Here's the mod you wanted
Just to note I nitpicked a lot while modding all the difs, hopefully it'll help in the end and it doesn't seem petty lol, good luck with rank!
Rem's NM
00:01:124 (1124|1,1499|1) - Since these are different sounds I wouldn't have them in the same lane (2,3 instead of 2,2 might work better)
00:02:624 - Same as previous
00:12:937 - I would make the pattern here mirror the one at 00:14:437 or vice versa
00:19:874 - I can't hear a reason for this one to be more spaced then the prior patterns, could just be me, and that being said I think it still plays fine, might just want to look into it
00:20:249 - Same goes for this one but once again I like how it plays, so I could just have bad hearing lol
00:25:874 - Maybe space this one similar to the one at 00:27:374
00:26:999 - Maybe only space the LN and the single apart by one lane (2,4 instead of 1,4)
00:28:499 - Same as previous
00:30:749 - Maybe place a note here, it feels a bit empty without one but I think it can still work like this
00:43:312 (43312|2,43312|0) - I think if you flipped these it would fit the song better, but this one is very subjective
00:44:812 (44812|1,44812|3) - Same as prior
00:51:562 (51562|1) - Consider moving this to lane 1, I think it works either way though
01:03:187 - Space these apart to reflect the intensity that's represented at 01:02:812
01:03:749 (63749|0,63749|2) - This double is spaced apart 1 lane, whereas the rest of the doubles at the start of Kiai are spaced by 2 lanes, I recommend alternating between these two spacing for the parts between 01:03:749 and 01:05:624 (Here's an example if you don't get what I mean)
01:08:812 (68812|3,68812|2) - Space this apart by two lanes to enhance the repetition used by the previous two doubles
01:10:312 (70312|1,70312|3) - I would maybe make these either not spaced or spaced apart two lanes, whichever you feel is better
01:11:062 - Same as previous
01:14:249 (74249|1) - Same sound as 01:15:749 (75749|1,75749|0) but not a double
01:16:874 - Flip this part to mirror the previous pattern (at 01:15:374)
01:22:874 - Same idea as previous one, but to mirror 01:21:374
01:22:124 (82124|0,82124|2) - This double should be the same as 01:23:624 (83624|3,83624|0)
01:26:062 - Maybe place the LN in lane 4 instead of lane 3? Very subjective one there though
Final Thoughts: I liked this dif! I tried to pick out as many things that I could identify as problems (no matter how minor) so that you have a lot to work with when editing it, some are more nitpicky then others so I'm sorry about that lol. The ideas used with the LN's in the intense sections have a lot of heart and I look forward to seeing what you can do when you fix some of the consistency issues .
00:02:624 - Same as previous
00:12:937 - I would make the pattern here mirror the one at 00:14:437 or vice versa
00:19:874 - I can't hear a reason for this one to be more spaced then the prior patterns, could just be me, and that being said I think it still plays fine, might just want to look into it
00:20:249 - Same goes for this one but once again I like how it plays, so I could just have bad hearing lol
00:25:874 - Maybe space this one similar to the one at 00:27:374
00:26:999 - Maybe only space the LN and the single apart by one lane (2,4 instead of 1,4)
00:28:499 - Same as previous
00:30:749 - Maybe place a note here, it feels a bit empty without one but I think it can still work like this
00:43:312 (43312|2,43312|0) - I think if you flipped these it would fit the song better, but this one is very subjective
00:44:812 (44812|1,44812|3) - Same as prior
00:51:562 (51562|1) - Consider moving this to lane 1, I think it works either way though
01:03:187 - Space these apart to reflect the intensity that's represented at 01:02:812
01:03:749 (63749|0,63749|2) - This double is spaced apart 1 lane, whereas the rest of the doubles at the start of Kiai are spaced by 2 lanes, I recommend alternating between these two spacing for the parts between 01:03:749 and 01:05:624 (Here's an example if you don't get what I mean)
01:08:812 (68812|3,68812|2) - Space this apart by two lanes to enhance the repetition used by the previous two doubles
01:10:312 (70312|1,70312|3) - I would maybe make these either not spaced or spaced apart two lanes, whichever you feel is better
01:11:062 - Same as previous
01:14:249 (74249|1) - Same sound as 01:15:749 (75749|1,75749|0) but not a double
01:16:874 - Flip this part to mirror the previous pattern (at 01:15:374)
01:22:874 - Same idea as previous one, but to mirror 01:21:374
01:22:124 (82124|0,82124|2) - This double should be the same as 01:23:624 (83624|3,83624|0)
01:26:062 - Maybe place the LN in lane 4 instead of lane 3? Very subjective one there though
Final Thoughts: I liked this dif! I tried to pick out as many things that I could identify as problems (no matter how minor) so that you have a lot to work with when editing it, some are more nitpicky then others so I'm sorry about that lol. The ideas used with the LN's in the intense sections have a lot of heart and I look forward to seeing what you can do when you fix some of the consistency issues .
Lyo's HD
00:02:249 (2249|2,2624|3,2999|0) - I would space these like you did 00:00:749 (749|1,1124|2,1499|3) (Try this type of thing to enhance the repetition of the piano)
00:04:687 (4687|0,4780|1) - I think these are unnecessary, or if you want to keep them I would add some stairs at 00:04:312 as well
00:13:687 - This section feel repetitive to a fault due to the overuse of the Lane 1 and Lane 4 pattern, try adding in a bit of variance
00:14:062 (14062|0,14062|3) - Maybe do something to individualize this double because of the bell sound
00:14:812 (14812|0,14812|3) - Why a double here?
00:15:280 (15280|1,15374|2) - I would mirror these so as to make a stair
00:18:374 - This section reuses the same pattern for a while, the repetition of the pattern would be good if you alternated it with a flipped version )If I was being descriptive enough, here's an example)
00:21:749 - Same goes for this section
00:24:187 (24187|0) - You could replace this LN with some singles
00:24:749 - For the other sections I said to alternate between the regular and flipped version, but if you do that I'd leave this section alone, I think it works out due to the high intensity the song has at this part.
00:29:812 - Sound here is represented by a triple earlier, but is used as a double here
00:37:124 - This doesn't feel like it should be a stair, maybe make the singles spaced apart to represent how the singers pitch kind of jumps around (Here's kind of what I mean)
00:42:937 (42937|2,42937|1) - I would space the LN's and singles apart by a lane in this section
00:44:437 (44437|1,44437|2) - If you accept the previous one, I would space the LN's and singles in this section by two lanes to amplify the intensity
00:54:468 - Add a single here
01:12:562 (72562|2,72562|1) - I would move this double into the left two lanes
01:14:999 - Missing a single here
01:15:937 - Single missing here as well
01:18:749 (78749|0,78749|1) - I would space the LN's and singles here to emphasize the intensity
Final Thoughts: Very fun dif! I feel like there are some consistency problems here, and also a bit too much reliance on repetition. When the repetition works it works VERY well, but for every time it works it felt like there was another section where it just got repetitive to a fault. I would take a look into spacing notes apart more to emphasize parts of the song that have more impact. All that aside I had lots of fun with it though! Looking forward to the final product .
00:04:687 (4687|0,4780|1) - I think these are unnecessary, or if you want to keep them I would add some stairs at 00:04:312 as well
00:13:687 - This section feel repetitive to a fault due to the overuse of the Lane 1 and Lane 4 pattern, try adding in a bit of variance
00:14:062 (14062|0,14062|3) - Maybe do something to individualize this double because of the bell sound
00:14:812 (14812|0,14812|3) - Why a double here?
00:15:280 (15280|1,15374|2) - I would mirror these so as to make a stair
00:18:374 - This section reuses the same pattern for a while, the repetition of the pattern would be good if you alternated it with a flipped version )If I was being descriptive enough, here's an example)
00:21:749 - Same goes for this section
00:24:187 (24187|0) - You could replace this LN with some singles
00:24:749 - For the other sections I said to alternate between the regular and flipped version, but if you do that I'd leave this section alone, I think it works out due to the high intensity the song has at this part.
00:29:812 - Sound here is represented by a triple earlier, but is used as a double here
00:37:124 - This doesn't feel like it should be a stair, maybe make the singles spaced apart to represent how the singers pitch kind of jumps around (Here's kind of what I mean)
00:42:937 (42937|2,42937|1) - I would space the LN's and singles apart by a lane in this section
00:44:437 (44437|1,44437|2) - If you accept the previous one, I would space the LN's and singles in this section by two lanes to amplify the intensity
00:54:468 - Add a single here
01:12:562 (72562|2,72562|1) - I would move this double into the left two lanes
01:14:999 - Missing a single here
01:15:937 - Single missing here as well
01:18:749 (78749|0,78749|1) - I would space the LN's and singles here to emphasize the intensity
Final Thoughts: Very fun dif! I feel like there are some consistency problems here, and also a bit too much reliance on repetition. When the repetition works it works VERY well, but for every time it works it felt like there was another section where it just got repetitive to a fault. I would take a look into spacing notes apart more to emphasize parts of the song that have more impact. All that aside I had lots of fun with it though! Looking forward to the final product .
MX
00:03:562 - I feel like the singles don't fit with the theme of the map, I would redo this part (up to the drum roll) with double's & LN's to reflect the rest of the map (the section after and during the drum roll is fine)
00:04:124 (4124|1) - Maybe make this into a double somehow to start the drum roll
00:12:562 - Maybe add an extra note here
00:14:624 (14624|0,14718|2,14812|0) - These are mapped to the piano but there are also sounds of the same instrument at 00:15:093 and 00:15:374, since it's so much more pronounced then the other instruments at that point I'd focus on it rather than going back to the drums right after you mapped the initial piano sounds (you could combine the two pretty well by removing 00:14:999 (14999|3) and 00:15:187 (15187|2), and then adding the piano in.
00:19:874 (19874|0,19968|2) - Why space these two like this?
00:20:624 (20624|3,20718|1) - Same as before, it kind of breaks up the map imo
00:24:187 - I would maybe remap this section to incorporate a stair of some sort
00:25:124 - You abandoned the use of doubles for a little at this section, maybe try and find a way to fit them back in to keep consistency
00:28:030 - These stairs feel kind of premature, maybe remap them to be like the doubles used earlier
00:32:999 (32999|2) - I think this LN removes some of the impact of this part of the song (Try something like this)
00:43:874 (43874|1,43968|0,44062|2,44062|3) - Flip this to make it mirror the pattern before to it
00:50:999 (50999|0) - Make this single lead into a stair so that the pattern isn't broken up.
01:01:312 (61312|3,61312|1) - Add some repetition to the sound used for this one and 01:00:562 (60562|3,60562|2) to emphasize the impact it has in the song
01:05:812 (65812|2,65812|0) - Same as the last one in a sense, I feel the sound should be represented by the same pattern both times
01:05:999 (65999|3,65999|1) - This shouldn't be a double
01:08:437 (68437|1,68437|3) - There should be more importance placed on this double then the rest of the ones next to it due to the high impact sound associated with it.
01:10:312 (70312|1,70312|3) - I would space this 2 lanes apart, rather than just 1.
01:11:062 (71062|1,71062|3) - Same as previous
01:21:749 - Triple here for consistency
01:25:499 (85499|1,85499|0) - Flip this double and move the single wherever
01:26:062 (86062|1,86062|2) - Change these two to singles and leave the other one the same.
Final Thoughts: Really enjoyable dif! I love the LN theme, all of them felt very fun to play and fit the song well. I feel there were a few issues with consistency of spacing and emphasis, but aside from that I think it was very well rounded. I can tell this will be a great map once it's fully finished .
00:04:124 (4124|1) - Maybe make this into a double somehow to start the drum roll
00:12:562 - Maybe add an extra note here
00:14:624 (14624|0,14718|2,14812|0) - These are mapped to the piano but there are also sounds of the same instrument at 00:15:093 and 00:15:374, since it's so much more pronounced then the other instruments at that point I'd focus on it rather than going back to the drums right after you mapped the initial piano sounds (you could combine the two pretty well by removing 00:14:999 (14999|3) and 00:15:187 (15187|2), and then adding the piano in.
00:19:874 (19874|0,19968|2) - Why space these two like this?
00:20:624 (20624|3,20718|1) - Same as before, it kind of breaks up the map imo
00:24:187 - I would maybe remap this section to incorporate a stair of some sort
00:25:124 - You abandoned the use of doubles for a little at this section, maybe try and find a way to fit them back in to keep consistency
00:28:030 - These stairs feel kind of premature, maybe remap them to be like the doubles used earlier
00:32:999 (32999|2) - I think this LN removes some of the impact of this part of the song (Try something like this)
00:43:874 (43874|1,43968|0,44062|2,44062|3) - Flip this to make it mirror the pattern before to it
00:50:999 (50999|0) - Make this single lead into a stair so that the pattern isn't broken up.
01:01:312 (61312|3,61312|1) - Add some repetition to the sound used for this one and 01:00:562 (60562|3,60562|2) to emphasize the impact it has in the song
01:05:812 (65812|2,65812|0) - Same as the last one in a sense, I feel the sound should be represented by the same pattern both times
01:05:999 (65999|3,65999|1) - This shouldn't be a double
01:08:437 (68437|1,68437|3) - There should be more importance placed on this double then the rest of the ones next to it due to the high impact sound associated with it.
01:10:312 (70312|1,70312|3) - I would space this 2 lanes apart, rather than just 1.
01:11:062 (71062|1,71062|3) - Same as previous
01:21:749 - Triple here for consistency
01:25:499 (85499|1,85499|0) - Flip this double and move the single wherever
01:26:062 (86062|1,86062|2) - Change these two to singles and leave the other one the same.
Final Thoughts: Really enjoyable dif! I love the LN theme, all of them felt very fun to play and fit the song well. I feel there were a few issues with consistency of spacing and emphasis, but aside from that I think it was very well rounded. I can tell this will be a great map once it's fully finished .
Just to note I nitpicked a lot while modding all the difs, hopefully it'll help in the end and it doesn't seem petty lol, good luck with rank!