hi from nm queue
[Challenge]
00:34:614 (4) - circle slider looks a bit distorted, fix a little
01:17:209 (5) - fix stack
02:27:871 (3) - stack on slider (1)
02:58:558 (1) - I'd love to have a circle before the spinner
02:58:558 (1) - not sure about the kiai
03:06:564 (1,1) - reverse slider is better?
03:23:231 (7) - nc
03:44:196 (3) - blanket looks a bit weird, move the end node a little down
03:47:874 (5) - sound is strong on both white and red tick, so two circles fit imo
03:48:261 (1,2) - red tick feels empty, try adding a circle since you did 03:55:035 (2) -
04:03:551 (4,1) - this hurts lol. would ctrl+g slider (1)
04:19:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - would prefer movement after fourth circle
04:22:325 (1) - very strong sound is undermined when you just stack it like this :c, would prefer movement
04:33:551 (1,2,3) - 3 nodes would be pointless if the sliders look straight. curve it a little more or use 2 nodes.
dont give kds if unhelpful. good luck!
[Challenge]
00:34:614 (4) - circle slider looks a bit distorted, fix a little
01:17:209 (5) - fix stack
02:27:871 (3) - stack on slider (1)
02:58:558 (1) - I'd love to have a circle before the spinner
02:58:558 (1) - not sure about the kiai
03:06:564 (1,1) - reverse slider is better?
03:23:231 (7) - nc
03:44:196 (3) - blanket looks a bit weird, move the end node a little down
03:47:874 (5) - sound is strong on both white and red tick, so two circles fit imo
03:48:261 (1,2) - red tick feels empty, try adding a circle since you did 03:55:035 (2) -
04:03:551 (4,1) - this hurts lol. would ctrl+g slider (1)
04:19:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - would prefer movement after fourth circle
04:22:325 (1) - very strong sound is undermined when you just stack it like this :c, would prefer movement
04:33:551 (1,2,3) - 3 nodes would be pointless if the sliders look straight. curve it a little more or use 2 nodes.
dont give kds if unhelpful. good luck!