Hi
General
too good for me
01:16:827 - ever thought spinner here would fit maybe untill 01:20:027 -
01:02:428 - maybe remove the kiai style from here to 01:04:028 -
00:34:431 - 00:28:031 - personaly think these whistles dont fit much since the bg voice is not even an instrument sound its kinda abusing to it but just my personal opinion so
Easy
00:51:229 (1,4) - try move them away so they dont slightly overlap they look unappealing
01:15:227 (1) - remove nc to be consistent with rest of the kiai
Normal
remove wide screen support
00:59:628 (2) - aimod says this object is not snapped well just move it and put it back it will snap
Hard
00:46:030 (4,3) - this stack on the arrow singe doesnt look nice maybe ctrl h 00:46:429 (1,2,3,4) - this whole pattern also create more movement to the intens part
00:50:429 (3) - how about two of 1/2 sliders would fit better cuz the vocal here 00:50:429 (3) - felt continuous
00:53:229 (3,6) - not properly stacked
00:59:628 (3,6) - same move little (3) to right to stack good 01:12:427 (3,6) - ^
Fading
00:39:930 (1) - can remove this and make 00:39:730 (9) - a repeat that would give abetter emphasize the next comping strong beat 00:40:030 (2) -
00:58:028 (4,2) - the stack ( ifound nothing so i just point out these xD)
01:10:527 - triple here maybe to be consistent it sound same as 01:04:028 (1,2,3) -
01:09:927 - 01:13:127 - can add note here
cool!!! ♥
General
too good for me
01:16:827 - ever thought spinner here would fit maybe untill 01:20:027 -
01:02:428 - maybe remove the kiai style from here to 01:04:028 -
00:34:431 - 00:28:031 - personaly think these whistles dont fit much since the bg voice is not even an instrument sound its kinda abusing to it but just my personal opinion so
Easy
00:51:229 (1,4) - try move them away so they dont slightly overlap they look unappealing
01:15:227 (1) - remove nc to be consistent with rest of the kiai
Normal
remove wide screen support
00:59:628 (2) - aimod says this object is not snapped well just move it and put it back it will snap
Hard
00:46:030 (4,3) - this stack on the arrow singe doesnt look nice maybe ctrl h 00:46:429 (1,2,3,4) - this whole pattern also create more movement to the intens part
00:50:429 (3) - how about two of 1/2 sliders would fit better cuz the vocal here 00:50:429 (3) - felt continuous
00:53:229 (3,6) - not properly stacked
00:59:628 (3,6) - same move little (3) to right to stack good 01:12:427 (3,6) - ^
Fading
00:39:930 (1) - can remove this and make 00:39:730 (9) - a repeat that would give abetter emphasize the next comping strong beat 00:40:030 (2) -
00:58:028 (4,2) - the stack ( ifound nothing so i just point out these xD)
01:10:527 - triple here maybe to be consistent it sound same as 01:04:028 (1,2,3) -
01:09:927 - 01:13:127 - can add note here
cool!!! ♥