Average Power Mostly just alignment issues throughout the map. Nothing of particular worry. Also, long breaks are long.
I think this could be better, here is an example.
Neet Power Neat, not too much to talk about. Normal Hitclaps don't sound so nice though. Soft
Hitclaps might help lift this map up.
- 01:36:566 - This line of blue sliders. You can do better than that, especially when it's at the vocals. You should try
making one repeat slider on the first and 3rd slider. Delete the 2nd and 4'th, it sounds better imo.
- 01:42:566 - Try the same with the blue sliders. Having so many sliders break apart the vocals doesn't make it
very intuitive or nice for gameplay and flow.
- 01:42:566 - Space out 1-3 from 4-6 and so on.
- 03:29:507 - Same thing with the first line of modding.
Strong Power In general, there are a lot of breaks that don't go well with the song. Some parts feel lacking, and the spinners don't help much to patch the void. The patterns and note placing looks pretty organically shaped and formed, as a suggestion, maybe you could replace some of the colours with custom ones.
- 01:43:625 - Highlighting this not because it's off or wrong by my standards, but it does go with her vocals. You
might want to accentuate the curves a little more, or others will think it's an ugly slider.
- 01:47:860 - This row of patterns. It's really, really messy. I know what you're going for, but having them run all
horizontally doesn't make it look pretty. Suggestion to revise this and shift the rest of the patterns in
another direction. On closer inspection, the Red "petals" and following are not aligned right.
- 02:23:860 - You should try shifting this slider towards the previous Red tick, then adding a circle on the White tick
after it.
- 03:18:213 - Now this, is a problem. I would advise you to make it better-looking.
- 03:32:242 - Wow, the distance on the Timeline and the distance on the Playfield are like 2 different things. This is
quite the jump I must say. I noticed ths subtle jumps throughout the map, so if it's for consistency
and to help tier the map for an Insane, then it's fine.
I think this could be better, here is an example.
Neet Power Neat, not too much to talk about. Normal Hitclaps don't sound so nice though. Soft
Hitclaps might help lift this map up.
- 01:36:566 - This line of blue sliders. You can do better than that, especially when it's at the vocals. You should try
making one repeat slider on the first and 3rd slider. Delete the 2nd and 4'th, it sounds better imo.
- 01:42:566 - Try the same with the blue sliders. Having so many sliders break apart the vocals doesn't make it
very intuitive or nice for gameplay and flow.
- 01:42:566 - Space out 1-3 from 4-6 and so on.
- 03:29:507 - Same thing with the first line of modding.
Strong Power In general, there are a lot of breaks that don't go well with the song. Some parts feel lacking, and the spinners don't help much to patch the void. The patterns and note placing looks pretty organically shaped and formed, as a suggestion, maybe you could replace some of the colours with custom ones.
- 01:43:625 - Highlighting this not because it's off or wrong by my standards, but it does go with her vocals. You
might want to accentuate the curves a little more, or others will think it's an ugly slider.
- 01:47:860 - This row of patterns. It's really, really messy. I know what you're going for, but having them run all
horizontally doesn't make it look pretty. Suggestion to revise this and shift the rest of the patterns in
another direction. On closer inspection, the Red "petals" and following are not aligned right.
- 02:23:860 - You should try shifting this slider towards the previous Red tick, then adding a circle on the White tick
after it.
- 03:18:213 - Now this, is a problem. I would advise you to make it better-looking.
- 03:32:242 - Wow, the distance on the Timeline and the distance on the Playfield are like 2 different things. This is
quite the jump I must say. I noticed ths subtle jumps throughout the map, so if it's for consistency
and to help tier the map for an Insane, then it's fine.