M4M
here's my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/517861
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00:00:045 (1) - I'd say a slider with slow sv would fit better in this case. Atm, the spinner forces the player to spin very fast for such a lame sound.
00:07:395 (1) - Ctrl+h to follow the same structured aestetics you've done on 00:08:595 (1,2,1,2) - for example
00:29:220 (3,4) - Blanket
00:43:845 (3,4) - Should probably break flow here as you've done previously to keep consistency (00:39:045 (3,4) - , 00:41:445 (3,4) - )
00:46:245 (3,4) - ^
01:01:995 (2,3,4) - Would look better if overlapped under (2) sliderhead (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7456686)
01:31:695 (4,1,2,3) - Doesn't flow well. How about this? (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7456720)
02:47:895 (3,4,1) - Move to x134 y93 just to make 02:48:045 (1,2) - look better
02:51:645 (1) - Change sampleset to normal on this note
03:33:513 (2,6) - How about something like this for nicer aestetics? (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7456797)
03:50:932 - The reverb from the kick is killing my headphones (especually on notes like 03:53:006 (4) - ) ;_; nothing special. just something worth mentioning
04:29:497 (4) - Sliderslide can be heard here
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Very good map, not much to say really. It's certainly tournament material.
So much better than the original song
here's my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/517861
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00:00:045 (1) - I'd say a slider with slow sv would fit better in this case. Atm, the spinner forces the player to spin very fast for such a lame sound.
00:07:395 (1) - Ctrl+h to follow the same structured aestetics you've done on 00:08:595 (1,2,1,2) - for example
00:29:220 (3,4) - Blanket
00:43:845 (3,4) - Should probably break flow here as you've done previously to keep consistency (00:39:045 (3,4) - , 00:41:445 (3,4) - )
00:46:245 (3,4) - ^
01:01:995 (2,3,4) - Would look better if overlapped under (2) sliderhead (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7456686)
01:31:695 (4,1,2,3) - Doesn't flow well. How about this? (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7456720)
02:47:895 (3,4,1) - Move to x134 y93 just to make 02:48:045 (1,2) - look better
02:51:645 (1) - Change sampleset to normal on this note
03:33:513 (2,6) - How about something like this for nicer aestetics? (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7456797)
03:50:932 - The reverb from the kick is killing my headphones (especually on notes like 03:53:006 (4) - ) ;_; nothing special. just something worth mentioning
04:29:497 (4) - Sliderslide can be heard here
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Very good map, not much to say really. It's certainly tournament material.
So much better than the original song