JeZag wrote:
hello, for m4m
wow, this map is super fun to play. take my suggestions below lightly, they most just opinion. also, pm me if any questions ^^;;
00:10:634 (1,2) - just consider alternative using hitcircles instead. i think it might be better to click these 4 notes I intend for a made slowly sounds.
00:14:772 (4,5) - i feel like the kickslider going perpendicular to the next note isnt very very good. if you are worried about overlap with 00:14:083 (1) , maybe don't worry because they are not on-screen at the same time anyway well, I don't think the patterns problem. I think this pattern is already popular. and the players also know this pattern a lot. before I played this patterns, it's enough clear imo
00:24:341 (4,5,6,7) - can you explain why the spacing here isnt like the other streams? it cant be because of the sudden direction change because of Don't have to be consistent to streams pattern. If the streams pattern to flow or reading problem, I agree the suggestion. but it's enough reading and moving or will cursor control it. I don't thinking this problem.
00:18:565 (2,3,4,5,6) - , so im guessing its because its a straight line? either way i think this should be consistent with the others. ^ same.
00:28:393 (3,4,5) - imo this rhythm plays better like this because the current rhythm has no click on 00:28:565 I never intend to be consistent in this part. Because if you pursue the same pattern, it will be boring. I was created to conceive various patterns and to give fun.
01:00:117 (3,1,2,3,4,1) - something to keep in mind, right now 01:00:634 (3,4) is the largest emphasis due to DS even though it should be the weakest (since the vocal isnt pronouncing something sharp here, more like adding to the prev instead). imo the largest emphasis should be 01:00:807 (4,1) .
an easy fix is to stack 01:00:807 (4) on 01:00:290 (1) (which is ok imo due to the AR)
01:00:979 (1,2) - for slow sliders like this, consider good blanket because its not like its going to escape the player's attention at this speed This is the right slider speed for the mood. if x0.50 slider speed a litte fast i guess
01:49:945 (9) - this should probably be deleted because keeping it actually ruins some of the emphasis of the empty space going into 01:50:634 (1) This is stream isn't problem. because, the other electronic vocal start point 01:49:945 here. and if this note is remove a little confuse streams reading.
01:58:910 (1,2) - this can be cleaned up
there are couple other sliders that also can also look much better in editor (and in game) with better blankets. you can either ignore, find them and correct, or just PM me forum or in-game and i will point them out.
02:11:927 (4) - delete this because its not in the music and also takes away from emphasis on clicking the head of 02:12:014 (1) . if you do delete, you also would need to remap to redo the emphasis tho, so your call. You need to think more about play. Consistency is important, but there must be some rhythm change while creating a variety of rhythms. and I think this rhythm matches the song. It's really a bit of a change.
02:32:876 (4,5) - i actually don't get the point of this. i dont think you need the kicksliders for vocals; hitcircles would be better here. if you do decide to keep kicksliders, make them overlap more and closer because then it also looks less messy imo. it's really player to problem? I can express vocals, but there is a lot of the other rhythm in it. And it's a really vague vocal rhythm.
02:36:841 (4) - this feels like it should be a kickslider and in a pattern with 02:37:014 (5,6) I intended to made stop moving patterns here.
02:39:945 (8) - try to make this tail clickable, its big. I don't want vocal sounds make it. and I made to electric piano sounds here.
02:53:393 (3) - same as the last time about making this kickslider Same.
03:23:393 (2,3) - i dont see the need for kicksliders, especially in the calm section and when only thing here is vocals ^ same my reason.
03:51:324 (5) - delete or not, its up to you don't delete. Same to my reason.
03:52:358 (2,3) - this here is wasting potential to make 03:52:358 (2,3,4) - into 2 cool looking wub sliders representing the same sound. also, i dont see a need to make 03:52:531 (3) a clickable beat anyhow
03:54:083 (5,6,7) - this really really feels like it should be like this rhythm with the kickslider being in a pattern with 03:53:565 (2,3,4) due to similar sounds and for the emphasis on 03:54:427 (8) Okay
03:57:186 (7) - this really feels like it could and should be 3/4 and not 1/2 I consistency 1/2 rhythm here.
04:39:255 (2,3,4,5,6) - this feels a tad bit awkward. if you change flow like this, make it more sharp and not round. The same to my reason.
Thanks for mods !