hello m4m ~~
[General]
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[Hard]
I recommend mapping hard difficulties (and lower) with DS for consistency
00:06:627 (6,1) - overlap looks bad
00:10:116 (1,3) - uhh better move 3 somewhere else
00:15:697 (1,2,3) - can shape better like this
00:17:092 (1,2) - this is confusing overlap..especially since it's a hard difficulty
00:20:581 (6,7) - also bad overlap
00:34:534 (7,8) - ^
00:36:278 (4,5) - ^ O.O
00:41:511 (1,3,5) - stack properly
00:44:999 (5,6,7,8,1) - for a hard difficulty i think this whole stacking pattern is really hard to read.. better do something else
00:49:185 (1,3) - hmmm there are a lot of overlap issues like this one, which looks bad and flows bad.. you need to avoid them for aesthetics and consistency...
for Hard diffs and below it is important to make them really flow well...yours doesnt flow as much so I think a remap would be better
[Insane]
00:05:930 (5,6) - i hear beat on blue tick
00:08:197 (3,4,5) - can shape better like this
00:10:639 (2) - mm both are strong sounds.. try two circles e.g https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7777746
00:11:511 (5) - nc?
00:18:139 (6,1) - minor stack problem
00:22:325 (2,3) - overlap looks bad.. move (3) down?
00:35:232 (1,2,3,6,7,8) - the rhythm choice is bad imo.. something like this or this works much better
00:39:418 (5,6) - feels bad when playing.. place slider (6) closer to slider tail (5) plz
00:40:813 (1,2,3) - refer line 6
00:42:209 (6,7,8) - confusing flow imo..try ctrl+h 00:42:557 (7,8) - and blanket 00:43:430 (9) -
00:46:918 (4,5) - increase distance for emphasis
00:47:441 (6) - nc
00:48:488 (5) - nc
00:49:883 (3,6) - bad overlap
00:51:976 (1,2,3) - you seem to like this rhythm a lot lol..
00:59:650 (10,11) - I hear beat on blue tick
01:10:116 (6,7) - change into two 1/2 sliders for better emphasis
01:12:209 (3,5) - minor stack problem
01:14:302 (1,2) - mm feels bad.. remove slider (2), extend slider (1) and add a circle on blue tick
01:18:837 (7) - suddenly no sound o.o?
01:22:325 (8) - nc
01:30:871 (10,1) - increase distance for emphasis
01:33:837 (1,2,3) - you should space these evenly for aesthetics and consistency
01:36:801 (2,4) - bad overlap
01:39:767 (3,4) - ^
01:41:161 (7,8) - ^
01:44:127 (4,5) - increase distance for emphasis on strong sound
i should also mention your nc patterns are weird lol.. it feels a bit too minimal.. since this is a slow song I think it is fine to nc on the middle of two large white ticks.. e.g nc 00:08:720 (6) - 00:11:511 (4) -
and it's also fine to nc parts that needed emphasis, for example 00:34:534 (8) - where you follow vocal instead of instrument
this is all i can suggest.. good luck!!!
[General]
check AIMod
remove unused bookmarks
[Hard]
I recommend mapping hard difficulties (and lower) with DS for consistency
00:06:627 (6,1) - overlap looks bad
00:10:116 (1,3) - uhh better move 3 somewhere else
00:15:697 (1,2,3) - can shape better like this
00:17:092 (1,2) - this is confusing overlap..especially since it's a hard difficulty
00:20:581 (6,7) - also bad overlap
00:34:534 (7,8) - ^
00:36:278 (4,5) - ^ O.O
00:41:511 (1,3,5) - stack properly
00:44:999 (5,6,7,8,1) - for a hard difficulty i think this whole stacking pattern is really hard to read.. better do something else
00:49:185 (1,3) - hmmm there are a lot of overlap issues like this one, which looks bad and flows bad.. you need to avoid them for aesthetics and consistency...
for Hard diffs and below it is important to make them really flow well...yours doesnt flow as much so I think a remap would be better
[Insane]
00:05:930 (5,6) - i hear beat on blue tick
00:08:197 (3,4,5) - can shape better like this
00:10:639 (2) - mm both are strong sounds.. try two circles e.g https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7777746
00:11:511 (5) - nc?
00:18:139 (6,1) - minor stack problem
00:22:325 (2,3) - overlap looks bad.. move (3) down?
00:35:232 (1,2,3,6,7,8) - the rhythm choice is bad imo.. something like this or this works much better
00:39:418 (5,6) - feels bad when playing.. place slider (6) closer to slider tail (5) plz
00:40:813 (1,2,3) - refer line 6
00:42:209 (6,7,8) - confusing flow imo..try ctrl+h 00:42:557 (7,8) - and blanket 00:43:430 (9) -
00:46:918 (4,5) - increase distance for emphasis
00:47:441 (6) - nc
00:48:488 (5) - nc
00:49:883 (3,6) - bad overlap
00:51:976 (1,2,3) - you seem to like this rhythm a lot lol..
00:59:650 (10,11) - I hear beat on blue tick
01:10:116 (6,7) - change into two 1/2 sliders for better emphasis
01:12:209 (3,5) - minor stack problem
01:14:302 (1,2) - mm feels bad.. remove slider (2), extend slider (1) and add a circle on blue tick
01:18:837 (7) - suddenly no sound o.o?
01:22:325 (8) - nc
01:30:871 (10,1) - increase distance for emphasis
01:33:837 (1,2,3) - you should space these evenly for aesthetics and consistency
01:36:801 (2,4) - bad overlap
01:39:767 (3,4) - ^
01:41:161 (7,8) - ^
01:44:127 (4,5) - increase distance for emphasis on strong sound
i should also mention your nc patterns are weird lol.. it feels a bit too minimal.. since this is a slow song I think it is fine to nc on the middle of two large white ticks.. e.g nc 00:08:720 (6) - 00:11:511 (4) -
and it's also fine to nc parts that needed emphasis, for example 00:34:534 (8) - where you follow vocal instead of instrument
this is all i can suggest.. good luck!!!