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AKI AKANE - Kuukan Formation

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Ryuusei Aika
Elite Mapper
1,086 posts
Joined January 2016
Ryuusei Aika
hi aru and shogun and kujinn lol
from queue

General
file missing: feathers.png - AiMod

Easy
00:10:786 (2) - for me it should be a 3/2 slider start from 00:10:625 - to fit the rhythm better
01:25:625 (1) - ^ 3/2 slider start from 01:25:463 -
01:43:689 (1) - ^ 3/2 start from 01:43:528 -
02:37:883 (3) - ^ 4/2 start from 02:37:722 -
00:15:947 (1,2) - blanket
00:20:463 (4,1) - ^
00:23:528 (1) - ^ (move the sliderend lower to fix)
01:26:270 (2,3) - ^
02:03:689 (3,4) - ^
02:44:980 (1,2) - ^
03:28:205 (1,2) - ^ (try to be more strict on those kind of issues would be better xd)

Normal
01:50:302 (4,5) - idk if u want to blanket here but if so then imo it can be improved
01:53:367 (3,1) - ^
02:55:302 (2,3) - ds

Hard
00:25:705 (3) - it would be better to move it to 00:25:625 - and turned it into a 5/4 slider to make 00:25:625 - more clickable
00:59:496 (4) - how about turn it into a slider? as 00:59:657 - has voice so it's a little weird if here has completely nothing
02:03:689 (3,4) - quite sure here is 1/3 so maybe u need to change those sliders

Insane
00:20:141 (2) - why a 1/4 slider here as 00:20:141 (2) - doesnt have any sound need to emphasize? i suggest to use just a note here
00:22:883 (4) - turn into a slider would be better, current rhythm is a little weird
01:37:722 (4) - ^
00:39:173 (1,2) - blanket
01:45:625 (1,1) - stack?
03:30:141 (8,9) - ctrl+g for a better flow

Highest
01:51:431 (1,2) - blanket can be improved

sry for actually pointed out nothing but only personal complains ;w;
nice song, gl :D
Cheri
1,770 posts
Joined November 2014
Cheri

Ryuusei Aika wrote:

hi aru and shogun and kujinn lol
from queue


Hard
00:25:705 (3) - it would be better to move it to 00:25:625 - and turned it into a 5/4 slider to make 00:25:625 - more clickable kept it the same
00:59:496 (4) - how about turn it into a slider? as 00:59:657 - has voice so it's a little weird if here has completely nothing ^
02:03:689 (3,4) - quite sure here is 1/3 so maybe u need to change those sliders changed



sry for actually pointed out nothing but only personal complains ;w;
nice song, gl :D
thanks for the mod

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osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: aaudio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 137178
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Kuukan Formation
TitleUnicode:空閒⇔Formation
Artist:AKI AKANE
ArtistUnicode:秋赤音
Creator:Arutsuki
Version:Dj Lucky's Hard
Source:
Tags:gumi vocaloid square akiakane room shogunmoon kujinn dj lucky kami-senpai cloudchaser
BeatmapID:1140380
BeatmapSetID:511707

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
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Arutsuki
630 posts
Joined December 2015
Topic Starter
Arutsuki

Ryuusei Aika wrote:

hi aru and shogun and kujinn lol
from queue

General
file missing: feathers.png - AiMod part of the storyboard, which is still WIP

Insane
00:20:141 (2) - why a 1/4 slider here as 00:20:141 (2) - doesnt have any sound need to emphasize? i suggest to use just a note here there are sounds, it's the drums getting gradually louder and the kickslider works well as a buildup to the 5 note burst
00:22:883 (4) - turn into a slider would be better, current rhythm is a little weird it's meat to empathise the sounds with both drum and guitar in it
01:37:722 (4) - ^
00:39:173 (1,2) - blanket fixed
01:45:625 (1,1) - stack? good catch
03:30:141 (8,9) - ctrl+g for a better flow I the current flows better

Highest
01:51:431 (1,2) - blanket can be improved done

sry for actually pointed out nothing but only personal complains ;w;
nice song, gl :D
thanks for modding~
Shunao
1,906 posts
Joined February 2016
Shunao
hi aru and shogun and kujinn lol Hi!
from queue

Easy
00:10:786 (2) - for me it should be a 3/2 slider start from 00:10:625 - to fit the rhythm better But here I map on the beats
01:25:625 (1) - ^ 3/2 slider start from 01:25:463 - here too
01:43:689 (1) - ^ 3/2 start from 01:43:528 - ^
02:37:883 (3) - ^ 4/2 start from 02:37:722 - It's fine like this c:
00:15:947 (1,2) - blanket Fixed
00:20:463 (4,1) - ^ ^
00:23:528 (1) - ^ (move the sliderend lower to fix) Fixed
01:26:270 (2,3) - ^ ^
02:03:689 (3,4) - ^ ^
02:44:980 (1,2) - ^ ^
03:28:205 (1,2) - ^ (try to be more strict on those kind of issues would be better xd) This blanket is fine :o

sry for actually pointed out nothing but only personal complains ;w;
nice song, gl :D

Thanks for modding!~

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osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: aaudio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 137178
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 67500,146210,192662
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 3.399999

[Metadata]
Title:Kuukan Formation
TitleUnicode:空閒⇔Formation
Artist:AKI AKANE
ArtistUnicode:秋赤音
Creator:Arutsuki
Version:Shogun's Easy
Source:
Tags:gumi vocaloid square akiakane room shogunmoon kujinn dj lucky kami-senpai cloudchaser
BeatmapID:1138823
BeatmapSetID:511707

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
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345,114,135947,2,0,P|308:125|260:120,1,71.9999978027344,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,193,136593,2,0,L|249:259,1,35.9999989013672,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,334,137238,6,0,P|262:327|222:336,1,71.9999978027344,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
147,347,137883,2,0,P|108:354|67:345,1,71.9999978027344,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,270,138528,2,0,P|61:228|69:196,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,132,139173,2,0,B|143:109|215:162|257:127,1,143.999995605469,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
489,339,141109,6,0,B|499:281|463:251|422:255|422:255|396:202|429:159,1,215.999993408203,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
491,132,142399,2,0,B|467:90|412:78|371:110|371:110|341:79|299:79,1,215.999993408203,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,7,143689,2,0,P|226:63|249:138,1,143.999995605469,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,195,144657,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,256,144979,2,0,B|286:245|286:245|237:259|237:259|195:253,1,143.999995605469,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,113,146270,6,0,B|158:176|46:217|124:324,1,215.999993408203,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,353,147560,2,0,P|249:366|335:336,1,143.999995605469,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
386,290,148528,1,8,0:0:0:0:
359,215,148851,2,0,P|336:164|356:102,2,107.999996704102,2|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,158,150141,2,0,L|456:137,1,35.9999989013672,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
477,67,150625,2,0,L|394:54,1,71.9999978027344,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,38,151431,6,0,P|214:23|136:44,1,143.999995605469,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
147,196,152722,2,0,P|218:211|297:189,1,143.999995605469,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
426,120,154012,2,0,P|444:187|422:269,1,143.999995605469,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,314,154980,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,260,155302,2,0,B|265:242|220:265|220:265|180:244|123:263,1,179.999994506836,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,308,156431,6,0,P|90:257|75:201,1,107.999996704102,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,127,157238,2,0,L|169:111,1,71.9999978027344,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,54,157883,2,0,P|241:95|225:165,1,107.999996704102,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,206,158689,2,0,P|214:230|280:216,1,107.999996704102,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
270,319,161754,6,0,B|259:270|259:270|301:245|299:189,1,143.999995605469,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,113,162722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,153,163044,2,0,P|166:148|81:100,2,143.999995605469,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,89,164980,6,0,P|367:120|361:167,1,71.9999978027344,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,209,165625,2,0,P|337:235|381:235,2,71.9999978027344,2|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,145,166593,1,8,0:0:0:0:
182,178,166915,6,0,P|144:187|107:180,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
50,132,167560,2,0,P|34:164|37:205,1,71.9999978027344,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
61,274,168205,2,0,B|122:265|122:265|173:280|173:280|243:266,1,179.999994506836,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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242,65,170141,2,0,L|163:84,1,71.9999978027344,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
107,127,170786,2,0,P|100:167|112:203,1,71.9999978027344,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,246,171431,2,0,P|135:271|99:274,1,71.9999978027344
27,269,172076,6,0,L|32:342,1,71.9999978027344,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,360,172722,2,0,P|143:367|185:357,1,71.9999978027344,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,334,173367,2,0,P|293:326|335:336,1,71.9999978027344,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
401,345,174012,2,0,L|411:307,1,35.9999989013672,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,223,174657,6,0,P|293:218|262:194,1,71.9999978027344,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,125,175302,2,0,P|267:115|293:83,1,71.9999978027344,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,11,175947,2,0,P|329:20|359:50,2,71.9999978027344,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,40,176914,1,8,0:0:0:0:
165,98,177237,6,0,P|125:103|87:99,1,71.9999978027344,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
31,51,177882,2,0,P|14:90|18:125,1,71.9999978027344,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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170,249,179172,2,0,L|221:253,1,35.9999989013672,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,230,179818,6,0,L|318:158,1,71.9999978027344,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,81,180463,2,0,P|299:80|267:96,1,71.9999978027344,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,140,181109,2,0,B|151:133|151:133|104:145|104:145|60:140,1,143.999995605469,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,285,184980,6,0,P|349:182|281:79,1,215.999993408203,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,101,186270,2,0,P|202:207|257:302,1,215.999993408203,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,313,187560,2,0,B|325:267|356:248|356:248|347:203|377:169,1,143.999995605469,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,115,188528,1,8,0:0:0:0:
347,70,188851,2,0,B|290:65|290:65|248:77|248:77|196:72,1,143.999995605469,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,208,190141,6,0,B|156:211|177:238|177:238|212:207|243:207|243:207|269:236|324:236,1,215.999993408203,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
377,191,191431,2,0,B|411:245|366:296|366:296|414:274|473:304,1,215.999993408203,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,52,195302,6,0,B|137:46|137:46|40:92,1,215.999993408203,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
57,169,196593,2,0,B|79:244|39:305|39:305|92:281|122:302,1,215.999993408203,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,225,197883,2,0,L|296:181,1,143.999995605469,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,151,198851,1,8,0:0:0:0:
386,77,199173,2,0,B|451:116|428:184|428:184|439:210|439:210|423:241,1,179.999994506836,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,292,200302,6,0,P|328:303|268:288,1,107.999996704102,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
213,234,201108,2,0,L|190:160,1,71.9999978027344,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,105,201754,2,0,P|183:86|241:102,2,107.999996704102,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,178,203044,6,0,L|38:162,1,71.9999978027344,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,89,203689,2,0,L|148:107,1,71.9999978027344,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,135,204334,2,0,P|221:169|209:212,1,71.9999978027344,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,278,204979,2,0,L|194:317,1,35.9999989013672,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,353,205463,6,0,P|313:363|365:345,1,107.999996704102,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,269,206270,2,0,L|373:188,1,71.9999978027344,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
311,149,206915,2,0,L|334:27,2,107.999996704102,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,168,208205,6,0,P|198:166|164:178,1,71.9999978027344,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,245,208851,2,0,P|92:212|89:169,1,71.9999978027344,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
49,117,209495,2,0,P|83:106|124:117,1,71.9999978027344,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,96,210141,2,0,L|234:88,1,35.9999989013672,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,34,210625,6,0,P|307:71|288:142,1,107.999996704102,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,213367,12,0,215302,0:0:0:0:
Affirmation
2,543 posts
Joined March 2015
Affirmation
Q

[Highest diff]
00:11:109 (3,4,5) - DS error, make same DS
00:15:302 (6,7,8) - Just make stream.
00:26:593 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - looks messy, make neat patterns.
00:36:593 (1) - players can't read this reverse because of 2(circle), don't stack them.
00:44:818 (3,1) - messy overlap
00:56:270 (1,1) - unnecessary Nc
01:17:076 (1,2) - meaningless antijump imo, it doesn't express any parts of music, just stack them.
01:20:141 (7,1,4) - avoid overlap
01:54:980 (7) - 01:55:625 (5) - NC here for express DS changing
02:50:302 (7,1) - blanket
02:52:076 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - check NC parts. looks weird.

GL
Arutsuki
630 posts
Joined December 2015
Topic Starter
Arutsuki

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[Highest diff]
00:11:109 (3,4,5) - DS error, make same DS they are tho
00:15:302 (6,7,8) - Just make stream. the kicksliders fit in with the music better imo
00:26:593 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - looks messy, make neat patterns. did something else
00:36:593 (1) - players can't read this reverse because of 2(circle), don't stack them. by the time they get to (3) the (2) isnt even visible, doesn't make reading any worse
00:44:818 (3,1) - messy overlap doesn't really affect the gameplay..
00:56:270 (1,1) - unnecessary Nc fixed
01:17:076 (1,2) - meaningless antijump imo, it doesn't express any parts of music, just stack them. doen't really matter if they're stacked or overlapped like that. plus stacking is gross
01:20:141 (7,1,4) - avoid overlap why?
01:54:980 (7) - 01:55:625 (5) - NC here for express DS changing not neccessary
02:50:302 (7,1) - blanket they're not supposed to blanket :<
02:52:076 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - check NC parts. looks weird. ?

GL
thanks for modding~
Wormi
200 posts
Joined November 2014
Wormi
[Even Now]
01:51:431 (1) - did you ctrl+g that by mistake ? wtf
btw your 4th combo color is too dark and the approach circles looks almost invisible with 100% background dim
-NanoRIPE-
2,041 posts
Joined October 2013
-NanoRIPE-
hey

easy
00:10:625 - i think the first slider should be start here cause it would make sense for the song imo
00:15:786 - the slider should start here for consistency with 00:13:205 (1) -
00:44:334 (1,2,1,2) - hmm looks odd imo cause at here the beat of the song increase so maybe make variation rhythm here same as you did at 00:49:496 (1,2,3,4)
00:52:076 (4,1) - swap nc
00:59:173 (4) - i think this should be 1/2 reverse slider for emphatize the vocal and drum more
01:04:334 (4) - ^
01:21:754 (5) - make the slidertail at 01:22:238 - and then circle at 01:22:560 - for emphatize the vocal more and also for make the rhythm on kiai time a bit harder than non kiai time
01:23:689 (2,3) - the rhythm doesnt fit with the vocal imo,so maybe make slider (2) 3/2 reverse slider and then at 01:24:980 - 1/2 reverse slider?
01:25:625 (1) - the slider should be start at 01:25:463 - (the reason same as first point_
01:30:625 - ^
01:35:786 - ^
01:37:238 (3) - unsnapped
01:38:367 - same as before,the slider should be start at this red tick
01:56:593 (1,2) - hmm im not sure about these slider,the song at here looks not calm like 00:34:012 (1,2) - so i think long slider is not good here imo
02:01:431 - circle here for vocal
02:04:334 (4,1) - swap nc
02:16:593 (4) - 1/2 reverse slider would be better here
02:37:238 (2,3) - same as 01:23:689 (2,3) -
02:44:980 (1) - i think 2/1 slider would be better here cause it looks odd imo
02:48:205 (3) - make the slider ended at 02:48:851 - and a circle here 02:49:173 - ?
02:54:012 (4) - 1/2 reverse slider here (the reason same as before)
02:59:172 (4) - ^
03:01:109 (3) - revere slider here? for emphatize the drum at 03:02:399 -
03:19:173 (5) - same as 01:21:754 (5) -
03:21:108 (2,3) - same as 01:23:689 (2,3) -
03:33:205 - the spinner should be start here imo\


ok thats it from me ~
GL! (sorry just mod 1 diff)
Arutsuki
630 posts
Joined December 2015
Topic Starter
Arutsuki

Worminators wrote:

[Even Now]
01:51:431 (1) - did you ctrl+g that by mistake ? wtf oh oops, thanks for noticing
btw your 4th combo color is too dark and the approach circles looks almost invisible with 100% background dim this is as good as it gets, I was gonna make it black to match the song lyrics but everyone hated that D:
Chalwa
1,105 posts
Joined August 2014
Chalwa
Hello! From my queue!
Will mod three the easiest diffs, cause higher i suck and also i'll say in general why i skipped other diffs.
[General]
  1. A gap between Hard and Insane are very big, too big! As you can see between Easy - Normal and Normal - Hard a gaps are 0,8-1*. Then between Hard and Insane you have 1.6* gap! And between Insane and Extra you have 0.6* gap. I know you don't want to add more diffs, but perhaps you must nerf Insane diff very much, cause that big gap is unrankable i think. That's why I won't mod it. Sorry >.<
  2. A storyboarder puts a file to .osb file - SB\feathers.png, but it isn't in folder. Also it's one unsue file in map folder and you should to remove it, because it will make a folder will have less size. It's SB\Light_Corner2.png
  3. Something went wrong, cause you have double Combo3 and Combo4. You should to remove duplicates.
  4. A white combo colour is unrankable as i good remember, someone eyes can hurt, cause this colour is really bright and when someone have epilepsy or another thing... You know what then will be.
[Shogun's Easy]
  1. 00:10:141 (1,2,3,4) - I think this pattern haven't got a sound in song. So this rhythm can be improved a lot - in screen you have my suggestion how to rhythm this correctly and readable for newbie.
    img
  2. 00:14:012 (2,4) - Very nazi 420/1337 overlap xdddd... Ehkemm... Now serious . I think this overlap isn't fine and you really should to move 00:15:625 (4) a little , very little to up because aesthetics may be better and i think it will be easy-going if you didn't fix it.
  3. 00:30:786 (4) - I suggest you a little curve to left, because it's better with natural movement and i personally don't like if you are making transitions and shapes like this, cause it's too fast direction change in my opinion.
  4. 00:33:367 (2) - Reversed 1/2 slider on this BPM on this diff is really too fast for players which are new in osu. So better thing you can make here is copy 00:32:722 (1) slider and paste it in 00:33:367 -. Also you should to rotate second slider, because it looks much better then.
  5. 00:56:109 (5) - The same thing as above.
  6. 01:29:496 (3) - I prefer to make better transition to 01:29:496 (3) slider the same like on my image, because now it's a bit broken i think. It's really less important issue, so skip it fast if you want.
    img2
  7. 01:35:302 (4) - The same thing with 1/2 reversed slider. I won't write them all, cause you can look at map and fix them all.
  8. 01:37:238 (3) - This slider isn't snapped correctly, because slider's end is on 1/12 beat. So you should to very fast fix it.
  9. 02:05:625 (1) - Why this slider shape is that weird? Before you made all sliders like this symmetrical or have smooth curves. I think better is a thing when you move first slider node to 333/305 and now it looks more polished.
  10. 03:11:431 (2) - Make this slider more aeshetics for make it symmetrical? Cause now it looks really randomely and ugly to be honest with you. but not that much ugly to be honest.
[Kujinn's Normal]
  1. 00:52:722 (2,5) - I think you put this objects too close. You can move a 00:54:012 (5) circle a bit to right for make it further and then looks more polished.
  2. 02:54:657 (1,2) - It doesn't look fine to be honest with you. Also it hasn't got comfortble flow to play, so my suggestion now is make a 02:55:302 (2) slider like 02:54:657 (1) slider, but rotated about 180 deg. Now it looks nicer and transition is better.
  3. Very solid diff.
[Dj Lucky's Hard]
  1. 00:10:141 (1,2,3,1) - I think you can make this part more creativity, cause now it's too boring. You can make square, triangle, back-to-back jumps, which you want. Be creative mapper, because i think that's most important thing which you must have when you're mapper.
  2. 00:12:399 (2,3) - Make this sliders parallel for improve aesthetics and make this objects more polite, cause now they looks really randomely and weird to be honest.
  3. 00:22:722 (2,3) - I think this stack is really hard to catch, cause now it can be a bit hard to see it for players. I think you can make a jump between 00:22:722 (2,1) a bit closer and stack circle with 00:23:528 (1) slider. Now this part is more polite than before.
  4. 00:23:528 (1,2) - You must to improve this blanket, cause at the moment it's really broken and aestetics here is really, really low. You should to move a slider node to 309/153 and end of slider to 318/198. Now it looks much better and issue is fixed.
  5. 00:32:722 (1) - In my opinion you should to remove NC from here, because a NC here can looks like 00:32:722 (1) slider is on another beat. If you remove it it will be easier to read.
  6. 00:32:722 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern and DS here looks really randomely, so I made a other pattern which is much better. I put it in screen, because it's really hard to read how to make it.
    img3
  7. 00:35:947 (2,3,4) - It can be hard to click, cause it's first rhythm like this on this diff, so i think better option which you can make here is make 3/4 beat repeated slider, it's a bit easier to catch it.
  8. 00:43:528 (2,3) - A jump here is really too big for Hard diff, cause I can't see pattern like this on Insanes, so they aren't used in Hard. Also you can remove one repeat from 00:43:851 (3) slider and put a circle in 00:44:173 - if you want.
  9. 00:58:851 (2,3) - I thisnk you can make more comfortable flow between these objects. Good idea is blanket 00:58:528 (1,3) objects, cause now looks really nice and it's simple. Mapper should be simple person too, cause a variety is fine, but not that much. If you are mapping extra diffs you can be more variety than in easy-hard.
  10. 01:01:431 (2) - It looks much nicer when you copy 01:01:109 (1) slider and only make a Ctrl + G. Now it looks very bad to be honest with you, but after my change it's more polished.
  11. 01:06:512 (2,3,4) - I'm really confused why you put here the same DS when between 01:06:512 (2,3) you have 1/4 beat, but between 01:06:754 (3,4) you have 1/2 beat. You should to fix it, cause it really lacks on aesthetics.
  12. 01:14:980 (4) - What do you think about Ctrl + J this slider for improve transition from 01:14:657 (3) slider. Also you should to move it a bit to down, because you will improve flow more then.
  13. Will end here, if you are good mapper you can see what can you improve in map. I think i wrote it, you can understand it. You can see what can you fixed.
I'm really sorry I made that short mod.
I don't like modding extra diffs expect stream maps.
Sorry! >.<
*runs
GOOD LUCK!
_handholding
3,109 posts
Joined April 2014
_handholding

Easy
  1. 00:10:786 (2) - You can NC this since it's the start of the measure
  2. 00:15:625 (4,1) - this choice of rhythm feels weird to play along to since 00:15:786 is much stronger beat than the other 2
  3. 00:34:012 (1,1,1) - Nice sliders dude. Clean, creative and not over the top
  4. 01:23:689 (2,3,1) - again the rhythm doesn't fit the song because the really strong beats 01:24:173 and 01:25:463 aren't mapped. Try this rhythm http://puu.sh/u5SA7/592a8bf17c.jpg
  5. 01:30:625 - Same as 00:15:786 . I won't mention it again but I do recommend going over every part of the song similar to this and mapping this beat
  6. 02:08:367 (5) - how about this rhythm? http://puu.sh/u5SM8/4565a001c0.jpg The reason I suggest this is because your current rhythm can cause some reading difficulties for beginners with the back and forth moved + the small reverse. The new rhythm suggested flows well and simplifies things up a bit
  7. 02:54:657 (1,2) - The slight touching goes against the structure of the rest of the map
  8. 02:55:947 (3,4) - what do you think of replacing these objects with a circle on 02:55:947 ? I think the pause compliments the vocals better as well as giving beginner players a small rest before the kiai time
  9. 03:12:722 - When playing this section would look better without the break imo

    Overall this is really clean and well made don't get me wrong. Structurally this is better than 95% of all the other easy diffs I see these days but you miss big, emphatic beats for the sake of polarity.

Normal
  1. 00:24:334 (3) - Reduce the curve a tiny bit, it would look better visually
  2. 01:17:076 (5,6) - Personally I would prefer this pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7339552 It feels like too much of a strain to pull your cursor back after the slider in a short amount of time
  3. 01:39:173 (3) - same as 00:24:334 (3)
  4. 01:45:625 (6,1) - In situations like these reading does become a bit of a problem when you put the tail a lot closer than the head.
  5. 02:53:367 (3,1) - I really recommend to avoid overlaps such as these because reasons
  6. 03:12:883 (1) - gradually increasing the volume on the spinner with timing points would be cool

Insane
  1. 00:23:044 - Feels really empty that you skipped this beat. This goes for other beats such as 01:37:883 etc

Extra
  1. 00:11:351 (3,7,8) - You don't need claps on these imo, it drowns everything else out. If you choose to delete them here then make sure to incorporate the change for the rest of your map
  2. 02:11:915 - When playing it would flow better if this was a circle imo. This is because the vocals at 02:11:915 and 02:12:076 and 02:12:238 are very similar intensity so having 02:11:915 as a passive beat (slider end) feels a bit empty and off

    The diff flows quite well but could improve in aesthetics imo. Aesthetics isn't my strongest point so maybe try get someone really experienced to suggest a few things

Even Now, My Heart Hasn't Forgotten
  1. 02:03:205 (3) - missing clap on tail
  2. 02:03:797 (2) - It would make sense to NC this if you are going to have NCs on 02:04:012 (1,1,1,1) since they are all a part of the 1/3 pattern
  3. 03:04:980 (1,1,1,1) - The hitsounds in the extra diff were more appropriate imo
  4. 03:12:399 (1) - Delete NC, un-needed
  5. 03:10:141 (1,1,1) - I don't think wise to have NCs of very similar colour next to each other for combos. Visually it looks a bit unappealing imo since they look like they're the same colour unless you look hard enough. It's also against the RC rules if the 2 different combo colours aren't distinguishable, so that's something think about
[]

Really cool song and SB! GL ~
Arutsuki
630 posts
Joined December 2015
Topic Starter
Arutsuki

Chalwa wrote:

Hello! From my queue!
Will mod three the easiest diffs, cause higher i suck and also i'll say in general why i skipped other diffs.
[General]
  1. A gap between Hard and Insane are very big, too big! As you can see between Easy - Normal and Normal - Hard a gaps are 0,8-1*. Then between Hard and Insane you have 1.6* gap! And between Insane and Extra you have 0.6* gap. I know you don't want to add more diffs, but perhaps you must nerf Insane diff very much, cause that big gap is unrankable i think. That's why I won't mod it. Sorry >.< is it really unrankable? also consider the fact that star rating is sometimes not really accurate of the actual difficulty. I have no idea why is it so high for insane it feels like it should be around 4.5 imo
  2. A storyboarder puts a file to .osb file - SB\feathers.png, but it isn't in folder. Also it's one unsue file in map folder and you should to remove it, because it will make a folder will have less size. It's SB\Light_Corner2.png

    Cloudchaser wrote:

    SB is still in W.I.P, don't worry about it.
  3. Something went wrong, cause you have double Combo3 and Combo4. You should to remove duplicates. they're a different shade, same colour for colourhaxing purposes
  4. A white combo colour is unrankable as i good remember, someone eyes can hurt, cause this colour is really bright and when someone have epilepsy or another thing... You know what then will be.
can it really cause seizures? it's not really flashing so I dunno..

GOOD LUCK!
thanks for modding!

Kisses wrote:

Insane
  1. 00:23:044 - Feels really empty that you skipped this beat. This goes for other beats such as 01:37:883 etc done that to empathise more important sounds

Even Now, My Heart Hasn't Forgotten
  1. 02:03:205 (3) - missing clap on tail fixed
  2. 02:03:797 (2) - It would make sense to NC this if you are going to have NCs on 02:04:012 (1,1,1,1) since they are all a part of the 1/3 pattern sure
  3. 03:04:980 (1,1,1,1) - The hitsounds in the extra diff were more appropriate imo I think it's fine the way it is
  4. 03:12:399 (1) - Delete NC, un-needed done
  5. 03:10:141 (1,1,1) - I don't think wise to have NCs of very similar colour next to each other for combos. Visually it looks a bit unappealing imo since they look like they're the same colour unless you look hard enough. It's also against the RC rules if the 2 different combo colours aren't distinguishable, so that's something think about well rip creativity in colourhaxing then.. I made the gray just a bit darker
[]

Really cool song and SB! GL ~
thanks for modding~
Shunao
1,906 posts
Joined February 2016
Shunao

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

hey

easy
00:10:625 - i think the first slider should be start here cause it would make sense for the song imo
00:15:786 - the slider should start here for consistency with 00:13:205 (1) -
00:44:334 (1,2,1,2) - hmm looks odd imo cause at here the beat of the song increase so maybe make variation rhythm here same as you did at 00:49:496 (1,2,3,4) No thanks, I keep my sliders for consistence with 00:34:012 (1,1,1) - and I don't see a very big problem here it's fine for me
00:52:076 (4,1) - swap nc
00:59:173 (4) - i think this should be 1/2 reverse slider for emphatize the vocal and drum more
01:04:334 (4) - ^
01:21:754 (5) - make the slidertail at 01:22:238 - and then circle at 01:22:560 - for emphatize the vocal more and also for make the rhythm on kiai time a bit harder than non kiai time
01:23:689 (2,3) - the rhythm doesnt fit with the vocal imo,so maybe make slider (2) 3/2 reverse slider and then at 01:24:980 - 1/2 reverse slider?
01:25:625 (1) - the slider should be start at 01:25:463 - (the reason same as first point_
01:30:625 - ^
01:35:786 - ^ I can't because there are strong sound here 01:35:302 (4) -.
01:37:238 (3) - unsnapped
01:38:367 - same as before,the slider should be start at this red tick
01:56:593 (1,2) - hmm im not sure about these slider,the song at here looks not calm like 00:34:012 (1,2) - so i think long slider is not good here imo Like I said before
02:01:431 - circle here for vocal
02:04:334 (4,1) - swap nc
02:16:593 (4) - 1/2 reverse slider would be better here
02:37:238 (2,3) - same as 01:23:689 (2,3) -
02:44:980 (1) - i think 2/1 slider would be better here cause it looks odd imo It's fine for me
02:48:205 (3) - make the slider ended at 02:48:851 - and a circle here 02:49:173 - ? No thanks :p
02:54:012 (4) - 1/2 reverse slider here (the reason same as before)
02:59:172 (4) - ^ ^
03:01:109 (3) - revere slider here? for emphatize the drum at 03:02:399 -
03:19:173 (5) - same as 01:21:754 (5) - Here I follow the vocals so I can't
03:21:108 (2,3) - same as 01:23:689 (2,3) - ^
03:33:205 - the spinner should be start here imo\

ok thats it from me ~
GL! (sorry just mod 1 diff)

Chalwa wrote:

Hello! From my queue!
Will mod three the easiest diffs, cause higher i suck and also i'll say in general why i skipped other diffs.

[Shogun's Easy]
  1. 00:10:141 (1,2,3,4) - I think this pattern haven't got a sound in song. So this rhythm can be improved a lot - in screen you have my suggestion how to rhythm this correctly and readable for newbie.
    img
    It's readable too with my pattern, I think
  2. 00:14:012 (2,4) - Very nazi 420/1337 overlap xdddd... Ehkemm... Now serious . I think this overlap isn't fine and you really should to move 00:15:625 (4) a little , very little to up because aesthetics may be better and i think it will be easy-going if you didn't fix it.
  3. 00:30:786 (4) - I suggest you a little curve to left, because it's better with natural movement and i personally don't like if you are making transitions and shapes like this, cause it's too fast direction change in my opinion.
  4. 00:33:367 (2) - Reversed 1/2 slider on this BPM on this diff is really too fast for players which are new in osu. So better thing you can make here is copy 00:32:722 (1) slider and paste it in 00:33:367 -. Also you should to rotate second slider, because it looks much better then. Maybe you're right but I fixed this slider renverse for the rythm so if I remove this slider the should be very odd..
  5. 00:56:109 (5) - The same thing as above. ^
  6. 01:29:496 (3) - I prefer to make better transition to 01:29:496 (3) slider the same like on my image, because now it's a bit broken i think. It's really less important issue, so skip it fast if you want.
    img2
    I fixed but in a other way
  7. 01:35:302 (4) - The same thing with 1/2 reversed slider. I won't write them all, cause you can look at map and fix them all. Like I said above, for the rythm
  8. 01:37:238 (3) - This slider isn't snapped correctly, because slider's end is on 1/12 beat. So you should to very fast fix it.
  9. 02:05:625 (1) - Why this slider shape is that weird? Before you made all sliders like this symmetrical or have smooth curves. I think better is a thing when you move first slider node to 333/305 and now it looks more polished.
  10. 03:11:431 (2) - Make this slider more aeshetics for make it symmetrical? Cause now it looks really randomely and ugly to be honest with you. but not that much ugly to be honest.
I'm really sorry I made that short mod.
I don't like modding extra diffs expect stream maps.
Sorry! >.<
*runs
GOOD LUCK!

Kisses wrote:

Easy
  1. 00:10:786 (2) - You can NC this since it's the start of the measure I fixed a new slider so I think if I fix this it's should be weird
  2. 00:15:625 (4,1) - this choice of rhythm feels weird to play along to since 00:15:786 is much stronger beat than the other 2
  3. 00:34:012 (1,1,1) - Nice sliders dude. Clean, creative and not over the top Thanks~
  4. 01:23:689 (2,3,1) - again the rhythm doesn't fit the song because the really strong beats 01:24:173 and 01:25:463 aren't mapped. Try this rhythm http://puu.sh/u5SA7/592a8bf17c.jpg Fixed in a other way~
  5. 01:30:625 - Same as 00:15:786 . I won't mention it again but I do recommend going over every part of the song similar to this and mapping this beat ^
  6. 02:08:367 (5) - how about this rhythm? http://puu.sh/u5SM8/4565a001c0.jpg The reason I suggest this is because your current rhythm can cause some reading difficulties for beginners with the back and forth moved + the small reverse. The new rhythm suggested flows well and simplifies things up a bit
  7. 02:54:657 (1,2) - The slight touching goes against the structure of the rest of the map
  8. 02:55:947 (3,4) - what do you think of replacing these objects with a circle on 02:55:947 ? I think the pause compliments the vocals better as well as giving beginner players a small rest before the kiai time
  9. 03:12:722 - When playing this section would look better without the break imo

    Overall this is really clean and well made don't get me wrong. Structurally this is better than 95% of all the other easy diffs I see these days but you miss big, emphatic beats for the sake of polarity.

Really cool song and SB! GL ~
No reply= Fixed!

Thanks everyone for modding!~ :)

ommgg
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 137178
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.4
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BeatDivisor: 2
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TitleUnicode:空閒⇔Formation
Artist:AKI AKANE
ArtistUnicode:秋赤音
Creator:Arutsuki
Version:Shogun's Easy
Source:
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195,96,210141,2,0,L|234:88,1,35.9999989013672,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,34,210625,6,0,P|307:71|288:142,1,107.999996704102,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,187,211431,2,0,P|266:207|308:211,1,71.9999978027344,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,178,212076,2,0,P|380:210|372:249,1,71.9999978027344,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,316,212722,2,0,P|370:327|426:309,1,71.9999978027344,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,213205,12,0,215302,0:0:0:0:
Cheri
1,770 posts
Joined November 2014
Cheri
why doesn't this forums give me a msg but when it does the mod ain't for me -.-

anyways just saying i'll use this post or make a new 1 to reply to the mod I got 2 days ago on monday or tuesday :)
Kujinn
1,382 posts
Joined December 2013
Kujinn
Normal with Hard icon is rankable?

Will Apply mods and edit this post tomorrow.
Arutsuki
630 posts
Joined December 2015
Topic Starter
Arutsuki
Reeee
Last edited by Arutsuki , edited 1 time in total.
TequilaWolf
279 posts
Joined November 2013
TequilaWolf
mod
Even Now, My Heart Hasn't Forgotten-

00:10:141 (1,2,3) - seems better to stack them instead of making jump, also you're not mapping 00:09:818 00:09:980 and 00:10:060?
00:20:141 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - consider a 7-note stream? or use a 1/4 slider to replace 00:20:302 (4,5) - because drums are only on 00:20:463 (6,7,8) -
00:35:947 (1,2,3) - these are hard to read if you place them in a triangle like this, would much prefer to use 1/4 sliders instead
00:41:351 (2) - don't think this is good because the red tick at the end needs to be clicked..maybe just use circles on 00:41:351 and 00:41:593
00:48:528 (3,1,2) - this part sounds like it could use a bigger distance for emphasis, it looks the same as this 00:48:367 (2,3) - which is a little weird, maybe reduce 00:48:367 (2,3) -
00:55:141 (1,2) - would ctrl+g to make the pattern feel better
01:05:302 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,1) - if anything it should be small ds->big not big->small
01:44:980 (1,2,1,2) - don't think these need to be as huge as they are,
01:41:431 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2) - this part is more intense and yet they're smaller
02:03:797 (1,1,1,1,1) - really hard to read, most people would just play them as 1/4s..use 1/6 sliders?
02:06:915 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - good 02:09:496 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - not so good
02:09:980 - do map this sound, also this 02:10:625
02:31:109 (2,3,4,5,1) - make 5->1 similar to rest?
03:12:722 - consider last jump here
03:19:173 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - why such huge jumps suddenly? compare it with this 03:08:851 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
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Arutsuki
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Topic Starter
Arutsuki

TequilaWolf wrote:

mod
Even Now, My Heart Hasn't Forgotten-

00:10:141 (1,2,3) - seems better to stack them instead of making jump, they're pretty loud sounds I think stacking would make it underwhelming also you're not mapping 00:09:818 00:09:980 and 00:10:060? nope, they don't seem as important really
00:20:141 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - consider a 7-note stream? or use a 1/4 slider to replace 00:20:302 (4,5) - because drums are only on 00:20:463 (6,7,8) - huh the drums do play on all seven notes, they just get gradually louder. that's why the kickslider is at the start, for better entrance to the upcoming burst and also for the fact the drums there are almost unhearable
00:35:947 (1,2,3) - these are hard to read if you place them in a triangle like this, would much prefer to use 1/4 sliders instead it's not really that hard to read, plus the sliders before introduce the 3/4 rhythm enough
00:41:351 (2) - don't think this is good because the red tick at the end needs to be clicked..maybe just use circles on 00:41:351 and 00:41:593 it doesn't really have to be, the sound is the same as the one on sliderhead so it shouldnt matter as long as it's not more intense on the tail, especially in a slow section like this
00:48:528 (3,1,2) - this part sounds like it could use a bigger distance for emphasis, it looks the same as this 00:48:367 (2,3) - which is a little weird, maybe reduce 00:48:367 (2,3) - good point, done
00:55:141 (1,2) - would ctrl+g to make the pattern feel better there's different sounds for 00:54:656 (1,2) - these than there is for 00:55:141 (1,2) - these. plus I think it would play nicer the way it is
01:05:302 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,1) - if anything it should be small ds->big not big->small it actually goes gradually down on intensity a small bit, I just hitsounded it wrong by putting claps on the last 5 notes. fixed that now
01:44:980 (1,2,1,2) - don't think these need to be as huge as they are,
01:41:431 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2) - this part is more intense and yet they're smaller the guitar pitch is higher yes but the drums are the same like at the end of kiai's, also it's not really that big of a spacing change
02:03:797 (1,1,1,1,1) - really hard to read, most people would just play them as 1/4s..use 1/6 sliders? not really hard.. 02:03:689 (1,1) - introduces the rhythm, and the notes after are NC'd to highligh that it continues
02:06:915 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - good 02:09:496 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - not so good fixed I think
02:09:980 - do map this sound, also this 02:10:625 they're not really that important, I think I can leave them out
02:31:109 (2,3,4,5,1) - make 5->1 similar to rest? oops never noticed that
03:12:722 - consider last jump here no real distinct sound there
03:19:173 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - why such huge jumps suddenly? compare it with this 03:08:851 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - why compare those two lol, they're completely different sounds
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thanks for modding~
nextplay
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Joined December 2015
nextplay
Mini Mod 5 Normal

[Normal]

00:14:980 (5,6) - make it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7529609 to follow the Vocals better and add at 00:15:625 - A Circle
02:39:173 - Add a Note?
03:12:722 - Set the Spinner at the Big White Tick because the Vocal already starts there

GL
Einja
652 posts
Joined February 2015
Einja
hi from my queue

Even now, my heart hasn't forgotten

00:17:399 (4,5,6) - should be as evenly spaced as 00:17:640 (7,8,9)
00:31:270 (1) - overlap this with 00:30:786 (1)
00:50:463 (6) - slider should be curved here
01:08:769 (8,1) - should be evenly spaced out like 01:10:059 (8,1)
01:32:238 (2,3,4) - space these neatly like 01:32:399 (4,5,6,7)
01:54:657 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you're emphasizing such a tiny 1/4 piano instrument. These should just be reverse sliders.
02:38:528 (4,5,6) - you nc'd all 1/3 notes, but not these?
02:45:625 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
02:52:318 (1,1) - remove nc
02:52:963 (1,1) - ^
02:53:609 (1,1) - ^
Arutsuki
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Topic Starter
Arutsuki

Einja wrote:

hi from my queue

Even now, my heart hasn't forgotten

00:17:399 (4,5,6) - should be as evenly spaced as 00:17:640 (7,8,9) nope the guitar gradually lowers pitch
00:31:270 (1) - overlap this with 00:30:786 (1) and?
00:50:463 (6) - slider should be curved here why :v
01:08:769 (8,1) - should be evenly spaced out like 01:10:059 (8,1) it's supposed to increase with each jump since the voice increases on intensity
01:32:238 (2,3,4) - space these neatly like 01:32:399 (4,5,6,7) done
01:54:657 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you're emphasizing such a tiny 1/4 piano instrument. These should just be reverse sliders. what's wrong with mapping to the piano :v all reverses would just be boring and it wouldnt bring out the piano enough
02:38:528 (4,5,6) - you nc'd all 1/3 notes, but not these? fixed
02:45:625 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ the whole section before is 1/3 so the rhythm should be apparent from that
02:52:318 (1,1) - remove nc why :VV
02:52:963 (1,1) - ^
02:53:609 (1,1) - ^
thx for modding~
Fursum
523 posts
Joined August 2014
Fursum
Im terrible at inconsistent rythms but, whatever I'll give it a shot.

Skipped last difficulty.

[General]

I know blue theme looks cool but, combo colors should be contrasted with the background, especially in the lower difficulties. My suggestion is to reverse grays with blues to contrast with the storyboard colors.

[Shogun's Easy]

00:20:463 (4,4,4,4,4) - According to guidelines, you should avoid 1/4 sliders.

00:33:367 (2) - ^ + 1/4 reverse in easy.

Got more 1/4 sliders but lazy to link.

Also, way too many sliders and too few circles. Slider shapes could be confusing for easy too.

[Kujinn's Normal]

Haven't noticed anything serious.

[DJ Lucky's Hard]

00:35:947 (2,3,4) - Unexpected spacing, could be fixed with a different color, but you use them for another reason :P

02:52:560 (3,1,3,1) - Has a different combo set but still unexpected because of the overused colors.

[Insane]

01:16:270 (1) - Maybe a different combo color to indicate the full space, because they look confusing.

01:17:399 (1) - ^

01:40:947 (1) - This overlap is a bit confusing.

03:00:625 (5,6) - A wide angle jump.

[Kami's Extra]

00:17:238 (1,2) - This jump could be sharper.

01:51:028 (4,5,6,7,8) - Stream feels and looks weird.

01:57:399 (4,5,1) - Flip these horizontally, helps with the circular flow.

02:04:657 (3) - Jump could be sharper.

03:12:560 (8) - Breaking the circular flow, and not a sharp angle. A bad jump overall.
Lami
1,756 posts
Joined June 2011
Lami
General

Hard-Insane gap can be handle better.

Hard

00:17:802 (3) - ee, two circle? looks so dense rhythm for hard diff
00:32:722 (1) - remove nc

Insane

00:15:624 (5,1) - overlap x
00:19:657 (1,2) - buff DS, i think it's pretty misreadable 1/4 rhythm, as tiny DS.
00:23:044 - eh,, skip only this beat.. despite of you mapped drum, densely.
if you NC at 02:18:528 (1) - , then 01:06:270 (6) - NC too
02:04:012 (1,1,1) - looks so NC spaming.. they don't need many NC
02:51:915 (5,1) - should be make readable reverse arrow
03:33:205 (8) - move more right position, or 03:33:044 (7) - left.

Kami's Extra

AR is so low, you should be consider AR spread, since 9 - 9 - 9.6 :thinking:

if you NC-ed 00:39:173 (1) - , then should be add 00:42:399 (4) - NC
00:54:012 (3,4,5) - can make more same angle with 00:53:367 (1) -
03:19:173 (1,2,3,4) - buff DS, cuz i feel so small this. vs 01:21:754 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - , 02:35:302 (1,2,1,2,1,2) -

Even Now

00:33:367 (5,6,7) - more angle better imo, cuz it's looks so sharp.
and looks better if remove overlapped 00:32:722 (3,7) -
00:36:189 (2,1) - should be make readable reverse arrow
00:51:754 (6,7,1) - improvable flow imo. it can play as well for now, but it can be more fluid.
01:01:431 (2,3,4,5) - actually, 01:01:754 (3,4) - express drum as well, but skipping 01:01:593 - drum.
so i kinda doubt this rhythm usage, what you want to express at this partten.
01:50:463 (4,1) - what a this whistle..? idk whether it's proper place or not.
01:50:786 - 01:54:012 - well, this kiai usage isn't appropriate for me. tbh, it's too clam part overall.
02:03:797 (1,1) - compare with 02:04:119 (1,1,1) - . second drum is so weaker than first one.
but second partten is more dense rhythm than first, so it make me time for thinking.
so i think it(02:03:797 (1,1) - ) need just circle, OR 02:04:227 (1,1) - change to slider
addtionally, you may check DS usage, too.
02:08:528 (2,3,4,5,1) - nerf DS, as it's not high pitchy section. it's near more close clam section, imo.
02:09:012 (2,4) - avoid overlapping, since 02:08:851 (1,3) - not have overlap
02:18:528 (1,2,3) - eh,, this jump is pretty awful, player can be easily misreadable 1/2 rhythm.
02:19:657 (9,1,2,3) - uncomfortable flow imo.
02:29:818 (1,2,3,4) - personally, i think player don't like triplet after 3/4 slider.
02:59:496 (5,6,7) - inconsistent DS
03:02:238 (1) - remove NC
Net0
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Joined October 2014
Net0
Really cool mapset :>
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