sup returning the m4m
I guess im lazy too, so i only looked at 2 diffs
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00:03:036 (6) - DS this
00:03:207 (7,4) - stack these?
00:05:436 (1,2,3) - i don't see a major difference in the music to have this stuff uneven
00:05:950 (1,2,1,2) - make the blankets consistent with these sliders
00:06:807 (3,4,5) - if ur going for a diamond might as well make DS it
00:10:064 (1) - seems a bit out of place, i think you should stick with the sharp angled sliders. But if you keep it then blanket something on it
00:07:321 (1,4) - stack em
00:13:664 (3,4,5) - make it equal DS
00:14:864 (3) - emphasizing the sound with a slider-end feels poopy, use a circle or something
00:15:550 (1,1) - you could blanket this much better (if thats what u were going for)
00:16:578 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - this whole part really comes off rough. i dont see much of a call for this funky change. your previous mapped parts had sharp angled flow, and now you turn it into some linear pattern from 2009. If you do want to keep it, you should make it symmetrical at the very least, cuz it looks a bit lopsided
00:23:264 (5,3,4,5) - maybe stack it those or space em out so they arent overlapping
00:27:550 (2) - DS
00:28:236 (2,3,4,5) - plays like a 2010 map, im not into that flow XD
00:36:293 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i like this part, its clean and represents some cute flow
00:38:350 (1,2,3,4,5) - should clean this up and make it symmetrical
00:41:436 (5,1) - plays a bit awkward, try spacing it out
01:02:778 (3) - i think you could cut this out and then take the triplet and space it out. i'd say it matches the music a bit better and would look better
01:09:550 (3,2) - isnt really mapped to anything
01:14:007 (1,2,3) - not too keen on this weird spacing here
I think the biggest issue with this diff is that you are emphasizing things weirdly or putting your own emphasis on something that should be kept standard
and the flow comes off a bit choppy
00:03:207 (7,4) - stack these?
00:05:436 (1,2,3) - i don't see a major difference in the music to have this stuff uneven
00:05:950 (1,2,1,2) - make the blankets consistent with these sliders
00:06:807 (3,4,5) - if ur going for a diamond might as well make DS it
00:10:064 (1) - seems a bit out of place, i think you should stick with the sharp angled sliders. But if you keep it then blanket something on it
00:07:321 (1,4) - stack em
00:13:664 (3,4,5) - make it equal DS
00:14:864 (3) - emphasizing the sound with a slider-end feels poopy, use a circle or something
00:15:550 (1,1) - you could blanket this much better (if thats what u were going for)
00:16:578 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - this whole part really comes off rough. i dont see much of a call for this funky change. your previous mapped parts had sharp angled flow, and now you turn it into some linear pattern from 2009. If you do want to keep it, you should make it symmetrical at the very least, cuz it looks a bit lopsided
00:23:264 (5,3,4,5) - maybe stack it those or space em out so they arent overlapping
00:27:550 (2) - DS
00:28:236 (2,3,4,5) - plays like a 2010 map, im not into that flow XD
00:36:293 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i like this part, its clean and represents some cute flow
00:38:350 (1,2,3,4,5) - should clean this up and make it symmetrical
00:41:436 (5,1) - plays a bit awkward, try spacing it out
01:02:778 (3) - i think you could cut this out and then take the triplet and space it out. i'd say it matches the music a bit better and would look better
01:09:550 (3,2) - isnt really mapped to anything
01:14:007 (1,2,3) - not too keen on this weird spacing here
I think the biggest issue with this diff is that you are emphasizing things weirdly or putting your own emphasis on something that should be kept standard
and the flow comes off a bit choppy
kev1nn's STRIDE GENERATION
00:00:807 (2,2) - I'd say that you should just turn these into sliders to follow the vocals better, or at least scrap 00:01:493 (3) -
00:10:321 (7,6) - seems a bit unnecessary. i dont think you need to jam these notes in there and map a sound that isnt there. or if u keep it, stack 00:11:864 (6,7) - like you did previously
00:24:464 (3,4) - them red tick sliders are icky. i think ur trying to follow the vocals here, but its awkward to play with that pause that comes after it. try moving them up and onto a white tick
00:27:721 (6,7,8,9) - i'd replace these with a slider instead
00:32:864 - i dont think the music calls for this. this awkward pause should be filled
00:17:093 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - so for this entire section, i'd consider it to be a much more tame and relaxing part of the song, i think its currently overmapped / similarly mapped to the other hard parts of the song. i think you tried to justify it by using a buncha hitsounds, but i really dont think this part should be that similar to the rest of the song. like once this part happens @ 00:27:721 (6,7,8,9,1) - then the map should get more intense, but there is currently nothing separating them
00:39:036 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - i'd say you should make these start small then slowly widen them so the first is the easiest jump and the last one is the hardest. currently it seems a bit random.
00:38:350 (2,3,4,5,6) - throwing a stream in here that doesnt fit the music
00:43:665 (4,5,6,3,4,5) - these triplets come off way too funky for what you have mapped so far. you havent really done anything similar to this before, so it feels way out of place
01:02:778 (2) - me thinks you should cut this note out, it doesnt really sound like it fits here
01:00:807 (8,9,1) - stack these, its slightly off and looks yucky
01:18:807 (1,2,3) - this is where you should be mapping on the red ticks so you can emphasize whatever that sound is
Majority of this difficulty feels random, mainly with the rhythm. You deviate from following the vocals and ignoring the main beat or vice versa. It happens often and it is generally uncalled for.
Anyways, the flow good for the most part, just focus on consistency with your flow and rhythms
00:10:321 (7,6) - seems a bit unnecessary. i dont think you need to jam these notes in there and map a sound that isnt there. or if u keep it, stack 00:11:864 (6,7) - like you did previously
00:24:464 (3,4) - them red tick sliders are icky. i think ur trying to follow the vocals here, but its awkward to play with that pause that comes after it. try moving them up and onto a white tick
00:27:721 (6,7,8,9) - i'd replace these with a slider instead
00:32:864 - i dont think the music calls for this. this awkward pause should be filled
00:17:093 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - so for this entire section, i'd consider it to be a much more tame and relaxing part of the song, i think its currently overmapped / similarly mapped to the other hard parts of the song. i think you tried to justify it by using a buncha hitsounds, but i really dont think this part should be that similar to the rest of the song. like once this part happens @ 00:27:721 (6,7,8,9,1) - then the map should get more intense, but there is currently nothing separating them
00:39:036 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - i'd say you should make these start small then slowly widen them so the first is the easiest jump and the last one is the hardest. currently it seems a bit random.
00:38:350 (2,3,4,5,6) - throwing a stream in here that doesnt fit the music
00:43:665 (4,5,6,3,4,5) - these triplets come off way too funky for what you have mapped so far. you havent really done anything similar to this before, so it feels way out of place
01:02:778 (2) - me thinks you should cut this note out, it doesnt really sound like it fits here
01:00:807 (8,9,1) - stack these, its slightly off and looks yucky
01:18:807 (1,2,3) - this is where you should be mapping on the red ticks so you can emphasize whatever that sound is
Majority of this difficulty feels random, mainly with the rhythm. You deviate from following the vocals and ignoring the main beat or vice versa. It happens often and it is generally uncalled for.
Anyways, the flow good for the most part, just focus on consistency with your flow and rhythms
I guess im lazy too, so i only looked at 2 diffs
GL boys, never give up