[Weber]
00:00:680 (1) - GOOD
00:09:635 (7) - Personal idea but what about moving the note to 00:10:232 - ? It wouldn't be just plain 1/1 mapping for the most time and fit well to the vocals. You may do this for other parts so the Kantan isn't too straight with 1/1.
00:36:053 (39) - Sounds like kat if you ask me, 00:36:500 (40) - sounds deeper than 00:36:053 (39) - and to put both with the same sound looks wrong to me.
00:43:665 (43) - Preferably to make this beat stronger you could add a finisher so it doesn't sound so "casual".
00:56:202 (53,54,57) - (53,54) could be changed to emphasize the vocals more and (57) to be consistent with (53) being used for k d k.
The problem I see is that Kantan barely offers something, weird enough but the non-kiai part is more entertaining than the kiai part. And if you check the Futsuu, you will quickly notice that Jon uses MANY oo oo.. pattern. It's a 67 BPM song so.. you have to think how that map would look like it's 134 instead. Although you'd need to use 1/3 I don't see the problem to use them on a healthy portion.
[Futsuu]
00:05:157 - 00:22:172 - This is rather a subjective point I want to mention, it's weird to me that this part is noticeable denser than 00:22:769 - 00:36:500 - . On 00:22:769 - 00:36:500 - I find it's clearer to notice what were you following here, yet it's a weird structure. Maybe this gives you thoughts to do something, or maybe not. I will leave this to you. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
00:38:291 (72) - This doesn't fit. Vocals end at 00:37:993 (71) - and else there is nothing that justifies to have something on 00:38:291 - except of consistency reasons which aren't really necessary, especially if the note sounds like it's "hanging in the air". Sounds weird? it is!
00:42:471 (80) - Comparing the next and previous notes this sounds weird to be a kat note. I'd suggest changing to don.
00:54:112 (105) - ^
00:55:903 (109) - ^
01:01:276 (120) - ^
01:16:500 - Okay, I don't get it. You used oo oo so much in the Futsuu difficulty, and now with a noticeable difference (vocals) you don't use it?
01:19:485 - 01:23:068 - https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/bRGmYhcB.png That part has something strong you shouldn't ignore. Right now it actually does that and skips important beats.
Right now the map lacks of emphasis and doesn't really focus on something but "just to follow what the song offers". That however could be better by leaving out notes and to use them on other places to follow the stronger vocals or beats of the song.
[Muzukashii]
00:04:859 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - I would not recommend to have such a long combo; it makes it sound less entertaining and the emphasis is sorta gone. Instead, try this: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/aGcgL4Ef.png It breaks the chain of notes but still gives more beats compared to Futsuu, plus the ooo don part works very well with the bgm.
00:09:336 - 00:12:321 - https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/O0Q3tVKl.png You need to consider that Futsuu mostly had oo oo parts when you suddenly appear with combos of eleven notes or even higher. That's not a good curve how to increase the difficulty. The example mainly removed the notes at 00:10:381 - , 00:10:829 - and 00:11:724 - , so it's not the big deal but still efficient.
00:12:918 - 00:14:709 - https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/NK9ZcQ9T.png for 00:13:665 - I see a potential place to use ooo wisely due the vocals. Aside of that I find this way better since 00:14:411 - (note between 29 and 30 on the picture) rather felt like a filler and not so contributing.
<many parts until the kiai appears with the same issues like above explained, mostly related to the point of 00:09:336 - 00:12:321 - .>
00:52:023 (144) - Looks good enough imo to be removed, so 00:52:321 (145,146) - and 00:51:724 (143) - are stronger then. Apply this for the same parts like 00:55:605 (155) - , etc.
So.. yeah, my personal opinion: less combo chains and more ooo parts. It actually makes more sense and fits better to the spread.
[Oni]
00:36:500 - 00:43:665 - Even though it's the hardest difficulty I don't find this part needs to be so dense. It just sounds spammy imo.
The Oni sounds okay so far, it's also the difficulty that rather leaves you the freedom to map how you want since the BPM is really low so you barely have to worry for spread issues or overmapping.
I think I want to go for ice-skaing now.
00:00:680 (1) - GOOD
00:09:635 (7) - Personal idea but what about moving the note to 00:10:232 - ? It wouldn't be just plain 1/1 mapping for the most time and fit well to the vocals. You may do this for other parts so the Kantan isn't too straight with 1/1.
00:36:053 (39) - Sounds like kat if you ask me, 00:36:500 (40) - sounds deeper than 00:36:053 (39) - and to put both with the same sound looks wrong to me.
00:43:665 (43) - Preferably to make this beat stronger you could add a finisher so it doesn't sound so "casual".
00:56:202 (53,54,57) - (53,54) could be changed to emphasize the vocals more and (57) to be consistent with (53) being used for k d k.
The problem I see is that Kantan barely offers something, weird enough but the non-kiai part is more entertaining than the kiai part. And if you check the Futsuu, you will quickly notice that Jon uses MANY oo oo.. pattern. It's a 67 BPM song so.. you have to think how that map would look like it's 134 instead. Although you'd need to use 1/3 I don't see the problem to use them on a healthy portion.
[Futsuu]
00:05:157 - 00:22:172 - This is rather a subjective point I want to mention, it's weird to me that this part is noticeable denser than 00:22:769 - 00:36:500 - . On 00:22:769 - 00:36:500 - I find it's clearer to notice what were you following here, yet it's a weird structure. Maybe this gives you thoughts to do something, or maybe not. I will leave this to you. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
00:38:291 (72) - This doesn't fit. Vocals end at 00:37:993 (71) - and else there is nothing that justifies to have something on 00:38:291 - except of consistency reasons which aren't really necessary, especially if the note sounds like it's "hanging in the air". Sounds weird? it is!
00:42:471 (80) - Comparing the next and previous notes this sounds weird to be a kat note. I'd suggest changing to don.
00:54:112 (105) - ^
00:55:903 (109) - ^
01:01:276 (120) - ^
01:16:500 - Okay, I don't get it. You used oo oo so much in the Futsuu difficulty, and now with a noticeable difference (vocals) you don't use it?
01:19:485 - 01:23:068 - https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/bRGmYhcB.png That part has something strong you shouldn't ignore. Right now it actually does that and skips important beats.
Right now the map lacks of emphasis and doesn't really focus on something but "just to follow what the song offers". That however could be better by leaving out notes and to use them on other places to follow the stronger vocals or beats of the song.
[Muzukashii]
00:04:859 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - I would not recommend to have such a long combo; it makes it sound less entertaining and the emphasis is sorta gone. Instead, try this: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/aGcgL4Ef.png It breaks the chain of notes but still gives more beats compared to Futsuu, plus the ooo don part works very well with the bgm.
00:09:336 - 00:12:321 - https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/O0Q3tVKl.png You need to consider that Futsuu mostly had oo oo parts when you suddenly appear with combos of eleven notes or even higher. That's not a good curve how to increase the difficulty. The example mainly removed the notes at 00:10:381 - , 00:10:829 - and 00:11:724 - , so it's not the big deal but still efficient.
00:12:918 - 00:14:709 - https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/NK9ZcQ9T.png for 00:13:665 - I see a potential place to use ooo wisely due the vocals. Aside of that I find this way better since 00:14:411 - (note between 29 and 30 on the picture) rather felt like a filler and not so contributing.
<many parts until the kiai appears with the same issues like above explained, mostly related to the point of 00:09:336 - 00:12:321 - .>
00:52:023 (144) - Looks good enough imo to be removed, so 00:52:321 (145,146) - and 00:51:724 (143) - are stronger then. Apply this for the same parts like 00:55:605 (155) - , etc.
So.. yeah, my personal opinion: less combo chains and more ooo parts. It actually makes more sense and fits better to the spread.
[Oni]
00:36:500 - 00:43:665 - Even though it's the hardest difficulty I don't find this part needs to be so dense. It just sounds spammy imo.
The Oni sounds okay so far, it's also the difficulty that rather leaves you the freedom to map how you want since the BPM is really low so you barely have to worry for spread issues or overmapping.
I think I want to go for ice-skaing now.