...all right, let's do this.
Derekku wrote:
[General]
*Offset is a bit early. Try 1,910 and resnap on all diffs please.
No.
[General]
I'm pleased to say that you're creativity in mapping stuff has increased since Kaze no Fantasy. I'm impressed. Don't be mislead by the length of this mod post, this map was well done IMO
Please fix the artist (pretty sure you know who it is)
[Kantan]
Reduce HP Drain by 1
suggestion: decrease circle size?
00:48:411 (1,3) - symmetry
01:03:295 (1,2,3,4) - suggestion: stack 1 and 2, 3 and 4 (mainly because of red ticks lol) OR make 1and2 and 3and4 just one slider (then reduce ticks to 0.5 lol)
01:07:016 (1,2) - ^
01:40:039 (1) - remove NC
01:56:085 (4) - try not to place it under the slider or something... objects under sliders are IMO too difficult for Easy. Suggestion: just make the slider into beats
01:59:109 (3,4) - ^
02:00:969 (1,2,3) - sorry but you'll want to make this less uglier then make it horizontally symmetrical. I know it's a bit difficult to make perfect sliders, but following this (
viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194) will make it much, MUCH better.
02:07:481 (5,6) - again, don't put under slider
[Futsuu]
Reduce HP Drain by 1
00:23:295 (4) - unnecessary spacing increase in this combo in general.
00:30:736 (4) - ^
00:55:388 (7) - too high
01:14:923 (1) - remove NC
01:23:760 (5,1) - remove NC from 1, put on 5
01:33:527 (1,3) - too high
01:40:039 (1) - remove NC
01:49:806 (1) - symmetry
01:51:667 (3) - ^
01:53:527 (5,1) - swap NC
02:03:062 (5) - I really think this slider needs perfection.
[Muzukashii]
Reduce HP Drain by 1
00:07:713 (1) - remove NC
00:36:551 (6) - too high
00:49:806 (4) - flip it vertically or something, this is too high
00:50:737 (1,5) - remove NC from 1, put on 5, remove on the next 1
00:54:458 (1,5) - ^
00:58:178 (1) - remove NC
01:12:597 (1) - suggestion: put it somewhere a bit more special
01:20:039 (1) - if possible, please put the slider away from the previous one (sliders overlapping = @_@)
01:27:481 (1) - sorry, but remove NC.
01:41:667 (1) - ^
01:55:853 (6) - ...I somehow don't like this slider? Doesn't really represent anything or what, maybe make it a bit more 'natural'...
01:59:574 (6) - somehow I have no problems with this slider though (looks good)
02:03:527 (6) - again, make it perfect
[Oni]
Reduce HP Drain by 1
00:35:388 (5) - symmetry on tail
00:38:876 (1) - remove NC
I like how you made the pre-chorus special.
01:41:667 (1,1,1) - I'm fine with this, but some people might bitch about this. Your choice though, I'd keep it if it was me
01:48:644 (1) - remove NC
01:53:527 (8) - don't stack plz
01:56:085 (7) - make it perfect too...
02:03:527 (7) - see why does THIS ONE look almost perfect while the others weren't?!
02:05:853 (4,5,6) - symmetry
You know what, I have no doubts about giving my 3 pink stars to this now. I am impressed, aqua.
I still feel that this song still deserves something more special (like some memorable Taiko pics for SB? lol, I'd do that if I can just gather 83659238746 Taiko pics...), though it feels OK the way it is now...
I also highly suggest putting in translated lyrics alongside the japanese ones, I think this song deserves it (not required, but... lol)
...contact me as soon as you get to these.