Hellloooow
My
suggestions for your map:
00:00:085 (1,2) - Blanket pls
00:01:464 (1,2) - bad flow curve it more towards 2
00:01:464 (1,3) - overlap
00:02:843 (1,2,3) - plays not so good
00:03:533 (4,1) - overlap maybe curve the slider and it looks better
00:06:291 (4,6,1) - the circle overlap ok but i wouldnt put that slider on top of that
00:07:843 (4,5,6,1) - rly close togheter doesnt look that good
00:08:533 (2,3) - blanket
00:12:843 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - doesnt fit to the music in my opinion maybe to sth with smoother movement
00:14:740 (3,5,6) - to close to togheter doesnt look good
00:19:222 (1,2) - blanket
00:21:119 (1,2,3,4) - same sounds 1 2 is a jump 3 4 not, u have to be consistent in such cases
00:22:153 (1,2) - blanket
00:23:705 (2,4,1) - overlap
00:33:102 (16,1) - blanket
00:36:291 (1,2) - ^
00:45:085 (2,3,4,5) - dont place them in triangle shapes if u combine that waveslider with a corner one, maybe find some shape that fits into that pattern
00:49:740 (1,2,3,4,5) - overlaps
00:52:498 (1,2) - ^
01:00:774 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ... ehhm xD u like it? i would go for a pattern that builds more pressure and isnt that hard to aim
01:06:981 (2,3) - spacing to low
01:09:567 (7,1) - blanket
01:32:498 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - no pls xD
01:41:464 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - that jump patterns dunno i think anyway there shoulnd be such jump patterns at this part
01:43:188 (5,6) - blanket
01:44:395 (5,6) - ^
01:50:429 (7,1,2,3,4) - space seven dont stack it on the end
01:58:016 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - dunno why jumps on this part
02:03:533 (4,1) - blanket
02:04:912 (5,2) - overlap
02:11:981 (2,5) - blanket
02:19:395 (6,7) - ^
02:30:257 (3,4,6) - 3 6 blanket 3 4 to close
02:31:636 (3,4) - spacing
02:56:636 (1,2) - blanket
03:00:602 (2,3,4,5,6) - spacing
03:13:188 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - u did this before try sth else
03:20:429 (6,1) - overlap
03:24:222 (3,5) - ^
03:56:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - doesnt fit here i guess
04:03:188 (2,3,4) - blankets
04:08:016 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - to close doesnt look good
04:09:740 (4,5,6,1) - was annoying during testplay maybe im bad (i am bad no kappa) but i missread it
04:21:809 (8,1,1,1) - spacing
04:31:636 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - readability
04:35:947 (1,2) - blanket
04:44:222 (2) - maybe a spinner?
04:50:947 (6,1) - blanket
04:57:153 (5,1) - space it more
05:08:705 (3) - not there pls xD
as u can see i pointed out a bit. I guess u need a bit time on that map. Maybe u try out some concepts. Your spacing is sometimes rly random try to use the distance snap more and listen to the music and intensity. Maybe try follow the singer more and get some variety.
Anyway Good Luck with your map i will play it later again.
If u have any questions feel free to ask me.