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Naruse Jun(CV.Minase Inori) - Watashi no Koe

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Sakurauchi Riko
hi

17:43 yaleufeu: ay
17:50 yaleufeu: xd
17:50 yaleufeu: btw
17:51 yaleufeu: are u free for a nm
17:51 yaleufeu: fast nm
17:51 Phyloukz: up to insane it is definetely balanced
17:51 Phyloukz: uhh
17:51 yaleufeu: I need +12 on my map
17:51 yaleufeu: then I'll ask for a BN
17:51 yaleufeu: 2 diffs only
17:51 yaleufeu: 104 true bpm
17:51 yaleufeu: Easy/Normal
17:51 yaleufeu: xdddddddddddd
17:51 Phyloukz: ok
17:51 Phyloukz: if i find smth
17:51 yaleufeu: alright
17:51 yaleufeu: ty
17:51 yaleufeu: luv
17:52 *yaleufeu is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1190376 Naruse Jun(CV.Minase Inori) - Watashi no Koe]
17:52 Phyloukz: maybe call you easy "simple"? i tihnk that looks cooler
17:52 Phyloukz: someone suggested me that on my set too
17:52 Phyloukz: on my 2 diff set xD
17:53 yaleufeu: Which diff
17:53 yaleufeu: easy ?
17:53 Phyloukz: of course
17:53 Phyloukz: maybe
17:53 Phyloukz: if you want
17:53 Phyloukz: i tihnk its better
17:53 yaleufeu: will think about it
17:53 yaleufeu: xddd
17:53 Phyloukz: because you have always this E/N/H thing
17:53 Phyloukz: but you only have 2 diffs
17:53 yaleufeu: Simple > Voiceless
17:54 yaleufeu: yea
17:54 yaleufeu: will do
17:54 yaleufeu: write it in ur mod (y)
17:54 Phyloukz: ohh
17:54 Phyloukz: i thought wed do quick irc
17:54 Phyloukz: xD
17:54 yaleufeu: o
17:54 yaleufeu: xD
17:54 Phyloukz: if youve got time
17:54 yaleufeu: well
17:54 yaleufeu: why not
17:55 Phyloukz: ok easy
17:55 yaleufeu: y
17:55 Phyloukz: 00:26:315 (4,1) - this flows not really well, expecially because you have really simple flow before
17:56 Phyloukz: 00:38:431 (4) - think you could polish this slider bit more, so its symmetrical balanced
17:56 Phyloukz: same with 00:40:161 (5) - since you copy pasted
17:57 yaleufeu: alright
17:58 Phyloukz: 01:18:238 (2,5) - stack
17:59 yaleufeu: yeap
17:59 Phyloukz: http://puu.sh/tSxid/10a2abf95e.jpg 01:37:277 (1,2,3) - would do it like in the pic
18:00 Phyloukz: more structure with that "equally triangle" idk how to call this type of triangle xD
18:00 yaleufeu: o
18:00 yaleufeu: yea
18:00 yaleufeu: looks better
18:01 Phyloukz: 01:58:046 (1,2) - i see this so often. i think it just flows bad...
18:01 Phyloukz: this up and down flow is really awkward and unnecessary imo
18:02 Phyloukz: 01:59:777 (2) - im more a fan of ctrl + g this
18:02 yaleufeu: there's a reason why I made a up and down flow there
18:02 yaleufeu: She elevates her voices one more time
18:02 yaleufeu: on the second slider
18:03 yaleufeu: that explains the up&down thing
18:03 yaleufeu: it's like OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOiiiiiiiiii OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
18:03 yaleufeu: see
18:03 Phyloukz: yea thats a reason though, still personal dislike it in general
18:03 Phyloukz: keep it
18:03 yaleufeu: alright
18:03 Phyloukz: thats it for easy
18:04 yaleufeu: btw about 01:37:277 (1,2,3) - guess I'll keep it like this, plays better in my opinion
18:04 yaleufeu: (on the simple diff)
18:04 Phyloukz: lol ok
18:04 Phyloukz: looks unstructured af but as you want
18:05 Phyloukz: then at least nerf the curve a bit
18:05 Phyloukz: or smth
18:05 Phyloukz: its like something in between, between this triangle and curved flow
18:05 Phyloukz: but as u want
18:05 Phyloukz: ok voiceless
18:05 yaleufeu: alright
18:05 Phyloukz: maybe 4.5 cs? i think easy top maps look more "elegant" with smaller circles (got that suggested too)
18:06 yaleufeu: 4.5CS is too much
18:06 yaleufeu: lol
18:06 yaleufeu: D:
18:07 Phyloukz: nah not really
18:07 Phyloukz: just a suggestion
18:08 Phyloukz: 00:41:897 (1,3,4) - looks really messy all together, theres no real pattern
18:08 Phyloukz: 00:54:013 (4,1) - stack or dont overlap
18:09 Phyloukz: 01:05:263 (5,1) - also an unintended overlap
18:09 Phyloukz: 01:07:859 (4,5,6) - triangle thing
18:10 Phyloukz: 01:11:320 (4,5,6) - ^
18:10 Phyloukz: 01:13:916 (2,4) - stack eventually
18:11 yaleufeu: ye
18:12 yaleufeu: 00:43:051 (3,4) - not applied, she ends her word on the 4 so I changed the direction
18:12 yaleufeu: 00:54:013 (4,1) - applied
18:12 Phyloukz: yea sure but still looks messy
18:12 Phyloukz: and unpatterned
18:12 Phyloukz: you can make same effect with a pattern
18:12 yaleufeu: 01:05:263 (5,1) - fixed
18:13 yaleufeu: 01:07:859 (4,5,6) - done the triangle thing
18:13 yaleufeu: 01:11:320 (4,5,6) - I'll keep it like I did, looks better to me
18:13 Phyloukz: http://puu.sh/tSya1/d61c00bea3.jpg better
18:13 yaleufeu: 01:13:916 (2,4) - fixed
18:13 Phyloukz: for 02:28:340 (5,6,1) -
18:13 Phyloukz: this is an example of strucutred pattern
18:13 yaleufeu: will do
18:13 Phyloukz: so you know what i mean
18:14 Phyloukz: 02:30:359 (3,4,5) - same here
18:14 Phyloukz: rest looks fine to me (except personal preferences)
18:14 Phyloukz: didnt find any rhythm issues
18:15 yaleufeu: Thanks :D
18:15 yaleufeu: Alright
18:15 Phyloukz: oh you sure you dont find a spot for a spinner?
18:16 Phyloukz: 0 spinner is not recommended by guideline
18:16 Phyloukz: only if the song really does not allow it
18:16 yaleufeu: uhm
18:16 yaleufeu: couldn't find one
18:16 yaleufeu: D:
18:17 yaleufeu: nvm
18:17 yaleufeu: found one for the Ez diff
18:17 Phyloukz: thats good

bye gl
Zerss


hey~


    General

  1. Timing points aren't consistant between difficulty (354 offset in Simple and 359 in Voiceless).
  2. Inconsistency in the Widescreen Support box (disable it on Simple).

    Simple

  1. 02:25:161 (4,1) - Why that 0.9× DS? Shouldn't be allowed in an Easy diff.

    Voiceless

  1. 01:28:340 - Wrong note here, should be S:C13. Same for 02:11:609 (7) -.
  2. 02:34:397 (4) - You can NC that to mark the fact that the song ends here. Same for Simple.
Topic Starter
Kyuukai

Zerss wrote:



hey~


    General

  1. Timing points aren't consistant between difficulty (354 offset in Simple and 359 in Voiceless).
  2. Inconsistency in the Widescreen Support box (disable it on Simple).

    Simple

  1. 02:25:161 (4,1) - Why that 0.9× DS? Shouldn't be allowed in an Easy diff.

    Voiceless

  1. 01:28:340 - Wrong note here, should be S:C13. Same for 02:11:609 (7) -.
  2. 02:34:397 (4) - You can NC that to mark the fact that the song ends here. Same for Simple.
Fixed up everything ! Thank you for modding !
Rioteck
Coucou

Simple diff ♥
00:12:469 (4) - Maybe you can curve it ? Better visual
00:15:931 (2) - CTRL+J it, plays better and looks better
00:59:200 - 01:02:661 - Break ?

Voiceless diff ♥
00:15:354 (3,4) - This pattern looks too straight, maybe you can move the 4 a bit lower ?
01:34:681 (2,4) - Avoid this overlap
01:58:911 (2,4) - Isn't it better stacked ?

Nice hitsounds btw o/
Topic Starter
Kyuukai

Rioteck wrote:

Coucou

Simple diff ♥
00:12:469 (4) - Maybe you can curve it ? Better visual
00:15:931 (2) - CTRL+J it, plays better and looks better
00:59:200 - 01:02:661 - Break ?

Voiceless diff ♥
00:15:354 (3,4) - This pattern looks too straight, maybe you can move the 4 a bit lower ?
01:34:681 (2,4) - Avoid this overlap
01:58:911 (2,4) - Isn't it better stacked ?

Nice hitsounds btw o/
Fixed everything ! Thanks <3
Nao Tomori
shouldn't you put greensleeves in the tags? this is just vocals over that song lol..


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P5ItNxpwChE
Topic Starter
Kyuukai

Nao Tomori wrote:

shouldn't you put greensleeves in the tags? this is just vocals over that song lol..


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P5ItNxpwChE
True, added !
FiddleBlue
~Hello! Still new to modding. So please excuse me if I make mistakes. ^^

[Simple.]

00:31:796 (1) - I think the hitsound whistle work great here as it gives some dynamic before the pause.

[Voiceless.]

00:33:238 (3) - Same as what I typed for [bold]Simple.[/bold] difficulty.
01:28:046 (3) - Maybe change this slider to circles instead as I think it emphasizes more than just merely a slider.
02:24:873 (5) - Not sure if this slider is supposed to be a blanket, but if it is, I think you should fix it.

Honestly, I don't see many things that need fixing. Hoping to see this rank soon!
Also thanks for sort off introducing me to this movie. Had a great time watching it. :P
Topic Starter
Kyuukai

FiddleBlue wrote:

~Hello! Still new to modding. So please excuse me if I make mistakes. ^^

[Simple.]

00:31:796 (1) - I think the hitsound whistle work great here as it gives some dynamic before the pause. Why not

[Voiceless.]

00:33:238 (3) - Same as what I typed for [bold]Simple.[/bold] difficulty. Why not
01:28:046 (3) - Maybe change this slider to circles instead as I think it emphasizes more than just merely a slider. nah, too much circles
02:24:873 (5) - Not sure if this slider is supposed to be a blanket, but if it is, I think you should fix it. yea

Honestly, I don't see many things that need fixing. Hoping to see this rank soon! There's a mapset ranked already ! You can try it out ^^
Also thanks for sort off introducing me to this movie. Had a great time watching it. :P Well, thanks ^^
Thanks for modding too !
Xinely
add soft-sliderslide pls thx
Topic Starter
Kyuukai

Xinely wrote:

add soft-sliderslide pls thx
well ok D:
Enon
Awesome song.
Zero__wind
[General]
why do you have "." for your diff names? I think removing them seems to be better

[Timing]
offset currently too late, please use offset 360(-40) for both diffs instead. remember to resnap all notes and inherited points, and reset preview time

[Hitsounding]
01:15:977 - I think you should use S:17 clap here, the sound you're using now is on the following red tick 01:16:265 - , not here. use S:13 clap for 01:16:265 (7) - in Voiceless diff instead
02:37:283 - try moving this inherited point to 02:34:686 - so the spinner won't be that noisy while spinning

[Simple.]
00:31:803 (1) - this spinner is too short for a Easy diff, plz try to remove it and start a 2/1 slider from 00:31:515 - with a circle at 00:33:246 -

call me back
Topic Starter
Kyuukai

Zero__wind wrote:

[General]
why do you have "." for your diff names? I think removing them seems to be better Idk how to explain that, but the dots are showing that it's her last words and that she lost her voice (lyrics & anime related), but if needed, I can remove them

[Timing]
offset currently too late, please use offset 360(-40) for both diffs instead. remember to resnap all notes and inherited points, and reset preview time I think you have the old mp3, redownload the mapset ?

[Hitsounding]
01:15:977 - I think you should use S:17 clap here, the sound you're using now is on the following red tick 01:16:265 - , not here. use S:13 clap for 01:16:265 (7) - in Voiceless diff instead Alright, I've changed the clap right here 01:16:265 - but about right here 01:15:977 - isn't it better to use S:11 or should I just remove the clap hitsound ?
02:37:283 - try moving this inherited point to 02:34:686 - so the spinner won't be that noisy while spinning alright

[Simple.]
00:31:803 (1) - this spinner is too short for a Easy diff, plz try to remove it and start a 2/1 slider from 00:31:515 - with a circle at 00:33:246 - Alright

call me back
*calls back Zero*
Zero__wind
you forgot to change the volume of the last spinner in Voiceless. diff
diff names are ok
Topic Starter
Kyuukai

Zero__wind wrote:

you forgot to change the volume of the last spinner in Voiceless. diff mybad, fixed !
diff names are ok alright
I changed the white combo color due to the new ranking criterias
Zero__wind
reminds me of the lovely movie
pishifat
hi, popping for a few issues:

soft-sliderslide 19 and 21 are unused, so they should be removed

time signature should be 3/4 instead of 4/4

the map itself is okay, so if you can get zero__wind to rebubble, i'll qualify!
Topic Starter
Kyuukai

pishifat wrote:

hi, popping for a few issues:

soft-sliderslide 19 and 21 are unused, so they should be removed

time signature should be 3/4 instead of 4/4

the map itself is okay, so if you can get zero__wind to rebubble, i'll qualify!
Everything is fixed !
Zero__wind
oh 3/4 baka me
sorry I overlooked that

Rebubbled as both issues are fixed
pishifat
a
Topic Starter
Kyuukai

pishifat wrote:

a
b
Chalwa

Kyuukai wrote:

pishifat wrote:

a
b
c
Pachiru

Chalwa wrote:

c
e
jeanbernard8865
just wanted to say that voice on 00:20:551 and 00:48:243 sounds half a tone lower than the keysounds ( C5 instead of C#5 ) to me
Wishkey
Oh sweet gj! love the song and map
Topic Starter
Kyuukai

AyanokoRin wrote:

just wanted to say that voice on 00:20:551 and 00:48:243 sounds half a tone lower than the keysounds ( C5 instead of C#5 ) to me
It actually EXACTLY sound like the piano of the song atm lol
Xinely
yay grats :D
Xinying
wow I love this song
jeanbernard8865

Kyuukai wrote:

AyanokoRin wrote:

just wanted to say that voice on 00:20:551 and 00:48:243 sounds half a tone lower than the keysounds ( C5 instead of C#5 ) to me
It actually EXACTLY sound like the piano of the song atm lol
yeah nevermind I tried putting a C5 keysound and it sounds way worse

I thought so cause voice does a weird thing here that it doesn't do at 00:06:705 so yeah
Evil_Twilight
gratz
Ora
congrats ;)
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