ONE OK ROCK - 20/20 · forum

-NanoRIPE-

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-06-07T13:11:37+00:00

timemon wrote:
Hi, M4M.

[NaWi's Insane]

why are you ignoring the sound at 00:31:044 - and 00:31:407 - but you mapped 00:31:589 (3) - .
imo you should remove the (3) circle on the white tick and map those 2 red ticks. - im prefer the drum on white tick

00:57:044 (1) - this slider looks a bit weird. why not try wave slider - but like this shape xddddd
01:00:680 (1,2,3,4,1) - this stream looks a bit too shaky and the final note has really sharp angle. should smooth it out a bit -reconsider

[Hard]
00:27:953 (1,2,3,4) - very confusing to read, you have 1/2 stack and 1/1 stack right next to each other. either unstack the 1/2 notes so the only 1/1 gap only stacks here, or simply don't stack the 1/1 and give it enough spacing to differentiate them from 1/2 notes. (or you could just map the red tick as well) - azzz okay2 xd fixed (used advanced's rhythm for this one lol)

Good luck with your mapset.

thanks!

William K

694 posts

Joined January 2013

William K 2017-06-07T15:37:02+00:00

timemon wrote:
Hi, M4M.

[NaWi's Insane]
00:02:317 (2) - shouldn't extend the slider past the white tick which has audible sound imo Nope, I wanted to mark that the music is still calm and I was just following the guitars.
00:40:317 (1) - why sudden NC change? The reason here is more like why I NC-ed 00:46:135 (1,2,1,2) - , cuz it's a consecutive jumps and it's a different emphasis from the others. Currently I'm emphasizing the drums. It's also for aesthetics thingy.

Good luck with your mapset.

Thanks for modding~

Hazu-

3,881 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2017-06-08T00:57:58+00:00

Realazy wrote:
returning m4m, sorry for the delay

[Hazu's Light Insane]

00:16:862 (1) - why NC here? it's pretty much in the same instrumental and vocal phrase as 00:16:317 (1) - SV changes
00:30:317 (4,5) - you could make the spacing smaller here to give more emphasis on 00:29:771 (2,3) - which are both clickable on snares I'll think about it.
00:46:498 (1,2) - would be nice if you could lower the spacing a bit here to not have too much contrast with 00:46:135 (1,2) - Fixed.
00:46:498 (1) - idk if that NC is necessary also since 00:46:135 (1,2,1,2) - basically all sound the same Fixed.

nice DT farm map

good luck!

timemon wrote:
Hi, M4M.

[Hazu's Light Insane]
00:25:044 (1,2) - should be circles imo, 5 sliders in a row is bland and you're following the vocal anyway. I don't want to have too many circles in this part of the song.
00:37:771 (5) - could afford a stack stream here I don't like streams :p
00:43:589 (5) - ^ ^
00:49:407 (5) - ^ same as well, your map has quite a jump, stack streams are not that hard. ^
01:02:680 (5) - NC for the cool final note lol Fixed.

Good luck with your mapset.

Thanks~

:3

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Kyouren

5,583 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2017-06-11T18:58:08+00:00

SB please ;w;

-NanoRIPE-

2,022 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-06-12T00:53:46+00:00

KittyAdventure wrote:
SB please ;w;

Nggk tau buat sb ;w;

Kyouren

5,583 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2017-06-12T05:54:12+00:00

Can I make one? xd

-NanoRIPE-

2,022 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-06-12T08:57:57+00:00

KittyAdventure wrote:
Can I make one? xd

Eh bolehkah? Yeeey \o/

[Nemesis]

[Nemesis] 2017-06-15T17:31:35+00:00

Mod from my queue.

Hazu's Light Insane

No issues! Good job on this one <3

NaWi's Insane

00:03:771 (3,4,5) - I don't like it in terms of readability
00:16:317 (1,2,3,4) - not really a fan of that flow but I guess it's fine
00:43:589 (1,2,3,4,1) - how about a curved stream instead? it would flow a bit better
00:57:044 (1) - haven't seen that slider shape in a long time lol
01:01:044 (1) - reattach that slider to the stream pls

Akitoshi's Insane

00:44:498 (4) - curved slider would fit in better
00:48:135 (1) - this feels out of place, a shape that has never occured before, I'd just use the standard straight slider bent at the end, like this one 00:36:498 (1) -

that's all from me, good luck!

William K

694 posts

Joined January 2013

William K 2017-06-15T19:26:58+00:00

[Nemesis] wrote:
Mod from my queue.

NaWi's Insane

00:03:771 (3,4,5) - I don't like it in terms of readability I like it, it's pretty challenging in terms of readability.
00:16:317 (1,2,3,4) - not really a fan of that flow but I guess it's fine I like how it flows though, it's more like a circle flow.
00:43:589 (1,2,3,4,1) - how about a curved stream instead? it would flow a bit better I want some variation from 00:37:771 (1,2,3,4,1) - so it's not just like all curved. Will look for more opinions though.

that's all from me, good luck!

Thanks for the mod~

-NanoRIPE-

2,022 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-06-16T06:19:11+00:00

[Nemesis] wrote:
Mod from my queue.

NaWi's Insane

00:57:044 (1) - haven't seen that slider shape in a long time lol - but its nice isnt?
01:01:044 (1) - reattach that slider to the stream pls - for guitar,so keep

that's all from me, good luck!

thanks for looking!

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-06-17T07:43:15+00:00

[Nemesis] wrote:
Akitoshi's Insane

00:44:498 (4) - curved slider would fit in better ruins the parallel things on 00:45:226 (1) -
00:48:135 (1) - this feels out of place, a shape that has never occured before, I'd just use the standard straight slider bent at the end, like this one 00:36:498 (1) - high pitch vocals suits with the slidershape and also it's not that out of place as I'm putting various kind of sliders anyway w

thanks for looking~

Kawashiro

1,522 posts

Joined April 2012

Kawashiro 2017-06-17T14:36:09+00:00

from my q

Advanced

00:04:680 (1,2) - I just wonder why you skipped this part. this part has nothing difference as 00:01:771 (1,2,3) - here. I think you should make them same for keep consistancy. Because this diff is for noobs. consistancy affect difficulty to noobs very much.
00:39:953 (2,3,4,5) - ^ 00:51:589 (2,1,2,3,4) -

Hard

00:25:953 (4) - make this 1/2 and put circle in 00:26:317 - here will make better beat. because you skipped 00:26:135 - this sound.
00:19:771 (2,3) - Make them two 1/2 slider? same as above reason
00:37:771 (5,1) - How about make different beat? it skipped vocal. To follow vocal, you should put clickable object in 00:37:953 - here.
00:43:589 (5,1) - ^, 00:43:771 -
00:49:407 (5,1) - ^, 00:49:589 -

Hazu

00:37:771 (5,1) - Same as hard, you skipped vocal. To follow vocal, you should put clickable object in 00:37:953 - here.
00:43:589 (5,1) - ^, 00:43:771 -
00:49:407 (5,1) - ^, 00:49:589 -

Akitoshi

00:40:680 (6,7) - I think there is no reason to reduce DS. move 7 to 136 280 or make them to 1/2 slider like 00:51:589 (2,3,4,5,6) - 6 in here

GL

Venix

Global Moderator

1,927 posts

Joined February 2015

Venix 2017-06-18T15:53:09+00:00

Hard

00:02:498 - I think you shouldn't ignore this rythm, because it's very important in music
00:09:044 (1,2) - Don't you think this flow is a bit uncomfortable? mby try it? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8377447
00:16:317 (1,4) - You should fix this stack. Btw I think 00:16:862 (4) - this shape stacked with 00:16:317 (1) - and 00:15:771 (4) - is a bit uncomfortable on hard. I think you shouldn't 00:16:317 (1,4) - stack it and try another option with better readability.
00:25:771 (3) - I think spacing before and after this circle should be bigger to emphasise downbeat a bit more.
00:26:135 - You should make this rythm clickable, because this downbeat is very important in music.
00:40:862 (4,1) - You should use here higher spacing to keep logic in 00:40:317 (1,2,3,4,1) - this pattern.
00:45:407 (6,1) - But here spacing should be smaller, because it's not important beat here.
00:50:317 (2,3,4) - Don't you think this pattern is too hard for hard difficulty? Mby try it instead? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8377537
00:52:498 (4,1) - Spacing here is too small. You should make it migger, because you've kind of the strongest rythm in song here.

gl!

DeletedUser_2179411

DeletedUser_2179411 2017-06-20T13:23:49+00:00

This map need a Star from me

Really well mapped ..

Feb

1,027 posts

Joined June 2014

Feb 2017-06-22T19:12:04+00:00

hi there

are you pulling an habi here? >:

not too much wrong here, well not even possible as the map is so short.
let's see

gen
00:32:317 (1,2,3,4) - these are unsnapped in hazus difficulty.
can you use a different combo colour for 1 and 3? both blend to much with the background. They are sometimes really hard to see especially with custom skins.
no clue why you use a whistle sound like soft-hitwhistle for streams such as 00:37:862 (6) - when whistles are mainly used for vocals. After all the whole stream in this example has snares in it.
mind moving the preview point a bit away from the instant drum sound at 00:35:226 - ? This way it makes it more pleasant to switch to while playing.

aki
Honestly not bad diff, but my main issue is that I can't see a difference in spacing when it comes to chorus and the build up. They all are spaced quite evenly and most importantly look like same spacing overall.

00:43:407 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - make the direct flow as 00:37:589 (4,5,6,7,8) - ? same thing with other part right after.
00:44:317 (3,4) - you sure you want to go with that? The uncomfortable rhythm here doesn't quite fit with the style of your map at all. Mostly your flow is pretty comfortable to play and this just was out of place for me in the overall design.
00:46:498 (1) - nc here? The only time you have such back and forth jumps in the map and it could make the reading here a bit easier.
00:55:589 (1) - After a jump pattern where the movement pushes away the slider like 00:53:771 (7,1) - here i expected something similiar here since you start off this section also with a single circle.
00:56:317 (5) - I think you can certainly make this stream a bit more interesting no? After 00:56:680 (9) - the drumroll gets alot more quiet. How about starting the spacing of with a bit more and turn it into less spacing?

ya ok.

nawi

holyshit this felt much harder than akis diff uh well
00:04:498 (6) - you use those overmaps to emphasize the guitar and thats cool and all, but can you map them more consistently like 00:09:953 (4) - here? Since its just a repeat of 00:00:317 (1) - this one
This means 00:11:862 - needs to be deleted as theres not a similar guitar sound, also it doesn't quite fit as you skip the actual drums on 00:11:498 - for non existent sounds.
00:39:407 (1) - It would make more sense to start of the slider at the red tick like I highlighted since the vocal does indeed change at the white tick, but the it starts of earlier. Something like an reverse slider would fit here as well, but yeah a standard slider makes the same amount of sense.
00:46:498 (1,2) - these jumps are bit to large imo and even harder than the spike in akis diff which is the hardest diff in the set.

hazu

00:04:589 (5) - makes sense to delete the note here as you don't map it at 00:10:317 - when the same sound occurs. Instead you focused on the vocal here which is fine, but it makes it a bit inconsistent with what you've done before. Would happen 00:16:226 - here again btw.
00:17:771 - you are not allowed to silence sliderends if theres a distinctive sound to it and in this case it happens to be the case.
00:31:589 (3,4) - should be swapped as the snare is on the red tick here and up until now you've mapped the heads after snares.
00:39:044 (3,4) - same thing with those, in this case the snare does land here, but in the chorus you mainly focus on vocals such as 00:41:771 (3,4) - and 00:44:680 (3,4) - so it makes sense to map them here alike.
00:41:953 (4) - can you ctrl+h this? the shape indicates movement onto the right side, but .. uh well ya there's nothing on the right side only sadness and darkness, and also it would make movement to 00:42:317 (1) - clearer.

hard

00:16:317 (1) - stack, upload and its unstacked again. Well stack.
00:31:771 - the nc here is abit misleading as the sound in music changes already at 00:31:589 (3) - so it makes sense to have a 1-2 1-2 or 1-2-3-4 ncing here. With the strong snares being on 00:31:771 - 00:32:135 (3) - . Also maybe give the snares more emphasize here than red ticks? Especially 00:31:771 (1,2) - between these.
00:45:226 - rhythm here is a bit messy in this section. 00:45:226 - This sound should be more emphasized than others. This is not the case so stuff like 00:45:953 - being not emphasized is abit werid, even tho they are really strong. Go for something simple like https://puu.sh/wrAmN/aab3a95c20.png
You also could use an two circles 00:45:771 - here instead to emphasize 00:45:953 - as well, but that might be a bit too over the top for hard difficulty.
00:51:044 (4) - should be ncd, as consistenty wants it.

advanced

honestly its ok diff, but im a bit concerned about the passive mapping you choose at the end for 00:59:771 (1,4) - The strong sounds being emphasized also on slidertails which are not clickable but weak sounds like 01:00:317 (2) - being clickable instead.
Not sure this is advicable in lower difficulties as there should be used the simplest rhythm possible.

00:05:771 (2,1) - can you differenciate those two? plays a bit wanky since they are not the same sounds as 00:05:771 (2) - after this follows nothing, but 00:06:135 (1) - after this there are indeed sounds on red ticks. Of course you want to stay consistent here, but how about doing an 1/2 slider at 00:06:135 - instead? This way you don't lose consistency and it plays abit more pleasant.
00:11:953 (1) - would mean here too.
00:57:044 (1) - slider looks abit weird at the end with HR, maybe fix the end abit.

Good Luck

lit120

3,254 posts

Joined August 2013

lit120 2017-06-23T09:42:12+00:00

[akitoshi]

00:17:953 (1) - finish

[NaWi]

00:13:771 (5) - fix ur triangle from 00:13:044 (2,3,4) - by setting it to 71|281
00:16:317 (1,2,3,4) - is this a square pattern? if yes, i find it not rly that square pattern tbh. u could adjust it by copy paste from 00:16:317 (1,2) - , rotate 90 degrees in selection centre. that should be it
00:32:317 (4) - should be on 464|249 to make a neat zig zag from 00:31:771 (1,2) -
01:00:498 - add a note?

[Hazu]

00:32:317 - fix ur slider speed
01:00:498 - add a note?

[h]

00:16:317 (1,4) - stack ny hancur .-.
00:27:044 (2) - remove clap dri tail ny. sharusny clap tu dri 00:27:407 (3) - reverse tu
00:58:498 (1,2) - kok ini beda dri 00:59:771 (1,2) - dan 01:01:407 (1,2) - ? kek merasa agak gak konsisten gitu .-.

[adv]

00:26:135 (3) - clap

[n]

00:26:135 (2) - clap

gl

William K

694 posts

Joined January 2013

William K 2017-06-23T11:10:41+00:00

Feb wrote:
hi there

are you pulling an habi here? >:

not too much wrong here, well not even possible as the map is so short.
let's see

nawi

holyshit this felt much harder than akis diff uh well
00:04:498 (6) - you use those overmaps to emphasize the guitar and thats cool and all, but can you map them more consistently like 00:09:953 (4) - here? Since its just a repeat of 00:00:317 (1) - this one
This means 00:11:862 - needs to be deleted as theres not a similar guitar sound, also it doesn't quite fit as you skip the actual drums on 00:11:498 - for non existent sounds. Actually, 00:04:498 (6) - isn't really an overmap as there's a sound there. As for 00:09:953 (4) - , I follow the vocals and emphasize them so I didn't map 00:09:862 - and the sound's covered by the clap before too, so the sound's pretty unclear while playing. About 00:11:862 (4) - I decided to map it because the vocal's already ended. At first, I mapped 00:11:498 - too, but after discussing with NanoRipe I decided to emphasize the vocals more.
00:39:407 (1) - It would make more sense to start of the slider at the red tick like I highlighted since the vocal does indeed change at the white tick, but the it starts of earlier. Something like an reverse slider would fit here as well, but yeah a standard slider makes the same amount of sense. Alright, I fixed this with a reversed slider instead.
00:46:498 (1,2) - these jumps are bit to large imo and even harder than the spike in akis diff which is the hardest diff in the set. Lowered it a bit.

Good Luck

Thanks for the mod~

lit120 wrote:
[NaWi]
00:13:771 (5) - fix ur triangle from 00:13:044 (2,3,4) - by setting it to 71|281 Fixed.
00:16:317 (1,2,3,4) - is this a square pattern? if yes, i find it not rly that square pattern tbh. u could adjust it by copy paste from 00:16:317 (1,2) - , rotate 90 degrees in selection centre. that should be it It's a square actually, I made it with CTRL-Shift-D
gl

Thanks for modding~

Here~

osu file format v14

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Kaifin

745 posts

Joined April 2013

Kaifin 2017-06-23T22:28:51+00:00

Easy

00:03:226 (1,2) - not parallel
00:04:680 (2,1) - this is also not parallel, fix at the same time
SPOILER
00:30:135 (2,3,4) - can you make the DS between these objects even? it looks super off since it's patterned like it should be an even distance
00:35:226 (1,2) - can you move 1 down a touch for readability sake? that way the pattern is 100% clear where the play is supposed to click/how the flow is, just a small adjustment like this
SPOILER

Normal

00:10:498 (1,2,1) - stacks like this are really confusing to new players, as you stay stacked but change the rhythm, pick a rhythm you use for stacks and stick with it don't mix it up especially not like this
the number of different rhythms you use with stacks in the intro is unreadably high for new players, i'd recommend reworking the stacks
this diff in general looks a lot less clean than the Easy, maybe it's the stacks but a lot of it is just unclean overlaps when compared to the very organized first diff

Advanced

similar complaint to the normal with the usage of stacks
00:20:317 (2,1) - do you map with stack view on? you should, stacks ruin blankets like this and make the patterns look really funny and bad
comb through the map for these stacked patterns if you didn't use stack view before, there is quite a few of them
this diff is a lot better than the normal though

Hard

00:16:862 (4) - wow neat!
00:25:953 (4,5,6) - this is kind of awkward/hard to read for a hard difficulty, why not just space them like this for much easier/clearer readability
SPOILER
00:30:135 (3,4) - can you make this note go straight out from the slider? it looks really off rn

your other diffs seem fine! good luck

-NanoRIPE-

2,022 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-06-26T08:04:04+00:00

UnLock- wrote:
from my q

Advanced
00:04:680 (1,2) - I just wonder why you skipped this part. this part has nothing difference as 00:01:771 (1,2,3) - here. I think you should make them same for keep consistancy. Because this diff is for noobs. consistancy affect difficulty to noobs very much. - cuz the guitar sound looks more dense at 00:01:771 (1,2,3) - than at 00:04:680 (1,2) - and also for break too
00:39:953 (2,3,4,5) - ^ 00:51:589 (2,1,2,3,4) - ^

Hard
00:25:953 (4) - make this 1/2 and put circle in 00:26:317 - here will make better beat. because you skipped 00:26:135 - this sound. - im prefer vocal here than the drum
00:19:771 (2,3) - Make them two 1/2 slider? same as above reason - ^
00:37:771 (5,1) - How about make different beat? it skipped vocal. To follow vocal, you should put clickable object in 00:37:953 - here.
00:43:589 (5,1) - ^, 00:43:771 -
00:49:407 (5,1) - ^, 00:49:589 - ^ all three above same as first point

GL

Venix wrote:
Hard
00:02:498 - I think you shouldn't ignore this rythm, because it's very important in music - hmm im prefer the guitar than the clap
00:09:044 (1,2) - Don't you think this flow is a bit uncomfortable? mby try it? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8377447 - i dont think so xd
00:16:317 (1,4) - You should fix this stack. Btw I think 00:16:862 (4) - this shape stacked with 00:16:317 (1) - and 00:15:771 (4) - is a bit uncomfortable on hard. I think you shouldn't 00:16:317 (1,4) - stack it and try another option with better readability. - just fixed the stack issues cuz the current shape looks cool imo
00:25:771 (3) - I think spacing before and after this circle should be bigger to emphasise downbeat a bit more. - but im aiready put a jump on slider (2) so yeah
00:26:135 - You should make this rythm clickable, because this downbeat is very important in music. - prefer the vocal
00:40:862 (4,1) - You should use here higher spacing to keep logic in 00:40:317 (1,2,3,4,1) - this pattern.
00:45:407 (6,1) - But here spacing should be smaller, because it's not important beat here.
00:50:317 (2,3,4) - Don't you think this pattern is too hard for hard difficulty? Mby try it instead? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8377537 - fixed with another pattern
00:52:498 (4,1) - Spacing here is too small. You should make it migger, because you've kind of the strongest rythm in song here. - hmm reconsider
gl!

lit120 wrote:
[*]01:00:498 - add a note? - nggk ada apa2 disitu,jadi ngapain naruh note?[/list]

[h]
00:16:317 (1,4) - stack ny hancur .-.
00:27:044 (2) - remove clap dri tail ny. sharusny clap tu dri 00:27:407 (3) - reverse tu
00:58:498 (1,2) - kok ini beda dri 00:59:771 (1,2) - dan 01:01:407 (1,2) - ? kek merasa agak gak konsisten gitu .- - biar variasi gitu,dan juga selagi rhtyhmnya masuk di musik nggk apa2 kan?
[adv]
00:26:135 (3) - clap
[n]
00:26:135 (2) - clap
gl

Kaifin wrote:
Easy
00:03:226 (1,2) - not parallel
00:04:680 (2,1) - this is also not parallel, fix at the same time
SPOILER
00:30:135 (2,3,4) - can you make the DS between these objects even? it looks super off since it's patterned like it should be an even distance
00:35:226 (1,2) - can you move 1 down a touch for readability sake? that way the pattern is 100% clear where the play is supposed to click/how the flow is, just a small adjustment like this
SPOILER

Normal
00:10:498 (1,2,1) - stacks like this are really confusing to new players, as you stay stacked but change the rhythm, pick a rhythm you use for stacks and stick with it don't mix it up especially not like this - i dont have no choice cuz i want to make a break here (the rhythm on intro is really dense af and i can't make the rhythm more simplier)
the number of different rhythms you use with stacks in the intro is unreadably high for new players, i'd recommend reworking the stacks
this diff in general looks a lot less clean than the Easy, maybe it's the stacks but a lot of it is just unclean overlaps when compared to the very organized first diff

Advanced
similar complaint to the normal with the usage of stacks
00:20:317 (2,1) - do you map with stack view on? you should, stacks ruin blankets like this and make the patterns look really funny and bad
comb through the map for these stacked patterns if you didn't use stack view before, there is quite a few of them
this diff is a lot better than the normal though

Hard
00:16:862 (4) - wow neat!
00:25:953 (4,5,6) - this is kind of awkward/hard to read for a hard difficulty, why not just space them like this for much easier/clearer readability - reconsider
SPOILER
00:30:135 (3,4) - can you make this note go straight out from the slider? it looks really off rn

about the stack stuff i will consider since im quite agreed with your argument but i wouldnt remap normal diff xd (it looks neat for me)
i will fix when someone pointing those out again ~

your other diffs seem fine! good luck

Feb wrote:
hi there

are you pulling an habi here? >:

not too much wrong here, well not even possible as the map is so short.
let's see

gen
00:32:317 (1,2,3,4) - these are unsnapped in hazus difficulty.
can you use a different combo colour for 1 and 3? both blend to much with the background. They are sometimes really hard to see especially with custom skins. - meh,the combo colours really fit with the background music so keep
no clue why you use a whistle sound like soft-hitwhistle for streams such as 00:37:862 (6) - when whistles are mainly used for vocals. After all the whole stream in this example has snares in it. - for guitar
mind moving the preview point a bit away from the instant drum sound at 00:35:226 - ? This way it makes it more pleasant to switch to while playing. - reconsidering

hard

00:16:317 (1) - stack, upload and its unstacked again. Well stack.
00:31:771 - the nc here is abit misleading as the sound in music changes already at 00:31:589 (3) - so it makes sense to have a 1-2 1-2 or 1-2-3-4 ncing here. With the strong snares being on 00:31:771 - 00:32:135 (3) - . Also maybe give the snares more emphasize here than red ticks? Especially 00:31:771 (1,2) - between these. -
00:45:226 - rhythm here is a bit messy in this section. 00:45:226 - This sound should be more emphasized than others. This is not the case so stuff like 00:45:953 - being not emphasized is abit werid, even tho they are really strong. Go for something simple like https://puu.sh/wrAmN/aab3a95c20.png
You also could use an two circles 00:45:771 - here instead to emphasize 00:45:953 - as well, but that might be a bit too over the top for hard difficulty.
00:51:044 (4) - should be ncd, as consistenty wants it.

advanced

honestly its ok diff, but im a bit concerned about the passive mapping you choose at the end for 00:59:771 (1,4) - The strong sounds being emphasized also on slidertails which are not clickable but weak sounds like 01:00:317 (2) - being clickable instead. - yeah,some modders said the same thing as you but i have to keep it cuz the current rhythm looks fits with the music imo
Not sure this is advicable in lower difficulties as there should be used the simplest rhythm possible.

00:05:771 (2,1) - can you differenciate those two? plays a bit wanky since they are not the same sounds as 00:05:771 (2) - after this follows nothing, but 00:06:135 (1) - after this there are indeed sounds on red ticks. Of course you want to stay consistent here, but how about doing an 1/2 slider at 00:06:135 - instead? This way you don't lose consistency and it plays abit more pleasant.
00:11:953 (1) - would mean here too.
00:57:044 (1) - slider looks abit weird at the end with HR, maybe fix the end abit.

Good Luck

no reply = fixed
BIG THANKS FOR YOUR MOD GUYS!!!!!
REALLY HELPFUL XD!!!!!

Last edited by -NanoRIPE- 2017-06-28T03:54:16+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-06-26T11:50:23+00:00

UnLock- wrote:
Akitoshi
00:40:680 (6,7) - I think there is no reason to reduce DS. move 7 to 136 280 or make them to 1/2 slider like 00:51:589 (2,3,4,5,6) - 6 in here

GL

Feb wrote:
aki
Honestly not bad diff, but my main issue is that I can't see a difference in spacing when it comes to chorus and the build up. They all are spaced quite evenly and most importantly look like same spacing overall.

00:43:407 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - make the direct flow as 00:37:589 (4,5,6,7,8) - ? same thing with other part right after.
00:44:317 (3,4) - you sure you want to go with that? The uncomfortable rhythm here doesn't quite fit with the style of your map at all. Mostly your flow is pretty comfortable to play and this just was out of place for me in the overall design.
00:46:498 (1) - nc here? The only time you have such back and forth jumps in the map and it could make the reading here a bit easier.
00:55:589 (1) - After a jump pattern where the movement pushes away the slider like 00:53:771 (7,1) - here i expected something similiar here since you start off this section also with a single circle. instrument pattern going to be different here so why not circles as well (and also variation for choking ppl)
00:56:317 (5) - I think you can certainly make this stream a bit more interesting no? After 00:56:680 (9) - the drumroll gets alot more quiet. How about starting the spacing of with a bit more and turn it into less spacing?

ya ok.

lit120 wrote:
[akitoshi]
00:17:953 (1) - finish

no reply means fixed, thanks!

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Yamicchi

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Yamicchi 2017-07-03T08:52:47+00:00

Hi o/
[Hard]
• 00:01:226 (4,5) - these should be 1/1 slider, you might not wanna overmapped this pattern like that
• 00:07:589 (1) - Stack lol
• 00:08:317 (3,2) - This stack looks bad for DT tho, tried with DT and it's not pretty comfortable
• 00:16:317 (1,3) - Ctrl+g these might create a better flow
• 00:22:498 (2) - Why did you skip a beat in between tho? Should be a circle + 1/2 slider
• 00:23:771 (1) - Again stacking is not a good idea as it can make people misreading. How about putting it at X331 Y116?
• 00:29:771 (2) - Should increase the spacing a bit, as you did the same for 00:30:862 (1,2) - 00:31:771 (2,4) - ?
• 00:33:771 (1) - imo ending it on 00:34:862 - sounds a lot better
• 01:02:862 (1) - Actually this spinner ends on 01:04:256 - which is 1/6, if you listen to it carefully. If it makes sense to you, do apply to all diffs.
[Hazu]
• 00:02:317 (2,3) - As you're mainly following the guitar, I believe ctrl + g this is a better option, as it remains showing the clap but also making guitars clickable tho.
• 00:36:135 (4) - Spacing towards (1) is a little too big comparing to other patterns you made afterward, try to reduce it a bit maybe
• 01:00:135 (2) - there's a sound on 01:00:498 - anyway, so why not a reverse slider?
[NaWi]
• 00:00:498 (2,4) - imo making these slider the same shape instead of 00:01:226 (4,2) - is better, as the 2 first sliders represent the same sound
• 00:16:953 (1) - Even for an Insane I wouldn't recommend such short spinner tho. A slider can be replaced here
• 00:57:044 (1) - awh I would prefer something more fancy instead :c
• 01:00:135 (2,1) - distance is kinda confusing. Try to put the stream somewhere else?

My mouse broke down again, might have to use Tab + Enter to send this :'( sorry for the inconvenient and good luck, love the song so much :3

-NanoRIPE-

2,022 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-07-03T10:22:46+00:00

Yamicchi wrote:
Hi o/
[Hard]
• 00:01:226 (4,5) - these should be 1/1 slider, you might not wanna overmapped this pattern like that
• 00:07:589 (1) - Stack lol
• 00:08:317 (3,2) - This stack looks bad for DT tho, tried with DT and it's not pretty comfortable
• 00:16:317 (1,3) - Ctrl+g these might create a better flow - meh its more makes the pattern unreadable
• 00:22:498 (2) - Why did you skip a beat in between tho? Should be a circle + 1/2 slider - i want to focusing the drum at 00:23:044 (3,4,5) -
• 00:23:771 (1) - Again stacking is not a good idea as it can make people misreading. How about putting it at X331 Y116? - theres a space between (5,1) - so i think its still readable imo
• 00:29:771 (2) - Should increase the spacing a bit, as you did the same for 00:30:862 (1,2) - 00:31:771 (2,4) - ? - reconsider
• 00:33:771 (1) - imo ending it on 00:34:862 - sounds a lot better - ^
• 01:02:862 (1) - Actually this spinner ends on 01:04:256 - which is 1/6, if you listen to it carefully. If it makes sense to you, do apply to all diffs.

[NaWi]
• 00:00:498 (2,4) - imo making these slider the same shape instead of 00:01:226 (4,2) - is better, as the 2 first sliders represent the same sound
• 00:16:953 (1) - Even for an Insane I wouldn't recommend such short spinner tho. A slider can be replaced here - i will ask william about this
• 00:57:044 (1) - awh I would prefer something more fancy instead :c - i hate slider art :<
• 01:00:135 (2,1) - distance is kinda confusing. Try to put the stream somewhere else? - reconsider

My mouse broke down again, might have to use Tab + Enter to send this :'( sorry for the inconvenient and good luck, love the song so much :3

thanks yamicchi!
no reply = fixed

edited :
hey aki if you dont mind
may i change your diff name to Akitoshi's Truth?

William K

694 posts

Joined January 2013

William K 2017-07-03T12:50:27+00:00

Yamicchi wrote:
Hi o/
[NaWi]
• 00:00:498 (2,4) - imo making these slider the same shape instead of 00:01:226 (4,2) - is better, as the 2 first sliders represent the same sound Right, Fixed.
• 00:16:953 (1) - Even for an Insane I wouldn't recommend such short spinner tho. A slider can be replaced here Alright, I made a slider.

My mouse broke down again, might have to use Tab + Enter to send this :'( sorry for the inconvenient and good luck, love the song so much :3

Here~

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Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-07-03T17:42:46+00:00

@Nano oh yeah sure

Hazu-

3,881 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2017-07-03T17:46:18+00:00

UnLock- wrote:
from my q

Hazu
00:37:771 (5,1) - Same as hard, you skipped vocal. To follow vocal, you should put clickable object in 00:37:953 - here. In the kiai I don't follow the vocals, for example, 00:36:317 - isn't clickable.
00:43:589 (5,1) - ^, 00:43:771 - ^
00:49:407 (5,1) - ^, 00:49:589 - ^

GL

Feb wrote:
hi there

are you pulling an habi here? >:

not too much wrong here, well not even possible as the map is so short.
let's see

gen
00:32:317 (1,2,3,4) - these are unsnapped in hazus difficulty. xd
can you use a different combo colour for 1 and 3? both blend to much with the background. They are sometimes really hard to see especially with custom skins.
no clue why you use a whistle sound like soft-hitwhistle for streams such as 00:37:862 (6) - when whistles are mainly used for vocals. After all the whole stream in this example has snares in it.
mind moving the preview point a bit away from the instant drum sound at 00:35:226 - ? This way it makes it more pleasant to switch to while playing.

hazu

00:04:589 (5) - makes sense to delete the note here as you don't map it at 00:10:317 - when the same sound occurs. Instead you focused on the vocal here which is fine, but it makes it a bit inconsistent with what you've done before. Would happen 00:16:226 - here again btw. Mmm... from 00:00:317 (1) - to 00:06:135 (1) - I follow the guitar, and from 00:06:135 (1) - to 00:29:226 (1) - I follow the vocals.
00:17:771 - you are not allowed to silence sliderends if theres a distinctive sound to it and in this case it happens to be the case.
00:31:589 (3,4) - should be swapped as the snare is on the red tick here and up until now you've mapped the heads after snares. Yeah fixed.
00:39:044 (3,4) - same thing with those, in this case the snare does land here, but in the chorus you mainly focus on vocals such as 00:41:771 (3,4) - and 00:44:680 (3,4) - so it makes sense to map them here alike. Yeah but in the kiai I don't follow the vocals.
00:41:953 (4) - can you ctrl+h this? the shape indicates movement onto the right side, but .. uh well ya there's nothing on the right side only sadness and darkness, and also it would make movement to 00:42:317 (1) - clearer. Fixed.

Good Luck

lit120 wrote:
[Hazu]
00:32:317 - fix ur slider speed xd
01:00:498 - add a note? Not necessary, I don't hear anything here.
gl

Yamicchi wrote:
Hi o/
[Hazu]
• 00:02:317 (2,3) - As you're mainly following the guitar, I believe ctrl + g this is a better option, as it remains showing the clap but also making guitars clickable tho. Yes, fixed.
• 00:36:135 (4) - Spacing towards (1) is a little too big comparing to other patterns you made afterward, try to reduce it a bit maybe I'll consider this
• 01:00:135 (2) - there's a sound on 01:00:498 - anyway, so why not a reverse slider? lit120's mod

My mouse broke down again, might have to use Tab + Enter to send this :'( sorry for the inconvenient and good luck, love the song so much :3

Thankkkkkkks
Edit:
@Nano add my name in tags please~

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0109-

337 posts

Joined June 2013

0109- 2017-07-07T09:24:27+00:00

m4m back

if you don't satisfied with the mod, you can ask me for ticket for the next map lol, this map already got pages of mod lol

Normal

00:05:771 (2) - this is so easy to misread that we have to skip lots of guitar sounds and wait for a random note to click. Remove NC 00:04:680 (1) - , add NC here 00:05:771 (2) - instead would be much better. I also can't see why you put NC at that (1), i feel that (1) really connected to the previous part in a musically way. You can also NC 00:06:135 (3) - instead would fit the music more.
00:53:226 (2,3) - the rhythm is getting so confused. You mainly followed the drum sounds along the map but you suddenly emphasized the vocal here which makes the map feels so awkward. I would recommend to place 1/1 slider here 00:53:226 (2) - instead and place a note 00:53:771 - would emphasize the drum better. As well as 00:54:680 (2,3) -

Advanced
00:18:135 (2) - i don't think that this stack is cool. The music started going intense and this (2) still connect to the previous calm slider doesn't look so nice. Furthermore, back and forth pattern usually express sounds that are similar with each others, but 00:16:862 (1,2) - sound so different. Placing (2) stack with
00:19:407 (4) - and change the shape a bit in order not to overlap with (3) would looks better.
00:46:862 (1,2) - this inconsistent is so noticeable. Players would easy misclick the (2) since there is 00:35:771 (2) - at the previous part. They would expect the same thing goes to current pattern. So I would suggest to put something here 00:47:407 -

Hard
00:36:498 (1) - the music sounds way more intense than how the note was placed. Increasing the spacing is cool but how about place that (1) like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8530054 would feel really great.

Hazu
00:17:953 (2) - i can't see why you have to stack this, probably you want to emphasize 00:18:135 (1) - better but this (2) also does a sound as intense as that (1). How about moving it out of that long slider?

NaWi
00:39:407 (6) - why reverse slider? the vocal seems not repeat the pitch as reverse sliders usually expressed. And make jumps after a reverse slider doesn't look nice. How about replacing with a note and a 1/2 slider? Those would reflect the vocal better like 00:39:589 - you can here the pitch raised a bit, furthermore, it would connect to the jumps better.
00:40:317 (1) - mysterious new combo, no need to explain, i can't see any different here lol xdd. Or you just nc 00:40:680 (3) - to consistent with 00:52:317 (1) -

others play nice
my engrish shit hah

William K

694 posts

Joined January 2013

William K 2017-07-07T11:16:50+00:00

0109- wrote:
m4m back
00:40:317 (1) - mysterious new combo, no need to explain, i can't see any different here lol xdd. Or you just nc 00:40:680 (3) - to consistent with 00:52:317 (1) - Alright, fixed.
others play nice
my engrish shit hah

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@NanoRipe, how about adding "Twenty" to tags, it's easier for me to type.

-NanoRIPE-

2,022 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-07-07T11:28:54+00:00

0109- wrote:
m4m back

if you don't satisfied with the mod, you can ask me for ticket for the next map lol, this map already got pages of mod lol
Normal
00:05:771 (2) - this is so easy to misread that we have to skip lots of guitar sounds and wait for a random note to click. Remove NC 00:04:680 (1) - , add NC here 00:05:771 (2) - instead would be much better. I also can't see why you put NC at that (1), i feel that (1) really connected to the previous part in a musically way. You can also NC 00:06:135 (3) - instead would fit the music more.
00:53:226 (2,3) - the rhythm is getting so confused. You mainly followed the drum sounds along the map but you suddenly emphasized the vocal here which makes the map feels so awkward. I would recommend to place 1/1 slider here 00:53:226 (2) - instead and place a note 00:53:771 - would emphasize the drum better. As well as 00:54:680 (2,3) -

Advanced
00:18:135 (2) - i don't think that this stack is cool. The music started going intense and this (2) still connect to the previous calm slider doesn't look so nice. Furthermore, back and forth pattern usually express sounds that are similar with each others, but 00:16:862 (1,2) - sound so different. Placing (2) stack with - reconsider
00:19:407 (4) - and change the shape a bit in order not to overlap with (3) would looks better. - ^
00:46:862 (1,2) - this inconsistent is so noticeable. Players would easy misclick the (2) since there is 00:35:771 (2) - at the previous part. They would expect the same thing goes to current pattern. So I would suggest to put something here 00:47:407 - theres a space between them so i think its still readable imo

Hard
00:36:498 (1) - the music sounds way more intense than how the note was placed. Increasing the spacing is cool but how about place that (1) like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8530054 would feel really great. - it would destroy the whole pattern (i wont remap anymore )

others play nice
my engrish shit hah - but your english still better than me xd

no reply = fixed
thanks!

Hazu-

3,881 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2017-07-08T19:51:31+00:00

0109- wrote:
m4m back

if you don't satisfied with the mod, you can ask me for ticket for the next map lol, this map already got pages of mod lol
Hazu
00:17:953 (2) - i can't see why you have to stack this, probably you want to emphasize 00:18:135 (1) - better but this (2) also does a sound as intense as that (1). How about moving it out of that long slider? Yeah I'm trying to emphasize this note, and I think the sound of 00:17:953 (2) - is very low (thinking that I'm following the vocals).

others play nice
my engrish shit hah

Thanks~

newton-

670 posts

Joined February 2015

newton- 2017-07-09T05:54:43+00:00

[

hard]

00:01:044 (3,4) - entry into 4 is visually uncomfortable unlike the rest of the stuff, consider making this look smoother
00:29:771 (2,3) - make these parallel/antiparallel
00:54:680 (3) - ctrlg for consistency with 00:52:680 (1,2,3) - (but this would mess up ds so you could choose not to do it)
00:57:044 (1) - move bends so they hit each vocal?
00:58:498 (1,2) - might be hard to read since you used stacks for mainly 1/2 before
01:00:317 (2,3) - ^

[

akitoshi's truth]

rename to akitoshi's normal
00:30:862 (1,2,3) - make rhythm just like 00:29:771 (2,3,4,5) - since theyre the same sounds
00:42:317 (1) - either line this up perfectly with 00:41:953 (4) - or point the part after the bend lower (like towards 00:43:226 (3) - or sth)

good luck!

-NanoRIPE-

2,022 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-07-09T12:01:53+00:00

newton- wrote:
[ hard]
00:01:044 (3,4) - entry into 4 is visually uncomfortable unlike the rest of the stuff, consider making this look smoother
00:29:771 (2,3) - make these parallel/antiparallel - i cant cuz ds
00:54:680 (3) - ctrlg for consistency with 00:52:680 (1,2,3) - (but this would mess up ds so you could choose not to do it) - yee
00:57:044 (1) - move bends so they hit each vocal? - i'll reconsider this
00:58:498 (1,2) - might be hard to read since you used stacks for mainly 1/2 before - but i think its still readable cuz theres a space a bout 1/1 so i will leave it as be
01:00:317 (2,3) - ^ - ^

good luck!

no reply = fixed thanks!

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-07-11T10:55:25+00:00

newton- wrote:
[ akitoshi's truth]
rename to akitoshi's normal i guess i'll rename back to Corinn instead
00:30:862 (1,2,3) - make rhythm just like 00:29:771 (2,3,4,5) - since theyre the same sounds i made it 00:31:226 (3) - as slider to avoid circle spams
00:42:317 (1) - either line this up perfectly with 00:41:953 (4) - or point the part after the bend lower (like towards 00:43:226 (3) - or sth) tried
good luck!

thanks!

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Cheri

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Joined November 2014

Cheri 2017-08-07T14:57:03+00:00

#modreq - small mod and nothing more - feel free to ignore it -

NaWi's Insane

00:19:771 (4,6,7,8) - blanket slightly off

- I actually couldn't find nothing when playing/editing -

Advanced

00:05:044 - even for this difficulty there should be atleast a slider here as having it blank just don't make sense music wise and it not going to make things harder for the player

same for here 00:10:862 -

00:43:589 (4,1) - The angle of 00:43:589 (4) - is a bit odd and hard - I think this would play a bit better if 00:43:953 (1) - was Ctrl + H

-NanoRIPE-

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Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-08-08T07:02:15+00:00

DJ Lucky wrote:
#modreq - small mod and nothing more - feel free to ignore it -

NaWi's Insane

00:19:771 (4,6,7,8) - blanket slightly off - i think its aiready good imo

- I actually couldn't find nothing when playing/editing -

Advanced

00:05:044 - even for this difficulty there should be atleast a slider here as having it blank just don't make sense music wise and it not going to make things harder for the player - reconsider this

same for here 00:10:862 - ^

00:43:589 (4,1) - The angle of 00:43:589 (4) - is a bit odd and hard - I think this would play a bit better if 00:43:953 (1) - was Ctrl + H - yeah

Thanks!

Beomsan

1,878 posts

Joined November 2013

Beomsan 2017-08-18T14:17:15+00:00

renkad wehn

-NanoRIPE-

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Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-08-19T07:14:59+00:00

Beomsan wrote:
renkad wehn

DuNN0

kunka

1,570 posts

Joined July 2012

kunka 2017-08-30T10:14:30+00:00

Hi
From my Q
General

Widescreen support check of each diff.

Akitoshi's Truth

00:16:135 (1) - nc必要？本来ならspinnerの位置でncだからいらないと思う。01:02:680 (1) - 同じ
00:23:407 (6,1) - 欲言うと、ここで一瞬止まった感じになるからstackで表現できると思う。ただ、配置変えめんどい
00:53:226 (4,4) - ここ２つシンバルあるぉ。add finishで
00:59:226 (3,4,5,6,7) - stackで大きな問題ではないんだけど曲調聞くと流れが止まってるような音に聞こえない。スゲー間隔が狭いstreamとかしない？
01:02:135 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^

NaWi's Insane

00:04:589 (7) - Do you need this? I can't think of a click need note...
00:39:953 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I like pentagons lol
00:48:680 (2,3,4,5) - I would recommend ctrl+G of 00:48:862 (3,5) - for better flow.
00:57:044 (1) - It's too straight. I think wavy lines are good for melody.

Hazu's Light Insane

00:20:680 (1,2) - You are doing the vocal follow in the phrase before and after. So I think snap should be red-tick instead of white-tick. For example https://puu.sh/xn70A.jpg
00:26:498 (1,2) - ^
00:53:227 (3,3) - Each head has a cymbal sounds. add finish, pls

Hard

00:03:044 - Because there is a sound here, the blank is unnatural. It's no problem because the following 00:05:953 - obviously has no sound. I recommend to change 00:02:862 (3) - to 1/2slider.
00:44:680 (3) - Certainly there is a sound. But for hard diff, I don't think it's a necessary snap. I think I could make a good rhythm to 00:44:862 (4,1) - by making a blank.
00:58:498 (1,2) - This is the same rhythm as 01:01:407 (1,2) - . It is not recommended that you change the notes type.

Advanced

00:31:226 (2,3,4) - I think a similar stack will cause confusion because it's not the same sound as 00:29:771 (2,3) - . 00:31:589 (3) - stack of a is recommended to stack to 00:31:771 (4) - head.

Normal

00:42:862 (2,3,4,1) - DS has a little uneven.
01:01:044 (4,1) - Because the rhythm is the same as 00:58:498 (1) - , I recommend that you change it that way. https://puu.sh/xn7Y6.jpg

Easy

00:56:317 - Because it's the same setting, a inherited points is not necessary.

Overall good map. Good Luck!!

-NanoRIPE-

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Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-08-30T13:16:56+00:00

kunka wrote:
Hi
From my Q
General
Widescreen support check of each diff - got it.

NaWi's Insane
00:48:680 (2,3,4,5) - I would recommend ctrl+G of 00:48:862 (3,5) - for better flow. - yeah but it would makes the object between (5,1) - more far than before so nope
00:57:044 (1) - It's too straight. I think wavy lines are good for melody. - reconsider

Hard
00:03:044 - Because there is a sound here, the blank is unnatural. It's no problem because the following 00:05:953 - obviously has no sound. I recommend to change 00:02:862 (3) - to 1/2slider. - yeah you're right but im run out of idea for making a new pattern so i will leave as is it
00:44:680 (3) - Certainly there is a sound. But for hard diff, I don't think it's a necessary snap. I think I could make a good rhythm to 00:44:862 (4,1) - by making a blank. - i dont understand this point :3
00:58:498 (1,2) - This is the same rhythm as 01:01:407 (1,2) - . It is not recommended that you change the notes type. - whats wrong about variation rhythm?

Advanced
00:31:226 (2,3,4) - I think a similar stack will cause confusion because it's not the same sound as 00:29:771 (2,3) - . 00:31:589 (3) - stack of a is recommended to stack to 00:31:771 (4) - head. - i think it works well for emphasize the drum at (2,4)

Normal
00:42:862 (2,3,4,1) - DS has a little uneven. - ye
01:01:044 (4,1) - Because the rhythm is the same as 00:58:498 (1) - , I recommend that you change it that way. https://puu.sh/xn7Y6.jpg - prefer the guitar here not the drum sorry
Easy
00:56:317 - Because it's the same setting, a inherited points is not necessary. - no,this inherited points i set up to 70% and the next one is 60% for tell the different between kiai time and outro volume's
Overall good map. Good Luck!!

thanks for your mod! will mod yours later ~

William K

694 posts

Joined January 2013

William K 2017-08-30T14:30:43+00:00

kunka wrote:
Hi
From my Q
NaWi's Insane
[list][*]00:04:589 (7) - Do you need this? I can't think of a click need note... It's mapped to the guitars, and yes I need it.
[*]00:39:953 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I like pentagons lol I changed it into some other kind of shape.
Overall good map. Good Luck!!

Thanks for modding :3

Here~

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Kikuri-nee

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Joined February 2014

Kikuri-nee 2017-09-01T16:01:04+00:00

Hello

Truth

00:03:953 (3) - From the previous sequence this should not be here ><
00:11:862 (5,1) - Imo a blanket here is not suitable, but you repeat it here 00:16:226 (5,1) - so it's like mehhhh
00:25:589 (4) - and 00:25:953 (6) - From your previous sequence this should have a soft whistle
00:26:680 (2,3) - These have whistles but this > 00:21:226 (4,5) - doesn't

Hard

00:28:862 (4,5,1) - Ik this is supposed to show the strong sounds, but it's not clear enough. I suggest putting them in a straight line so it's easier to see?

Advanced

00:04:135 (4) - Imo should not curve this way
00:07:589 (1) - Should flow better from (3)
00:40:498 (3,4,5) - Imo 4 should be stacked below 3 since you're kind of changing the direction
01:01:044 (4) - I feel that this should be placed further down so it's easier to proceed here from the repeating slider

No problem here

No problem here

No problem here

00:08:317 (4) - I don't think the jump to this should be this big this early
00:39:407 (6) - Don't think this should be here

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No problem here

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