Faust wrote:

Neet Power Neat, not too much to talk about. Normal Hitclaps don't sound so nice though. Soft
Hitclaps might help lift this map up.
But I had tried soft-clap and found it not so well...
- 01:36:566 - This line of blue sliders. You can do better than that, especially when it's at the vocals. You should try
making one repeat slider on the first and 3rd slider. Delete the 2nd and 4'th, it sounds better imo.

- 01:42:566 - Try the same with the blue sliders. Having so many sliders break apart the vocals doesn't make it
very intuitive or nice for gameplay and flow.

- 01:42:566 - Space out 1-3 from 4-6 and so on.

- 03:29:507 - Same thing with the first line of modding.
This "blue tick sliders"is actually what I want to use,sorry

Bikko wrote:

[Hijiri's Neet Power]

OH MY GOD! WTH! RESNAP ALL NOTES RIGHT NOW!OK

quite interesting style. spacing and slider speed too often changed, It has almost random flow. IMO, I can not help this thing much. This style is hard to understand to me.

01:36:566 (1~5) I can not feel any rhythm from these sliders. maybe you try follow its vocal... but... Anyway, don't use blue tick here.Sorry,this is what I want to use
01:41:867 (1~5) ^^
01:53:507 (1,1) delete note and make spinner 01:53:507 ~ 01:54:919 No
03:29:507 (1~4) I can not feel any rhythm from these sliders. don't use blue tick here.
03:40:808 (5,6,1) make them perfect stack.OK

Nivalis wrote:

Mod request via in-game chat
I'll mod every diff except Taiko.

[Hijiri's Weak Power]
-> I think this diff needs more hitsounds. Added
00:52:448 (6,1,2) - Is (1) closer to (2) rather than (6)? I don't know, maybe it's just my eyes It's same
01:07:625 (5) - Add whistle?Added
01:09:036 (2) - Add clap?Added
01:42:213 (3,1) - Encircle it perfectly? Fixed

SPOILER

[attachment=2:49c0e]leorda mod 1.png[/attachment:49c0e]

As you can see, the approach circle can be your guide to encircle it perfectly.
01:52:801 (4) - Adjust the angle, also adjust (1) - (4)'s position Fixed
02:18:919 (1) - This slider's shape is quite ugly. Fixed
03:15:389 (1) - Make it spiral? Fixed

[Hijiri's Average Power]
-> Same as above, I think this diff needs more hitsounds (especially whistles)
01:16:095 (5) - Encircle it perfectly with (4) Fixed
01:17:507 (2,3,4) - Spacing inconsistency? Fixed
01:26:683 (5) - The end of the slider is not above (2) Fixed
01:33:742 (1,2,3,4) - I recommend this pattern. Fixed

SPOILER

[attachment=1:49c0e]leorda mod 2.png[/attachment:49c0e]

01:46:448 (3,4,5,6) - Delete (5) and (6), move (4) one grid up and right, then copy-paste (3) and (4) and flip vertical Fixed
02:35:860 (5) - Like this perhaps? Fixed

SPOILER

[attachment=0:49c0e]leorda mod 3.png[/attachment:49c0e]

[Hijiri's Neet Power] I leave it to Neethime
-> I'm amazed by this diff ^_^
00:34:455 (3,5) - Not perfectly stacked

[Hijiri's Strong Power]
00:57:742 (3,4,5,6,7) - The angle feels weird Fixed
01:19:625 (1) - Add finish at end? Fixed
01:21:919 (6,7) - Add clap? Fixed
01:26:507 (8) - (sorry I have to use Indonesian) Nanggung, kalau mau dibuat efek "wave" harusnya lebih diturunin lagi Fixed
01:43:625 (11) - Use this technique to create a perfect circle? Fixed

SPOILER

02:24:566 (4) - Wave it? Fixed
02:37:448 (1,2,3) - The angle feels weird, if it's a set of slider fans then fan it more. Fixed
03:05:860 (5) - One grid left. Fixed
03:18:213 (1) - Spiral it better? Fixed

SPOILER

Tadi udah banyak itu, tapi kedelete semua yang dua diff terakhir -_-
Yang berhasil diselamatin ya segini Star

Colin Hou wrote:

Leoneet power!

DiamondCrash wrote:

Why is there a storyboard to keep you to the end of the song? If the people want to listen to the rest of the song, they can just wait at the results screen, can't they?

SPOILER

Melpomena wrote:

love this song and the mapset is nice ^^

Mafiamaster wrote:

[Average]
I don't think I heard any hitsounds in this. Fixed

[Neet] All FIXED
Raise the volume of the first timing section by 2 ticks.
01:33:742 - Raise volume by at least 1 tick.
And so on. Just make sure that the soft hit sampleset is audible throughout the map.

[Strong]
01:08:507 (5) - New combo? Fixed
01:08:683 (1) - Remove new combo? No
01:18:213 (5) - New combo? No
02:24:566 (4) - New combo since it's a slowdown. Fixed

[Taiko]
01:33:455 (122) - Unsnapped. Fixed
01:33:514 (123) - Unsnapped. Fixed

Mafiamaster wrote:

Recheck? But I already bubbled it

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Strong Power]
02:23:860 (2,3) - The distance here should be 1/2 not 1/4 this creates an anti-jump plus if you use 1/2 like it's supposed to be it would also make it more symmetrical. Please fix this.

Mafiamaster wrote:

Why'd the bubble get popped? The spacing was fine. Leorda, fix the spacing back the way it was please.

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Neet Power]

03:18:036 (6) - A new combo is highly suggested here.

[Strong Power]

00:56:683 (5) - Seems like you forget to place a clap here.
01:33:742 (1) - Add a finish at the begin of this slider.
01:36:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These jumps are really too forced, reduce them a bit please.
02:24:036 (3) - The clap at the end of this slider doesn't follow anything and sounds bad, remove it.
03:26:683 (1) - Add a finish at the begin of this slider.
03:29:507 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These jumps are really too forced as well, and them are really hard to read when playing.

Sorry but I have to pop for now, let me know when you've fixed my mod and I'll see what can I do.

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Strong Power]

03:29:507 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern is still too confusing. Change to something different >.<

osuplayer111 wrote:

You're improving much, Leorda. This map is good not bad

Re-Bubbled~

Make sure that the spacing is consistent and does not change within the combo itself, unless you have a compelling reason to change the spacing.

abalee wrote:

O_O

Strong power:
02:31:448 (2) - I think you've remove the clap here coz you did it at 02:24:036 (3) -
02:35:860 (9) - So hmm add clap at the end?

neet power:
01:39:389 (1,2,3,4) - I think the spacing in this combo is a bit far while 01:40:448 (5) - looks fine.

Make sure that the spacing is consistent and does not change within the combo itself, unless you have a compelling reason to change the spacing.

01:46:272 (1,2,3) - ^
Hmm.. or you could try make 01:40:448 (5) - and 01:47:154 (4) - a bit far to make the combo's spacing consistent

never gonna to pop by my own opinion

James2250 wrote:

Looks like taiko problem is fixed now btw?

1. 01:03:389 (5) - New combo or not stack it under (1) would be a good idea here so it's easier to read.
2. 01:06:742 (8,1) - Move these further away from each other
3. 01:13:801 (6,1) - What is up with the spacing here! Doesn't make sense at all, and looks too similar to 01:12:566 (6,1) spacing wise. (Please make them much closer to each other (Preferably Distance snapping close)
4. 01:23:683 (6,1) - ^
5. 02:24:036 (3,1) - Weird jump

Xgor wrote:

[Neet Power]
Slowdowns feels just awkward here imo.

01:07:978 (3,4) - Why is this less spaced out compared to the rest

[Strong Power]


There is quite some weird spacing on this map and a lot of them is quite awful, here is the worse

1. 01:03:389 (5) - New combo or not stack it under (1) would be a good idea here so it's easier to read.
2. 01:06:742 (8,1) - Move these further away from each other
3. 01:13:801 (6,1) - What is up with the spacing here! Doesn't make sense at all, and looks too similar to 01:12:566 (6,1) spacing wise. (Please make them much closer to each other (Preferably Distance snapping close)
4. 01:23:683 (6,1) - ^
5. 02:24:036 (3,1) - Weird jump

01:46:448 (1) - Maybe remove new combo here
02:23:860 (2,3) - What sense does this make to the music?
03:06:919 (1,2,3,4) - Bit odd looking pattern here.
03:29:507 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why does this have different combo than this 01:47:860 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)
Keep it consistent.


Also please make this give more score than Neet power.
It's much harder but still gives off much less.

Popping this with support from several others (Including a BAT)

Xgor wrote:

Hopefully everything is fine now

osuplayer111 wrote:

Sorry for the delay, but here I am.

Ranked~

Natteke wrote:

Oh these sliders...................

lepidopodus wrote:

Ok, for Taiko diffs, some patterns are nice, but I don't like sudden, long, hard-to-read 1/4 streams, while other parts are quite easy.