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NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.


[Taiko]
fine but a little tired for the repeating oox or xxo or xxoxx or blablabla, everything will repeat 4 times= =

Hi~NR
You say a little tired for the repeating oox or xxo or xxoxx .... This is indeed the right, not to mention ... the song continues to do different things really a problem, so we first put this ... I will think about it, If you have a better swing method, I will fix it :3
Faust
Average Power Mostly just alignment issues throughout the map. Nothing of particular worry. Also, long breaks are long.

I think this could be better, here is an example.

Neet Power Neat, not too much to talk about. Normal Hitclaps don't sound so nice though. Soft
Hitclaps might help lift this map up.

- 01:36:566 - This line of blue sliders. You can do better than that, especially when it's at the vocals. You should try
making one repeat slider on the first and 3rd slider. Delete the 2nd and 4'th, it sounds better imo.

- 01:42:566 - Try the same with the blue sliders. Having so many sliders break apart the vocals doesn't make it
very intuitive or nice for gameplay and flow.

- 01:42:566 - Space out 1-3 from 4-6 and so on.

- 03:29:507 - Same thing with the first line of modding.

Strong Power In general, there are a lot of breaks that don't go well with the song. Some parts feel lacking, and the spinners don't help much to patch the void. The patterns and note placing looks pretty organically shaped and formed, as a suggestion, maybe you could replace some of the colours with custom ones.

- 01:43:625 - Highlighting this not because it's off or wrong by my standards, but it does go with her vocals. You
might want to accentuate the curves a little more, or others will think it's an ugly slider.

- 01:47:860 - This row of patterns. It's really, really messy. I know what you're going for, but having them run all
horizontally doesn't make it look pretty. Suggestion to revise this and shift the rest of the patterns in
another direction. On closer inspection, the Red "petals" and following are not aligned right.

- 02:23:860 - You should try shifting this slider towards the previous Red tick, then adding a circle on the White tick
after it.

- 03:18:213 - Now this, is a problem. I would advise you to make it better-looking.

- 03:32:242 - Wow, the distance on the Timeline and the distance on the Playfield are like 2 different things. This is
quite the jump I must say. I noticed ths subtle jumps throughout the map, so if it's for consistency
and to help tier the map for an Insane, then it's fine.
Topic Starter
Leorda

Faust wrote:

mods
:O
Topic Starter
Leorda
Sorry for double post

Faust wrote:

Average Power Mostly just alignment issues throughout the map. Nothing of particular worry. Also, long breaks are long.

I think this could be better, here is an example. Fixed

Neet Power Neat, not too much to talk about. Normal Hitclaps don't sound so nice though. Soft
Hitclaps might help lift this map up. I leave it for Neethime

- 01:36:566 - This line of blue sliders. You can do better than that, especially when it's at the vocals. You should try
making one repeat slider on the first and 3rd slider. Delete the 2nd and 4'th, it sounds better imo.

- 01:42:566 - Try the same with the blue sliders. Having so many sliders break apart the vocals doesn't make it
very intuitive or nice for gameplay and flow.

- 01:42:566 - Space out 1-3 from 4-6 and so on.

- 03:29:507 - Same thing with the first line of modding.

Strong Power In general, there are a lot of breaks that don't go well with the song. Some parts feel lacking, and the spinners don't help much to patch the void. The patterns and note placing looks pretty organically shaped and formed, as a suggestion, maybe you could replace some of the colours with custom ones.

- 01:43:625 - Highlighting this not because it's off or wrong by my standards, but it does go with her vocals. You
might want to accentuate the curves a little more, or others will think it's an ugly slider. OK

- 01:47:860 - This row of patterns. It's really, really messy. I know what you're going for, but having them run all
horizontally doesn't make it look pretty. Suggestion to revise this and shift the rest of the patterns in
another direction. On closer inspection, the Red "petals" and following are not aligned right. I think it's fine

- 02:23:860 - You should try shifting this slider towards the previous Red tick, then adding a circle on the White tick
after it. OK

- 03:18:213 - Now this, is a problem. I would advise you to make it better-looking. OK Then

- 03:32:242 - Wow, the distance on the Timeline and the distance on the Playfield are like 2 different things. This is
quite the jump I must say. I noticed ths subtle jumps throughout the map, so if it's for consistency
and to help tier the map for an Insane, then it's fine. .............
Thx Dr. Faust
pokedigi
Sorry but... Is taiko guest diff still being referred?
Topic Starter
Leorda

pokedigi wrote:

Sorry but... Is taiko guest diff still being referred?
No, sorry
Bikko
My english is not good. I'm sorry about this but my contury is not english-speaking world. keep in mind please.


Poof! Summoned!

RED : IMPORTANT
ORANGE : I RECOMMEND IT STRONGLY
BLUE : SUGGESTION, NAZI, PERSONAL DISCONTENT
PURPLE : KIDDING, APPEAL, NOT ACTUAL MODDING DISCUSSION


[Story Board]
plz -7ms... well...

[General]
Veeeery close to under 20000kb. Just 51kb so it is fine but can you reduce its filesize more?
Your name of diffs (Hijiri's blahblah) are little confusing. first I thought, 'All diffs are guest diffs!? 0_o WTH!?'. lol.

[Hijiri's Weak Power]

All timing sections are mismatched with tick. make -7 ms all.

I don't like this kind of too close distance spacing. It's terribly ugly; Why make them overlapped? They are already slow enough. I can not say repositioning all notes, Anyway it is readable and beatable. Just personal preference. So, It is totally up to you.

00:50:330 (x) I expect a note on this timing.
01:50:683 (1~4) How about this? If you'll follow this suggestion, don't forget about 01:53:507 (1~4)'s position.
03:15:389 (1) looks too ugly. make it symmetry.
03:21:036 (1) I expect note patterns in this spinner section.

[Hijiri's Average Power]

All timing sections are mismatched with tick. make -7 ms all.

01:05:507 (5) too ugly. make it symmetry.
03:04:095 (1~8) distorted positioning.

[Hijiri's Neet Power]

OH MY GOD! WTH! RESNAP ALL NOTES RIGHT NOW!

quite interesting style. spacing and slider speed too often changed, It has almost random flow. IMO, I can not help this thing much. This style is hard to understand to me.

01:36:566 (1~5) I can not feel any rhythm from these sliders. maybe you try follow its vocal... but... Anyway, don't use blue tick here.
01:41:867 (1~5) ^
01:53:507 (1,1) delete note and make spinner 01:53:507 ~ 01:54:919
03:29:507 (1~4) I can not feel any rhythm from these sliders. don't use blue tick here.
03:40:808 (5,6,1) make them perfect stack.

[Hijiri's Strong Power]

on 170 BPM, 1/4 is over than 11.33 hit per second speed. just 1 streams combo can makes extream. 00:57:742 (3~7) is a good example. but I'll mod this one because most of people can't understand this, and it is beatable, and IMO, this map's concept is jumps, not streams.

All timing sections are mismatched with tick. make -7 ms all.

Slider Tick Rate 2

Look 03:15:566 (1~8) in autoplay or test, not edit mode. It's Fxxing terrible! set Stack Leniency to 0.4!

00:57:742 (3~7) As I said, This streams is evil. Just appeal. not actual mod.
01:33:742 (1~4,1~4) make them in symmetry
01:43:625 (11) Make this slider's end point to 01:44:683, white tick. or, I expect a note from 01:44:860. and remove clap.
01:47:860 (1~4,1~4,1~4,1~4) terribly dislocated. make them all perfect square. you can use Rotate function for this work, and it takes just few seconds.
01:52:448 ~ 01:52:977 (x) I don't like this empty section.
02:23:154 (1~4) make them in symmetry
02:35:860 (9) same as 01:43:625.



IMO, This is very unusual style mapset. quite interesting.
+Star, good luck.

Topic Starter
Leorda

Bikko wrote:

My english is not good. I'm sorry about this but my contury is not english-speaking world. keep in mind please.


Poof! Summoned!

RED : IMPORTANT
ORANGE : I RECOMMEND IT STRONGLY
BLUE : SUGGESTION, NAZI, PERSONAL DISCONTENT
PURPLE : KIDDING, APPEAL, NOT ACTUAL MODDING DISCUSSION


[Story Board]
plz -7ms... well...

[General]
Veeeery close to under 20000kb. Just 51kb so it is fine but can you reduce its filesize more? I can't
Your name of diffs (Hijiri's blahblah) are little confusing. first I thought, 'All diffs are guest diffs!? 0_o WTH!?'. lol.

[Hijiri's Weak Power] ALL FIXED

All timing sections are mismatched with tick. make -7 ms all.

SPOILER
[attachment=1:166d3]screenshot320.jpg[/attachment:166d3]
I don't like this kind of too close distance spacing. It's terribly ugly; Why make them overlapped? They are already slow enough. I can not say repositioning all notes, Anyway it is readable and beatable. Just personal preference. So, It is totally up to you.

00:50:330 (x) I expect a note on this timing.
01:50:683 (1~4) How about this? If you'll follow this suggestion, don't forget about 01:53:507 (1~4)'s position.
SPOILER
[attachment=0:166d3]screenshot321.jpg[/attachment:166d3]
03:15:389 (1) looks too ugly. make it symmetry.
03:21:036 (1) I expect note patterns in this spinner section.

[Hijiri's Average Power] ALL FIXED

All timing sections are mismatched with tick. make -7 ms all.

01:05:507 (5) too ugly. make it symmetry.
03:04:095 (1~8) distorted positioning.

[Hijiri's Neet Power] I'll leave it to Neethime

OH MY GOD! WTH! RESNAP ALL NOTES RIGHT NOW!

quite interesting style. spacing and slider speed too often changed, It has almost random flow. IMO, I can not help this thing much. This style is hard to understand to me.

01:36:566 (1~5) I can not feel any rhythm from these sliders. maybe you try follow its vocal... but... Anyway, don't use blue tick here.
01:41:867 (1~5) ^
01:53:507 (1,1) delete note and make spinner 01:53:507 ~ 01:54:919
03:29:507 (1~4) I can not feel any rhythm from these sliders. don't use blue tick here.
03:40:808 (5,6,1) make them perfect stack.

[Hijiri's Strong Power]

on 170 BPM, 1/4 is over than 11.33 hit per second speed. just 1 streams combo can makes extream. 00:57:742 (3~7) is a good example. but I'll mod this one because most of people can't understand this, and it is beatable, and IMO, this map's concept is jumps, not streams.

All timing sections are mismatched with tick. make -7 ms all. Fixed

Slider Tick Rate 2 Fixed

Look 03:15:566 (1~8) in autoplay or test, not edit mode. It's Fxxing terrible! set Stack Leniency to 0.4! Fixed

00:57:742 (3~7) As I said, This streams is evil. Just appeal. not actual mod. NO
01:33:742 (1~4,1~4) make them in symmetry Already
01:43:625 (11) Make this slider's end point to 01:44:683, white tick. or, I expect a note from 01:44:860. and remove clap. Fixed
01:47:860 (1~4,1~4,1~4,1~4) terribly dislocated. make them all perfect square. you can use Rotate function for this work, and it takes just few seconds. The rotate function is hard to work
01:52:448 ~ 01:52:977 (x) I don't like this empty section. NO
02:23:154 (1~4) make them in symmetry Already
02:35:860 (9) same as 01:43:625. Fixed



IMO, This is very unusual style mapset. quite interesting.
+Star, good luck.
Neethime

Faust wrote:

Neet Power Neat, not too much to talk about. Normal Hitclaps don't sound so nice though. Soft
Hitclaps might help lift this map up.
But I had tried soft-clap and found it not so well...
- 01:36:566 - This line of blue sliders. You can do better than that, especially when it's at the vocals. You should try
making one repeat slider on the first and 3rd slider. Delete the 2nd and 4'th, it sounds better imo.

- 01:42:566 - Try the same with the blue sliders. Having so many sliders break apart the vocals doesn't make it
very intuitive or nice for gameplay and flow.

- 01:42:566 - Space out 1-3 from 4-6 and so on.

- 03:29:507 - Same thing with the first line of modding.
This "blue tick sliders"is actually what I want to use,sorry

Bikko wrote:

[Hijiri's Neet Power]

OH MY GOD! WTH! RESNAP ALL NOTES RIGHT NOW!OK

quite interesting style. spacing and slider speed too often changed, It has almost random flow. IMO, I can not help this thing much. This style is hard to understand to me.

01:36:566 (1~5) I can not feel any rhythm from these sliders. maybe you try follow its vocal... but... Anyway, don't use blue tick here.Sorry,this is what I want to use
01:41:867 (1~5) ^^
01:53:507 (1,1) delete note and make spinner 01:53:507 ~ 01:54:919 No
03:29:507 (1~4) I can not feel any rhythm from these sliders. don't use blue tick here.
03:40:808 (5,6,1) make them perfect stack.OK
;) Thanks

Download: EastNewSound - Lucid Dream (Leorda) [Hijiri's Neet Power].osu
Niva
Mod request via in-game chat
I'll mod every diff except Taiko.

[Hijiri's Weak Power]
-> I think this diff needs more hitsounds.
00:52:448 (6,1,2) - Is (1) closer to (2) rather than (6)? I don't know, maybe it's just my eyes
01:07:625 (5) - Add whistle?
01:09:036 (2) - Add clap?
01:42:213 (3,1) - Encircle it perfectly?
As you can see, the approach circle can be your guide to encircle it perfectly.
01:52:801 (4) - Adjust the angle, also adjust (1) - (4)'s position
02:18:919 (1) - This slider's shape is quite ugly.
03:15:389 (1) - Make it spiral?

[Hijiri's Average Power]
-> Same as above, I think this diff needs more hitsounds (especially whistles
01:16:095 (5) - Encircle it perfectly with (4)
01:17:507 (2,3,4) - Spacing inconsistency?
01:26:683 (5) - The end of the slider is not above (2)
01:33:742 (1,2,3,4) - I recommend this pattern.
01:46:448 (3,4,5,6) - Delete (5) and (6), move (4) one grid up and right, then copy-paste (3) and (4) and flip vertical
02:35:860 (5) - Like this perhaps?

[Hijiri's Neet Power]
-> I'm amazed by this diff ^_^
00:34:455 (3,5) - Not perfectly stacked

[Hijiri's Strong Power]
00:57:742 (3,4,5,6,7) - The angle feels weird
01:19:625 (1) - Add finish at end?
01:21:919 (6,7) - Add clap?
01:26:507 (8) - (sorry I have to use Indonesian) Nanggung, kalau mau dibuat efek "wave" harusnya lebih diturunin lagi
01:43:625 (11) - Use this technique to create a perfect circle?
02:24:566 (4) - Wave it?
02:37:448 (1,2,3) - The angle feels weird, if it's a set of slider fans then fan it more.
03:05:860 (5) - One grid left.
03:18:213 (1) - Spiral it better?

Tadi udah banyak itu, tapi kedelete semua yang dua diff terakhir -_-
Yang berhasil diselamatin ya segini :D Star


Topic Starter
Leorda

Nivalis wrote:

Mod request via in-game chat
I'll mod every diff except Taiko.

[Hijiri's Weak Power]
-> I think this diff needs more hitsounds. Added
00:52:448 (6,1,2) - Is (1) closer to (2) rather than (6)? I don't know, maybe it's just my eyes It's same
01:07:625 (5) - Add whistle?Added
01:09:036 (2) - Add clap?Added
01:42:213 (3,1) - Encircle it perfectly? Fixed
SPOILER
[attachment=2:49c0e]leorda mod 1.png[/attachment:49c0e]
As you can see, the approach circle can be your guide to encircle it perfectly.
01:52:801 (4) - Adjust the angle, also adjust (1) - (4)'s position Fixed
02:18:919 (1) - This slider's shape is quite ugly. Fixed
03:15:389 (1) - Make it spiral? Fixed

[Hijiri's Average Power]
-> Same as above, I think this diff needs more hitsounds (especially whistles)
01:16:095 (5) - Encircle it perfectly with (4) Fixed
01:17:507 (2,3,4) - Spacing inconsistency? Fixed
01:26:683 (5) - The end of the slider is not above (2) Fixed
01:33:742 (1,2,3,4) - I recommend this pattern. Fixed
SPOILER
[attachment=1:49c0e]leorda mod 2.png[/attachment:49c0e]
01:46:448 (3,4,5,6) - Delete (5) and (6), move (4) one grid up and right, then copy-paste (3) and (4) and flip vertical Fixed
02:35:860 (5) - Like this perhaps? Fixed
SPOILER
[attachment=0:49c0e]leorda mod 3.png[/attachment:49c0e]

[Hijiri's Neet Power] I leave it to Neethime
-> I'm amazed by this diff ^_^
00:34:455 (3,5) - Not perfectly stacked

[Hijiri's Strong Power]
00:57:742 (3,4,5,6,7) - The angle feels weird Fixed
01:19:625 (1) - Add finish at end? Fixed
01:21:919 (6,7) - Add clap? Fixed
01:26:507 (8) - (sorry I have to use Indonesian) Nanggung, kalau mau dibuat efek "wave" harusnya lebih diturunin lagi Fixed
01:43:625 (11) - Use this technique to create a perfect circle? Fixed
02:24:566 (4) - Wave it? Fixed
02:37:448 (1,2,3) - The angle feels weird, if it's a set of slider fans then fan it more. Fixed
03:05:860 (5) - One grid left. Fixed
03:18:213 (1) - Spiral it better? Fixed

Tadi udah banyak itu, tapi kedelete semua yang dua diff terakhir -_-
Yang berhasil diselamatin ya segini :D Star
thx

and you slider maker are soooooo moe (。ಥˇωಥ)
Neethime
Colin Hou
Leoneet power!
Topic Starter
Leorda

Colin Hou wrote:

Leoneet power!
...
aRiskOfRain
Do you really have to have "Hijari's" on the start of every diff? Just "Weak Power" "Strong Power" etc. would do.
Why is there a storyboard to keep you to the end of the song? If the people want to listen to the rest of the song, they can just wait at the results screen, can't they?

Average;

02:13:272 (1) - End 1/2 earlier like Weak and Strong's spinners are.
Bikko

DiamondCrash wrote:

Why is there a storyboard to keep you to the end of the song? If the people want to listen to the rest of the song, they can just wait at the results screen, can't they?

Maybe Leorda wants to see this. XD
ElecoR
star
Melpomena
love this song and the mapset is nice ^^
Topic Starter
Leorda

Melpomena wrote:

love this song and the mapset is nice ^^
thx
gowww
8-)
Mafiamaster
[Average]
I don't think I heard any hitsounds in this.

[Neet]
Raise the volume of the first timing section by 2 ticks.
01:33:742 - Raise volume by at least 1 tick.
And so on. Just make sure that the soft hit sampleset is audible throughout the map.

[Strong]
01:08:507 (5) - New combo?
01:08:683 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:18:213 (5) - New combo?
02:24:566 (4) - New combo since it's a slowdown.

[Taiko]
01:33:455 (122) - Unsnapped.
01:33:514 (123) - Unsnapped.
Topic Starter
Leorda

Mafiamaster wrote:

[Average]
I don't think I heard any hitsounds in this. Fixed

[Neet] All FIXED
Raise the volume of the first timing section by 2 ticks.
01:33:742 - Raise volume by at least 1 tick.
And so on. Just make sure that the soft hit sampleset is audible throughout the map.

[Strong]
01:08:507 (5) - New combo? Fixed
01:08:683 (1) - Remove new combo? No
01:18:213 (5) - New combo? No
02:24:566 (4) - New combo since it's a slowdown. Fixed

[Taiko]
01:33:455 (122) - Unsnapped. Fixed
01:33:514 (123) - Unsnapped. Fixed
wring
star :)
swish
:D
dNextGen
*hugs Leorda*
Mafiamaster
Great, bubbled!
Fight69
OMG YES !
FireballFlame
Star!
Mafiamaster
Recheck? But I already bubbled it :P
Topic Starter
Leorda

Mafiamaster wrote:

Recheck? But I already bubbled it :P
Opss sorry :(
CzekoMisiek
:)
Star!
Micia
star~:D
Sakura
[Strong Power]
02:23:860 (2,3) - The distance here should be 1/2 not 1/4 this creates an anti-jump plus if you use 1/2 like it's supposed to be it would also make it more symmetrical. Please fix this.
Topic Starter
Leorda

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Strong Power]
02:23:860 (2,3) - The distance here should be 1/2 not 1/4 this creates an anti-jump plus if you use 1/2 like it's supposed to be it would also make it more symmetrical. Please fix this.
I don't know what you mean, sorry :(

EDIT : Like this?
Sakura
I didnt mean to remove the note, the spacing has an error because it was supposed to be 1/2 and not 1/4 so it will lead to click 1/4 away, because of the anti-jump, removing the note does fix it however it will probably sound worse, so i recommend you fix the spacing instead
Mafiamaster
Why'd the bubble get popped? The spacing was fine. Leorda, fix the spacing back the way it was please.
Topic Starter
Leorda

Mafiamaster wrote:

Why'd the bubble get popped? The spacing was fine. Leorda, fix the spacing back the way it was please.
inb4 Sakura Hana kill you
Sakura
Ok after a long chat with mafiamaster, this looks ok now after a few rearranging and stuff, so Rebubble~
Patchouli
star~ :)
Andrea
[Neet Power]

03:18:036 (6) - A new combo is highly suggested here.

[Strong Power]

00:56:683 (5) - Seems like you forget to place a clap here.
01:33:742 (1) - Add a finish at the begin of this slider.
01:36:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These jumps are really too forced, reduce them a bit please.
02:24:036 (3) - The clap at the end of this slider doesn't follow anything and sounds bad, remove it.
03:26:683 (1) - Add a finish at the begin of this slider.
03:29:507 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These jumps are really too forced as well, and them are really hard to read when playing.


Sorry but I have to pop for now, let me know when you've fixed my mod and I'll see what can I do.
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