hi, from queue
amazing map, amazing song
also i like your sliders <3
[ challenge]
amazing map, amazing song
also i like your sliders <3
[ challenge]
- 00:50:186 - maybe make sv a but higher here - this seems more intense than the previous section
- 01:11:713 (5,6,1) - kinda uncomfortable flow - you could argue that it's for emphasis of 1, but you haven't done this anywhere else in this section so it's a bit inconsistent
- 01:25:301 (1,2,3) - maybe unstack a little like 01:27:708 (1,2,3) - and 01:34:944 (5,6,1) - for consistency?
- 02:23:749 (1) - ctrl+g this for spacing emphasis, also ctrl+g the others if youre doing this obv
- 02:27:413 (1,3) - i think you could stack these
- 02:40:238 (1,2,3,4) - the spacing here is similar but the gaps in rhythm are different. consider changing as a misread may happen here.
- 03:14:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - consider simplifying rhythm to 1/2 and 1/4 in this section so for readability and to fit with the rest of the section - no one will expect these sort of unusual rhythm gaps unless theyve already listened to the song
- 03:38:777 (5,1) - could also be misread, also spacing is too big for a 1/4 gap imo
- 03:39:067 (1) - actually shouldnt this be on the red tick after it? vocal starts there and it's for consistency with similar stuff in the upcoming section
- 03:49:809 (5,6,7,8) - nitpicky but these arent equidistant
- 04:03:551 (4,1) - even with slider leniency i think this is too big for a 1/4 gap