22:21 Critical_Star: meow, call me when u are free
22:21 Kawawa: owo
22:21 Kawawa: meow, I free
22:22 Critical_Star: owo
22:23 Critical_Star: wanna irc? just a few stuff actually
22:23 Kawawa: wow so fast -w-
22:24 Kawawa: I was okay if you do that slowly
22:24 Kawawa: okay wanna irc
22:24 Critical_Star: :x
22:24 Kawawa: 'x'
22:26 Critical_Star: 00:20:212 (20212|6,20374|5,20536|4,20860|0,21022|1) - suggest > http://puu.sh/vwMJM/32a9d14266.png i think it fit better to the sound, what do you think?
22:27 Kawawa: oh I was following piano at there.
22:27 Kawawa: 00:18:914 (18914|6,18914|5,19239|5,19239|6,19563|5,19563|6,19887|6,19887|5) - is same with 00:20:212 (20212|1,20212|0,20374|1,20374|0,20536|1,20536|2,20698|1,20698|2) -
22:28 Critical_Star: oh i thought u catch those 1/2 sound here
22:28 Kawawa: 00:22:806 -
22:28 Kawawa: should I remove this section?
22:29 Critical_Star: i was about to say that too hmm
22:29 Kawawa: I think this is okay, but in case.
22:30 Critical_Star: sound end there but it will be odd to end at blue line
22:30 Kawawa: yeah.
22:31 Kawawa: I think there has a same piano pitch
22:31 Kawawa: 00:18:914 (18914|0,19077|1,19239|2,19401|0,19563|2,19725|1,19887|0,20049|2) - like those piano
22:31 Kawawa: repeated.
22:32 Critical_Star: i can hear the echo there but well i think should be fine to keep that
22:32 Kawawa: 00:20:212 - ~ 00:21:347 - = 00:21:509 - ~ 00:22:644 -
22:32 Kawawa: 00:21:509 - so is that same with 00:20:212 - 00:22:806 -
22:33 Critical_Star: oki
22:33 Critical_Star: 01:15:264 (75264|3,75345|2,75427|3,75508|4) - how about > http://puu.sh/vwN5T/ec456e3af7.png ?
22:33 Critical_Star: wait
22:33 Critical_Star: nvm that
22:34 Critical_Star: 01:15:670 (75670|1,75751|3,75832|6,75913|3) - i saw this
22:35 Kawawa: https://puu.sh/vwPqE/0bb3672171.png I move it like this
22:35 Critical_Star: ok
22:36 Critical_Star: 01:24:427 (84427|3) - how about move to 2? because i did see u make a little pattern gap for each higher pitch piano sound here
22:37 Kawawa: 01:17:291 - ~ 01:27:670 - I can't change anything in this part, because I repeated this shape 4times. (and moved left one)
22:38 Kawawa: ;w;
22:38 Critical_Star: ah i see, i should notice that like 01:18:751 (78751|4,78913|5,79075|6,79237|5,79399|4,79562|5,79724|6) -
22:38 Kawawa: https://puu.sh/vwPBJ/3ac6ab0c3e.png
22:38 Critical_Star: 01:21:345 (81345|3,81508|4,81670|5,81832|4,81994|3,82156|4,82318|5) -
22:38 Critical_Star: good structure i like it
22:39 Kawawa: thanks 'w'
22:41 Kawawa: some hitsounds fixed
22:42 Kawawa: 02:06:913 - "Punk" Removed, It should be moved, my mistaken, 02:03:670 - And added it here. seems a missing
22:43 Critical_Star: sure
22:46 Critical_Star: 04:49:399 (289399|5,289399|4,289562|5,289562|4,289724|6,289724|5,289886|6,289886|5) - u can reduce a note here to make a different from their sound impact
22:48 Kawawa: umm, maybe I need to remove them? o.o
22:48 Critical_Star: or make it LN
22:49 Critical_Star: http://puu.sh/vwQa6/47ed9e5269.png
22:49 Critical_Star: just something different feel could be nice
22:49 Critical_Star: :x
22:49 Kawawa: oh I was that,
22:50 Kawawa: And I tried it too https://puu.sh/vwQcV/4a91bb1ade.png
22:50 Kawawa: hmm but still feel awkward than now
22:50 Kawawa: ;w;
22:51 Critical_Star: ;w;
22:51 Kawawa: because It was a bundle for the main melody section 04:48:751 (288751|3,288751|0,288751|2,288913|2,288913|3,289075|4,289075|1,289075|3,289075|0,289237|3,289237|4,289399|5,289399|1,289399|2,289399|4,289562|4,289562|5,289724|2,289724|6,289724|3,289724|5,289886|6,289886|5) -
22:51 Kawawa: can I keep this one?
22:51 Critical_Star: sure
22:51 Kawawa: 04:18:589 (258589|3,258589|5,258589|6,258589|0,258670|2,258697|4,258751|0,258805|5,258832|2) -
22:52 Kawawa: I wondering what do you think this
22:52 Kawawa: recommend to keep 1/4th only?
22:52 Critical_Star: it is 1/4 + 1/6 here it is fine for me
22:53 Critical_Star: hmm personally think current one is better
22:54 Kawawa: before was that one http://puu.sh/vwQp2/0c01dcb00b.jpg
22:54 Kawawa: but I followed dede's opinion
22:54 Critical_Star: ah yes i know your old pattern at here before
22:54 Critical_Star: hmm
22:54 Critical_Star: doesn't it feel hard?
22:54 Kawawa: before one is
22:54 Kawawa: honestly too hard.
22:55 Kawawa: 04:18:589 - especially
22:55 Kawawa: https://puu.sh/vwQp2/0c01dcb00b.jpg
22:55 Kawawa: so I made it nerf
22:55 Critical_Star: stair 1/3 jack is hard, unless u make it like 123 - 4-5-6 <but this is too easy
22:55 Critical_Star: 04:18:264 (258264|0,258264|3,258264|2,258372|4,258372|1,258372|3,258481|4,258481|2,258481|5,258589|6,258589|5,258589|3,258589|0) - short one is okay
22:56 Kawawa: this is okay?
22:56 Kawawa: than before one?
22:57 Critical_Star: u can use by the previous one i guess but 04:18:589 (258589|0,258589|3,258589|5,258589|6) -
22:57 Critical_Star: should consider reduce to 3
22:57 Critical_Star: note
22:58 Critical_Star: looks harder to have 4 note there
22:58 Kawawa: hmm
22:58 Kawawa: this is?
22:58 Kawawa: https://puu.sh/vwQFd/2b11545296.jpg
22:58 Kawawa: but is looks fit.
22:59 Kawawa: I think.
22:59 Kawawa: 04:18:264 (258264|1,258264|3,258264|0,258372|1,258372|2,258372|4,258481|5,258481|2,258481|3,258589|4,258589|6,258589|3,258697|5,258697|4,258805|6,258805|5,258913|6) -
22:59 Kawawa: 04:18:589 (258589|0,258670|1,258751|2,258832|1,258913|0) -
23:00 Kawawa: 04:18:589 (258589|6) - If I remove this one, then hmm some looks empty?
23:00 Critical_Star: 04:18:589 (258589|3) - if remove this>
23:00 Critical_Star: ?
23:01 Critical_Star: but well it look like broken stair lol
23:01 Kawawa: https://puu.sh/vwQMz/d86112a360.jpg
23:01 Critical_Star: 04:18:264 (258264|0,258372|1,258481|4,258481|2,258589|3,258697|4,258805|5) -
23:01 Kawawa: lol
23:01 Kawawa: 'W'
23:01 Critical_Star: 'W'
23:01 Critical_Star: omg haha
23:01 Critical_Star: i am ruining it lol
23:02 Kawawa: I could not sure about it http://puu.sh/vwQQI/9f28c9ac31.jpg
23:02 Kawawa: but now version is sure a quite http://puu.sh/vwQS8/6ca039f3a4.jpg
23:02 Kawawa: I think easy than my thinking
23:03 Critical_Star: can u play the pattern well?
23:03 Kawawa: 1times passed.
23:03 Critical_Star: ok cool
23:03 Kawawa: but can pass before ver.
23:03 Kawawa: but can't pass before ver.
23:04 Critical_Star: https://puu.sh/vwQS8/6ca039f3a4.jpg this one u can do it right
23:05 Kawawa: yeah.
23:05 Critical_Star: alright then i think it should be no problem for you to do this pattern
23:06 Kawawa: 'w'
23:06 Critical_Star: .w.
23:07 Critical_Star: 05:07:967 - intend to miss this one>'?
23:08 Kawawa: because SV
23:08 Kawawa: x0.85 for a while.
23:08 Kawawa: and for take a rest
23:10 Critical_Star: okay seems clear
23:11 Critical_Star: any part u are concern>?
23:11 Kawawa: UM
23:11 Kawawa: 00:34:481 (34481|3) - I can hear sound
23:11 Kawawa: you too?
23:12 Critical_Star: yes i can hear it
23:12 Kawawa: 00:45:913 (45913|4,46075|4) - I want to move it to 6
23:13 Critical_Star: actually 5 is much more comfortable in my opinion
23:13 Kawawa: okay then 5
23:13 Kawawa: 'w'
23:13 Critical_Star: :x
23:14 Kawawa: Ah
23:15 Critical_Star: 00:54:670 (54670|5,54751|3,54751|6,54832|5,54913|4,54913|6,54994|5,54994|3,55075|6,55075|4) - i guess i have to prctice more 7K stream, pattern like this is still hard for me :X
23:15 Kawawa: 02:08:535 - ~ 02:08:859 - can you hear 1/8th drum?
23:15 Critical_Star: hmm
23:15 Kawawa: I will try it better 00:54:670 -
23:15 Critical_Star: not really, the 1/8 sound start at 02:08:859 -
23:16 Critical_Star: eh nono, if u can play it nicely sure
23:16 Kawawa: oh I see,
23:16 Critical_Star: i just point the part i am bad at lol
23:16 Kawawa: 02:08:535 - ~ 02:08:859 - why I still can hear 1/8th?
23:16 Kawawa: so before was 1/8th here too
23:16 Kawawa: but expew told me it's not 1/8th
23:16 Kawawa: but I still was not sure
23:16 Kawawa: now is fine.
23:17 Kawawa: because "drrr
23:17 Kawawa: a bit
23:17 Critical_Star: hmm
23:17 Critical_Star: it does sound like 1/8 drrt
23:17 Critical_Star: but
23:17 Critical_Star: 02:08:859 (128859|0,128859|5,128859|3,128859|6,128899|1,128940|4,128940|2,128981|5,129021|0,129021|6,129062|1,129102|4,129102|2,129143|5,129183|3,129183|1,129183|6,129183|0) -
23:17 Critical_Star: if i compare this one
23:18 Kawawa: 00:55:075 (55075|6) - maybe I can remove this one in case,
23:18 Kawawa: yeah.
23:18 Critical_Star: i can hear that better in 1/8
23:19 Kawawa: I see
23:21 Kawawa: I think that's all.
23:21 Kawawa: but I will re-check everythings again
23:22 Critical_Star: 02:11:778 (131778|2,131818|1,131859|0) - oh do u want to use LN for here too?
23:22 Kawawa: hmmm
23:22 Kawawa: I wanted
23:22 Kawawa: hmm
23:22 Kawawa: 02:11:859 (131859|6,131859|0) - 2notes is fine?
23:22 Critical_Star: i forgot a place u did the same thing
23:23 Critical_Star: it feel a little empty when u remove a note there so i guess is okay
23:24 Kawawa: yeah, some bns also told it's okay
23:24 Critical_Star: 02:32:535 (152535|6,152575|5,152616|4) - i guess is the same case why u didnt use LN
23:24 Kawawa: 02:32:535 (152535|6,152575|5,152616|0,152616|4,152656|1,152697|2,152737|3,152778|4) - 02:11:778 (131778|2,131818|1,131859|0,131859|6,131899|5,131940|4,131981|3,132021|2) -
23:24 Kawawa: yeah was same thing
23:24 Kawawa: -w-
23:25 Critical_Star: ok really the end here 'w'
23:26 Kawawa: I will say you after I recheck everything
23:26 Kawawa: that what I change
23:26 Kawawa: 'w'
23:26 Critical_Star: alright
23:27 Critical_Star: want me post this now?
23:27 Kawawa: umm maybe after I recheck?
23:27 Critical_Star: sure