1. Metadata source?

1. 00:42:111 (4) - I see you blanketed this slider's tail with the next one's body; however you can blanket it with its head as well for a cleaner pattern, like this.
2. 00:46:013 (4,1) - This blanket can be improved~

1. 00:09:183 (3) - Noticeable spacing inconsistency (check previous and next object's distance, the distance inconsistency can be seen anyway)
2. 00:24:793 (3) - ^
3. 00:46:744 (3) - & 00:48:207 (2) - ^

1. 00:18:695 (2,3) - 00:27:476 (1,2) - 00:30:403 (3,4) - 00:40:159 (3,4) - These blankets can be improved~

1. 00:22:598 (3,4) - The flow you're creating towards the transition to the new combo slider feels un-intuitive and is not very comfortable to make that movement. I would suggest something more natural like this, which is basically curving the sliders to the opposite direction~
2. 00:31:378 (1) - This slider's shape can be improved, you can see in the middle that imperfection when you curve more one more side than the other, also you should make the curves stand out more, something like this~ Then you got 00:39:183 (1) - which I guess is the copy of the one I mentioned.
3. 00:45:037 (1) - Flow can be more natural if you apply ctrl+J on this slider. Talking about from the previous note to this one. But then if you do this, it will affect negatively the flow with the next note xp You know, three 1/1 sliders in a row may be easy for a hard at this bpm, so just change it for a 1/2 slider and add another circle, it follows the vocals anyway. I mean this~

1. 00:10:646 (2,4) - They're close to each other, you should blanket them once for all :v
2. 00:17:720 (1) - Same as in hard with the shape that can be improved, the imperfection can be seen in the middle~
3. 00:30:159 (2) - If you move this circle to x:205 y:234 the blanket will look neater~

1. 00:40:159 (4,5,6) - This is the only time in the whole diff where you make a 1/4 jump. you should be consistent by using other patters that you constantly used like 00:27:963 (2,3,4) - or 00:26:256 (4,5,6) -

ezek wrote:

[General]

1. Metadata source? http://www.d8.tv/c-divertissement/ms-palmashow/pid6942-palmashow-videos.html?vid=1252666

[Normal]

1. 00:09:183 (3) - Noticeable spacing inconsistency (check previous and next object's distance, the distance inconsistency can be seen anyway)
2. 00:24:793 (3) - ^
3. 00:46:744 (3) - & 00:48:207 (2) - ^ ye, fixed all them

[Hard]

1. 00:22:598 (3,4) - The flow you're creating towards the transition to the new combo slider feels un-intuitive and is not very comfortable to make that movement. I would suggest something more natural like this, which is basically curving the sliders to the opposite direction~ did sth~
2. 00:31:378 (1) - This slider's shape can be improved, you can see in the middle that imperfection when you curve more one more side than the other, also you should make the curves stand out more, something like this~ Then you got 00:39:183 (1) - which I guess is the copy of the one I mentioned. improved curves
3. 00:45:037 (1) - Flow can be more natural if you apply ctrl+J on this slider. Talking about from the previous note to this one. But then if you do this, it will affect negatively the flow with the next note xp You know, three 1/1 sliders in a row may be easy for a hard at this bpm, so just change it for a 1/2 slider and add another circle, it follows the vocals anyway. I mean this~ ye here should be 1/2 patterns to be consistent with other tacts~

[Insane]

1. 00:10:646 (2,4) - They're close to each other, you should blanket them once for all :v I don't want to use so much blankets ;w;
2. 00:17:720 (1) - Same as in hard with the shape that can be improved, the imperfection can be seen in the middle~ fixed
3. 00:30:159 (2) - If you move this circle to x:205 y:234 the blanket will look neater~ indeed

You can call me back~
@Shmiklak: my set https://osu.ppy.sh/s/511592

ezek wrote:

I don't understand Zerss :/ Improving blankets has nothing to do with sliders touching themselves ._.

Shmiklak wrote:

I prefer when every word in diffname starts from capitalised symbol, also it's more right if we follow English gramatic because as I remember every new word in titles should start from capitalised symbols. Anyway even if I am not right it isn't important and I don't want to change it because people will need to redownload the set and it will kill my own preferable things

ezek wrote:

Chaoslitz wrote:

M4M from pigeon
popped due to bold issue

[General]

1. I am confused about the source when i saw this from the link you have provided above lol
   
   For me La Folle soirée du Palmashow 2 looks more accurate but well i cant understand french so i would need translation xd I don't speak french too though, but I used source from this map and the mapper is a french guy so imo he is right, but ye i think we need help from french speakers https://osu.ppy.sh/b/749825
2. yea same as the top diff name, translate pls : p I don't really sea the reason to translate it but Je dis ça, je dis rien is lyrics of the song and it translates as "I say that I say nothing" imo it's great to call the highest diff like this because the lyrics are very simple for ears, it might be sth like French "tatoe" or "hibike" lol
3. Inconsistent combo colour in your Normal ([251,155,60] is missing) ye fixed

[Ima's Easy]

1. 00:13:818 (3,4) - Pattern doesn't flow well here when you are moving up your cursor from 3 to 4 but 00:14:793 (4) is pointing downward, try to move up the slider end a bit. I hope it's better now

[Normal]

1. 00:14:793 (1,2) - Fix the ds fixed

[Insane]

1. Use ar7.5? the current ar doesn't fit with the spread indeed
2. better to lower the od a bit, gap between hard and insane is pretty big ye

yea just a short mod, mapset is nice
call me back when ezek rebubbled it o/

edit: i guess Zerss didn't intend to blanket those patterns or it looks overcurved when blanket so he decided not to ;o It is fine for me anyway

wajinshu wrote:

Где моя гиди

Kisses wrote:

Normal
00:23:329 (3,1) - When you enable stacking these are a lot closer and looks a bit off visually :v https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8381452
lol, I mapped it with enabled stacks and this is what I wanted (: It's fully okay for me so I'm not gonna change this (:
Advanced
00:37:720 (2) - Feels like rhythm would fit better http://puu.sh/wnWRM/0913e59ea0.jpg
It matches the music/vocals better and flows better rhythmically when playing imo. The lower object density reflects the calmness too new word starts on 1/2 tick so current rythm emphasises all vocals, beats and guitars perfectly (:

Hard
00:13:817 (1) - It would be more appropriate to end this at 00:14:305 . The vocal ends here and and the pause does flow nicer rhythmically I don't want to make pause in this diff (:

Insane
00:21:134 (5,1) - It would feel more right if you spaced this blanket out a bit more like all your other objects and blankets. Eg 00:29:427 (1,2) and 00:30:890 (4,1) etc it's just stupid and useless (:
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Minor stuff really and not worth a DQ but if this does get DQ'd then I think it'd be worth checking some stuff out

Kisses wrote:

Minor stuff really and not worth a DQ but if this does get DQ'd then I think it'd be worth checking some stuff out

Bakari wrote:

o, hi, I am pretty sure that we need Slayed's explanation on a couple of things

why is 00:10:403 - unclickable, when there is a much weaker beat on 00:10:646 - mapped right after it. I believe that with the rhythm you follow, 00:10:646 (2) - removing (2) would be a natural way to represent the synth thing you follow in a better way. also, 00:17:720 (1) - represents a very similar idea and uses completely different rhythm, which is far less intense. (applies to Insane as well?) i prefer to keep note on that hat because i think those places gonna feel too empty with your rhythm, since the overall rhythm is somewhat dense

I feel like a more basic rhythm would match your idea better

also, 00:13:817 (1) - I am fairly sure that the tail should be muted, this applies to the other difficulties as well. just compare that slider with 00:15:768 (1) - they really should differ in terms of hitsounding not sure about the sliderend, imo its pretty fine to keep it audible to catch the vocals, but its up to shmiklak