00:05:052 (4,5) - I think you could use a single between these. It just feels a bit empty and I'm not sure why its not mapped currently.
00:34:359 (3,4) - ^
Your hard looks very polished. All your DS is good, NC is good. I'm not sure what more you could really change about it.
00:16:359 (4,5,1) - I'm not quite sure the rule or stacked 1/2 notes. You should find someone to either tell you they are allowed or not because i have been told to avoid stacking notes in normal diffs.
But other than the stacking and overlap (which does make sense how you use it I'm just not sure if you can in normal diffs) It looks good. Follows consistent rhythms again and has good readable NC.
All good here
Ok final comment is that you should find a mod que for a established mapper and get them to take a look. For how few mods you have its actually very polished and could probably get ranked with a few tweaks. Good luck going further. ^^
If you found my mod useful you can mod me back here https://osu.ppy.sh/s/476450 but i understand that I didn't have a whole lot to say.