We are number one but it's longer than I remember it. :thinking:
[Inner Oni]
(ノ°Д°)ノ︵ ┻━┻ This Difficulty is fine, nothing to resist.
[Oni]
00:25:956 - Personally this feels somewhat unnatural slow to be. I wouldn't slow it at all but if you want to keep it, increase the SV to 0.9.
00:31:671 - if you apply above, make 00:31:671 to 0.85 OR you add a line on 00:31:492 - with 0.85, else without one of these solutions, 00:31:671 (122) - looks a bit cluttered with 00:31:492 (121) - .
00:50:331 - 00:51:671 - this setting would rather work for the last difficulty - which "only" used it till 1.10. I suggest to be consistent here because it felt much smoother in the Inner Oni to move from 1.00 to 1.10 than from 1.00 to 1.20.
01:03:099 - Move the line at 01:03:635 - it currently has a very unnecessary overlap between the d an K note: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/wVr1OlEh
01:13:099 (185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197) - Stream should be simplified by removing 01:13:903 (194) - .
01:14:528 - Personal suggestion to decrease it to 1.10, 1.15 fits barely with the setting here.
01:28:814 - 01:31:671 - This sounds... very strange to play. the other two chorus (they're the same, yes) have a closer focus to the vocals but that one sounds rather random than focused. Try this: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/vfXXrTP9 (the marked note is a Finisher Note)
01:31:671 - 01:33:278 - same applies here too: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/9BRh6ePz
02:08:635 (119,120,121) - kkd works better if you ask me.
02:21:581 (49) - It somewhat sounds like an unnecessary filler you can quit it. You should remove it.
03:31:046 (194) - same case like 01:13:903 (194) - .
01:28:814 - end - the whole structure how you've used the SV in- and decreases are pretty random and overdone for the most time. The Inner Oni used them very well and you can "feel" it while playing they're fitting with the changes in the song. I barely understand why 02:00:242 - is 1.35 for example. I mean, I get why you use a fairly higher SV compared to 00:51:671 - since this kiai is even stronger but.. that doesn't really play how it looks. Either try to follow Midnaait's Inner Oni or be consistent with the suggestions I gave above.
[Muzukashii]
01:17:921 (15) - It felt uncomfortable to play that note to be honest, the d kdk rhythm is nice although there is nothing strong on the spot at 01:18:278 (17) - but the (15) note is really meh, I'd remove it, same with 01:23:635 (38) - .
01:49:707 (133) - and 01:56:492 (159) - ^
03:35:064 (15) - 03:40:778 (38) - shrugs
Very solid Muzukashii, I like it!
[Futsuu]
Looks good, tho it plays that I have to get used to it.
[Kantan's... Kan..tan?]
00:07:742 - and 00:13:457 - I think these two beats can be mapped too, obviously with kat notes (since you're already doing that with every note here). This should apply to every upcoming loop.
00:20:242 - 00:25:957 - https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/Gn7taQyN The kat note on the picture would have a stronger impact on the sound while the three Dons in a row fits better to the vocals.
00:34:171 (43) - I'd move the note to 00:33:457 - , ddd there sounds better imo.
00:51:671 - 01:03:100 - should get a nerf in the density, I agree it can be slightly closer since it's the Kiai part but I think it's currently too much.
My suggestion: 00:51:671 - 00:57:385 - https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/CaKgc0oV and 00:57:385 - 01:03:100 - https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/Pv6bnp4M
01:28:814 - 01:34:528 - https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/iqwfl1ZO to have some minor changes compared to the first chorus.
01:34:528 - 01:40:242 - https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/L1L4b6hU ^
01:50:242 (158,159,160,161,162) - to be honest, I somewhat hate dkdkd in Kantan Difficulties, it feels harder imo.. try using ddkkd if you really want to use both colours, I found it pretty cool to have the refrains in single colours.
01:55:957 (168,169,170,171,172) - ^
01:58:814 (174,175,176,177,178) - ^
02:00:242 - 02:05:957 - if you don't want to re-use the first Kiai change I suggest, use this: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/bnpWT1Uh
02:05:957 - 02:11:671 - ^ https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/ibi9MJ2M
And the rest repeats from here, apply to the changes you've made before.
Midnaait's Difficulties are 👌, very well done here! Kantan's Difficulty is solid but definitely can be improved, it's however on a good way. Lno's Oni needs a revamp of the SV usage, aside of this the difficulty itself is nice to play but loses a lot of potential due the lack of SV structure here.
[Inner Oni]
(ノ°Д°)ノ︵ ┻━┻ This Difficulty is fine, nothing to resist.
[Oni]
00:25:956 - Personally this feels somewhat unnatural slow to be. I wouldn't slow it at all but if you want to keep it, increase the SV to 0.9.
00:31:671 - if you apply above, make 00:31:671 to 0.85 OR you add a line on 00:31:492 - with 0.85, else without one of these solutions, 00:31:671 (122) - looks a bit cluttered with 00:31:492 (121) - .
00:50:331 - 00:51:671 - this setting would rather work for the last difficulty - which "only" used it till 1.10. I suggest to be consistent here because it felt much smoother in the Inner Oni to move from 1.00 to 1.10 than from 1.00 to 1.20.
01:03:099 - Move the line at 01:03:635 - it currently has a very unnecessary overlap between the d an K note: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/wVr1OlEh
01:13:099 (185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197) - Stream should be simplified by removing 01:13:903 (194) - .
01:14:528 - Personal suggestion to decrease it to 1.10, 1.15 fits barely with the setting here.
01:28:814 - 01:31:671 - This sounds... very strange to play. the other two chorus (they're the same, yes) have a closer focus to the vocals but that one sounds rather random than focused. Try this: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/vfXXrTP9 (the marked note is a Finisher Note)
01:31:671 - 01:33:278 - same applies here too: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/9BRh6ePz
02:08:635 (119,120,121) - kkd works better if you ask me.
02:21:581 (49) - It somewhat sounds like an unnecessary filler you can quit it. You should remove it.
03:31:046 (194) - same case like 01:13:903 (194) - .
01:28:814 - end - the whole structure how you've used the SV in- and decreases are pretty random and overdone for the most time. The Inner Oni used them very well and you can "feel" it while playing they're fitting with the changes in the song. I barely understand why 02:00:242 - is 1.35 for example. I mean, I get why you use a fairly higher SV compared to 00:51:671 - since this kiai is even stronger but.. that doesn't really play how it looks. Either try to follow Midnaait's Inner Oni or be consistent with the suggestions I gave above.
[Muzukashii]
01:17:921 (15) - It felt uncomfortable to play that note to be honest, the d kdk rhythm is nice although there is nothing strong on the spot at 01:18:278 (17) - but the (15) note is really meh, I'd remove it, same with 01:23:635 (38) - .
01:49:707 (133) - and 01:56:492 (159) - ^
03:35:064 (15) - 03:40:778 (38) - shrugs
Very solid Muzukashii, I like it!
[Futsuu]
Looks good, tho it plays that I have to get used to it.
[Kantan's... Kan..tan?]
00:07:742 - and 00:13:457 - I think these two beats can be mapped too, obviously with kat notes (since you're already doing that with every note here). This should apply to every upcoming loop.
00:20:242 - 00:25:957 - https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/Gn7taQyN The kat note on the picture would have a stronger impact on the sound while the three Dons in a row fits better to the vocals.
00:34:171 (43) - I'd move the note to 00:33:457 - , ddd there sounds better imo.
00:51:671 - 01:03:100 - should get a nerf in the density, I agree it can be slightly closer since it's the Kiai part but I think it's currently too much.
My suggestion: 00:51:671 - 00:57:385 - https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/CaKgc0oV and 00:57:385 - 01:03:100 - https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/Pv6bnp4M
01:28:814 - 01:34:528 - https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/iqwfl1ZO to have some minor changes compared to the first chorus.
01:34:528 - 01:40:242 - https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/L1L4b6hU ^
01:50:242 (158,159,160,161,162) - to be honest, I somewhat hate dkdkd in Kantan Difficulties, it feels harder imo.. try using ddkkd if you really want to use both colours, I found it pretty cool to have the refrains in single colours.
01:55:957 (168,169,170,171,172) - ^
01:58:814 (174,175,176,177,178) - ^
02:00:242 - 02:05:957 - if you don't want to re-use the first Kiai change I suggest, use this: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/bnpWT1Uh
02:05:957 - 02:11:671 - ^ https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/ibi9MJ2M
And the rest repeats from here, apply to the changes you've made before.
Midnaait's Difficulties are 👌, very well done here! Kantan's Difficulty is solid but definitely can be improved, it's however on a good way. Lno's Oni needs a revamp of the SV usage, aside of this the difficulty itself is nice to play but loses a lot of potential due the lack of SV structure here.