Blazevoir wrote:

Blue = suggestions/minor issues
Red = please fix this

[General]
The offset should be at 25,965. (Be sure to fix all inherited timing sections afterwards!) Also, I don't know what you would name it, but I think you need another difficulty (harder than Weak Power yet easier than Strong Power). There's too much of a difficulty spread at the moment Finally... you need more hitsounds.

Note: The following is according to your current offset.

[Hijiri's Weak Power]
03:15:396 (1) - Is this supposed to be a circle? If so, can you make it neater?

[Hijiri's Strong Power]
01:19:632 (1) - Make this symmetrical?
01:43:632 (11) - ^
02:31:455 (1) - What the... move this back to 02:31:279 and then...
02:31:632 (2) - Move this back to 02:31:455 so that they follow the vocals (you'll have to fix this slider though since it won't end at the same spot on the timeline).
02:35:867 (9) - Make this slider end on a white tick?

I await the fixes (and preferably another difficulty).

0989596108 wrote:

hi~
may i have a taiko diff in this map?
i like original sound of this music

Leorda wrote:

Ok, but please rename your taiko diff to "Hijiri's Taiko Power" ok?

Blazevoir wrote:

Umm... you could've just uploaded the .osb to here... You didn't need to use another hosting website...

_lolipop wrote:

AngeLeo > <.

samipale wrote:

Hi, cute Leorda, I'm a boy.

ENS :3

Neethime wrote:

8-) fuck yeah,finally completed,sorry for delay.

Decompress soft-hitclap.rar and put soft-hitclap.wav into song folder~

Derekku wrote:

[General]
*Offset feels a tiny bit late. Try 25,978 please. Fixed

[Hijiri's Weak Power] All FIXED
*Why is this the only diff with Letterboxing?
03:21:132 (1) - I'd start this on the red tick instead (and shorten)

[Hijiri's Strong Power]
01:37:632 (7,8,1,2) - @-@ I love jumps, but holy alskdjflksdf those are way too big x_x Screw you, Fixed
01:47:867 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I love these <3 Then why you point out?
02:22:279 (4,5,6,7) - buhhhhh this is really hard to read Fixed
02:31:455 (2) - the repeat on the blue tick sounds wrong Fixed
*Perhaps lower drain a tick to compensate for the short breaks (even if you mapped them, I think that the drain is a bit high anyway)

[Hijiri's Taiko Power]
*More than 999 notes? FUCK YEAH

*My main issue with this mapset is that there isn't enough variety in the difficulty. Easy-Insane-Insane Taiko. That really doesn't leave much room for average players in the Normal/Hard areas. If you could add at least one more difficulty in-between, I think that this mapset would be much much much better. Good luck!

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
obviously you need something between 0.6 stars and 4.91 stars. fuck yeah. FUCK YOU RIN! I'm gonna to make a normal diff, sigh. NatsumeRin, fuck yeah
put Neethime into tags. OK, put no-7 in tags

[Weak]
fine. zzz.

[Neet] And that's why I said this diff is bad
kiai should be the same with other diffs.
volume is a bit low to me... increase it?
00:50:507 (4,3) - what is this fucked note?
00:54:213 (3,4) - ...? i guess 3 is in fact 1/1 earlier?
00:57:036 (3,4) - ...
01:05:507 (3,4) - this happens again and again ... why?
02:14:507 (7) - should be 0.5x slider i guess?
02:36:566 (4,5,6) - nazi. 1 grid right.
03:36:566 (1,2) - easy to read it wrong but not a big deal.
why these stupid things happen..? i checked the original ver and didn't find those mistakes. you must did sth fucking wrong.

[Taiko]
fine but a little tired for the repeating oox or xxo or xxoxx or blablabla, everything will repeat 4 times= = Insult 0989596108 if you want to do that

[Strong]
HP Drain Rate -2/-1. or players will die due to your long slider and short break. YOU WILL DIE......
01:11:507 (1) - 1 grid left. Fixed
01:19:625 (1) - what... and the little break after it... try to use some notes instead? Fixed
01:52:448 - still should have another two sliders imo. NO WAY
02:23:860 (2,3) - hey spacing FIXED
notes are placed a bit random imo.

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.


[Taiko]
fine but a little tired for the repeating oox or xxo or xxoxx or blablabla, everything will repeat 4 times= =

Hi~NR
You say a little tired for the repeating oox or xxo or xxoxx .... This is indeed the right, not to mention ... the song continues to do different things really a problem, so we first put this ... I will think about it, If you have a better swing method, I will fix it :3

Faust wrote:

mods

Faust wrote:

Average Power Mostly just alignment issues throughout the map. Nothing of particular worry. Also, long breaks are long.

I think this could be better, here is an example. Fixed

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Neet Power Neat, not too much to talk about. Normal Hitclaps don't sound so nice though. Soft
Hitclaps might help lift this map up. I leave it for Neethime

- 01:36:566 - This line of blue sliders. You can do better than that, especially when it's at the vocals. You should try
making one repeat slider on the first and 3rd slider. Delete the 2nd and 4'th, it sounds better imo.

- 01:42:566 - Try the same with the blue sliders. Having so many sliders break apart the vocals doesn't make it
very intuitive or nice for gameplay and flow.

- 01:42:566 - Space out 1-3 from 4-6 and so on.

- 03:29:507 - Same thing with the first line of modding.

Strong Power In general, there are a lot of breaks that don't go well with the song. Some parts feel lacking, and the spinners don't help much to patch the void. The patterns and note placing looks pretty organically shaped and formed, as a suggestion, maybe you could replace some of the colours with custom ones.

- 01:43:625 - Highlighting this not because it's off or wrong by my standards, but it does go with her vocals. You
might want to accentuate the curves a little more, or others will think it's an ugly slider. OK

- 01:47:860 - This row of patterns. It's really, really messy. I know what you're going for, but having them run all
horizontally doesn't make it look pretty. Suggestion to revise this and shift the rest of the patterns in
another direction. On closer inspection, the Red "petals" and following are not aligned right. I think it's fine

- 02:23:860 - You should try shifting this slider towards the previous Red tick, then adding a circle on the White tick
after it. OK

- 03:18:213 - Now this, is a problem. I would advise you to make it better-looking. OK Then

- 03:32:242 - Wow, the distance on the Timeline and the distance on the Playfield are like 2 different things. This is
quite the jump I must say. I noticed ths subtle jumps throughout the map, so if it's for consistency
and to help tier the map for an Insane, then it's fine. .............

pokedigi wrote:

Sorry but... Is taiko guest diff still being referred?

Bikko wrote:

My english is not good. I'm sorry about this but my contury is not english-speaking world. keep in mind please.


Poof! Summoned!

RED : IMPORTANT
ORANGE : I RECOMMEND IT STRONGLY
BLUE : SUGGESTION, NAZI, PERSONAL DISCONTENT
PURPLE : KIDDING, APPEAL, NOT ACTUAL MODDING DISCUSSION


[Story Board]
plz -7ms... well...

[General]
Veeeery close to under 20000kb. Just 51kb so it is fine but can you reduce its filesize more? I can't
Your name of diffs (Hijiri's blahblah) are little confusing. first I thought, 'All diffs are guest diffs!? 0_o WTH!?'. lol.

[Hijiri's Weak Power] ALL FIXED

All timing sections are mismatched with tick. make -7 ms all.

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[attachment=1:166d3]screenshot320.jpg[/attachment:166d3]

I don't like this kind of too close distance spacing. It's terribly ugly; Why make them overlapped? They are already slow enough. I can not say repositioning all notes, Anyway it is readable and beatable. Just personal preference. So, It is totally up to you.

00:50:330 (x) I expect a note on this timing.
01:50:683 (1~4) How about this? If you'll follow this suggestion, don't forget about 01:53:507 (1~4)'s position.

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[attachment=0:166d3]screenshot321.jpg[/attachment:166d3]

03:15:389 (1) looks too ugly. make it symmetry.
03:21:036 (1) I expect note patterns in this spinner section.

[Hijiri's Average Power] ALL FIXED

All timing sections are mismatched with tick. make -7 ms all.

01:05:507 (5) too ugly. make it symmetry.
03:04:095 (1~8) distorted positioning.

[Hijiri's Neet Power] I'll leave it to Neethime

OH MY GOD! WTH! RESNAP ALL NOTES RIGHT NOW!

quite interesting style. spacing and slider speed too often changed, It has almost random flow. IMO, I can not help this thing much. This style is hard to understand to me.

01:36:566 (1~5) I can not feel any rhythm from these sliders. maybe you try follow its vocal... but... Anyway, don't use blue tick here.
01:41:867 (1~5) ^
01:53:507 (1,1) delete note and make spinner 01:53:507 ~ 01:54:919
03:29:507 (1~4) I can not feel any rhythm from these sliders. don't use blue tick here.
03:40:808 (5,6,1) make them perfect stack.

[Hijiri's Strong Power]

on 170 BPM, 1/4 is over than 11.33 hit per second speed. just 1 streams combo can makes extream. 00:57:742 (3~7) is a good example. but I'll mod this one because most of people can't understand this, and it is beatable, and IMO, this map's concept is jumps, not streams.

All timing sections are mismatched with tick. make -7 ms all. Fixed

Slider Tick Rate 2 Fixed

Look 03:15:566 (1~8) in autoplay or test, not edit mode. It's Fxxing terrible! set Stack Leniency to 0.4! Fixed

00:57:742 (3~7) As I said, This streams is evil. Just appeal. not actual mod. NO
01:33:742 (1~4,1~4) make them in symmetry Already
01:43:625 (11) Make this slider's end point to 01:44:683, white tick. or, I expect a note from 01:44:860. and remove clap. Fixed
01:47:860 (1~4,1~4,1~4,1~4) terribly dislocated. make them all perfect square. you can use Rotate function for this work, and it takes just few seconds. The rotate function is hard to work
01:52:448 ~ 01:52:977 (x) I don't like this empty section. NO
02:23:154 (1~4) make them in symmetry Already
02:35:860 (9) same as 01:43:625. Fixed



IMO, This is very unusual style mapset. quite interesting.
+Star, good luck.

Faust wrote:

Neet Power Neat, not too much to talk about. Normal Hitclaps don't sound so nice though. Soft
Hitclaps might help lift this map up.
But I had tried soft-clap and found it not so well...
- 01:36:566 - This line of blue sliders. You can do better than that, especially when it's at the vocals. You should try
making one repeat slider on the first and 3rd slider. Delete the 2nd and 4'th, it sounds better imo.

- 01:42:566 - Try the same with the blue sliders. Having so many sliders break apart the vocals doesn't make it
very intuitive or nice for gameplay and flow.

- 01:42:566 - Space out 1-3 from 4-6 and so on.

- 03:29:507 - Same thing with the first line of modding.
This "blue tick sliders"is actually what I want to use,sorry

Bikko wrote:

[Hijiri's Neet Power]

OH MY GOD! WTH! RESNAP ALL NOTES RIGHT NOW!OK

quite interesting style. spacing and slider speed too often changed, It has almost random flow. IMO, I can not help this thing much. This style is hard to understand to me.

01:36:566 (1~5) I can not feel any rhythm from these sliders. maybe you try follow its vocal... but... Anyway, don't use blue tick here.Sorry,this is what I want to use
01:41:867 (1~5) ^^
01:53:507 (1,1) delete note and make spinner 01:53:507 ~ 01:54:919 No
03:29:507 (1~4) I can not feel any rhythm from these sliders. don't use blue tick here.
03:40:808 (5,6,1) make them perfect stack.OK

Nivalis wrote:

Mod request via in-game chat
I'll mod every diff except Taiko.

[Hijiri's Weak Power]
-> I think this diff needs more hitsounds. Added
00:52:448 (6,1,2) - Is (1) closer to (2) rather than (6)? I don't know, maybe it's just my eyes It's same
01:07:625 (5) - Add whistle?Added
01:09:036 (2) - Add clap?Added
01:42:213 (3,1) - Encircle it perfectly? Fixed

SPOILER

[attachment=2:49c0e]leorda mod 1.png[/attachment:49c0e]

As you can see, the approach circle can be your guide to encircle it perfectly.
01:52:801 (4) - Adjust the angle, also adjust (1) - (4)'s position Fixed
02:18:919 (1) - This slider's shape is quite ugly. Fixed
03:15:389 (1) - Make it spiral? Fixed

[Hijiri's Average Power]
-> Same as above, I think this diff needs more hitsounds (especially whistles)
01:16:095 (5) - Encircle it perfectly with (4) Fixed
01:17:507 (2,3,4) - Spacing inconsistency? Fixed
01:26:683 (5) - The end of the slider is not above (2) Fixed
01:33:742 (1,2,3,4) - I recommend this pattern. Fixed

SPOILER

[attachment=1:49c0e]leorda mod 2.png[/attachment:49c0e]

01:46:448 (3,4,5,6) - Delete (5) and (6), move (4) one grid up and right, then copy-paste (3) and (4) and flip vertical Fixed
02:35:860 (5) - Like this perhaps? Fixed

SPOILER

[attachment=0:49c0e]leorda mod 3.png[/attachment:49c0e]

[Hijiri's Neet Power] I leave it to Neethime
-> I'm amazed by this diff ^_^
00:34:455 (3,5) - Not perfectly stacked

[Hijiri's Strong Power]
00:57:742 (3,4,5,6,7) - The angle feels weird Fixed
01:19:625 (1) - Add finish at end? Fixed
01:21:919 (6,7) - Add clap? Fixed
01:26:507 (8) - (sorry I have to use Indonesian) Nanggung, kalau mau dibuat efek "wave" harusnya lebih diturunin lagi Fixed
01:43:625 (11) - Use this technique to create a perfect circle? Fixed

SPOILER

02:24:566 (4) - Wave it? Fixed
02:37:448 (1,2,3) - The angle feels weird, if it's a set of slider fans then fan it more. Fixed
03:05:860 (5) - One grid left. Fixed
03:18:213 (1) - Spiral it better? Fixed

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Tadi udah banyak itu, tapi kedelete semua yang dua diff terakhir -_-
Yang berhasil diselamatin ya segini Star

Colin Hou wrote:

Leoneet power!

DiamondCrash wrote:

Why is there a storyboard to keep you to the end of the song? If the people want to listen to the rest of the song, they can just wait at the results screen, can't they?

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Melpomena wrote:

love this song and the mapset is nice ^^

Mafiamaster wrote:

[Average]
I don't think I heard any hitsounds in this. Fixed

[Neet] All FIXED
Raise the volume of the first timing section by 2 ticks.
01:33:742 - Raise volume by at least 1 tick.
And so on. Just make sure that the soft hit sampleset is audible throughout the map.

[Strong]
01:08:507 (5) - New combo? Fixed
01:08:683 (1) - Remove new combo? No
01:18:213 (5) - New combo? No
02:24:566 (4) - New combo since it's a slowdown. Fixed

[Taiko]
01:33:455 (122) - Unsnapped. Fixed
01:33:514 (123) - Unsnapped. Fixed

Mafiamaster wrote:

Recheck? But I already bubbled it

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Strong Power]
02:23:860 (2,3) - The distance here should be 1/2 not 1/4 this creates an anti-jump plus if you use 1/2 like it's supposed to be it would also make it more symmetrical. Please fix this.

Mafiamaster wrote:

Why'd the bubble get popped? The spacing was fine. Leorda, fix the spacing back the way it was please.

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Neet Power]

03:18:036 (6) - A new combo is highly suggested here.

[Strong Power]

00:56:683 (5) - Seems like you forget to place a clap here.
01:33:742 (1) - Add a finish at the begin of this slider.
01:36:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These jumps are really too forced, reduce them a bit please.
02:24:036 (3) - The clap at the end of this slider doesn't follow anything and sounds bad, remove it.
03:26:683 (1) - Add a finish at the begin of this slider.
03:29:507 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These jumps are really too forced as well, and them are really hard to read when playing.

Sorry but I have to pop for now, let me know when you've fixed my mod and I'll see what can I do.

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Strong Power]

03:29:507 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern is still too confusing. Change to something different >.<

osuplayer111 wrote:

You're improving much, Leorda. This map is good not bad

Re-Bubbled~

Make sure that the spacing is consistent and does not change within the combo itself, unless you have a compelling reason to change the spacing.

abalee wrote:

O_O

Strong power:
02:31:448 (2) - I think you've remove the clap here coz you did it at 02:24:036 (3) -
02:35:860 (9) - So hmm add clap at the end?

neet power:
01:39:389 (1,2,3,4) - I think the spacing in this combo is a bit far while 01:40:448 (5) - looks fine.

Make sure that the spacing is consistent and does not change within the combo itself, unless you have a compelling reason to change the spacing.

01:46:272 (1,2,3) - ^
Hmm.. or you could try make 01:40:448 (5) - and 01:47:154 (4) - a bit far to make the combo's spacing consistent

never gonna to pop by my own opinion

James2250 wrote:

Looks like taiko problem is fixed now btw?

1. 01:03:389 (5) - New combo or not stack it under (1) would be a good idea here so it's easier to read.
2. 01:06:742 (8,1) - Move these further away from each other
3. 01:13:801 (6,1) - What is up with the spacing here! Doesn't make sense at all, and looks too similar to 01:12:566 (6,1) spacing wise. (Please make them much closer to each other (Preferably Distance snapping close)
4. 01:23:683 (6,1) - ^
5. 02:24:036 (3,1) - Weird jump

Xgor wrote:

[Neet Power]
Slowdowns feels just awkward here imo.

01:07:978 (3,4) - Why is this less spaced out compared to the rest

[Strong Power]


There is quite some weird spacing on this map and a lot of them is quite awful, here is the worse

1. 01:03:389 (5) - New combo or not stack it under (1) would be a good idea here so it's easier to read.
2. 01:06:742 (8,1) - Move these further away from each other
3. 01:13:801 (6,1) - What is up with the spacing here! Doesn't make sense at all, and looks too similar to 01:12:566 (6,1) spacing wise. (Please make them much closer to each other (Preferably Distance snapping close)
4. 01:23:683 (6,1) - ^
5. 02:24:036 (3,1) - Weird jump

01:46:448 (1) - Maybe remove new combo here
02:23:860 (2,3) - What sense does this make to the music?
03:06:919 (1,2,3,4) - Bit odd looking pattern here.
03:29:507 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why does this have different combo than this 01:47:860 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)
Keep it consistent.


Also please make this give more score than Neet power.
It's much harder but still gives off much less.

Popping this with support from several others (Including a BAT)

Xgor wrote:

Hopefully everything is fine now

osuplayer111 wrote:

Sorry for the delay, but here I am.

Ranked~

Natteke wrote:

Oh these sliders...................

lepidopodus wrote:

Ok, for Taiko diffs, some patterns are nice, but I don't like sudden, long, hard-to-read 1/4 streams, while other parts are quite easy.