Sorry for the delay, I was very busy

Modding:

General:
- I would have reduced the stack (4/9)
- Sightly reduce the audio (very loudly)

Timing:
Good!

Easy:
01:46:304 - add break time
<Sound>
W - Whostle. E - Finish. R - Clap
Time (00:00:00) - exact time of bit
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00:33:723 - delete W, put E
00:34:110 - R, 00:35:658 - R
00:36:820 - delete W
00:37:207 W+E
00:39:916 - delete W
00:40:304 - R, 00:41:852 - R
00:50:755 - delete W, put E
00:51:529 - E+R
00:55:787 - W+E
00:59:271 - R
01:02:755 - R, 01:03:142 - R
01:03:529 - W
01:09:336 - delete W
01:15:142 - R, 01:15:916 - E
01:37:207 - delete W
01:37:594 - R
01:40:304 - delete W
01:40:691 - W+E
01:43:400 - delete W
01:43:787 - R, 01:45:336 - E+R
01:48:433 - E+R
01:51:142 - delete W
01:54:239 - delete W, put E
01:55:013 - R
01:56:949 - R
01:59:271 - W+E
02:00:433 - delete W
02:00:820 - E+R
02:50:368 - W
02:51:142 - R
02:55:013 - R
02:56:562 - R
03:04:304 - R
03:05:465 - delete R
03:05:852 - R
03:08:562 - delete R
03:08:949 - R

Normal+ :
- Add hitsound at the beginning
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00:30:239 (5) - align precisely under the slider #4 (without gridsnap)
00:53:852 - add a circle
00:53:852 (spinner) - start on 00:54:239
01:16:497 (3,4,5) - align precisely under the slider #2 (without gridsnap)
01:19:787 (3,4) - spaicing
01:57:336 - add a circle
01:57:336 (spinner) - start on 01:57:723
02:23:271 (3) - down by one on the grid
03:09:529 (3,4,5) - align precisely under the slider #2 (without gridsnap)

Hard:
- Overall and HP Drain +1
- If you want sound mod, write on queue or pm
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00:21:142 (2,3) - spaicing
00:33:916 (3) - better, move this circle under #1
00:34:691 (2,3,4,5,6) - spaicing: make it the same
00:37:013 - add a circle
02:16:110 (4,1) - spaicing
02:19:787 - add a circle
02:51:142 (4) - left by one on the grid
03:14:949 - add a circle
03:15:045 - add a circle

Cool map 8) Star

Tiny stone wrote:

normal
01:20:175 (4) - 左一格。 Fixed

Famfrit wrote:

Normal+ :
- Add hitsound at the beginning
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00:30:239 (5) - align precisely under the slider #4 (without gridsnap) Fixed
00:53:852 - add a circle Fixed
00:53:852 (spinner) - start on 00:54:239 Fixed
01:16:497 (3,4,5) - align precisely under the slider #2 (without gridsnap) Fixed
01:19:787 (3,4) - spaicing Hmm, i think i no at here start spaicing
01:57:336 - add a circle Fixed
01:57:336 (spinner) - start on 01:57:723 Fixed
02:23:271 (3) - down by one on the grid Fixed
03:09:529 (3,4,5) - align precisely under the slider #2 (without gridsnap) Fixed

Thank you, Tiny stone and Famfrit

Download: Lily - Fatal Moment (Kochiya Sanae) [Bourdon's Normal+].osu

to Tiny stone : all fixed ,包括3个图上的所有 太感激了 就给2个kds吧

to Famfrit : i fixed all, thanks very much

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蛋姐姐moemoe~

BG isn't 4:3

You better resize it.

Disable letterboxes during breaks.

[Normal +]
00:14:949 - Clap.
02:21:336 (5) - Ah,it playr really bad,please make it 1x BPM.
02:39:529 (3) - Mirror from (1)?
03:10:884 (2) - Well,same suggestion,remove 0.5x from here.

[Hard]
Well,that's more like an Insane.
Hm..maybe be you should increase AR.
00:24:045 (3) - It's completely stacked,it's not allowed..change to a better way.

I don't like spacing in Easy,but otherwise it seems fine.
Good luck anyway,star~

IceBeam wrote:

[Normal +]
00:14:949 - Clap. Fixed
02:21:336 (5) - Ah,it playr really bad,please make it 1x BPM. Fixed
02:39:529 (3) - Mirror from (1)? Fixed
03:10:884 (2) - Well,same suggestion,remove 0.5x from here. Hm..no.

Thanks, IceBeam

Download: Lily - Fatal Moment (Kochiya Sanae) [Bourdon's Normal+].osu

im very lazy now >_<

靠 触姐你不看我签名档吗

没蛋姐lol

可以吗？

╮(╯_╰)╭

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这样。。。嘛？

._.来加星了

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BG太那啥了改一个

Easy的话Note对齐，部分clap感觉比较随意，可以去掉

Normal的话hitsound问题也是

Insane中jump比较随意，虽然玩起来可以读但是感觉很违和，基本可以全部删掉

没了

[General]
offset+8 I think.

[Easy]
00:36:433 - add a note?
00:50:755 (4,1) - add a note at 00:51:142 ,or unstack them.

[Bourdon's Normal+]
00:27:916 (1,2,3,4) - too hard for a normal(normal+?) diff.
You used a "normal" mapset, but there is some patterns that are too hard for a normal diff. so I think you can make the mapset harder and rename it to "hard."

[Insane]
nothing found, but I suggest you to add more streams in this map,streams really fit this song.

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kiddly wrote:

[Bourdon's Normal+]
00:27:916 (1,2,3,4) - too hard for a normal(normal+?) diff.
You used a "normal" mapset, but there is some patterns that are too hard for a normal diff. so I think you can make the mapset harder and rename it to "hard." Hmmm...i will re-do the normal, so i think that is not like the HARD

Thank you, kiddly

Download: Lily - Fatal Moment (Kochiya Sanae) [Bourdon's Normal+].osu

small eight

hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)




Insane

好像MOD得差不多了没什么大问题

00:21:150 (2,3) - 注意stack leniec对位置的影响
00:44:376 (7,1) - 这地方也是


Normal+

00:34:312 (1,2,3) - 我感觉停顿后红线开始的slider打起来特别难受，虽然和歌词能对上。还有这三个间隔不一样就不要都叠起来（1PC我果断断了）
00:36:441 (3,1) - spacing
00:37:408 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这玩意全在红线上打起来太难受了，而且还有CLAP
01:37:795 (1,2,3) - 同第一个
01:39:924 (3,1) - spacing（应该是直接复制了ctrl+h ctrl+j的……后面还是全在红线上）


Easy

01:08:957 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - 这里的排列对新手有点难……
02:12:441 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这个复制过来的也是……
03:08:183 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - 同上。似乎适当提高slider速度能好读一点（当然这样需要REMAP了- -，就这样问题也不大）

good job

i am sorry. i could not find anything wrong.

Zelos wrote:

i am sorry. i could not find anything wrong.

also thanks u

Sandpig wrote:

Normal+

00:34:312 (1,2,3) - 我感觉停顿后红线开始的slider打起来特别难受，虽然和歌词能对上。还有这三个间隔不一样就不要都叠起来（1PC我果断断了）
00:36:441 (3,1) - spacing Hmm.. no, i use the slider from 00:35:279 to here...
00:37:408 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这玩意全在红线上打起来太难受了，而且还有CLAP
01:37:795 (1,2,3) - 同第一个
01:39:924 (3,1) - spacing（应该是直接复制了ctrl+h ctrl+j的……后面还是全在红线上）

^Fixed~ Bump!!~!!

Download: Lily - Fatal Moment (Kochiya Sanae) [Bourdon's Normal+].osu

finally it looks fine for me

bbl

I didn't know I sung a song like this.

Help.

MarioBros777 wrote:

I didn't know I sung a song like this.

Help.

You can song it now wow

lol

[Easy]

02:40:302 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:42:624 (4) - New combo.
02:44:173 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Bourdon's Normal+]

Rename this difficulty to "Bourdon's Normal"

02:56:947 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Insane]

01:50:366 (9) - New combo.
02:25:592 (1) - Remove new combo.

Just fix these new combo suggestions and rename the Normal difficulty and I'll rank this.

fixed