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[General]
check AIMod
remove unused bookmarks
[Hard]
I recommend mapping hard difficulties (and lower) with DS for consistency
00:06:627 (6,1) - overlap looks bad fixed
00:10:116 (1,3) - uhh better move 3 somewhere else changed position
00:15:697 (1,2,3) - can shape better like this
00:17:092 (1,2) - this is confusing overlap..especially since it's a hard difficulty fixed
00:20:581 (6,7) - also bad overlap fixed
00:34:534 (7,8) - ^
00:36:278 (4,5) - ^ O.O
00:41:511 (1,3,5) - stack properly fixed
00:44:999 (5,6,7,8,1) - for a hard difficulty i think this whole stacking pattern is really hard to read.. better do something else
changed to a more easier pattern
00:49:185 (1,3) - hmmm there are a lot of overlap issues like this one, which looks bad and flows bad.. you need to avoid them for aesthetics and consistency...
for Hard diffs and below it is important to make them really flow well...yours doesnt flow as much so I think a remap would be better
[Insane]
00:05:930 (5,6) - i hear beat on blue tick idont sure about that , wait for more mod and iwill decide
00:08:197 (3,4,5) - can shape better like this
00:10:639 (2) - mm both are strong sounds.. try two circles e.g https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7777746 ok
00:11:511 (5) - nc? ok
00:18:139 (6,1) - minor stack problem
00:22:325 (2,3) - overlap looks bad.. move (3) down? fixed
00:35:232 (1,2,3,6,7,8) - the rhythm choice is bad imo.. something like this or this works much better
00:39:418 (5,6) - feels bad when playing.. place slider (6) closer to slider tail (5) plz
00:40:813 (1,2,3) - refer line 6
00:42:209 (6,7,8) - confusing flow imo..try ctrl+h 00:42:557 (7,8) - and blanket 00:43:430 (9) - did a big change
00:46:918 (4,5) - increase distance for emphasis
00:47:441 (6) - nc fixed
00:48:488 (5) - nc fixed
00:49:883 (3,6) - bad overlap fixed
00:51:976 (1,2,3) - you seem to like this rhythm a lot lol..
00:59:650 (10,11) - I hear beat on blue tick
01:10:116 (6,7) - change into two 1/2 sliders for better emphasis fixed
01:12:209 (3,5) - minor stack problem
01:14:302 (1,2) - mm feels bad.. remove slider (2), extend slider (1) and add a circle on blue tick fixed
01:18:837 (7) - suddenly no sound o.o? fixed
01:22:325 (8) - nc
01:30:871 (10,1) - increase distance for emphasis
01:33:837 (1,2,3) - you should space these evenly for aesthetics and consistency
01:36:801 (2,4) - bad overlap
01:39:767 (3,4) - ^
01:41:161 (7,8) - ^
01:44:127 (4,5) - increase distance for emphasis on strong sound
i should also mention your nc patterns are weird lol.. it feels a bit too minimal.. since this is a slow song I think it is fine to nc on the middle of two large white ticks.. e.g nc 00:08:720 (6) - 00:11:511 (4) -
and it's also fine to nc parts that needed emphasis, for example 00:34:534 (8) - where you follow vocal instead of instrument
i was follow vocal but after a mod i did a big change. i dont sure about this lol
this is all i can suggest.. good luck!!!
All fix !kunka wrote:
Ashemu's Easy glああああああああああああああああ日本の人やったぁぁああああああやらかしたぁぁあああああああああ \(^o^)/アイアムジャパニーズ
- 00:06:627 (6,1) - It doesn't have any problem to use 1/6 in a simple substance. But, when I let you link other objects, this becomes difficult for a beginner. I recommend that I change the 00:06:627 (6) - to 1circle. たしかに初心者向けではない音取りですね… fix!
- 00:19:534 (2,3) - Because stack is difficult, I can't recommend it for a beginner. But I may haven't any problem depending on BN because BPM is slow. Well,,After all, I recommend that I remove stack lol fix!
- 00:20:930 (4,5) - ^ 01:20:930 (2,3) - same fix!
- 00:40:116 (5) - I recommend 1/2 slider. You have it with the same rhythm like that before 00:34:534 (4) - fix!
- 01:26:860 (3,4) - fm,,I think that rhythm such as the 01:24:069 (3) - is good. https://puu.sh/veosp.jpg 素敵… fix!
- 01:44:650 - I think that this sound is important. I suggest it as follows. https://puu.sh/veoR4.jpg or https://puu.sh/veoSL.jpg 折り返しのパターンに変えました fix!
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A s h e m u wrote:
All fix !kunka wrote:
Ashemu's Easy glああああああああああああああああ日本の人やったぁぁああああああやらかしたぁぁあああああああああ \(^o^)/アイアムジャパニーズ
- 00:06:627 (6,1) - It doesn't have any problem to use 1/6 in a simple substance. But, when I let you link other objects, this becomes difficult for a beginner. I recommend that I change the 00:06:627 (6) - to 1circle. たしかに初心者向けではない音取りですね… fix!
- 00:19:534 (2,3) - Because stack is difficult, I can't recommend it for a beginner. But I may haven't any problem depending on BN because BPM is slow. Well,,After all, I recommend that I remove stack lol fix!
- 00:20:930 (4,5) - ^ 01:20:930 (2,3) - same fix!
- 00:40:116 (5) - I recommend 1/2 slider. You have it with the same rhythm like that before 00:34:534 (4) - fix!
- 01:26:860 (3,4) - fm,,I think that rhythm such as the 01:24:069 (3) - is good. https://puu.sh/veosp.jpg 素敵… fix!
- 01:44:650 - I think that this sound is important. I suggest it as follows. https://puu.sh/veoR4.jpg or https://puu.sh/veoSL.jpg 折り返しのパターンに変えました fix!
MODありがとうございます(^o^)ノ
Update plz ~ :3
ok wwAshemu's Easyosu file format v14
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78,79,8720,2,0,P|158:56|230:88,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,124,9767,1,2,0:0:0:0:
374,115,10116,2,0,P|402:195|377:266,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,253,11511,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,297,11860,2,0,P|144:339|153:377,2,80,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,253,12906,6,0,P|241:180|223:101,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,51,13953,1,0,0:0:0:0:
113,116,14302,2,0,P|96:161|72:195,1,80
45,260,14999,2,0,P|62:305|86:339,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,346,15697,6,0,B|231:323|231:323|314:333,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,340,16743,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,296,17092,2,0,P|467:253|485:217,1,80
510,145,17790,2,0,P|503:102|485:66,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,37,18488,6,0,P|340:64|256:56,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,60,19534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,128,19883,2,0,P|190:200|115:246,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,172,20930,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,240,21278,2,0,P|71:305|152:319,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
227,289,22325,1,0,0:0:0:0:
303,263,22674,2,0,P|389:258|474:299,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,348,24069,6,0,P|225:356|150:324,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,282,25116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,216,25464,2,0,P|69:182|81:147,1,80
87,66,26162,2,0,P|127:75|153:107,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,183,26860,6,0,P|165:262|204:337,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,288,27906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
345,305,28255,2,0,P|322:348|288:365,2,80,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
409,256,29302,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,214,29650,6,0,P|407:177|480:217,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
487,290,30697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
421,336,31046,2,0,B|381:346|340:328|340:328|293:313|253:323,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,334,32092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
106,318,32441,6,0,P|65:248|70:164,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,107,33488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,99,33837,2,0,P|234:96|272:82,1,80
325,22,34534,2,0,P|351:58|353:94,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,156,35232,6,0,P|383:169|432:114,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,82,36627,2,0,P|194:69|145:124,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,199,37674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,266,38023,2,0,B|188:289|138:274|138:274|90:262|58:286,2,160,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,144,40116,2,0,P|356:155|386:184,1,80
453,226,40813,6,0,P|392:264|316:227,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,147,42209,2,0,P|245:109|321:146,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,211,43255,1,0,0:0:0:0:
418,266,43604,2,0,B|405:332|346:361|346:361|292:331|275:263|275:263|241:294|207:296,1,320,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,257,45348,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,280,45697,2,0,P|60:240|78:205,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
149,167,46395,6,0,P|165:127|174:76,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
247,63,47092,2,0,P|255:102|270:139,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,192,47790,2,0,P|341:280|377:345,1,160,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,296,49185,6,0,P|143:313|61:296,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,223,50232,1,0,0:0:0:0:
11,144,50581,2,0,L|18:63,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
79,12,51278,2,0,P|112:33|167:41,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,21,51976,6,0,P|210:98|135:120,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,168,53023,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,235,53371,2,0,P|22:273|32:314,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
87,369,54069,2,0,L|173:354,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,325,54767,6,0,B|287:332|319:308|319:308|353:285|402:301,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,273,55813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
439,198,56162,2,0,P|426:160|416:112,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,43,56860,2,0,P|360:33|304:43,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,76,57557,6,0,P|157:115|82:114,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
53,183,58604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
95,250,58953,2,0,P|172:235|256:249,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,296,59999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
393,303,60348,6,0,P|413:232|458:160,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,81,61395,1,0,0:0:0:0:
362,100,61743,2,0,P|344:142|322:167,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,210,62441,2,0,P|211:228|186:250,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,319,63139,6,0,P|144:318|107:255,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,182,64185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,110,64534,2,0,P|145:134|158:172,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,244,65232,2,0,P|233:239|277:257,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,301,65930,2,0,P|446:236|327:179,1,320,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,50,68023,6,0,P|191:62|137:67,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,25,68720,2,0,P|79:101|142:147,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
214,180,69767,1,0,0:0:0:0:
285,144,70116,2,0,B|357:110|357:110|438:110,1,160,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,224,71511,6,0,P|241:219|200:157,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,104,72557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
85,158,72906,2,0,P|50:182|12:191,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
13,271,73604,2,0,P|51:280|84:303,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,351,74302,6,0,P|221:321|310:318,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,263,75348,1,0,0:0:0:0:
427,219,75697,2,0,L|510:234,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
489,311,76395,2,0,L|410:325,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,263,77092,6,0,P|354:186|416:139,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,68,78139,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,58,78488,2,0,P|337:80|287:87,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,41,79185,2,0,P|219:78|226:118,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,186,79883,6,0,B|222:208|182:184|182:184|145:161|108:176,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,252,80930,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,236,81278,2,0,P|28:168|80:96,1,160,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,108,82674,6,0,B|275:126|314:113|314:113|352:99|392:114,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
433,181,83720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
375,236,84069,2,0,P|364:298|386:364,2,120,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
433,181,85464,6,0,P|456:101|430:31,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,13,86511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,55,86860,2,0,P|241:73|131:70,2,120,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
317,127,88255,2,0,P|374:246|448:128,1,320,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,127,90348,6,0,P|284:167|294:208,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,247,91046,2,0,P|294:284|225:247,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,198,92092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
235,168,92441,2,0,L|219:8,1,160,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,1,93488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
65,33,93837,6,0,L|78:195,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,266,94883,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,326,95232,2,0,P|121:241|74:191,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
26,130,96278,1,0,0:0:0:0:
57,56,96627,2,0,B|128:99|208:47|208:47|309:26|350:104,1,320,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,198,98720,2,0,P|226:240|244:272,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
311,316,99418,6,0,P|395:317|464:281,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
405,133,100813,2,0,P|321:132|252:168,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,261,102209,2,0,P|49:233|0:170,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,96,103604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,104302,2,0,P|264:260|256:292,2,80,2|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
有记得有个id差不多的人 没空格。我以为是国人khy200610140 wrote:
我沒預先說是我考虑不周QAQ 不過A s h e m u是日本人ww
thank you ^_^kunka wrote:
Hi~
From request of the m4m.General
- Kiai start and end of each diff is different. I think that setting make the same is better. The kiai start thinks that 00:49:185 - is good. And the end-point is 01:33:837 - fixed
- I think that soft-hitnormal doesn't match music. A sound very greatly collapses quiet music remarkably imo. I recommend its deletion.
- Because there isn't soft-sliderslide2, I hear the noise of the slider.
- Because you don't use "@Ariesbto_EV_B10_03.png", please delete it. https://puu.sh/venNC.png
- Setting of the combo color.
Insane
- 00:15:697 (1) - Because there isn't the cymbals sound, I recommend that I remove finish. 00:18:488 (1) - 00:21:278 (1) - 00:26:860 (1) - 00:29:650 (1) - 00:32:441 (1) - 00:38:023 (1) - 00:40:813 (1) - same fixed
- 00:18:488 (1,2) - The space of the object is small. When open an interval, is more clean imo https://puu.sh/vek4O.jpg fixed
- 00:22:325 (2,3) - I don't feel need of the overlapping. I recommend that I remove overlap. fixed
- 00:46:395 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - It's a good combo according to consistency. However, I recommend it as follows to raise visibility. https://puu.sh/velhp.jpg fixed
- 01:45:174 (1) - Finish is unnatural. This point do fade-out calmly. I remove finish and recommend that I add 5% to 01:49:185 - https://puu.sh/venxC.png fixed
It's necessary for the suggestion of the hit-sounds to consider other diff.Hard
- 00:40:639 (9,1) - The same phrase doesn't perform stack. Reference 00:42:034 (4,5) - As a result, please remove it because stack becomes unnatural. 00:34:534 (7,8,1) -
- 00:42:209 (5) - Correction of perfect stack.
- 00:45:871 (6,7,8,1) - It's hard to recognize stack. I recommend movement of the 00:46:395 (1) - . How about the tail of the 00:44:302 (3) - ? https://puu.sh/vemsF.jpg
- 00:49:011 (9,1) - The 00:49:185 (1) - is a strong sound. I don't feel need of stack. 01:11:511 (1) - same
- 00:51:278 (8,9) - I don't feel need of overlapping. Please compare notes of the similar rhythm and placement. Reference 00:56:860 (8,9) - Similar object 01:02:441 (7,8) - fixed
- 00:57:209 (9,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Visibility isn't good imo. How about this? change to a easier pattern
https://gyazo.com/e635fe1841f7062887cde3a6db5905b9- 01:03:139 (1,2) - Deletion of the overlapping. ok
- 01:39:767 (3,4) - I recommend the placement of the same pattern. Reference 01:41:161 (7,8) - So, I think that stack isn't necessary.
color=#00FF00]ok[/color]- 01:43:604 (5) - nc. It's reference in insane diff. ok
A lot of overlap that is not necessary exist. I strongly recommend that I reduce them to improve visibility.Ashemu's Easy glああああああああああああああああ日本の人やったぁぁああああああやらかしたぁぁあああああああああ
- 00:06:627 (6,1) - It doesn't have any problem to use 1/6 in a simple substance. But, when I let you link other objects, this becomes difficult for a beginner. I recommend that I change the 00:06:627 (6) - to 1circle.
- 00:19:534 (2,3) - Because stack is difficult, I can't recommend it for a beginner. But I may haven't any problem depending on BN because BPM is slow. Well,,After all, I recommend that I remove stack lol
- 00:20:930 (4,5) - ^ 01:20:930 (2,3) - same
- 00:40:116 (5) - I recommend 1/2 slider. You have it with the same rhythm like that before 00:34:534 (4) -
- 01:26:860 (3,4) - fm,,I think that rhythm such as the 01:24:069 (3) - is good. https://puu.sh/veosp.jpg
- 01:44:650 - I think that this sound is important. I suggest it as follows. https://puu.sh/veoR4.jpg or https://puu.sh/veoSL.jpg
看到經過上面幾個mod的時候,其實我已經改了一些地方,很多改完的部分會跟你的mod有重疊 所以我是盡量憑記憶,沒註明的項目應該都改過的了Misaki-Mei wrote:
在tag里面加上GD的ID 嗯
[Hard]
00:05:930 (5) - ctrl+j
00:08:720 (5) - 这个卡手 做顺 改容易了
00:21:278 (1,2) - 还是flow的问题 至少这样 我随便摆了一下https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780820 好,改
00:24:767 (2) - 同第一条 然后https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780833 这种的你应该直接复制
00:38:023 (1,2,3,4) - 不一定要像我这样做 但是低难度还是需要考虑考虑怎么做比较顺手怎么做简单 如果能不无聊就更好https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780882 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780889 這個我再看看
00:46:395 (1,2,3) - hard不用全程锁间距 贴起来不好看 滑条判定送 合适的地方完全可以放开一点 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7780916
改了
你可以试着用鼠标来走 改掉自己觉得不合适的地方
[lnsane]
00:06:627 (6,1) - 难看 改了個模式 雖然不知道還難不難看(自己的審美觀就是^&(*&*(^&^(
00:35:232 (1) - 卡手 不过并不是说必须要做顺手我只是觉得这种轻柔的音乐这样有点不合适个人观点
00:52:674 (3,4,5,6) - 这个我觉得必须改了 大改了一下
01:31:918 (3) - 叠好 你应该有关闭打击动画吧 謝謝提醒w
01:44:302 (5,6,7,8) - 我觉得这一部分你有必要统一间距 這個我先看看
看上去不错在做的好看点 flow 在顺一点 RANK就不远了 可惜你运气不好 现在rank难度提升了
觉得合适可以在找我看 我空得很
Moeri wrote:
[General]
整體的NC應該可以再頻繁一倍,因為這首歌你是當做翻倍BPM(162)做的。
[Insane]
00:04:011 (6) - 這裡可以NC,因為與00:03:662 (5) - 的節奏之間的停頓的話加一個NC會比較合曲呢?
00:05:057 (2,3) - 這兩個物件因為在音樂里是屬於比較激烈的部分,可以考慮旋轉180°,然後把兩個都放在坐標481,236。這樣做也會跟前後物件更配合,更美觀。
00:05:755 (4) - 這個可以疊到00:05:930 (5) - 上面?因為之前的00:05:057 (2,3) - 疊起來了,這裡也疊起來的話會比較consistent。然後畢竟後面這裡也沒有節奏或者旋律的變化。
00:06:453 - 這裡跳過了一個比較明顯的音,不過主要是這個音明顯,然後你這裡反而是短暫的停了一下,並且去下一個物件的距離不大,會有點違和。
00:08:197 (3) - 這裡跟之前的一樣,也可以NC。
00:08:720 (6,7) - 這裡的間距相比 00:09:767 (8,9,1) - 是有點相反了?音樂里反而是變得越激烈哦。
00:10:639 (2,3) - 相比上面這裡這個更激烈。
00:16:918 (3,5,7) - 這樣的重疊錯位有點不推薦,雖然不是很大區別但是可以嘗試改一下Stack Leniency到5。
00:20:581 (7,8) - 這裡的遮擋可以考慮NC一下。
00:23:371 (4,5) - 人聲唱了四聲,改成四個圈如何?
01:17:790 (3) - 這裡可以旋轉15°,那樣的話會看起來更像一個柔和的旋轉flow。
01:19:883 (1,2,3,5,6) - 這個不錯,聽美觀的哦 繼續。
01:18:488 (1) - 可以NC,因為是個三角梗。
01:22:325 (8) - 這裡也是可以NC,不然間距跟01:21:976 (7) - 會有點奇怪。
後面這段這個音效聽起來挺有趣hhh 可惜只是最後這裡一段使用了。
[Hard]
先說一下,有些包圍(滑條包圍圈)可以再完美一點,比如00:04:534 (1,2) - 。後面的這類就先不說啦。
00:58:953 (8,9) - 這裡美觀性上的角度來看的話 可以改進。嘗試用00:58:953 (8) - 複製粘貼,點擊ctrl-H,然後擺在00:58:953 (8,10) - 之間試試?
Hard可以的,沒多少可以說的了。
[Ashemu's Easy]
不錯的,沒問題。
謝謝你的摸啊wwkhy200610140 wrote:
Moeri wrote:
[General]
整體的NC應該可以再頻繁一倍,因為這首歌你是當做翻倍BPM(162)做的。
[Insane]
00:04:011 (6) - 這裡可以NC,因為與00:03:662 (5) - 的節奏之間的停頓的話加一個NC會比較合曲呢? ok
00:05:057 (2,3) - 這兩個物件因為在音樂里是屬於比較激烈的部分,可以考慮旋轉180°,然後把兩個都放在坐標481,236。這樣做也會跟前後物件更配合,更美觀。 大改了那個位置 然後也變跳了
00:05:755 (4) - 這個可以疊到00:05:930 (5) - 上面?因為之前的00:05:057 (2,3) - 疊起來了,這裡也疊起來的話會比較consistent。然後畢竟後面這裡也沒有節奏或者旋律的變化。
00:06:453 - 這裡跳過了一個比較明顯的音,不過主要是這個音明顯,然後你這裡反而是短暫的停了一下,並且去下一個物件的距離不大,會有點違和。加了音
00:08:197 (3) - 這裡跟之前的一樣,也可以NC。 ok
00:08:720 (6,7) - 這裡的間距相比 00:09:767 (8,9,1) - 是有點相反了?音樂里反而是變得越激烈哦。 改了
00:10:639 (2,3) - 相比上面這裡這個更激烈。 間距拉遠了
00:16:918 (3,5,7) - 這樣的重疊錯位有點不推薦,雖然不是很大區別但是可以嘗試改一下Stack Leniency到5。
00:20:581 (7,8) - 這裡的遮擋可以考慮NC一下。
00:23:371 (4,5) - 人聲唱了四聲,改成四個圈如何?
01:17:790 (3) - 這裡可以旋轉15°,那樣的話會看起來更像一個柔和的旋轉flow。 ok
01:19:883 (1,2,3,5,6) - 這個不錯,聽美觀的哦 繼續。
01:18:488 (1) - 可以NC,因為是個三角梗。
01:22:325 (8) - 這裡也是可以NC,不然間距跟01:21:976 (7) - 會有點奇怪。
後面這段這個音效聽起來挺有趣hhh 可惜只是最後這裡一段使用了。
[Hard]
先說一下,有些包圍(滑條包圍圈)可以再完美一點,比如00:04:534 (1,2) - 。後面的這類就先不說啦。 我是真不會包 我還以為這個已經包的很完美了Orz
00:58:953 (8,9) - 這裡美觀性上的角度來看的話 可以改進。嘗試用00:58:953 (8) - 複製粘貼,點擊ctrl-H,然後擺在00:58:953 (8,10) - 之間試試? 好 改了
Hard可以的,沒多少可以說的了。
[Ashemu's Easy]
不錯的,沒問題。
謝謝摸ww_Yiiiii wrote:
General
--如果要rank的话,这个set在spread上缺个Normal
Insane
--00:12:209 (3) - NC 因为这里有个DS梗。 好
--00:40:116 (7,8) - 感觉间距大了,而且现在这里出了个overlap也不好看。拉近了距離和沒overlap了
--01:21:976 (7,8) - 推荐做overlap,否则控这一拍并且还移动感觉很奇怪。 好
--01:28:953 (3,4) - blanket 修改了 雖然不知道還有沒有包好
--01:39:767 (3,4,5) - 这个擦边很难看。
--01:42:209 (1,2,3,4) - 这种地方实在想不出啥好办法就用滑条转连打弄一个比较整齐的图形,手摆的不好看。後面的都重做了一次
--01:44:302 (5) - 有新的音,NC一下 嗯
以上是具体问题,再说一下整体的问题。
--01:05:930 (1,2) - 00:49:185 (1,2) - 这都是1/2滑条后跟一个圈的节奏,而且都是圈那里没有vocal,但是DS变化很明显,这是一个kiai段普遍存在的问题。一般同节奏的DS波动幅度在0.5x之内都是没问题的,最好还是要统一,而且现在的那几个t2的搞事bn特别爱抠这种细节,推荐你早点改。注意与这种00:56:162 (6,7) - 圈上有vocal音的做区分。 其實我知道我高潮段的ds有幾個部分都沒一致,但我還是沒改的方向
畢竟有些位置動了看起來就不好看了(個人感覺 ,所以我先再看看, 謝謝你啊w
--01:04:185 (4,5,6) - 一般这种有轻重音之分的地方不会用折返的,因为折返无DS变化,还是最好改一下,避开那些bn爱挑的毛病。
--00:15:348 (7,8,1) - 这种两个连续很轻的音接一个重音的地方,我推荐把两个轻音的圈做stack 嗯
Hard
--00:41:511 (2,4) - 做Hard不要搞事。 其實我也覺得這個難讀 但鎖ds也沒位置放了 那我改一下這部分的前後吧吧
--00:44:302 (3,5) - blanket 調了彎的角度 不過不知道這次有沒有包好0 0 ?
--01:02:790 (8,1) - 全图就没用过几次变DS,干脆别用了。我记得这个时刻之前也有,都去掉吧。 我再看看
Ashemu's Easy
--Wide screen support - on
没了,gl~
tksNeoskylove wrote:
As you requested, I'll call you later for m4m XD
[General]
Where is Normal diff? You should add Normal diff XD
[Hard]
00:06:453 - How about add a beat here? I think this part has piano sound idont sureof this
00:10:116 (1,2) - How about make parallel for better seeing? ok sure
00:13:430 (2,3) - I think stack looks weird since you didn't stack at other parts fixed
00:32:441 (1,5) - looks not good overlap imo, fixed
00:53:023 (4,5,1) - make unstack pattern like 00:50:232 (4,5,1) - fixed[/color]
00:59:302 (1) - Unnecessary NC imo, fixed[/color]
01:21:103 (4,1) - could you avoid this linear overlap here? looks not so good for seeing fixed[/color]
01:34:360 (3,4) - swap rhythm for make consistency with 01:35:755 (3,4) -
for me, not so bad, but you should make more consistent map.
[Insane]
It is Insane diff, But I don't know well what is your "Basic DS". you have to turn on DS snap when you map, then players can read well.
00:04:011 (1) - looks unnecessary NC, fixed[/color]
00:09:767 (6,7) - How about make slider for make consistency with 00:04:185 (2) - ? fixed[/color]
00:31:220 - try to add a beat here
00:40:813 (1,2) - antijump looks weird imo. you didn't used well. fixed[/color]
00:47:964 (3) - add NC here for better looking
01:33:488 (3) - Just change into 2 circles since 01:33:662 - has good vocal sound.
GL
謝謝摸kanor wrote:
一下子忘记了ORZ
[Genal]
Letterbox in breaks:
Ashemu's Easy: 0
Hard: 1
Insane: 1
Unused hitsounds:
normal-slidertick.wav[/list]
Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms:
combobreak.wav
Combo colors are not set at all diffs.
没看到Normal,要是想rank的话现在这个spread肯定是不行的
[Easy]
01:28:255 (4,1) - not sure if the stack is OK because of the low AR.
Nice diff
[Hard]
00:04:011 (2,3,1,2,3) - 感觉这一段难度有点爆炸...因为是个比较安静的Part 重做了這裡
首先00:04:011 (2,3,1) - 我猜你应该没有ds,虽然说hard没规定必须DS,但是在这里我觉得没有什么一定要放开DS的理由,而且这里虽然音高但是总体还是个比较安静的部分,拉开间距总觉得不太舒服,直线flow本身也不是特别好打,建议是叠一下 ^
00:05:057 (2,3) - 这种可以像00:05:755 (4,1) - 一样,这样就避开了意义不大的跳跃,整体也显得干净点
00:07:325 (1,2) - 这里是个个人的小建议,因为中间空了一拍,你可以就在1的滑条尾放2,这样有一种停顿感,就和你空的拍对上了,00:09:592 (2) - 这里也是 是好想法 不過我不確定這樣改有沒有必要 我再看看
00:25:464 (1,2,3) - 没包好 重新包了一下 不知道這樣算不算包好
00:26:860 (1,2,3) - 这种怎么说呢...我不能说这么摆不行,但是这么摆没什么美感,而且接下来无论你怎么摆都会有点浪费空间,而且如果你在前面00:04:011 (2,3,1) -这种音也只是直线三个1/2,这里的音并不强,却也这么摆就不太好了,还是建议叠起来 fixed[/color]
00:28:604 (2,3) - 节奏ctrl+G一下比较舒服
00:29:476 (5,1) - 这里建议和00:18:313 (4,1) -统一一下,因为两个是同样的节奏,如果你后面跳了,那么前面最好也小跳一下,顺便后面这个跳在hard里肯定大了,建议在缩小一点 2個都鎖了ds
00:32:267 (2) - 建议移到(298,304)原来的看着有些歪了 ok
00:41:860 (3,1) - 00:51:627 (4,1) - 01:02:790 (4,1) -01:08:371 (4,1) - 01:13:953 (4,1) - 01:19:534 (4,1) - 01:28:081 (4,1) - 01:30:697 (4,1) - 这个大跳肯定要不得,还是按DS来吧,如果你想跳,比DS大2倍感觉是极限了,再大就和insane差不多 都重做鎖了ds
00:59:302 (1) - 这里的DS不是很明白什么意思,要不再找人检查一下DS? 已改
01:39:418 (1,2) - 因为这里曲子已经到安静的部分了,再用这么打击感强烈的排列似乎不太好,建议把这两个合并成一个滑条
那些大跳是肯定要改的,那是insane的摆法,hard小跳就可以了
[Insane]
00:04:534 (1,3,1) - 00:22:325 (2,1) - 检查一下blanket 改了雖然不知道有沒有包住
00:11:511 (1,1) - 这里我看了一下,实际SV没有变,所以没有必要NC
00:13:430 (2) - 这个Note放那里导致flow有点怪异,建议还是就放在前面的滑条尾上
后面不太摸得动了,简单的一点意见:因为你整体都放了比较多的跳,实际上很难通过排列去区分曲子的高潮部分和安静部分,这是个比较大的问题
GL啦
thank youDeppyforce wrote:
[General]
no combo colors?
disable letterbox during breaks; no breaks in map
can you atleast try to smooth the sb a little bit? or just use this code/ looks cleaner
sure
also the fact that you only do sb at end and not the kiai too is pretty weird, i recommend to find another pic and do the thing at kiai too
wheres 2* normal diff
easy diff has disabled widescreen support
[Insane]
00:05:755 (4,1) - blanket idont sure is that means fixed,
00:09:767 (3) - should split to 2 circles imo cuz there are strong piano key on both head and end of the slider, like 00:10:639 (2,3) -
ok
00:46:395 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:47:441 (1,2,3,4) - are the same, so if u mapped the sound at 00:46:743 - u should map another at 00:47:790 - too
01:03:139 (1,2,3) - the spacing from 01:03:139 (1,2) - should be smaller than 01:03:662 (2,3) - to emphasize that 01:03:837 (3) - is stronger fixed
01:30:348 (3,4,5,6) - this spacing is too big for what the song actually is fixed
[Hard]
00:05:057 (2,3) - stack error
00:28:255 (1,2) - blanket
00:48:488 (1,2,1) - this is way too big compared to other 1/2 ds usage pls space this less sure
^also if you make that a jump, 01:11:511 (1) - should be a jump too
01:21:103 (4) - stack error fixed
01:37:674 - 01:38:023 - should be mapped too, right now it feels empty while paying to just leave those out fixed
[Easy]
00:25:464 (3,4) - nazi blanket
00:39:767 - since u mapped alot of 1/2 already this should be mapped too cuz its a drum beat which is pretty strong compare to other 1/2 u mapped
01:33:837 (1) - can u make this different shape from 01:32:441 (4) - to emphasize new verse
khy200610140 wrote:
thank youDeppyforce wrote:
[General]
no combo colors?
disable letterbox during breaks; no breaks in map fixed
can you atleast try to smooth the sb a little bit? or just use this code/ looks cleaner
sure
also the fact that you only do sb at end and not the kiai too is pretty weird, i recommend to find another pic and do the thing at kiai too
wheres 2* normal diff
easy diff has disabled widescreen support
[Insane]
00:05:755 (4,1) - blanket idont sure is that means fixed,
00:09:767 (3) - should split to 2 circles imo cuz there are strong piano key on both head and end of the slider, like 00:10:639 (2,3) -
ok
00:46:395 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:47:441 (1,2,3,4) - are the same, so if u mapped the sound at 00:46:743 - u should map another at 00:47:790 - too
01:03:139 (1,2,3) - the spacing from 01:03:139 (1,2) - should be smaller than 01:03:662 (2,3) - to emphasize that 01:03:837 (3) - is stronger fixed
01:30:348 (3,4,5,6) - this spacing is too big for what the song actually is fixed
[Hard]
00:05:057 (2,3) - stack error
00:28:255 (1,2) - blanket
00:48:488 (1,2,1) - this is way too big compared to other 1/2 ds usage pls space this less sure
^also if you make that a jump, 01:11:511 (1) - should be a jump too
01:21:103 (4) - stack error fixed
01:37:674 - 01:38:023 - should be mapped too, right now it feels empty while paying to just leave those out fixed
[Easy]
00:25:464 (3,4) - nazi blanket
00:39:767 - since u mapped alot of 1/2 already this should be mapped too cuz its a drum beat which is pretty strong compare to other 1/2 u mapped
01:33:837 (1) - can u make this different shape from 01:32:441 (4) - to emphasize new verse
Left wrote:
i recommend increasing DS a bit like 1.1x cuz notes are almost touching each other 同じ意見です
Yasaija 714 wrote:
[Ashemu's Easy]
[*]オブジェクトの間隔が短いからDistance 1.1でもいいと思うRemapなるかも? 自分でも狭いと思ってました remap done .Left wrote:
i recommend increasing DS a bit like 1.1x cuz notes are almost touching each other 同じ意見です
All fix ! thanks for mod <3Left wrote:
[Easy]
i recommend increasing DS a bit like 1.1x cuz notes are almost touching each other i agree :3
00:40:116 (5,1) - blanket fix
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