Hi 404 AccNotFound, from M4M
Please note that it's only my suggestion, if my modding affect your mapping style, feel free to deny it.
Take a look not serious that much like friendly modding!
Let's see! OwO
[Inner Oni]
00:12:889 (22,24,26,28,30,32,34,40,42,44,46) - How about emphasize the higher pitch by changing these note to
k ?
00:28:936 - Delete, and place
d on 00:28:819 / 00:29:012 instead. we have 1/6 pitch here.
00:33:383 - Add
d , still have a pitch here.
00:33:471 - Shouldn't be
k? , To emphasize the high pitch here.
00:40:971 - Add
d , similar pitch to 00:39:575. To ignore this point, feel weird for me.
00:43:761 - ^
00:55:709 - Add note here might be a good idea , to match 00:56:319 (186,187,188) sounds & pattern.
00:57:017 - Change to
k , to make a difference to 00:57:191 which it's sounds give a suddenly stop sound and this point is deserve to d as you've place. But 00:57:017 have a drag voice. Maybe k will be fitter to this point.
01:02:860 - Add
d , feel like lost some rhythm here.
01:07:308 / 01:07:482 / 01:08:005 / 01:08:180 - Add
d here, in my opinion.
01:10:186 - Add
d , to follow the piano sound.
01:18:122 - Change to
k ?
01:19:343 - ^
01:21:348 - Same as 01:10:186
01:29:982 - Add
k here , notable sound shouldn't be ignored.
01:44:633 / 01:44:982 - Add
d here, this point have a piano pitch , to emphasize the piano pitch here , add d might be a good idea
01:47:424 / 01:47:773 - ^
01:50:564 / 01:50:912 - ^
01:50:040 (526,527,528,529,530,531,532) - if follow my upper instruction, then change this part to
dkdkdkd. It will be fitter due to the pitch.
01:53:354 / 01:53:703 / 01:55:796 / 01:56:145 / 01:58:587 / 01:58:936 - Add
d , same reason
02:08:238 (56,57) - Ctrl+G ,
02:24:052 - ^
02:24:139 / 02:24:226 - Delete , almost no pitch here.
02:24:575 (41,42) - Ctrl+G , maybe fitter to the pitch.
02:30:593 - Change to
d ?
02:30:680 - Change to
K , very strong pitch , K might be fitter.
02:51:523 - Change to
d ?
02:57:017 - How about this? It'll look more fun to play in this part.
03:08:354 until 03:09:226 - Feel weird for me even I understand why do you put note like that and I can't suggest how to change, wait for experience modders to discuss on this point, sorry. ;;w;;
03:20:912 - How about
K ? , strong pitch here.
03:34:866 - Increase slider , let in end on 03:39:052 , the pitch stop here.
03:44:546 - Delete , and add
d on 03:44:517 and 03:44:575 , still 1/6 rhythm here.
04:02:686 (256,257) - Ctrl+G , to emphasize the piano sound on 257th note.
04:09:052 - Add
d here , similar rhythm to 04:09:750
04:15:505 until 04:16:029 - this part should be 1/6 due to the piano pitch. Like this
04:27:628 move to 04:27:820 - to match the rhythm you've place before thus so far.
04:27:889 - Change to
k , to emphasis the pitch here.
04:30:680 - Change to
k , to make difference between 04:30:505 and 04:30:854
04:34:168 / 04:34:866 - Add
d , this pitch is high enough to add a note and for the inner while playing this.
04:46:029 - Shouldn't be
d ? , this point have a low pitch tone.
Wait this map to get ranked!, I love it!
Good luck!