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Lily - Fatal Moment

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The 08 team_Bourdon
710 posts
Joined February 2010
The 08 team_Bourdon

IceBeam wrote:

[Normal +]
00:14:949 - Clap. Fixed
02:21:336 (5) - Ah,it playr really bad,please make it 1x BPM. Fixed
02:39:529 (3) - Mirror from (1)? Fixed
03:10:884 (2) - Well,same suggestion,remove 0.5x from here. Hm..no. :)
Thanks, IceBeam 8-)

Download: Lily - Fatal Moment (Kochiya Sanae) [Bourdon's Normal+].osu
Kochiya Sanae
179 posts
Joined June 2010
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Kochiya Sanae
im very lazy now >_<
ignorethis
osu! Alumni
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ignorethis
靠 触姐你不看我签名档吗
CarlJohnson
12 posts
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CarlJohnson
:)
Hakurei Reimu
43 posts
Joined January 2010
Hakurei Reimu
没蛋姐lol
FutakiKanata
180 posts
Joined July 2008
FutakiKanata
可以吗？
Aria
174 posts
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Aria
╮(╯_╰)╭
kanojo snow
2 posts
Joined August 2010
kanojo snow
:) star star
macttt
49 posts
Joined March 2010
macttt
:roll: 这样。。。嘛？
Windows_Vista_old
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Windows_Vista_old
:D :D :D
cirno821
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cirno821
._.来加星了
Ice coffee
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Ice coffee
star 8-)
miku
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miku
star~ :)
Nozomi Kiriya
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Nozomi Kiriya
Star~

=w=
Windows XP_old
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Windows XP_old
8-)
Muscipular
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Muscipular
star~
hopeyayv
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hopeyayv
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ignorethis
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2008
ignorethis
BG太那啥了改一个

Easy的话Note对齐，部分clap感觉比较随意，可以去掉

Normal的话hitsound问题也是

Insane中jump比较随意，虽然玩起来可以读但是感觉很违和，基本可以全部删掉

没了 :D
kiddly
885 posts
Joined February 2009
kiddly
[General]
offset+8 I think.

[Easy]
00:36:433 - add a note?
00:50:755 (4,1) - add a note at 00:51:142 ,or unstack them.

[Bourdon's Normal+]
00:27:916 (1,2,3,4) - too hard for a normal(normal+?) diff.
You used a "normal" mapset, but there is some patterns that are too hard for a normal diff. so I think you can make the mapset harder and rename it to "hard."

[Insane]
nothing found, but I suggest you to add more streams in this map,streams really fit this song.
Kalotaku
29 posts
Joined April 2010
Kalotaku
star :D
The 08 team_Bourdon
710 posts
Joined February 2010
The 08 team_Bourdon

kiddly wrote:

[Bourdon's Normal+]
00:27:916 (1,2,3,4) - too hard for a normal(normal+?) diff.
You used a "normal" mapset, but there is some patterns that are too hard for a normal diff. so I think you can make the mapset harder and rename it to "hard." Hmmm...i will re-do the normal, so i think that is not like the HARD :)
Thank you, kiddly :)

Download: Lily - Fatal Moment (Kochiya Sanae) [Bourdon's Normal+].osu
Kochiya Sanae
179 posts
Joined June 2010
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Kochiya Sanae
small eight :oops:
Sandpig
847 posts
Joined September 2010
Sandpig
hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)




Insane

好像MOD得差不多了没什么大问题

00:21:150 (2,3) - 注意stack leniec对位置的影响
00:44:376 (7,1) - 这地方也是


Normal+

00:34:312 (1,2,3) - 我感觉停顿后红线开始的slider打起来特别难受，虽然和歌词能对上。还有这三个间隔不一样就不要都叠起来（1PC我果断断了）
00:36:441 (3,1) - spacing
00:37:408 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这玩意全在红线上打起来太难受了，而且还有CLAP
01:37:795 (1,2,3) - 同第一个
01:39:924 (3,1) - spacing（应该是直接复制了ctrl+h ctrl+j的……后面还是全在红线上）


Easy

01:08:957 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - 这里的排列对新手有点难……
02:12:441 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这个复制过来的也是……
03:08:183 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - 同上。似乎适当提高slider速度能好读一点（当然这样需要REMAP了- -，就这样问题也不大）

good job 8-)
Zelos
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Joined May 2010
Zelos
i am sorry. i could not find anything wrong.
Kochiya Sanae
179 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Kochiya Sanae

Zelos wrote:

i am sorry. i could not find anything wrong.
also thanks u :D
The 08 team_Bourdon
710 posts
Joined February 2010
The 08 team_Bourdon

Sandpig wrote:

Normal+

00:34:312 (1,2,3) - 我感觉停顿后红线开始的slider打起来特别难受，虽然和歌词能对上。还有这三个间隔不一样就不要都叠起来（1PC我果断断了）
00:36:441 (3,1) - spacing Hmm.. no, i use the slider from 00:35:279 to here...
00:37:408 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这玩意全在红线上打起来太难受了，而且还有CLAP
01:37:795 (1,2,3) - 同第一个
01:39:924 (3,1) - spacing（应该是直接复制了ctrl+h ctrl+j的……后面还是全在红线上）
^Fixed~ Bump!!~!!

Download: Lily - Fatal Moment (Kochiya Sanae) [Bourdon's Normal+].osu
ignorethis
osu! Alumni
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ignorethis
finally it looks fine for me

bbl
Lilac
Elite Mapper
1,515 posts
Joined December 2008
Lilac
I didn't know I sung a song like this.

Help.
eveless
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Joined April 2009
eveless

MarioBros777 wrote:

I didn't know I sung a song like this.

Help.
You can song it now wow
Kochiya Sanae
179 posts
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Topic Starter
Kochiya Sanae
lol
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Easy]

02:40:302 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:42:624 (4) - New combo.
02:44:173 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Bourdon's Normal+]

Rename this difficulty to "Bourdon's Normal"

02:56:947 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Insane]

01:50:366 (9) - New combo.
02:25:592 (1) - Remove new combo.

Just fix these new combo suggestions and rename the Normal difficulty and I'll rank this.
Kochiya Sanae
179 posts
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Kochiya Sanae
fixed
Krisom
osu! Alumni
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Krisom

I don't see the creator anywhere, in tags or source :<!

I found that "kofunP" ( 古墳P ) is the creator, (though you could confirm that by searching a bit :P). Anyways, add that to tags and I'm pretty sure andré will rank anyways.
Kochiya Sanae
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Kochiya Sanae
thank you very much :)
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Andrea
Looks good now, thank you too Krisom.

Ranked~
eveless
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eveless
Lily!
The 08 team_Bourdon
710 posts
Joined February 2010
The 08 team_Bourdon
Congratulations, egg sister :D
Kochiya Sanae
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Kochiya Sanae
thanks ;)
banvi
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banvi
yay nice map!
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