Is it actually allowed to use different combo colours on each diff?
anyway let's start:
• 00:02:306 (5) - What do you think about moving this to x:224 y:11? It would be exactly between 00:01:660 (3,4) - so the visual impact would be a lot better
Also i would add NC here (since the pattern itself sounds different than 00:01:177 (1,2,3,4) - , and not differencing them would be dissapointing)
• 00:03:435 (8,2) - Move the 8 a bit to the bottomleft so the blanket with the 2 will be fiixed..
OR move this whole pattern 00:03:757 (1,2) - a bit to the top-right (i feel like this second one is the best option because 00:03:435 (8,1) - this patern wouldnt be that closed)
• 00:05:370 (1) - Is the NC really neccesary?
If you wanna do it cuz the differences on their rhythms at least add one more here 00:05:693 (3) -
• 00:07:628 (1,2,1,2,3) - Same
• 00:10:209 (5) - Adding NC for the same reason than 00:02:306 (5) -
• 00:15:047 (7,1) - Switch NC's? Having a new combo on 00:15:693 (1) - feels kinda dissapointing
• 00:17:499 (4,1) - I think that you should separate this two a bit since i guess you dont want an overlap there xD
• 00:24:164 (5) - Move this to x:213 y:298, again, the visual impact would be a lot better imo
00:24:331 (6) - This one is a bit different, you could actually move it to x:424 y:259 but the spacing would be a lot on 00:24:331 (6,1) - , but i think that you should care too much about that spacing, since the sound on that slider1 is actually pretty high enough to space it a lot
• 00:25:331 (4) - Adding NC for emphasis wouldnt be really bad
• 00:28:997 (3) - Moving this to x:277 y:340 would make a cool overlap with 00:28:164 (4) - with also avoiding a too high spacing
• 00:29:497 (5) - x:271 y:242 a e s t h e t i c s
• 00:31:497 (2) - You have two options here: moving it a bit to the topleft to make a clear overlap, or stack it with 00:30:331 (2) - , Right now that circle is in a weird position, not enough to call it overlap but nor stack, so look at it
• 00:35:664 (2) - You could move this circle a bit to the left so it would fit the followpoint between 00:35:331 (1,2) - (basically being linear)
• 00:37:497 (5) - What about moving this to x:196 y:315 to make a cool overlap with 00:36:331 (5) - ?
• 00:41:831 (1,2,3) - The spacing on this pattern is just..... huh not really good, maybe because the second circle feels that it have to be more spaced instead of the third one
• 00:44:164 (4) - Again, move this to x:312 y:97 so it would be exactly between slider2 and slider1's sliderend
• 00:47:164 (1,3) - I'd prefer a stack here instead of an overlap this time, it feels pretty good for a stack, dont it?
• 00:49:826 (1) - This note position is clearly the weirdest i saw on this map (it doesnt mean its bad but the cursor movement is .. weird)
Try this(
without NC so you can see the followpoint )
• 00:57:574 (5) - Reduce the spacing ghere just a bit so it can overlap correctly with 00:56:914 (2) -
• 00:58:068 (2) - Move this a bit to down, its actually not fitting the slider shape
• 00:59:222 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - HOLY DIDNT EXPECT THIS LMAO
• 01:00:129 (5,6,1) - Fix the stack on the middle of this 3 sliders
• 01:00:870 (2) - Move this a bit to the left, its actually too close to the slider1
• 01:01:035 (3,4,5,6,7) - this is just not right... you know why
01:01:221 - Try deleting this one and stacking this two 01:01:035 (3,4) - (like if it were a double) ... its the only suggestion that's on my mind right now to fix that since this 01:01:140 - and this 01:01:221 - aren't really hearable at all enough to makee a stream there
• 01:21:139 (5) - Move this to x:295 y:357 , same thing about visual impact, right now its too close to 01:20:483 (2) - and its weird to see
• 01:21:631 (2) - Same here, You can do an overlap with 01:20:647 (3) - here by moving it to x:334 y:202
• 01:40:303 (1) - This one isnt that relevant, but moving it to x:339 y:38 would make it be exactly between 01:39:074 (7,8) -
Im not trying to being nazi but its just that i want to improve this map's aesthetics and visuals so dont take me wrong xD