00:48:797 (1,2,3) - I would remove the circle on 2. You can hear there's a pause before the 1/4's begin on the red tick.
00:55:131 (2,3) - not a good rhythm choice. You make 3 the point of emphasis with this rhythm but it's a weak blue tick.
00:57:797 (3,4) - felt rather empty. I think you could have used a 1/2 slider and added some more density. But if you want rhythm variety i'll accept that as a valid argument (but only if you mean it).
01:02:797 (1,2) - Not a good rhythm either. for the same reason as earlier. I would shorten 01:02:797 (1) - to a 3/4 slider and use the same rhythm i recommended earlier.
01:45:714 (1) - Sounds entirely unnecessary imo.
01:46:047 (3,4) - These are all wrong. Put them on white ticks please. Listen to 01:46:130 - 01:46:464 -
your current rhythm has no rhythmic value since you do a 2x repeat, then a 3x repeat, then a 1x repeat. its impossible to read how many repeats there should be on a 1/4 slider.
01:56:130 - 02:06:797 - This section is waaaay more difficult than the earlier section. I don't think its appropriate at all, its too much of a step up and already feels like the kiai section in terms of intensity. Also, the triplets are very overmapped.
02:54:713 (2,3) - Stacking is better. It's really hard to aim a 1/4 jump like this and still have to slow down to catch 3 due to them being spaced.
02:56:463 (1,1,1,1,1) - These are 1/6.
03:09:463 (3,4,1) - The overlap makes the pattern a bit unpolished for me
03:14:463 (1,2,1,2) - use streams instead? You spam 1/4 sliders so often that when i hear clear 1/4 beats i wish you used something different. Here is a good opportunity.
03:19:630 (4) - Make this a 1/4 slider because 03:19:797 - is a really important beat. You have to keep it clickable or you ruin the 3/4 rhythm here. 03:20:047 (2,3) - is good.
03:20:463 (1,2,3,1) - I would just not map it... the snapping is somewhere between 1/12 and 1/8 and probably requires a bpm shift. simplify rhythm here unless you want to time it, because the current snap is definitely wrong/
03:36:380 (2) - Remove this since you don't do 1/4 jumps on the second one. Imo the 1/4 jump is too much of a spike for this section anyways.
03:39:047 (2) - ^
03:50:797 (1,1) - Huge jump out of nowhere...
04:01:130 (4,5) - This jump is really inappropriate too... why does 5 need such large spacing?
04:14:797 (1,2) - I think its too hard to see the repeats on slider 2. Don't stack and do a different pattern that keeps the slider visible.
04:25:463 (1,1,1,1,1) - 1/6
05:09:543 (4) - two circles instead? The beat on red tick is pretty important too.
05:11:543 (3) - Same here. You map 05:11:210 (2,3) - similarly, but they sound different, the second one has two notes.
05:14:543 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same here. You map them the same, but the first is just two notes, theres no beat on the blue tick. Remove 05:14:626 (2) - .
05:18:876 (1,2) - Ctrl+G slider 1 two times (and adjust the inconsistency) before you copy paste/ Slider 2 is off because you didn't do this step.
05:20:543 (1,2) - You could use the same slider design imo.
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Pretty good map. I like how it isn't stream heavy. I think you overdo the 1/4 sliders a bit too much though so you could cut back a bit and put a bit more short streams on the kiai's. I mentioned like one or two places. Generally the set is pretty well designed, but that section in the middle with the triplets is my biggest concern.
Also, please properly reply to previous mods. You left a lot of stuff blank. I assume you fixed? and what is +++++?
00:55:131 (2,3) - not a good rhythm choice. You make 3 the point of emphasis with this rhythm but it's a weak blue tick.
00:57:797 (3,4) - felt rather empty. I think you could have used a 1/2 slider and added some more density. But if you want rhythm variety i'll accept that as a valid argument (but only if you mean it).
01:02:797 (1,2) - Not a good rhythm either. for the same reason as earlier. I would shorten 01:02:797 (1) - to a 3/4 slider and use the same rhythm i recommended earlier.
01:45:714 (1) - Sounds entirely unnecessary imo.
01:46:047 (3,4) - These are all wrong. Put them on white ticks please. Listen to 01:46:130 - 01:46:464 -
your current rhythm has no rhythmic value since you do a 2x repeat, then a 3x repeat, then a 1x repeat. its impossible to read how many repeats there should be on a 1/4 slider.01:56:130 - 02:06:797 - This section is waaaay more difficult than the earlier section. I don't think its appropriate at all, its too much of a step up and already feels like the kiai section in terms of intensity. Also, the triplets are very overmapped.
02:54:713 (2,3) - Stacking is better. It's really hard to aim a 1/4 jump like this and still have to slow down to catch 3 due to them being spaced.
02:56:463 (1,1,1,1,1) - These are 1/6.
03:09:463 (3,4,1) - The overlap makes the pattern a bit unpolished for me
03:14:463 (1,2,1,2) - use streams instead? You spam 1/4 sliders so often that when i hear clear 1/4 beats i wish you used something different. Here is a good opportunity.
03:19:630 (4) - Make this a 1/4 slider because 03:19:797 - is a really important beat. You have to keep it clickable or you ruin the 3/4 rhythm here. 03:20:047 (2,3) - is good.
03:20:463 (1,2,3,1) - I would just not map it... the snapping is somewhere between 1/12 and 1/8 and probably requires a bpm shift. simplify rhythm here unless you want to time it, because the current snap is definitely wrong/
03:36:380 (2) - Remove this since you don't do 1/4 jumps on the second one. Imo the 1/4 jump is too much of a spike for this section anyways.
03:39:047 (2) - ^
03:50:797 (1,1) - Huge jump out of nowhere...
04:01:130 (4,5) - This jump is really inappropriate too... why does 5 need such large spacing?
04:14:797 (1,2) - I think its too hard to see the repeats on slider 2. Don't stack and do a different pattern that keeps the slider visible.
04:25:463 (1,1,1,1,1) - 1/6
05:09:543 (4) - two circles instead? The beat on red tick is pretty important too.
05:11:543 (3) - Same here. You map 05:11:210 (2,3) - similarly, but they sound different, the second one has two notes.
05:14:543 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same here. You map them the same, but the first is just two notes, theres no beat on the blue tick. Remove 05:14:626 (2) - .
05:18:876 (1,2) - Ctrl+G slider 1 two times (and adjust the inconsistency) before you copy paste/ Slider 2 is off because you didn't do this step.
05:20:543 (1,2) - You could use the same slider design imo.
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Pretty good map. I like how it isn't stream heavy. I think you overdo the 1/4 sliders a bit too much though so you could cut back a bit and put a bit more short streams on the kiai's. I mentioned like one or two places. Generally the set is pretty well designed, but that section in the middle with the triplets is my biggest concern.
Also, please properly reply to previous mods. You left a lot of stuff blank. I assume you fixed? and what is +++++?
