Thanks for your help!Josefumi wrote:
Hello there, commin' from my queue!Easy:
00:13:513 (1) - If you put the end on 00:16:878 It would be as nice i think there's something about this...
00:19:682 - Maybe a circle in here? the sound isn't really that significant/is more of a background sound
00:57:252 - What about this? <.< for a slower section it'd probably best to keep a less dense rhythm
01:37:626 (2) - This looks nicer ...but doesn't that break DS?Missed You
I think putting the stack leniency to 3, it fits much more a e s t h e t i c a l y (Note: Only do changes with "*" if you changed it) completely forgot this was a thing xd
00:19:962 (1,2,3) - Overlap 2 with 3 and put them looking at eachother aight ye
00:21:084 (4,5) - I recommend trying a full slider from 00:21:084 to 00:21:364 but... there's different sounds
* 00:22:485 (1) - Move it under 00:22:204 (10)
* 00:23:046 (2) - Move under 3
00:28:793 (7,8) - Stack together instead of spreading, it's confusing how...?
00:31:036 (6,7) - ^
01:02:579 (5,6) - Stack over 01:02:859 that looks p confusing tbh
* 01:25:289 (1) - Move under 01:24:168 (3)
01:46:317 (3) - Instead of b i g slider try slider retur stream b-but muh vocal
Nice mapset! Good luck
Namjoon stan here o.o/
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Topic Starter
Liked the sound of this song, so here's a mod.
Easy:
00:24:168 (5): Make this a new combo instead of the slider after it. The pause before it calls for that.
01:03:981 (2): Feels weird that this is the only section to use the default whistle sound effect.
Firetruck's Normal:
00:17:158 (1): Again, doesn't need to be a new combo.
00:46:878 (4): Make this a new combo instead of the slider after it. There are several other instances of this throughout.
01:04:822 (1): Might look better if you curved it to blanket the preceding slider instead of that overlap.
01:47:719 (1): Same here.
Lapis' Hard:
01:02:859 (1): This new combo placement feels especially weird.
Easy:
00:24:168 (5): Make this a new combo instead of the slider after it. The pause before it calls for that.
01:03:981 (2): Feels weird that this is the only section to use the default whistle sound effect.
Firetruck's Normal:
00:17:158 (1): Again, doesn't need to be a new combo.
00:46:878 (4): Make this a new combo instead of the slider after it. There are several other instances of this throughout.
01:04:822 (1): Might look better if you curved it to blanket the preceding slider instead of that overlap.
01:47:719 (1): Same here.
Lapis' Hard:
01:02:859 (1): This new combo placement feels especially weird.
Topic Starter
Thanks for helping, I'll wait on the others responsesBehonkiss wrote:
Liked the sound of this song, so here's a mod.
Easy:
00:24:168 (5): Make this a new combo instead of the slider after it. The pause before it calls for that. yeah, I agree
01:03:981 (2): Feels weird that this is the only section to use the default whistle sound effect. It's weird... but it kinda fits too, I guess?
Josefumi wrote:
Lapi's Hard
I recommend putting a lower AR Why? It's already too low.
00:15:756 (1) - Spinner conflics with the next slider, im my opinion is too close and too fast. Pretty sure it's fine, considering the fact that it's a hard difficulty.
00:50:523 - What about this for a slider form? Looks nice, but I want to keep mine. 01:03:981 (5,6,7) - Too cloose with eachother, try to separate them a little bit I'm following DS here.
01:06:504 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This part is kinda overmapped, I recommend adjusting a slower pace on 01:07:766 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) I'm following the beats in the background, meaning that these are not overmapped, they're completely fine as long as they follow the beats.
01:23:887 (4,5) - Jump too big, try to avoid these without an excuse I want a proper reason for this. Saying "try to avoid these without an excuse" is kinda of rude.
01:41:831 (2,3) - ^ .
01:49:682 (4,1) - ^!!!! .
01:54:168 (4,1) - ^ .
01:54:448 (1,2) - Not so much of a big gap, but I recommend adjusting it. .
02:01:177 (1) - Missed sample
I'm sorry for not applying anything from your mods, but thank you both for checking my diff!Behonkiss wrote:
Lapis' Hard:
01:02:859 (1): This new combo placement feels especially weird. There's a downbeat here, and every NC starts at downbeat, so I'm keeping it.
Topic Starter
just gonna say that the missed hitsounds were a mistake on my end so i've (hopefully) fixed for all diffsJosefumi wrote:
here mod
ok that's all, hope it's helpful & ty for ur mod again
Firetruck's Normal
I really don't know what I could say to make this diff better sorry lol
lapis' hard
00:51:364 - I feel like there should be a circle here bc there's no pause in instrumentals or vocals
01:06:925 (7,8) - imo this part would work better w/ a circle at 01:06:504, and a two beat slider at 01:06:784. Bc the current rhythm there feels weird to play and kinda off but that could be just me
01:38:747 (1) - Random Hitsound?
01:06:925 (7,8) - imo this part would work better w/ a circle at 01:06:504, and a two beat slider at 01:06:784. Bc the current rhythm there feels weird to play and kinda off but that could be just me
01:38:747 (1) - Random Hitsound?
missing you
00:13:513 - personally preference, think there should be a spinner here to the downbeat before the first slider
00:17:579 (6) - These 1/4 beats are following the vocals but 6 doesn't belong bc no vocal or prominent sound is hear on that beat
00:30:056 (3) - repeat doesn't serve any purpose
01:07:766 (2) - unnecessary imo bc there is no sound it represents, and doesn't serve as good filler either
02:01:738 (2,3) and 02:05:102 (1,2) represent the vocals but the vocals lose emphasis at 02:02:579 (4,5,1,2,3,4) bc these notes are just following the beat. Kinda breaks the flow imo and u should stick to mapping one or the other
the spacing in general is a little weird bc sometimes 1/4 beats will be touching but when they aren't touching they look like the 1/2 spacing, so playing isn't always as intuitive as I feel like it should be
00:17:579 (6) - These 1/4 beats are following the vocals but 6 doesn't belong bc no vocal or prominent sound is hear on that beat
- 00:21:644 (6,7,8,9,10) - Same w/ 9 here
00:30:056 (3) - repeat doesn't serve any purpose
01:07:766 (2) - unnecessary imo bc there is no sound it represents, and doesn't serve as good filler either
02:01:738 (2,3) and 02:05:102 (1,2) represent the vocals but the vocals lose emphasis at 02:02:579 (4,5,1,2,3,4) bc these notes are just following the beat. Kinda breaks the flow imo and u should stick to mapping one or the other
the spacing in general is a little weird bc sometimes 1/4 beats will be touching but when they aren't touching they look like the 1/2 spacing, so playing isn't always as intuitive as I feel like it should be
ok that's all, hope it's helpful & ty for ur mod again
Thank you for modding! Aside from adding a circle at the part Cosmic mentioned, I've also made 01:10:710 (3,4) - 1/8 sliders.cosmiccc wrote:
lapis' hard00:51:364 - I feel like there should be a circle here bc there's no pause in instrumentals or vocals Sure.
01:06:925 (7,8) - imo this part would work better w/ a circle at 01:06:504, and a two beat slider at 01:06:784. Bc the current rhythm there feels weird to play and kinda off but that could be just me If you listen carefully at 01:06:504, there's a hold in his vocals, and I used a slider here to emphasise that. So I'm keeping this rhythm.
01:38:747 (1) - Random Hitsound? Don't think so.
EDIT: Bakari and I did an IRC mod. Fixed a few patterns, and nerfed jumps in kiai.
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Topic Starter
cosmiccc wrote:
missing you00:13:513 - personally preference, think there should be a spinner here to the downbeat before the first slider alright, yeah
00:17:579 (6) - These 1/4 beats are following the vocals but 6 doesn't belong bc no vocal or prominent sound is hear on that beat what about the "s" sound00:20:383 (2) - doesn't represent any sound and is weird playing imo yeah, I'll remove it
- 00:21:644 (6,7,8,9,10) - Same w/ 9 here but the "sh" sound?
00:30:056 (3) - repeat doesn't serve any purpose it goes with the vocal, like na-neun
01:07:766 (2) - unnecessary imo bc there is no sound it represents, and doesn't serve as good filler either but there's an instrument here which is mapped later on as well
02:01:738 (2,3) and 02:05:102 (1,2) represent the vocals but the vocals lose emphasis at 02:02:579 (4,5,1,2,3,4) bc these notes are just following the beat. Kinda breaks the flow imo and u should stick to mapping one or the other it's meant to gradually decrease in spacing to represent the slowing nature of the song, idk it works in my mind...
the spacing in general is a little weird bc sometimes 1/4 beats will be touching but when they aren't touching they look like the 1/2 spacing, so playing isn't always as intuitive as I feel like it should be yeah... i do emphasise a few things with spacing
ok that's all, hope it's helpful & ty for ur mod again thank you!
Hey!
[General]
[Firetruck's Normal]
[General]
- Add a fe w more tags like Bangtan Boys and Bangtans just in case somebody tries to use them.
- Metadata is correct, as we've already discussed that. link
- The hitsounds feel really loud in general. Pobably should be 15-30% quiter.
- 01:20:803 (1,2,3) - this combo definitely stands out in terms of length and consistency. You might want to look into it to make sure it works as intended.
- 01:36:504 (1,2) - that'd be cool if these two were using identical shapes, sort of like 01:32:018 (1,1) - this way the patterning would feel more structured.
Note: 01:51:084 (2,4) - again, similar shapes could make the part feel more structured. - 01:47:719 - I would really prefer this to be an individual circle. As a matter of fact, 01:46:598 (2) - I would probably just replace each of the beats with a circle, the vocals here feel pretty interesting and so do the drums.
- 01:49:962 (1) - minor - overlaps with the HP bar, probably should be higher as to prevent that from happening.
Just a few visual things. I actually think it's a pretty cool difficulty.
[Firetruck's Normal]
- 00:28:373 - shouldn't there be somethimg as both vocals and drums feel pretty powerful. Probably a circle or at least a reverse from the previous slider?
Note: 00:43:794 - same. Perhaps this, plus, the 3/2 gap feels a bit forced. - 00:49:401 (1,2) - I doubt this is spaced intentionally as there is nothing to justify the change and it doesn't look consistent at all.
- 01:14:074 (1) - splitting it into a 1/1 slider and a circle would match the rhythm better and feel more consistent in general. See 01:16:317 (1,2,3) - for example.
Note: 01:32:018 (1) - same.
Kind of a shame there's no spinner. But everything else is neat, I like it.
We've done an IRC check, fixed a number of jumps. The rest was pretty.IRC log16:21 Lapis Aoki: Hana didn't update my diff, sec
16:21 Lapis Aoki: http://puu.sh/w9wUk.osz
16:22 Bakari: Okay, let me scan through general stuff
16:23 *Bakari is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1244096 BTS - Spring Day [Lapis' Hard]]
16:23 Bakari: 00:15:756 (1,1) - are you sure about having only 1/2 beat of recovery time?
16:25 Lapis Aoki: I've got some complains about this before. But since this is a hard diff, I thought it was okay.
16:25 Bakari: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8250624 try something like this
16:25 Lapis Aoki: I'll remove it, since I can't end it anywhere else-
16:25 Bakari: oh, okay then
16:26 Bakari: 00:20:242 (1,2) - 00:29:214 (1,2) - these two feel similar, yet spacing is very different
16:27 Bakari: I'd probably remove the jump on the first pattern
16:28 Lapis Aoki: https://puu.sh/w9x7F.jpg
16:28 Bakari: yeah, it's cool
16:29 Bakari: 00:39:027 (2,3) - i like the way 2-3 jump feels, but isn't (2) strong as well?
16:29 Bakari: probably something like https://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/CYphBtFU.jpg this
16:32 Lapis Aoki: 00:39:027 - has the same sound as 00:30:056 - and there's no jump in here
16:32 Lapis Aoki: pretty much like the same point you mentioned
16:33 Bakari: oh, i see
16:33 Bakari: 00:47:158 (1,3) - btw, are you sure about this pattern?
16:33 Bakari: it looks different from the rest of the things
16:35 Bakari: https://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/TpXrnp42.jpg probably something like this?
16:35 Lapis Aoki: I'm pretty sure it's fine, plus I like the visuals of this pattern
16:35 Lapis Aoki: but if you have another pattern in mind, then show me some
16:35 Bakari: it felt like the stack/overlap thingy stood out
16:36 Lapis Aoki: https://puu.sh/w9xmv.jpg
16:36 Bakari: yeah, why not
16:36 Bakari: I'm happy with any kind of pattern that you like \o/
16:37 Lapis Aoki: Alrighty
16:37 Bakari: 01:04:822 - the 3/4 thingy feels sort of out of sync and there's definitely vocal here, so, let's add a circle?
16:38 Bakari: obv, the vocal is alos supported with the drums
16:40 Bakari: 01:06:224 (5,6) - also, let's try to ctrl+g these two, I have a feeling this would represent the song better
16:40 Bakari: also, that'd give us one more 1/4 double, and doubles here feel relaly cool
16:42 Bakari: I guess 01:15:196 (4,5,1) - 01:19:682 (3,4,1) - these are based on vocals and you intentionally don't stress (1), right?
16:42 Lapis Aoki: https://puu.sh/w9xA3.jpg
16:43 Lapis Aoki: also about the previous point
16:43 Lapis Aoki: http://puu.sh/w9xB3.jpg
16:43 Bakari: looks sweet
16:44 Bakari: 01:29:775 (1,2,3) - what about this jump, though. it feels sort of like the first one that we've nerfed
16:45 Bakari: the rest is okay, it's just a few things about the jumps
16:45 Lapis Aoki: How about this one then? https://puu.sh/w9xE9.jpg
16:45 Bakari: (3) has some vocals going on and feels pretty valueable, I can see that pattern working, sure
16:46 Lapis Aoki: Yep, (1) (2) has some high notes, then (3) has soft vocals
16:48 Bakari: so yeah, just check it once again to make sure everything works as you intended it after the changes
16:49 Lapis Aoki: Alright
We did a few things, changed some patterns to flow and look better.IRC log20:12 Tae: touch my butt~
20:12 Bakari: sure <3
20:12 *Bakari is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1226410 BTS - Spring Day [Missing You]]
20:14 Bakari: 00:22:204 (9,1,2,3) - can you explain why the spacing gradually increases here?
20:15 Bakari: I'd rather go for 9-1 being a strong jump
20:15 Bakari: then 1-2 being a jump but less intense
20:15 Tae: yeah, igy
20:15 Bakari: and then regular ds to match the instruments
20:15 Tae: ah, yeah
20:16 Bakari: oh, and are you sure about the intro being so heavy in terms of 1/4s?
20:17 Bakari: I'd probably use more sliders than circles for the sake of spread
20:17 Bakari: besides, kiai feels pretty easy when compared with the intro
20:18 Tae: yeah
20:18 Tae: im willing to tone it down on the 1/4 in some areas, but I feel it fits in other areas
20:18 Bakari: it definitely works well with the rapping
20:18 Tae: 00:24:168 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - for example, i'd be happy to put some more sliders here
20:18 Bakari: yeah, that's the kind of stuff that'd benefit from having more sliders
20:19 Bakari: also, the 1/4 spacing at times is pretty hard to read
20:19 Bakari: and spacing in general as well
20:19 Bakari: 00:19:962 (1,2,3) - for example the change here
20:20 Tae: yeah
20:20 Tae: ah, if 1 goes down, and 2 goes up, that could work better?
20:20 Bakari: my main concern is patterns like 00:45:336 (3,4,5) - 00:49:822 (3,4,5,6) -
20:21 Bakari: anything goes, as long as you feel like a player can understand and feel the spacing changes
20:21 Tae: https://puu.sh/w9FZa/30a530bd10.png like this, for example?
20:21 Bakari: yeah, this looks great
20:22 Bakari: 00:52:205 (4,5) - 00:53:186 (9,10) - 00:58:373 (1,2) - have a look at these things
20:22 Bakari: 00:58:373 (1,2) - 00:59:495 (4,5,6) - or maybe at these, this is a more noticeable contrast
20:22 Tae: yeah
20:22 Bakari: i see tha you try to do cool stuff with the spacings
20:22 Tae: the first should definitely be more spaced than the second
20:23 Bakari: probably you could play with the stacks as well
20:23 Bakari: but keep in mind that stacks should also be consistent
20:23 Tae: yeah
20:25 Bakari: in terms of rhythm this whole thing is pretty good, by the way
20:25 Bakari: but i'm not so sure about your flow
20:25 Tae: that's good to know
20:25 Bakari: 00:40:570 (2,3,4,5) - this seems to be linear flow, but then it suddenly breaks
20:25 Tae: yeah, i do struggle with flow above everything else
20:26 Bakari: https://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/GV50RsqS.jpg
20:26 Bakari: probably something of the kind?
20:26 Tae: yeah, that looks better if 4/5 is flipped
20:28 Bakari: 00:36:504 (2,3,4) - this isn't a bad pattern, but your flow appears to be mostly linear.
20:28 Bakari: so, it sort of stands out
20:29 Bakari: probably something closer to this https://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/3isJjeGc.jpg
20:29 Bakari: or if you like the existing pattern, introduce something similar in a few more parts
20:30 Tae: yeah
20:30 Bakari: 01:06:784 (7,8,1) - i don't feel this pattern in the song, let me explain why
20:31 Bakari: a) (1) is stressed less than (8), which is quite strange considering the fact that (1) is actually stronger
20:32 Bakari: b) the pattern on its own is sort of unfinished, there's a lot of empty space and it just feels somewhat random
20:33 Tae: hm, yeah
20:33 Bakari: if we could use spacing more freely, sometihng like https://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/1GFse1sv.jpg this would be perfect
20:33 Tae: o, that looks good
20:33 Tae: lemme try that
20:33 Bakari: i personally think that the pattern i showed looks better because it has a finished idea
20:34 Bakari: i make 7-8 symmetrical
20:34 Bakari: and keep the flow somewhat linear
20:34 Bakari: probably we could try a ner'd version like https://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/2KdI3k55.jpg this
20:36 Tae: https://puu.sh/w9GzQ/dbf68052b0.png yeah, I think I managed to do it, that flows well, thanks
20:37 Bakari: just introduce a few more patterns like this (spacing/flow)
20:37 Bakari: so it'd feel like a part of your style, rather than a single fix
20:38 Tae: yeah
20:38 Bakari: 01:24:728 (4,1) - this doesn't really flow, I think
20:38 Bakari: i mean, it does, but it works differently than the rest of the patterns
20:38 Bakari: there's a pretty sharp angle between 4 and 1
20:38 Tae: ctrl+g on 4, maybe?
20:38 Bakari: then 3-4 goes weird :p
20:39 Tae: hm
20:40 Bakari: https://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/0tCkHjxk.jpg 120 degrees rotation, perhaps?
20:41 Bakari: and the rest would look like this https://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/S4Vejz2a.jpg
20:43 Bakari: 01:29:214 (4,1,2,3) - similar pattern/flow thingy https://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/dOnSi1vW.jpg
20:43 Bakari: 01:35:943 (5,1) - and this'd be the last one, i believe
20:46 Tae: alright, fixed those now
20:46 Bakari: I guess that's about it
20:46 Bakari: just the spacings/flow
Topic Starter
Bakari wrote:
Hey!
[General][Easy]
- Add a fe w more tags like Bangtan Boys and Bangtans just in case somebody tries to use them. yep, added a few more tags as mentioned... im not too sure about "Bangtans" though...?
- Metadata is correct, as we've already discussed that. link
- The hitsounds feel really loud in general. Pobably should be 15-30% quiter. I believe I adjusted this before we had our irc discussion
- 01:20:803 (1,2,3) - this combo definitely stands out in terms of length and consistency. You might want to look into it to make sure it works as intended. aa, fixed the ncs
- 01:36:504 (1,2) - that'd be cool if these two were using identical shapes, sort of like 01:32:018 (1,1) - this way the patterning would feel more structured. yup
Note: 01:51:084 (2,4) - again, similar shapes could make the part feel more structured. think these are more similar- 01:47:719 - I would really prefer this to be an individual circle. alright. As a matter of fact, 01:46:598 (2) - I would probably just replace each of the beats with a circle, the vocals here feel pretty interesting and so do the drums. hm... I think the vocal itself calls for a slider as it's a continuous sound
- 01:49:962 (1) - minor - overlaps with the HP bar, probably should be higher as to prevent that from happening. adjusted because of the issue above
Just a few visual things. I actually think it's a pretty cool difficulty.
[Missing You]I feel like the set is pretty cool, but it definitely can and should get better before we push it any further. Remind me to stick around and get back to it some time later Will do!
We did a few things, changed some patterns to flow and look better. should be better nowIRC log20:12 Tae: touch my butt~
20:12 Bakari: sure <3
20:12 *Bakari is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1226410 BTS - Spring Day [Missing You]]
20:14 Bakari: 00:22:204 (9,1,2,3) - can you explain why the spacing gradually increases here?
20:15 Bakari: I'd rather go for 9-1 being a strong jump
20:15 Bakari: then 1-2 being a jump but less intense
20:15 Tae: yeah, igy
20:15 Bakari: and then regular ds to match the instruments
20:15 Tae: ah, yeah
20:16 Bakari: oh, and are you sure about the intro being so heavy in terms of 1/4s?
20:17 Bakari: I'd probably use more sliders than circles for the sake of spread
20:17 Bakari: besides, kiai feels pretty easy when compared with the intro
20:18 Tae: yeah
20:18 Tae: im willing to tone it down on the 1/4 in some areas, but I feel it fits in other areas
20:18 Bakari: it definitely works well with the rapping
20:18 Tae: 00:24:168 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - for example, i'd be happy to put some more sliders here
20:18 Bakari: yeah, that's the kind of stuff that'd benefit from having more sliders
20:19 Bakari: also, the 1/4 spacing at times is pretty hard to read
20:19 Bakari: and spacing in general as well
20:19 Bakari: 00:19:962 (1,2,3) - for example the change here
20:20 Tae: yeah
20:20 Tae: ah, if 1 goes down, and 2 goes up, that could work better?
20:20 Bakari: my main concern is patterns like 00:45:336 (3,4,5) - 00:49:822 (3,4,5,6) -
20:21 Bakari: anything goes, as long as you feel like a player can understand and feel the spacing changes
20:21 Tae: https://puu.sh/w9FZa/30a530bd10.png like this, for example?
20:21 Bakari: yeah, this looks great
20:22 Bakari: 00:52:205 (4,5) - 00:53:186 (9,10) - 00:58:373 (1,2) - have a look at these things
20:22 Bakari: 00:58:373 (1,2) - 00:59:495 (4,5,6) - or maybe at these, this is a more noticeable contrast
20:22 Tae: yeah
20:22 Bakari: i see tha you try to do cool stuff with the spacings
20:22 Tae: the first should definitely be more spaced than the second
20:23 Bakari: probably you could play with the stacks as well
20:23 Bakari: but keep in mind that stacks should also be consistent
20:23 Tae: yeah
20:25 Bakari: in terms of rhythm this whole thing is pretty good, by the way
20:25 Bakari: but i'm not so sure about your flow
20:25 Tae: that's good to know
20:25 Bakari: 00:40:570 (2,3,4,5) - this seems to be linear flow, but then it suddenly breaks
20:25 Tae: yeah, i do struggle with flow above everything else
20:26 Bakari: https://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/GV50RsqS.jpg
20:26 Bakari: probably something of the kind?
20:26 Tae: yeah, that looks better if 4/5 is flipped
20:28 Bakari: 00:36:504 (2,3,4) - this isn't a bad pattern, but your flow appears to be mostly linear.
20:28 Bakari: so, it sort of stands out
20:29 Bakari: probably something closer to this https://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/3isJjeGc.jpg
20:29 Bakari: or if you like the existing pattern, introduce something similar in a few more parts
20:30 Tae: yeah
20:30 Bakari: 01:06:784 (7,8,1) - i don't feel this pattern in the song, let me explain why
20:31 Bakari: a) (1) is stressed less than (8), which is quite strange considering the fact that (1) is actually stronger
20:32 Bakari: b) the pattern on its own is sort of unfinished, there's a lot of empty space and it just feels somewhat random
20:33 Tae: hm, yeah
20:33 Bakari: if we could use spacing more freely, sometihng like https://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/1GFse1sv.jpg this would be perfect
20:33 Tae: o, that looks good
20:33 Tae: lemme try that
20:33 Bakari: i personally think that the pattern i showed looks better because it has a finished idea
20:34 Bakari: i make 7-8 symmetrical
20:34 Bakari: and keep the flow somewhat linear
20:34 Bakari: probably we could try a ner'd version like https://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/2KdI3k55.jpg this
20:36 Tae: https://puu.sh/w9GzQ/dbf68052b0.png yeah, I think I managed to do it, that flows well, thanks
20:37 Bakari: just introduce a few more patterns like this (spacing/flow)
20:37 Bakari: so it'd feel like a part of your style, rather than a single fix
20:38 Tae: yeah
20:38 Bakari: 01:24:728 (4,1) - this doesn't really flow, I think
20:38 Bakari: i mean, it does, but it works differently than the rest of the patterns
20:38 Bakari: there's a pretty sharp angle between 4 and 1
20:38 Tae: ctrl+g on 4, maybe?
20:38 Bakari: then 3-4 goes weird :p
20:39 Tae: hm
20:40 Bakari: https://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/0tCkHjxk.jpg 120 degrees rotation, perhaps?
20:41 Bakari: and the rest would look like this https://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/S4Vejz2a.jpg
20:43 Bakari: 01:29:214 (4,1,2,3) - similar pattern/flow thingy https://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/dOnSi1vW.jpg
20:43 Bakari: 01:35:943 (5,1) - and this'd be the last one, i believe
20:46 Tae: alright, fixed those now
20:46 Bakari: I guess that's about it
20:46 Bakari: just the spacings/flow
applied everything in bakari's mod, thanks!
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Hmm... You may add "防弾少年団" in tags because it's an japanese name for bts. 
Why add the Japanese name, though?- Frontier - wrote:
Hmm... You may add "防弾少年団" in tags because it's an japanese name for bts.
I think someone might find bts maps in this name.Lapis Aoki wrote:
Why add the Japanese name, though?
Topic Starter
Hmm, I would add the Japanese name if I was mapping the Japanese version of one of their songs, but I don't really feel it fits on a Korean song... I should add the translation "bulletproof boy scouts" though- Frontier - wrote:
Hmm... You may add "防弾少年団" in tags because it's an japanese name for bts.
Hello from my queue! 
Normally I don't enjoy K-pop, but BTS is an exception. Especially this one.
Sorry if the mod is short. I have problem modding normal and easy.
Good luck with your mapset!
Normally I don't enjoy K-pop, but BTS is an exception. Especially this one.
General
- Maybe you can make a new kiai section on these parts to emphasize them: 01:29:775 - and 01:47:719 - .
- 02:05:383 - I think the kiai should stop here instead as the music mostly stops here.
Firetruck's Normal
- 00:52:766 (3,4) - Maybe instead of a 1/2 slider, you put a circle on each half beat to emphasize the loud drum sounds.
- 00:52:766 (3,4) - Circle here because strong sound.
- 01:44:074 (2,3) - Maybe align these directly below the previous slider?
Lapis' Hard
- 01:10:710 (3,4) - I think a 1/8 repeating sliders is a bit too hard for an advance difficulty.
- 01:47:719 - Why is the hitsound volume 5%?
Spring Day
- 00:25:570 (3) - I think this should be a 1/4 slider with no repetition instead, as it supports the vocal more as there's no vocal on 00:25:850 - . You seem to be following the vocal more so I don't see why you wouldn't here. Also, players/modders might think that it's the same to 00:25:009 (2) - where it doesn't.
- 00:30:056 (3) - Perhaps making this the same as 00:27:813 (3,4,5,6) - as they sound similar.
- 00:34:541 (5,1) - Players might mistook these for a 1/4 snapping instead of a beat snap. Perhaps put some spacing between them?
- 00:40:429 (1,2,3,4,5) - Instead of this how about doing this instead to emphasize the style of the vocal (idk what to call it) instead as the repeating 1/2 sliders kinda downgrade that part: https://gyazo.com/f4986d91834a9c72237d37de98d58f8b
- 01:37:345 (3,4) - I think the spacing is a bit too far here.
Good luck with your mapset!
Topic Starter
FiddleBlue wrote:
Hello from my queue!
Normally I don't enjoy K-pop, but BTS is an exception. Especially this one.Sorry if the mod is short. I have problem modding normal and easy.General
- Maybe you can make a new kiai section on these parts to emphasize them: 01:29:775 - and 01:47:719 - . yeah that sounds fine
- 02:05:383 - I think the kiai should stop here instead as the music mostly stops here. i think it's fine as is, goes with the fading out as well :thinking:
Spring Day
- 00:25:570 (3) - I think this should be a 1/4 slider with no repetition instead, as it supports the vocal more as there's no vocal on 00:25:850 - . You seem to be following the vocal more so I don't see why you wouldn't here. Also, players/modders might think that it's the same to 00:25:009 (2) - where it doesn't. ye, igy
- 00:30:056 (3) - Perhaps making this the same as 00:27:813 (3,4,5,6) - as they sound similar. did it the other way round but ssh
- 00:34:541 (5,1) - Players might mistook these for a 1/4 snapping instead of a beat snap. Perhaps put some spacing between them? I did intend for it to be like this but I can change it if others have an issue with it
- 00:40:429 (1,2,3,4,5) - Instead of this how about doing this instead to emphasize the style of the vocal (idk what to call it) instead as the repeating 1/2 sliders kinda downgrade that part: https://gyazo.com/f4986d91834a9c72237d37de98d58f8b i think my version follows it pretty closely, but thanks for the suggestion
- 01:37:345 (3,4) - I think the spacing is a bit too far here. fixed
Good luck with your mapset!
ok i may have forgotten a 6 here when i was fixing volumes so lemme just fix that for uFiddleBlue wrote:
- 01:47:719 - Why is the hitsound volume 5%?
Nothing changed. Thank you for looking at the diff, though!FiddleBlue wrote:
Lapis' Hard
- 01:10:710 (3,4) - I think a 1/8 repeating sliders is a bit too hard for an advance difficulty. There're beats on 1/8 ticks. Besides, 1/8 are fine in hard difficulties.
- 01:47:719 - Why is the hitsound volume 5%? It's not 5%..?
YUS
FIRE
THESE
SAKURA MOTHA
FUKA SPIRNG
ASS DAY IN SUMMA
BC IT FIRE AF IN SUMMA
YEA GO BAKARI
BAKARI NO LONGER BAKA BC GUNA BUBBLÉ THÏS SHÎT BOIII
GO BAKARIIII WEEEEWW
GO TAE TÅË TÂÈ B@Y BAYEEEE WEW
FIRE
THESE
SAKURA MOTHA
FUKA SPIRNG
ASS DAY IN SUMMA
BC IT FIRE AF IN SUMMA
YEA GO BAKARI
BAKARI NO LONGER BAKA BC GUNA BUBBLÉ THÏS SHÎT BOIII
GO BAKARIIII WEEEEWW
GO TAE TÅË TÂÈ B@Y BAYEEEE WEW
Topic Starter
Jesus Nolan...
you could at leaat mod this and help it to get ranked :^)
you could at leaat mod this and help it to get ranked :^)
nolan r u okay
FROM MAE QQQQUEUEE
Good luck further!
Easy
00:33:700 (1,2,3) - Blanket maybe?
00:46:037 (5,1) - I'm not sure if you didn't blanket it on purpose
00:57:252 (1,2) - For me, this looks werid
01:20:803 (1,2,3) - Blanket
01:23:046 (4,1,4) - 1. not sure about these slight overlaps
2. Did you make these by hand? or are they copy/pasted?
01:27:532 (4,5,1) - Blanket, 01:27:532 (4,1) - overlap
01:32:018 (4,5,6,1) - This could look better
01:40:990 (1,2,3) - Blanket maybe?
01:42:112 (2,5) - overlap
01:48:280 (4,5) - I don't like how this looks
01:56:691 (4,5) - Blanket
00:46:037 (5,1) - I'm not sure if you didn't blanket it on purpose
00:57:252 (1,2) - For me, this looks werid
01:20:803 (1,2,3) - Blanket
01:23:046 (4,1,4) - 1. not sure about these slight overlaps
2. Did you make these by hand? or are they copy/pasted?
01:27:532 (4,5,1) - Blanket, 01:27:532 (4,1) - overlap
01:32:018 (4,5,6,1) - This could look better
01:40:990 (1,2,3) - Blanket maybe?
01:42:112 (2,5) - overlap
01:48:280 (4,5) - I don't like how this looks
01:56:691 (4,5) - Blanket
Firetruck's Normal
01:26:411 (3,1,2) - Blanket?
01:32:018 (1) - Move the first curving anker just a tiny bit to the left (Sorry, very nit-picky :p)
01:32:018 (1) - Move the first curving anker just a tiny bit to the left (Sorry, very nit-picky :p)
Lapis' Hard
01:05:943 (4,5) - Unexpected jump?
01:26:971 (4,1) - Blanket?
01:32:579 (2,3,4) - This isn't a perfect rectangle :/ Try to copy/paste then rotate 120 degrees
02:05:663 (1) - Fix last curve?
01:26:971 (4,1) - Blanket?
01:32:579 (2,3,4) - This isn't a perfect rectangle :/ Try to copy/paste then rotate 120 degrees
02:05:663 (1) - Fix last curve?
Missing You
00:24:728 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This looked really compacted
00:31:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Not a fan of this shape
00:38:186 (1,2) - Unexpected jump?
00:52:766 (6) - NC
01:08:467 (6,1) - Blanket
01:09:168 (7) - NC
01:09:588 (1) - Remove NC
01:10:009 (2,2) - Weird overlap?
01:12:953 (4,2) - oh my
01:14:074 (1,4) - ^
01:14:074 (1,5) - ^^
01:43:233 (1,5) - Overlap
01:47:719 (1,2) - Blanket
02:00:897 (6,3) - What
02:05:523 (3) - I think the song supports one last note here?
00:31:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Not a fan of this shape
00:38:186 (1,2) - Unexpected jump?
00:52:766 (6) - NC
01:08:467 (6,1) - Blanket
01:09:168 (7) - NC
01:09:588 (1) - Remove NC
01:10:009 (2,2) - Weird overlap?
01:12:953 (4,2) - oh my
01:14:074 (1,4) - ^
01:14:074 (1,5) - ^^
01:43:233 (1,5) - Overlap
01:47:719 (1,2) - Blanket
02:00:897 (6,3) - What
02:05:523 (3) - I think the song supports one last note here?
Good luck further!
Thanks for modding!danielexus wrote:
Lapis' Hard01:05:943 (4,5) - Unexpected jump? This jump was suggested by Bakari as the way he holds his vocal here is strong.
01:26:971 (4,1) - Blanket? It's already good.
01:32:579 (2,3,4) - This isn't a perfect rectangle :/ Try to copy/paste then rotate 120 degrees I made it like this on purpose. Plus, I think it's fine.
02:05:663 (1) - Fix last curve? Fixed.
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Topic Starter
danielexus wrote:
FROM MAE QQQQUEUEEEasypolished a few things, applied most of this00:33:700 (1,2,3) - Blanket maybe?
00:46:037 (5,1) - I'm not sure if you didn't blanket it on purpose
00:57:252 (1,2) - For me, this looks werid
01:20:803 (1,2,3) - Blanket
01:23:046 (4,1,4) - 1. not sure about these slight overlaps
2. Did you make these by hand? or are they copy/pasted?
01:27:532 (4,5,1) - Blanket, 01:27:532 (4,1) - overlap
01:32:018 (4,5,6,1) - This could look better
01:40:990 (1,2,3) - Blanket maybe?
01:42:112 (2,5) - overlap should be fine, 2 isn't visible when 5 appears
01:48:280 (4,5) - I don't like how this looks
01:56:691 (4,5) - BlanketMissing You00:24:728 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This looked really compacted should be fine imo
00:31:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Not a fan of this shape ^
00:38:186 (1,2) - Unexpected jump?
00:52:766 (6) - NC
01:08:467 (6,1) - Blanket
01:09:168 (7) - NC
01:09:588 (1) - Remove NC
01:10:009 (2,2) - Weird overlap?
01:12:953 (4,2) - oh my
01:14:074 (1,4) - ^
01:14:074 (1,5) - ^^
01:43:233 (1,5) - Overlap
01:47:719 (1,2) - Blanket
02:00:897 (6,3) - What what do you mean what... i dont think it's really an issue?
02:05:523 (3) - I think the song supports one last note here? it's really just a continuation of the note before, it should be fine
no reply = fixed, thanks for helping
From my modding queue.
Overall looks really good! Great job.
Easy - I have nothing its a good starter.
Firetruck's Normal:
00:17:158 (1) - I'd make this a reverse or a note and a slider so it can accent the vocal.
I feel as if the spacing could go up by a little bit so the slider ends dont overlap other objects. But probably just me. No issue with doing something like this but
Lapis's Hard:
00:17:158 (1,2) - Still sounds weird. Maybe just a note on the red then a slider from the white to the red tick?
01:05:102 (1,4) - Though slow this rhythm here might be a little too hard for some players
01:49:682 (4,1) - Big jump for something in this difficulty compared to everything else.
Missing You: (Might be a little out of order)
00:52:766 (1,2,3,4) - A 3* "no-no" newer players won't know how to deal with this. I'd keep it a close stream or 2 short sliders.
01:29:775 (1,2,3) - 1 to 2 is quite a big jump. I can see that you wanted to make it equal with the starts of 1 and 3 for the triangle . I'd move it here to make it a little less strenuous for the player. https://puu.sh/wflUc/24d737bc97.png
Overall looks really good! Great job.
Easy - I have nothing its a good starter.
Firetruck's Normal:
00:17:158 (1) - I'd make this a reverse or a note and a slider so it can accent the vocal.
I feel as if the spacing could go up by a little bit so the slider ends dont overlap other objects. But probably just me. No issue with doing something like this but
Lapis's Hard:
00:17:158 (1,2) - Still sounds weird. Maybe just a note on the red then a slider from the white to the red tick?
01:05:102 (1,4) - Though slow this rhythm here might be a little too hard for some players
01:49:682 (4,1) - Big jump for something in this difficulty compared to everything else.
Missing You: (Might be a little out of order)
00:52:766 (1,2,3,4) - A 3* "no-no" newer players won't know how to deal with this. I'd keep it a close stream or 2 short sliders.
01:29:775 (1,2,3) - 1 to 2 is quite a big jump. I can see that you wanted to make it equal with the starts of 1 and 3 for the triangle . I'd move it here to make it a little less strenuous for the player. https://puu.sh/wflUc/24d737bc97.png
Topic Starter
thanks for helping!Mistaken wrote:
Missing You: (Might be a little out of order)
00:52:766 (1,2,3,4) - A 3* "no-no" newer players won't know how to deal with this. I'd keep it a close stream or 2 short sliders. idk, this is meant to be mapped insane-ish, hence the amount of 1/4
01:29:775 (1,2,3) - 1 to 2 is quite a big jump. I can see that you wanted to make it equal with the starts of 1 and 3 for the triangle . I'd move it here to make it a little less strenuous for the player. https://puu.sh/wflUc/24d737bc97.png adjusted but so that it blankets :thinking:
Nothing changed. Thank you for modding, though!Mistaken wrote:
Lapis's Hard:
00:17:158 (1,2) - Still sounds weird. Maybe just a note on the red then a slider from the white to the red tick? This is good to me.
01:05:102 (1,4) - Though slow this rhythm here might be a little too hard for some players The rhythm here follows the music perfectly, so I don't view this as an issue.
01:49:682 (4,1) - Big jump for something in this difficulty compared to everything else. I made the jump here a little bit difficult because (1) sounds strong.
Also at 01:54:168 (4,1) - they pretty much have the same distance. I'll change this if more modders complained about this jump, though.
hey
tae
how
was
your
day
was
it
spring
Topic Starter
I really don't think this is okay.
Let's keep the discussion relevant to the beatmap, please.
Let's keep the discussion relevant to the beatmap, please.
tae u sound like a goofball sayin dat smh we giving u support and u acting like an indifferent moderator dufuq
Behonkiss wrote:
Firetruck's Normal:
00:17:158 (1): Again, doesn't need to be a new combo.
00:46:878 (4): Make this a new combo instead of the slider after it. There are several other instances of this throughout. i nc on downbeats
01:04:822 (1): Might look better if you curved it to blanket the preceding slider instead of that overlap.
01:47:719 (1): Same here. 01:47:158 (4,1) -
i like the aestethics of the straight slider leading into a curvy, and same with the one above, a curvy leading into a straight
FiddleBlue wrote:
Firetruck's Normal
- 00:52:766 (3,4) - Maybe instead of a 1/2 slider, you put a circle on each half beat to emphasize the loud drum sounds. i think 1/2 sliders emphasize it better
- 00:52:766 (3,4) - Circle here because strong sound. ^
- 01:44:074 (2,3) - Maybe align these directly below the previous slider? they're like this intentionally, i think it looks nice~
danielexus wrote:
Firetruck's Normal01:26:411 (3,1,2) - Blanket? don't wanna ruin the flow from the slider before
01:32:018 (1) - Move the first curving anker just a tiny bit to the left (Sorry, very nit-picky :p)
thanks for modding u all! no reply = appliedMistaken wrote:
Firetruck's Normal:
00:17:158 (1) - I'd make this a reverse or a note and a slider so it can accent the vocal.
I feel as if the spacing could go up by a little bit so the slider ends dont overlap other objects. But probably just me. No issue with doing something like this but i don't like doing higher spacings in normal, it'll feel weird going from an easy with easy rhythm to a normal with high spacing and that uses 1/2 rhythm
hey tae how was ur day was it spring
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