from queue~
the ending points are a basic summary of what needs to be fixed throughout the map. i recommend reading that before fixing any specific points.
Nirvana
00:14:399 (1,2,3,4) - i fail to see any reason why the DS is inconsistent here. if you want to change up the DS anywhere, it should probably be here 00:15:077 (4) because of the pitch of the melody.
00:21:173 - in many sections, youre ignoring some beats like this one, but why? it sounds just as important as the stream before it. like here, 00:57:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - its the same thing, except you filled in those beats. i think it would be better if you mapped the empty beats in the earlier section.
00:26:399 (1) - Add finish?
00:39:173 - this section does have lyrics. however, right now there is a very big difference in how it feels to play from the stream part. generally, most (good) maps dont follow lyrics ONLY, they follow instruments as well.
00:40:915 (1) - slider looks really weird, try making a standard wave slider?
00:43:431 (1) - you only need 1 anchor point
00:41:302 (1,2) - overlap doesnt look good
00:44:980 (1,2) - ^
00:43:431 (1) - multiple-repeat long sliders are quite bland, especially in harder difficulties. split this up.
02:07:626 (1) - this repeat slider isn't consistent with the rhythm youve been using earlier, split this up into 1/4 sliders
04:33:754 - now youre completely ignoring the other instruments in the background to map solely guitar.
05:36:077 - there is a strong note here, so why not map it as a circle and then have the spinner afterwards?
05:48:464 (1) - why is this slider a wave slider instead of a slider with red anchors (which you used for every other sound like this) 03:43:045 (1) - ?
general ending points:
-be consistent in what you do map and what you don't map. don't skip over notes for no good reason.
-dont completely ignore the instruments you've been following to switch over to the entrance of another musical element (vocals, guitar). i would recommend using slider heads to mark vocals and guitar. you've already done this in a few places like here 02:04:528 (1,2,3,4,5) - and here 02:10:722 (1,2,3,1,2)
-overlaps dont look good unless executed properly. if you want an overlap, find a way to make it fit in with the rest of the objects around it.
-04:05:496 (1) - 04:05:883 (1) - 04:06:270 (1) - the sharp turns at these points work well in emphasizing the vocals, so if you dont use the slider pattern, use this pattern instead.
Good luck!
the ending points are a basic summary of what needs to be fixed throughout the map. i recommend reading that before fixing any specific points.
Nirvana
00:14:399 (1,2,3,4) - i fail to see any reason why the DS is inconsistent here. if you want to change up the DS anywhere, it should probably be here 00:15:077 (4) because of the pitch of the melody.
00:21:173 - in many sections, youre ignoring some beats like this one, but why? it sounds just as important as the stream before it. like here, 00:57:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - its the same thing, except you filled in those beats. i think it would be better if you mapped the empty beats in the earlier section.
00:26:399 (1) - Add finish?
00:39:173 - this section does have lyrics. however, right now there is a very big difference in how it feels to play from the stream part. generally, most (good) maps dont follow lyrics ONLY, they follow instruments as well.
00:40:915 (1) - slider looks really weird, try making a standard wave slider?
00:43:431 (1) - you only need 1 anchor point
00:41:302 (1,2) - overlap doesnt look good
00:44:980 (1,2) - ^
00:43:431 (1) - multiple-repeat long sliders are quite bland, especially in harder difficulties. split this up.
02:07:626 (1) - this repeat slider isn't consistent with the rhythm youve been using earlier, split this up into 1/4 sliders
04:33:754 - now youre completely ignoring the other instruments in the background to map solely guitar.
05:36:077 - there is a strong note here, so why not map it as a circle and then have the spinner afterwards?
05:48:464 (1) - why is this slider a wave slider instead of a slider with red anchors (which you used for every other sound like this) 03:43:045 (1) - ?
general ending points:
-be consistent in what you do map and what you don't map. don't skip over notes for no good reason.
-dont completely ignore the instruments you've been following to switch over to the entrance of another musical element (vocals, guitar). i would recommend using slider heads to mark vocals and guitar. you've already done this in a few places like here 02:04:528 (1,2,3,4,5) - and here 02:10:722 (1,2,3,1,2)
-overlaps dont look good unless executed properly. if you want an overlap, find a way to make it fit in with the rest of the objects around it.
-04:05:496 (1) - 04:05:883 (1) - 04:06:270 (1) - the sharp turns at these points work well in emphasizing the vocals, so if you dont use the slider pattern, use this pattern instead.
Good luck!