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[Extra: Taki]
00:26:581 (2) - Maybe 00:26:406 - start it from here and add a 1/2 00:26:929 - ? This way you get to follow the piano you didn't skip till now and keep usual rhythm.
00:29:371 (3) - think of making this into 3 circles? 00:29:197 (2) - think this one is stronger, and i don't see many reasons to put a slider since there are no vocals
00:31:813 (2) - ugh maybe make it 1/2 and reverse it?
00:41:232 - hm increasing the SV here would be nice, but i guess remapping would be a chore.
00:46:464 (4) - Ctrl+g adds an interesting flow
00:57:450 (1,2,3,1) - is this even readable on sightread?
01:02:506 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think its not because this has same spacing yet its 1/4
00:53:742 (3) - weird thing i spotted, this is not NCed here 00:59:135 (1) - but here it is
00:58:798 (4) - also shouldn't this be 2 circles like you did here 00:53:405 (1,2) - http://i.imgur.com/WEnuVLk.jpg flow actually looks sick
01:06:551 (3,4) - I'd turn them into circles because compared to 01:07:225 (1,2,3,4) - they have vocals on slider end and start.
01:10:596 (3) - a little nitpicky, but making it go downwards may make it look better? http://i.imgur.com/x5yAffB.jpg
01:11:607 (2) - considering the nature of your map, think you can make this pattern better looking by placing the sliderend on 01:11:101 (4) -, further more copy paste this 01:11:270 (1) - and replace it with 01:11:944 (3) - and blanket itself http://i.imgur.com/4ymQyqT.jpg
01:20:034 (3) - personally i'd make this a slider
01:25:933 (2) - ^, think it will make the rhythm doper
01:29:472 (6,7) - considering how loud the snares are on both the slider head and tail, i suggset making it into circles. Also NC on 01:29:472 (6) - kinda feels like it could fit
01:36:551 (4) - wouldn't placing it like 01:35:540 (1) - , making it symmetrical make more sense, actually http://i.imgur.com/Kv5pxY0.jpg i like this a lot more, you get to emphasize both that slider and the next downbeat
01:43:124 (4,5,6) - mm shouldnt they get more spcing emphasis similalr to here 01:37:731 (4,5,6) -
01:53:236 (2) - compared to what it sounds i think clap is a bit too loud for what it follows
02:03:180 (3) - aint this a bit overspaced? http://i.imgur.com/ldmeFmK.jpg placing it here would make more sense.
02:05:034 (1) - i'd place it here, better aesthetics, but i assume you wanted it at your position as some form of a disconnect from previous pattern. http://i.imgur.com/cc798TJ.jpg
[Extra: Mitsuha]
In this map I will mostly point out aesthetic suggestions, it seems like it follows identical rhythm to Taki.
00:58:798 (4) - wouldn't placing it here be better? http://i.imgur.com/pNDmEB7.jpg
00:46:115 (3,4) - i'd place them like this? To emphasize them, but i guess the spacing is too big http://i.imgur.com/oqMgJD0.jpg
00:52:046 (1,2) - isn't stacked perfectly xd
00:54:079 (5,1,3) - visual spacing is a bit inconsistent here
00:55:764 (5,2) - weird that you didn't blanket this like you usually do
01:05:877 (1) - http://i.imgur.com/ImsdEfA.jpg small suggestion, i like how this looks
01:18:686 (3,1) - blanketing this too would be dope
01:25:259 (4) - shouldn't this be in the middle of 01:24:753 (1,2) -
[Sotarks' Musubi Insane]
Why is the diffuclty named Sotarks' rather than Sotark's?
00:34:604 (6) - think of making this into a circle and add a 1/1 slider here 00:34:778 -
00:40:883 (8,1) - fix blanket?
00:41:232 (1,2) - seems like intensity is going up here, yet you map it with 2 very long sliders.
00:52:394 (1) - mm this doesn't get any emphasis even though its so strong. How bout this? http://i.imgur.com/aexie9k.jpg
00:55:090 (1) - ugh i think changing the slider end into a circle would fit more here, somehow the 3/4 slider feels out of place in the section
00:55:764 (3) - I suggest changing it into a slider.
01:01:158 (4,5,6,7) - can you justify this large spacing increase specifically here?
01:01:832 (1) - for an insane i'd rather have this as a 3stack. Having a 1/4 slider out of nowhere confuses me, and it will probably confuse people at the level of insane maps even more
01:03:180 (1) - Okay so, to make the pattern perfect, i'd curve this slider a bit more, and make a closer blanket to 01:03:011 (2) - (also blanket is a bit imperfect as it is). It will keep the same visual spacing that 01:02:674 (7,2) - these things do.
01:05:371 (8,9,10) - can you make this fit better compared to the wave slider? Doesn't look good atm.
01:04:865 (7,1) - overlap
01:05:877 (1,2,3) - can't you place it like this? http://i.imgur.com/Q5Z8l2u.jpg
01:06:888 (4,6) - Blanket fix
01:08:573 (1) - a bit oddly looking, think its out of place for the section.
01:14:472 (2) - Ugh a little upwards and 01:14:641 (3,4) - a little downwards to better blanket the wave?
01:18:011 (6,7) - this blanket error is a bit more obvious
01:19:023 (1,2,1) - placing them here http://i.imgur.com/IR1URHd.jpg could make it look better
01:25:680 - Mmmm maybe make use of this? either here like this http://i.imgur.com/vqo3Sns. jpg or here http://i.imgur.com/eGxd6Pt.jpg
01:26:944 (6,1) - i don't like this overlap
01:28:461 (4) - http://i.imgur.com/YI6uHHE.jpg id place it here, what do you think?
01:31:158 (6,7) - using this spacing for these sounds in the section, ain't it a bit underspaced? i mean 01:32:169 (3,4) - compare it to this spacing
01:32:337 (4) - listen to its sliderend, shouldn't it be clickable? ;d
01:37:899 (5,1) - fix blanket
01:44:978 (6) - Ctrl+G for more emphasis?
01:44:978 (6,8) - they ain't perfectly paralel
01:47:674 (1,3) - ugh they are too curved, imo they look ugly and should be replaced with 01:46:326 (1) -
01:51:719 (1,2) - blanket
01:53:573 (9) - NC?, yep you did a NC here 02:05:034 (1) - .
[NeoSL's Insane]
00:29:371 (3) - I'd reverse this, plays nice, and add a circle on 00:29:894 -
00:29:197 (2,4) - If you dont, then fix this imperfect overlap
00:33:383 - feels a bit weird that you ignored it here if its mapped here 00:27:801 (2) -
00:35:650 (1,3) - imperfect stacking, also fix blanket 00:36:174 (2,3) -
00:37:743 (3) - oky so this one starts with a vocal and doesnt end on one, 00:38:092 (4) - this one ends on one, i suggset making (4) into 2 circles
00:54:416 (5,6,7) - i don't like the fact that you didn't emphasize this
00:55:596 (3,7) - ugh this overlap
01:20:202 (4,2) - why is this imperfect stacking happening
01:11:607 (2,2) - i'd personally make them circles to follow the vocals like i mentioned here 00:38:092 (4)
01:29:472 (7,8,9,10,11) - It would be nice to increase to DS for this 5stack, intensity is the highest on it.
02:05:034 (11) - NC?
This one was really carefully mapped, can't point up many things
[Insane: Taki]
Okay so this is a bit weird, but you're using higher SV on the start than on extra
00:32:162 (3,4) - fix blanket
00:45:941 (3,4,5,1) - aint this a bit too close?
00:54:332 - Should the 3stack rather be here than here 00:53:826 (2) -
00:56:354 - shouldn't there be a beat here?
ugh i dont agree with the rhythm on 00:52:394 (1) - to 01:03:180 (1) - so i won't point out more.
01:04:191 (5) - why is the spacing to this slider too low?
01:06:719 (4) - is the offbeat really necessary here? I highly suggest using both beats to be clickable, maybe add a slider on the kick.
01:11:270 (1,2) - ain't they a tad bit too close?
01:13:967 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't like the fact that in the section you're not using this kind of overlapping again, it starts with it so i would assume there would be more similar patterns.
01:28:461 (7,8) - I'd increase the spacing on them a bit
01:31:832 (2,5) - okay so you've used a partial overlap, even though the whole section if it has overlaps they are full overlaps
01:30:483 (2,4) - a bit imperfect overlap
01:33:180 (2,3) - making them parallel would make it look better? http://i.imgur.com/Q7TDiWm.jpg
01:32:843 (1) - vs 01:38:236 (1) - different mapping style on same rhythm, i guess chose one on both.
01:42:113 (4,1) - yo that's a bit odd
02:05:034 (4) - NC?
[Insane: Mitsuha]
00:25:883 (1,2) - they don't look curved i had to check if they had 1 more anchor, curve them a bit more you know, for the structure
00:41:929 (3,4) - a bit more of sliders could use a slightly denser curve
00:29:197 (2,4) - a bit imperfect stacking
00:48:732 (2,3) - looks a bit odd bcs no blanketing
01:06:719 (4) - i mentioned this at taki
01:07:225 (1,2) - hm now that i payed attention, you stopped doing the slight curve.
01:12:618 (1,2,3,4) - I think that you might consider using a stream here, since Insane difficulties are a bit more streamy
01:22:731 (3) - is this out of screen a bit
01:55:427 (5) - woow does this count as out of screen?
02:05:034 (4) - NC?
Mm, that should be it.
[Extra: Taki]
00:26:581 (2) - Maybe 00:26:406 - start it from here and add a 1/2 00:26:929 - ? This way you get to follow the piano you didn't skip till now and keep usual rhythm.
00:29:371 (3) - think of making this into 3 circles? 00:29:197 (2) - think this one is stronger, and i don't see many reasons to put a slider since there are no vocals
00:31:813 (2) - ugh maybe make it 1/2 and reverse it?
00:41:232 - hm increasing the SV here would be nice, but i guess remapping would be a chore.
00:46:464 (4) - Ctrl+g adds an interesting flow
00:57:450 (1,2,3,1) - is this even readable on sightread?
01:02:506 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think its not because this has same spacing yet its 1/4
00:53:742 (3) - weird thing i spotted, this is not NCed here 00:59:135 (1) - but here it is
00:58:798 (4) - also shouldn't this be 2 circles like you did here 00:53:405 (1,2) - http://i.imgur.com/WEnuVLk.jpg flow actually looks sick
01:06:551 (3,4) - I'd turn them into circles because compared to 01:07:225 (1,2,3,4) - they have vocals on slider end and start.
01:10:596 (3) - a little nitpicky, but making it go downwards may make it look better? http://i.imgur.com/x5yAffB.jpg
01:11:607 (2) - considering the nature of your map, think you can make this pattern better looking by placing the sliderend on 01:11:101 (4) -, further more copy paste this 01:11:270 (1) - and replace it with 01:11:944 (3) - and blanket itself http://i.imgur.com/4ymQyqT.jpg
01:20:034 (3) - personally i'd make this a slider
01:25:933 (2) - ^, think it will make the rhythm doper
01:29:472 (6,7) - considering how loud the snares are on both the slider head and tail, i suggset making it into circles. Also NC on 01:29:472 (6) - kinda feels like it could fit
01:36:551 (4) - wouldn't placing it like 01:35:540 (1) - , making it symmetrical make more sense, actually http://i.imgur.com/Kv5pxY0.jpg i like this a lot more, you get to emphasize both that slider and the next downbeat
01:43:124 (4,5,6) - mm shouldnt they get more spcing emphasis similalr to here 01:37:731 (4,5,6) -
01:53:236 (2) - compared to what it sounds i think clap is a bit too loud for what it follows
02:03:180 (3) - aint this a bit overspaced? http://i.imgur.com/ldmeFmK.jpg placing it here would make more sense.
02:05:034 (1) - i'd place it here, better aesthetics, but i assume you wanted it at your position as some form of a disconnect from previous pattern. http://i.imgur.com/cc798TJ.jpg
[Extra: Mitsuha]
In this map I will mostly point out aesthetic suggestions, it seems like it follows identical rhythm to Taki.
00:58:798 (4) - wouldn't placing it here be better? http://i.imgur.com/pNDmEB7.jpg
00:46:115 (3,4) - i'd place them like this? To emphasize them, but i guess the spacing is too big http://i.imgur.com/oqMgJD0.jpg
00:52:046 (1,2) - isn't stacked perfectly xd
00:54:079 (5,1,3) - visual spacing is a bit inconsistent here
00:55:764 (5,2) - weird that you didn't blanket this like you usually do
01:05:877 (1) - http://i.imgur.com/ImsdEfA.jpg small suggestion, i like how this looks
01:18:686 (3,1) - blanketing this too would be dope
01:25:259 (4) - shouldn't this be in the middle of 01:24:753 (1,2) -
[Sotarks' Musubi Insane]
Why is the diffuclty named Sotarks' rather than Sotark's?
00:34:604 (6) - think of making this into a circle and add a 1/1 slider here 00:34:778 -
00:40:883 (8,1) - fix blanket?
00:41:232 (1,2) - seems like intensity is going up here, yet you map it with 2 very long sliders.
00:52:394 (1) - mm this doesn't get any emphasis even though its so strong. How bout this? http://i.imgur.com/aexie9k.jpg
00:55:090 (1) - ugh i think changing the slider end into a circle would fit more here, somehow the 3/4 slider feels out of place in the section
00:55:764 (3) - I suggest changing it into a slider.
01:01:158 (4,5,6,7) - can you justify this large spacing increase specifically here?
01:01:832 (1) - for an insane i'd rather have this as a 3stack. Having a 1/4 slider out of nowhere confuses me, and it will probably confuse people at the level of insane maps even more
01:03:180 (1) - Okay so, to make the pattern perfect, i'd curve this slider a bit more, and make a closer blanket to 01:03:011 (2) - (also blanket is a bit imperfect as it is). It will keep the same visual spacing that 01:02:674 (7,2) - these things do.
01:05:371 (8,9,10) - can you make this fit better compared to the wave slider? Doesn't look good atm.
01:04:865 (7,1) - overlap
01:05:877 (1,2,3) - can't you place it like this? http://i.imgur.com/Q5Z8l2u.jpg
01:06:888 (4,6) - Blanket fix
01:08:573 (1) - a bit oddly looking, think its out of place for the section.
01:14:472 (2) - Ugh a little upwards and 01:14:641 (3,4) - a little downwards to better blanket the wave?
01:18:011 (6,7) - this blanket error is a bit more obvious
01:19:023 (1,2,1) - placing them here http://i.imgur.com/IR1URHd.jpg could make it look better
01:25:680 - Mmmm maybe make use of this? either here like this http://i.imgur.com/vqo3Sns. jpg or here http://i.imgur.com/eGxd6Pt.jpg
01:26:944 (6,1) - i don't like this overlap
01:28:461 (4) - http://i.imgur.com/YI6uHHE.jpg id place it here, what do you think?
01:31:158 (6,7) - using this spacing for these sounds in the section, ain't it a bit underspaced? i mean 01:32:169 (3,4) - compare it to this spacing
01:32:337 (4) - listen to its sliderend, shouldn't it be clickable? ;d
01:37:899 (5,1) - fix blanket
01:44:978 (6) - Ctrl+G for more emphasis?
01:44:978 (6,8) - they ain't perfectly paralel
01:47:674 (1,3) - ugh they are too curved, imo they look ugly and should be replaced with 01:46:326 (1) -
01:51:719 (1,2) - blanket
01:53:573 (9) - NC?, yep you did a NC here 02:05:034 (1) - .
[NeoSL's Insane]
00:29:371 (3) - I'd reverse this, plays nice, and add a circle on 00:29:894 -
00:29:197 (2,4) - If you dont, then fix this imperfect overlap
00:33:383 - feels a bit weird that you ignored it here if its mapped here 00:27:801 (2) -
00:35:650 (1,3) - imperfect stacking, also fix blanket 00:36:174 (2,3) -
00:37:743 (3) - oky so this one starts with a vocal and doesnt end on one, 00:38:092 (4) - this one ends on one, i suggset making (4) into 2 circles
00:54:416 (5,6,7) - i don't like the fact that you didn't emphasize this
00:55:596 (3,7) - ugh this overlap
01:20:202 (4,2) - why is this imperfect stacking happening
01:11:607 (2,2) - i'd personally make them circles to follow the vocals like i mentioned here 00:38:092 (4)
01:29:472 (7,8,9,10,11) - It would be nice to increase to DS for this 5stack, intensity is the highest on it.
02:05:034 (11) - NC?
This one was really carefully mapped, can't point up many things
[Insane: Taki]
Okay so this is a bit weird, but you're using higher SV on the start than on extra
00:32:162 (3,4) - fix blanket
00:45:941 (3,4,5,1) - aint this a bit too close?
00:54:332 - Should the 3stack rather be here than here 00:53:826 (2) -
00:56:354 - shouldn't there be a beat here?
ugh i dont agree with the rhythm on 00:52:394 (1) - to 01:03:180 (1) - so i won't point out more.
01:04:191 (5) - why is the spacing to this slider too low?
01:06:719 (4) - is the offbeat really necessary here? I highly suggest using both beats to be clickable, maybe add a slider on the kick.
01:11:270 (1,2) - ain't they a tad bit too close?
01:13:967 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't like the fact that in the section you're not using this kind of overlapping again, it starts with it so i would assume there would be more similar patterns.
01:28:461 (7,8) - I'd increase the spacing on them a bit
01:31:832 (2,5) - okay so you've used a partial overlap, even though the whole section if it has overlaps they are full overlaps
01:30:483 (2,4) - a bit imperfect overlap
01:33:180 (2,3) - making them parallel would make it look better? http://i.imgur.com/Q7TDiWm.jpg
01:32:843 (1) - vs 01:38:236 (1) - different mapping style on same rhythm, i guess chose one on both.
01:42:113 (4,1) - yo that's a bit odd
02:05:034 (4) - NC?
[Insane: Mitsuha]
00:25:883 (1,2) - they don't look curved i had to check if they had 1 more anchor, curve them a bit more you know, for the structure
00:41:929 (3,4) - a bit more of sliders could use a slightly denser curve
00:29:197 (2,4) - a bit imperfect stacking
00:48:732 (2,3) - looks a bit odd bcs no blanketing
01:06:719 (4) - i mentioned this at taki
01:07:225 (1,2) - hm now that i payed attention, you stopped doing the slight curve.
01:12:618 (1,2,3,4) - I think that you might consider using a stream here, since Insane difficulties are a bit more streamy
01:22:731 (3) - is this out of screen a bit
01:55:427 (5) - woow does this count as out of screen?
02:05:034 (4) - NC?
Mm, that should be it.