*00:43:744 (8,9) - the same thing as I mentioned in Hard
*00:50:744 (4) - I don't think this angle slider would fit here speaking of flow and movement because right after this there's a curved one and it totally breaks the flow so having this a curved slider and placed like this https://puu.sh/wD2zp/8a05759565.jpg would improve the flow to be honest but also be careful at 00:49:744 (5) - there will be an overlap after and better avoid it
*00:54:244 (1,2,3) - that's the only rhythm structure you used for this section, basically for whole diff so why don't change the rhythm into this one as you did before? https://puu.sh/wD2Gg/e686c19879.jpg you'll keep the consistency of rhythm usage of this section (actually of the whole diff imo lol)
*00:59:244 (6,7,8) - i know that the song and the vocal are getting more and more intense but why did you make a screen jump so suddenly? i don't see any logic behind these high jumps even if the song itself is very intense decreasing them a bit would emphasize the song's intensity properly than these screen jumps
that's all for now! though i'm aware of the spread gap between Normal and Hard. The normal uses constant 1/2 and 1/1 while the Hard is pretty dense with 1/2s spam and fulfilled with triplets so that's what makes me worry. in rest everything is good and neat.
gl!
lol dat face
[general]
*in A r M i N's easy русский Дмитрий YouTube are missing from tags make sure to add them
*all difficulties end at different spots rip
*disable widescreen support since there's no any sb nor video
*from 00:00:244 - to 00:16:244 - you could've mapped this section because of the guitar and of the hihats so this section is mappable to be honest (it applies for all difficulties)
[A r M i N's Easy]
*00:46:244 (3) - in this section you used 2/1 slider + note + 2 1/1 sliders and suddenly you're changing the rhythm structure, when the vocal is exactly stronger like the previous ones to be honest you can split this 2/1 slider into an 1/1 slider and an 1/1 note so you will follow much better the vocal and also you'll keep the consistency throughout the whole section before the song's chorus
*00:59:744 (4) - this should be a hitclap not a hitwhistle since here's a snare
*01:00:244 (1) - it would fit more with the song's final cymbal if you'll move the spinner's end to the 1/1 tick (i mean to 01:01:244 -) also you can add an inherited line there with 5% volume since the song is not really loud there imo
clean diff
[M a r v o l l o's Normal]
*it has the same HP as Easy do so better increase the hp to 4
*better change it to Shmiklak's Normal let's don't make dirty jokes pls
*00:23:244 (3) - missing hitclap on tail
*00:48:244 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - copypasta aaaaa
*01:00:244 (1) - missing hitwhistle plus you can change this note with an 1/2 slider and then add another 1/2 slider but with a reverse arrow like in this picture https://puu.sh/wD1JW/6af32c5e29.jpg i know it sounds a bit off but also you can not add a reverse arrow and add another 1/1 note after the 2nd 1/2 slider if you want
nice one
[Hard]
*00:36:244 (1,2)- maybe space them a bit more? just to look like they have their spacing increased visually speaking since they're supposed to emphasize the stronger vocal // 00:44:244 (1) - same goes here // 00:48:244 (1,2) - and so on
*00:39:744 - here's the a sound which is the vocal and is pretty prominent but you did not add anything here you can add a note here to give emphasis to that vocal instead of ignoring it, even if you wanted to leave a gap between the slider and the next note but not like this ignoring the prominent sound (i mean the vocal)
*00:45:994 - and 00:46:244 - even if you wanted to leave a gap here you can at least to add a note on that 1/2 tick and 1/1 tick to emphasize properly the vocal instead of ignoring it // 00:59:994 - and 01:00:244 - same here
[Charasho]
*00:25:244 (3,4,5) - i don't know why the spacing between (3)- and (4)- is bigger than (4)- and (5)- since there the vocal is more stronger than the first pair to be honest the spacing between (4)- and (5)- should be bigger than (3)- and (4)- in order to emphasis the stronger vocal // 00:27:244 (3,4,5) - same goes here
*00:39:744 - same as I said in Hard
*00:40:244 (1,2,3) - that's literally the same thing as I said for 00:25:244 (3,4,5) - // 00:43:744 (8,9) - and here aaa
*00:43:744 (8,9) - the same thing as I mentioned in Hard
*00:50:744 (4) - I don't think this angle slider would fit here speaking of flow and movement because right after this there's a curved one and it totally breaks the flow so having this a curved slider and placed like this https://puu.sh/wD2zp/8a05759565.jpg would improve the flow to be honest but also be careful at 00:49:744 (5) - there will be an overlap after and better avoid it
*00:54:244 (1,2,3) - that's the only rhythm structure you used for this section, basically for whole diff so why don't change the rhythm into this one as you did before? https://puu.sh/wD2Gg/e686c19879.jpg you'll keep the consistency of rhythm usage of this section (actually of the whole diff imo lol)
*00:59:244 (6,7,8) - i know that the song and the vocal are getting more and more intense but why did you make a screen jump so suddenly? i don't see any logic behind these high jumps even if the song itself is very intense decreasing them a bit would emphasize the song's intensity properly than these screen jumps
that's all for now! though i'm aware of the spread gap between Normal and Hard. The normal uses constant 1/2 and 1/1 while the Hard is pretty dense with 1/2s spam and fulfilled with triplets so that's what makes me worry. in rest everything is good and neat.
gl!