Mod. Sorry I took so long
Good luck
Satanic Oni
The only specific thing I want to mention is that there are no 1/6 sounds to justify your use of 1/6 at 03:04:035 and 03:04:543 - these should definitely be 1/4 instead.
Other than that, I think that you need a little more consistency between sections. I know that can be hard to do in a collab diff like this, but it seems to me that SE_LovelySoul's mapping tends to be more dense than steven's or Shriai's. Because of this, the flow of the map is a little strange. Just consider what the other mappers have done a little more when mapping your sections.
I can tell that a lot of effort went into this map, and I think it's paid off - for the most part, this map is really good.
Other than that, I think that you need a little more consistency between sections. I know that can be hard to do in a collab diff like this, but it seems to me that SE_LovelySoul's mapping tends to be more dense than steven's or Shriai's. Because of this, the flow of the map is a little strange. Just consider what the other mappers have done a little more when mapping your sections.
I can tell that a lot of effort went into this map, and I think it's paid off - for the most part, this map is really good.
Good luck