Sotarks
Sotarks wrote:
omg how do you even want me to mod this >< it's unmoddable
well ok here we go !
[Blossom]
01:39:754 (2,3,4) - unstacking those could really be easier to read tbh! // think its fine to read rn
01:46:707 (3) - nc is not needed here
01:47:488 (3) - i miss readed this to 3/4 !! maybe put it x392 y48, would make nice flow! // i like current one more, your suggestion feels too spaced out imo
01:53:426 (2) - x301 y209? would be nice
02:53:426 (1) - remove nc so you don't have this 02:53:816 (3,1) - weird nc transition here xd
02:57:645 (6) - nc?
03:22:332 (1,2,3) - hey u don't wanna do smth like this ? if you agree fix the next ones ! could be really nice for the emphasis on 03:22:645 (3) - ! // nah, i dont want angled jumps here
03:58:895 (3) - try this rythmn instead to follow correctly vocals. // eh i want to keep it somewhat simple
04:35:613 (4,3) - stack
04:42:254 (2,3) - try this ?
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increadible map!!!
gl
*have a star*
lit120
lit120 wrote:
[blossom]dude, this deserves 4 stars xd
- 00:27:645 (1,1) - this looks off // i tried
- 05:22:645 (2) - is it just me or the star shape isn't rly parallel from both sides? // pretty sure its parallel
hi-mei
hi-mei wrote:
hello
from my queue:
00:12:645 - i think here shud be starting another slider, and 00:10:145 (1) - shud be ending here 00:12:020 - consequently cuz 00:12:645 - is a start of new sound phrase which is held by slider end for now... this will also solve this 00:13:895 (2) - slider from being too short for slow calm part
and also use doing what i suggested above 00:15:770 (1,2,1) - here for example, i think this is how it supposed to be // i acknowledge the slider rhythm you want me to map, but i'd rather keep my own
00:57:332 (3) - i think it shud be a bit further from (2) due to emphasis logic. 0.03 gain isnt that tangible... cuz 3 is way stronger than 1 or 2 here
01:05:613 (2) - maybe make this shape a bit more rounded by using circle? http://puu.sh/vcf1t/5e30b1916d.jpg // its fine
01:08:113 (2,1) - same http://puu.sh/vcf2Y/35a6b24224.jpg // ^
01:10:926 (1) - not quite sure why u put a slider here, maybe making a slider from 01:10:770 - for vocals and ignoring 01:10:926 - would fit better // i follow the rest of that little synth up until the spinner, i think its fine as a transition in focus
01:45:613 (1,2) - shud be parallel maybe
01:58:270 (4,5,6) - and 01:58:582 (7,8,1) - triplets shud have the same distance inbetween them? // fixed 1st one, 2nd one is b/c of change in sv
02:29:207 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - i dont think that ds increment shud be that high
from 1.3 to 2.3 to 3.5 in a one sound phrase that doesnt have much intensity // its pretty easy to play
02:34:988 (3) - hmm not sure if this shud be a reverse slider, it feels like 02:35:066 - 02:35:145 - shud be clickable
02:38:426 (2,2) - make it like this maybe http://puu.sh/vcfjZ/2b022f484d.jpg
so overlap wont look that harsh // ?
02:54:988 (3,1) - ^ change stuff for a bit, looks ugly for me // its fine
02:57:645 (6) - lol nc?
03:11:238 (3) - shud be nc here as u did 03:09:832 (1) - ?
03:40:223 - break here? i mean, theres no reason to leave this without break, guidelines in RC are telling us // purely for thematic effect, and hp drain doesnt go down
03:51:395 - not quite sure why u did a slider end here, its a start of new vocal line tho // that measure is one whole vocal line
04:23:895 (1,1) - not quite sure if this place is readable tho ._. maybe change the curved slider // no ones had problems with this when testplaying
04:37:332 (4,3) - stack slider ends to avoid harsh overlap ;w;
overall i can say this map is really good, i like it!
thanks for the mods! ; )