Wishkey wrote:
Heyo, #modreqs
Soft-hitnormal.wav unused deleted
-5 offset? sounds abit better with the whistles and this on top diff 01:28:051 (3) - mainly yea
could lower the volume for the intro and outro a bit since they don't have keysounds and are weaker in general, makes the keysounded parts a bit stronger since there lies the focus of the map yea sure
easyfixed all
- 00:12:474 (4,5,1) - would make the flow a bit smoother, kinda the only point with that sharp angles in the diff. moving 00:14:205 (1) - up and tilting -5% would work for example or something like 00:55:743 (1,2,3) -
- 00:45:359 (1,2) - control + g the rythm? the downbeat end is a new vocal and the prev one is extend in the song so first the sliders sounds a bit better
- NCing is a bit weird sometimes
- 02:08:436 (1) - bit inconsistent NCing with 01:40:743 (4) -
- 02:29:205 (5) - missing NC? 8 combo seems long here and you kinda seperated a similar music section in the intro by an NC in the middle
- also you go for a denser NC pattern from 00:34:397 (1) - to 01:26:897 (3) - compared the rest (1ish every downbeat/semi musical sentence vs 2 downbeats/full sentence) dunno if its intentional but I don't really see a reason for it tbh
normalCool song and really nice you took the time keysounding, gl with the map!
- 00:10:166 (6) - 00:24:301 (6) - and reoccuring, could consider keysounding these since the piano is quite audible while playing on these notes I'm keysounding the vocals only
- 00:26:320 (4,5,6) - a bit more angler like 00:12:474 (4,5,6) - would be nice here, it plays pretty linear atm yeap
- 01:18:243 (4) - lower pitch keysound here? nah, I think it's the right one
- 01:39:873 (5,6) - and similar in kiai, first the circle then the slider? makes you have the keysounds clickable since thats your main feedback and goes well with the vocals aswell. oh just noticed you did it in last kiai so yeah dunno if you want diversity between them but having both clickable sounds better to me but can leave it I suppose since it seems intentional then I changed everything into circle - slider
- 01:53:719 (5) - higher pitch on tail keysound? I think it's the right one
- 02:24:873 (5,6,7) - 02:31:796 (5,6,7) - since its the weaker end of the song you could consider making these a returnslider so you have a less dense rythm then the kiai since its considerably weaker yes
- seems about it only other thing I wanna mention is these rythms 00:16:796 (5,6,7) - , 00:44:488 (5,6,7) - since the keysounding is the main feedback you get while playing, it makes 00:45:065 (7) - kinda awkward to play since its clickable aswell without the feedback so could consider changeing 6-7 into a slider for these like you did in kiai for similar keysound patterns if it gets brought up again I agree, I'm taking ur suggestion
Thank you for modding and ur support !
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Naruse Jun(CV.Minase Inori) - Watashi no Koe
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Topic Starter
hi
bye gl
17:43 yaleufeu: ay
17:50 yaleufeu: xd
17:50 yaleufeu: btw
17:51 yaleufeu: are u free for a nm
17:51 yaleufeu: fast nm
17:51 Phyloukz: up to insane it is definetely balanced
17:51 Phyloukz: uhh
17:51 yaleufeu: I need +12 on my map
17:51 yaleufeu: then I'll ask for a BN
17:51 yaleufeu: 2 diffs only
17:51 yaleufeu: 104 true bpm
17:51 yaleufeu: Easy/Normal
17:51 yaleufeu: xdddddddddddd
17:51 Phyloukz: ok
17:51 Phyloukz: if i find smth
17:51 yaleufeu: alright
17:51 yaleufeu: ty
17:51 yaleufeu: luv
17:52 *yaleufeu is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1190376 Naruse Jun(CV.Minase Inori) - Watashi no Koe]
17:52 Phyloukz: maybe call you easy "simple"? i tihnk that looks cooler
17:52 Phyloukz: someone suggested me that on my set too
17:52 Phyloukz: on my 2 diff set xD
17:53 yaleufeu: Which diff
17:53 yaleufeu: easy ?
17:53 Phyloukz: of course
17:53 Phyloukz: maybe
17:53 Phyloukz: if you want
17:53 Phyloukz: i tihnk its better
17:53 yaleufeu: will think about it
17:53 yaleufeu: xddd
17:53 Phyloukz: because you have always this E/N/H thing
17:53 Phyloukz: but you only have 2 diffs
17:53 yaleufeu: Simple > Voiceless
17:54 yaleufeu: yea
17:54 yaleufeu: will do
17:54 yaleufeu: write it in ur mod (y)
17:54 Phyloukz: ohh
17:54 Phyloukz: i thought wed do quick irc
17:54 Phyloukz: xD
17:54 yaleufeu: o
17:54 yaleufeu: xD
17:54 Phyloukz: if youve got time
17:54 yaleufeu: well
17:54 yaleufeu: why not
17:55 Phyloukz: ok easy
17:55 yaleufeu: y
17:55 Phyloukz: 00:26:315 (4,1) - this flows not really well, expecially because you have really simple flow before
17:56 Phyloukz: 00:38:431 (4) - think you could polish this slider bit more, so its symmetrical balanced
17:56 Phyloukz: same with 00:40:161 (5) - since you copy pasted
17:57 yaleufeu: alright
17:58 Phyloukz: 01:18:238 (2,5) - stack
17:59 yaleufeu: yeap
17:59 Phyloukz: http://puu.sh/tSxid/10a2abf95e.jpg 01:37:277 (1,2,3) - would do it like in the pic
18:00 Phyloukz: more structure with that "equally triangle" idk how to call this type of triangle xD
18:00 yaleufeu: o
18:00 yaleufeu: yea
18:00 yaleufeu: looks better
18:01 Phyloukz: 01:58:046 (1,2) - i see this so often. i think it just flows bad...
18:01 Phyloukz: this up and down flow is really awkward and unnecessary imo
18:02 Phyloukz: 01:59:777 (2) - im more a fan of ctrl + g this
18:02 yaleufeu: there's a reason why I made a up and down flow there
18:02 yaleufeu: She elevates her voices one more time
18:02 yaleufeu: on the second slider
18:03 yaleufeu: that explains the up&down thing
18:03 yaleufeu: it's like OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOiiiiiiiiii OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
18:03 yaleufeu: see
18:03 Phyloukz: yea thats a reason though, still personal dislike it in general
18:03 Phyloukz: keep it
18:03 yaleufeu: alright
18:03 Phyloukz: thats it for easy
18:04 yaleufeu: btw about 01:37:277 (1,2,3) - guess I'll keep it like this, plays better in my opinion
18:04 yaleufeu: (on the simple diff)
18:04 Phyloukz: lol ok
18:04 Phyloukz: looks unstructured af but as you want
18:05 Phyloukz: then at least nerf the curve a bit
18:05 Phyloukz: or smth
18:05 Phyloukz: its like something in between, between this triangle and curved flow
18:05 Phyloukz: but as u want
18:05 Phyloukz: ok voiceless
18:05 yaleufeu: alright
18:05 Phyloukz: maybe 4.5 cs? i think easy top maps look more "elegant" with smaller circles (got that suggested too)
18:06 yaleufeu: 4.5CS is too much
18:06 yaleufeu: lol
18:06 yaleufeu: D:
18:07 Phyloukz: nah not really
18:07 Phyloukz: just a suggestion
18:08 Phyloukz: 00:41:897 (1,3,4) - looks really messy all together, theres no real pattern
18:08 Phyloukz: 00:54:013 (4,1) - stack or dont overlap
18:09 Phyloukz: 01:05:263 (5,1) - also an unintended overlap
18:09 Phyloukz: 01:07:859 (4,5,6) - triangle thing
18:10 Phyloukz: 01:11:320 (4,5,6) - ^
18:10 Phyloukz: 01:13:916 (2,4) - stack eventually
18:11 yaleufeu: ye
18:12 yaleufeu: 00:43:051 (3,4) - not applied, she ends her word on the 4 so I changed the direction
18:12 yaleufeu: 00:54:013 (4,1) - applied
18:12 Phyloukz: yea sure but still looks messy
18:12 Phyloukz: and unpatterned
18:12 Phyloukz: you can make same effect with a pattern
18:12 yaleufeu: 01:05:263 (5,1) - fixed
18:13 yaleufeu: 01:07:859 (4,5,6) - done the triangle thing
18:13 yaleufeu: 01:11:320 (4,5,6) - I'll keep it like I did, looks better to me
18:13 Phyloukz: http://puu.sh/tSya1/d61c00bea3.jpg better
18:13 yaleufeu: 01:13:916 (2,4) - fixed
18:13 Phyloukz: for 02:28:340 (5,6,1) -
18:13 Phyloukz: this is an example of strucutred pattern
18:13 yaleufeu: will do
18:13 Phyloukz: so you know what i mean
18:14 Phyloukz: 02:30:359 (3,4,5) - same here
18:14 Phyloukz: rest looks fine to me (except personal preferences)
18:14 Phyloukz: didnt find any rhythm issues
18:15 yaleufeu: Thanks :D
18:15 yaleufeu: Alright
18:15 Phyloukz: oh you sure you dont find a spot for a spinner?
18:16 Phyloukz: 0 spinner is not recommended by guideline
18:16 Phyloukz: only if the song really does not allow it
18:16 yaleufeu: uhm
18:16 yaleufeu: couldn't find one
18:16 yaleufeu: D:
18:17 yaleufeu: nvm
18:17 yaleufeu: found one for the Ez diff
18:17 Phyloukz: thats good
bye gl
hey~
General
- Timing points aren't consistant between difficulty (354 offset in Simple and 359 in Voiceless).
- Inconsistency in the Widescreen Support box (disable it on Simple).
Simple
- 02:25:161 (4,1) - Why that 0.9× DS? Shouldn't be allowed in an Easy diff.
Voiceless
- 01:28:340 - Wrong note here, should be S:C13. Same for 02:11:609 (7) -.
- 02:34:397 (4) - You can NC that to mark the fact that the song ends here. Same for Simple.
Topic Starter
Fixed up everything ! Thank you for modding !Zerss wrote:
hey~
- Timing points aren't consistant between difficulty (354 offset in Simple and 359 in Voiceless).
- Inconsistency in the Widescreen Support box (disable it on Simple).
- 02:25:161 (4,1) - Why that 0.9× DS? Shouldn't be allowed in an Easy diff.
- 01:28:340 - Wrong note here, should be S:C13. Same for 02:11:609 (7) -.
- 02:34:397 (4) - You can NC that to mark the fact that the song ends here. Same for Simple.
Coucou
Simple diff ♥
Voiceless diff ♥
Nice hitsounds btw o/
Simple diff ♥
00:12:469 (4) - Maybe you can curve it ? Better visual
00:15:931 (2) - CTRL+J it, plays better and looks better
00:59:200 - 01:02:661 - Break ?
00:15:931 (2) - CTRL+J it, plays better and looks better
00:59:200 - 01:02:661 - Break ?
Voiceless diff ♥
00:15:354 (3,4) - This pattern looks too straight, maybe you can move the 4 a bit lower ?
01:34:681 (2,4) - Avoid this overlap
01:58:911 (2,4) - Isn't it better stacked ?
01:34:681 (2,4) - Avoid this overlap
01:58:911 (2,4) - Isn't it better stacked ?
Nice hitsounds btw o/
Topic Starter
Fixed everything ! Thanks <3Rioteck wrote:
Coucou
Simple diff ♥00:12:469 (4) - Maybe you can curve it ? Better visual
00:15:931 (2) - CTRL+J it, plays better and looks better
00:59:200 - 01:02:661 - Break ?
Voiceless diff ♥00:15:354 (3,4) - This pattern looks too straight, maybe you can move the 4 a bit lower ?
01:34:681 (2,4) - Avoid this overlap
01:58:911 (2,4) - Isn't it better stacked ?
Nice hitsounds btw o/
shouldn't you put greensleeves in the tags? this is just vocals over that song lol..
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P5ItNxpwChE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P5ItNxpwChE
Topic Starter
True, added !Nao Tomori wrote:
shouldn't you put greensleeves in the tags? this is just vocals over that song lol..
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P5ItNxpwChE
~Hello! Still new to modding. So please excuse me if I make mistakes. ^^
[Simple.]
00:31:796 (1) - I think the hitsound whistle work great here as it gives some dynamic before the pause.
[Voiceless.]
00:33:238 (3) - Same as what I typed for [bold]Simple.[/bold] difficulty.
01:28:046 (3) - Maybe change this slider to circles instead as I think it emphasizes more than just merely a slider.
02:24:873 (5) - Not sure if this slider is supposed to be a blanket, but if it is, I think you should fix it.
Honestly, I don't see many things that need fixing. Hoping to see this rank soon!
Also thanks for sort off introducing me to this movie. Had a great time watching it.
[Simple.]
00:31:796 (1) - I think the hitsound whistle work great here as it gives some dynamic before the pause.
[Voiceless.]
00:33:238 (3) - Same as what I typed for [bold]Simple.[/bold] difficulty.
01:28:046 (3) - Maybe change this slider to circles instead as I think it emphasizes more than just merely a slider.
02:24:873 (5) - Not sure if this slider is supposed to be a blanket, but if it is, I think you should fix it.
Honestly, I don't see many things that need fixing. Hoping to see this rank soon!
Also thanks for sort off introducing me to this movie. Had a great time watching it.
Topic Starter
FiddleBlue wrote:
~Hello! Still new to modding. So please excuse me if I make mistakes. ^^
[Simple.]
00:31:796 (1) - I think the hitsound whistle work great here as it gives some dynamic before the pause. Why not
[Voiceless.]
00:33:238 (3) - Same as what I typed for [bold]Simple.[/bold] difficulty. Why not
01:28:046 (3) - Maybe change this slider to circles instead as I think it emphasizes more than just merely a slider. nah, too much circles
02:24:873 (5) - Not sure if this slider is supposed to be a blanket, but if it is, I think you should fix it. yea
Honestly, I don't see many things that need fixing. Hoping to see this rank soon! There's a mapset ranked already ! You can try it out ^^
Also thanks for sort off introducing me to this movie. Had a great time watching it.
Thanks for modding too !
add soft-sliderslide pls thx
Topic Starter
well ok D:Xinely wrote:
add soft-sliderslide pls thx
Awesome song.
[General]
why do you have "." for your diff names? I think removing them seems to be better
[Timing]
offset currently too late, please use offset 360(-40) for both diffs instead. remember to resnap all notes and inherited points, and reset preview time
[Hitsounding]
01:15:977 - I think you should use S:17 clap here, the sound you're using now is on the following red tick 01:16:265 - , not here. use S:13 clap for 01:16:265 (7) - in Voiceless diff instead
02:37:283 - try moving this inherited point to 02:34:686 - so the spinner won't be that noisy while spinning
[Simple.]
00:31:803 (1) - this spinner is too short for a Easy diff, plz try to remove it and start a 2/1 slider from 00:31:515 - with a circle at 00:33:246 -
call me back
why do you have "." for your diff names? I think removing them seems to be better
[Timing]
offset currently too late, please use offset 360(-40) for both diffs instead. remember to resnap all notes and inherited points, and reset preview time
[Hitsounding]
01:15:977 - I think you should use S:17 clap here, the sound you're using now is on the following red tick 01:16:265 - , not here. use S:13 clap for 01:16:265 (7) - in Voiceless diff instead
02:37:283 - try moving this inherited point to 02:34:686 - so the spinner won't be that noisy while spinning
[Simple.]
00:31:803 (1) - this spinner is too short for a Easy diff, plz try to remove it and start a 2/1 slider from 00:31:515 - with a circle at 00:33:246 -
call me back
Topic Starter
*calls back Zero*Zero__wind wrote:
[General]
why do you have "." for your diff names? I think removing them seems to be better Idk how to explain that, but the dots are showing that it's her last words and that she lost her voice (lyrics & anime related), but if needed, I can remove them
[Timing]
offset currently too late, please use offset 360(-40) for both diffs instead. remember to resnap all notes and inherited points, and reset preview time I think you have the old mp3, redownload the mapset ?
[Hitsounding]
01:15:977 - I think you should use S:17 clap here, the sound you're using now is on the following red tick 01:16:265 - , not here. use S:13 clap for 01:16:265 (7) - in Voiceless diff instead Alright, I've changed the clap right here 01:16:265 - but about right here 01:15:977 - isn't it better to use S:11 or should I just remove the clap hitsound ?
02:37:283 - try moving this inherited point to 02:34:686 - so the spinner won't be that noisy while spinning alright
[Simple.]
00:31:803 (1) - this spinner is too short for a Easy diff, plz try to remove it and start a 2/1 slider from 00:31:515 - with a circle at 00:33:246 - Alright
call me back
you forgot to change the volume of the last spinner in Voiceless. diff
diff names are ok
diff names are ok
Topic Starter
I changed the white combo color due to the new ranking criteriasZero__wind wrote:
you forgot to change the volume of the last spinner in Voiceless. diff mybad, fixed !
diff names are ok alright
reminds me of the lovely movie
hi, popping for a few issues:
soft-sliderslide 19 and 21 are unused, so they should be removed
time signature should be 3/4 instead of 4/4
the map itself is okay, so if you can get zero__wind to rebubble, i'll qualify!
soft-sliderslide 19 and 21 are unused, so they should be removed
time signature should be 3/4 instead of 4/4
the map itself is okay, so if you can get zero__wind to rebubble, i'll qualify!
Topic Starter
Everything is fixed !pishifat wrote:
hi, popping for a few issues:
soft-sliderslide 19 and 21 are unused, so they should be removed
time signature should be 3/4 instead of 4/4
the map itself is okay, so if you can get zero__wind to rebubble, i'll qualify!
oh 3/4 baka me
sorry I overlooked that
Rebubbled as both issues are fixed
sorry I overlooked that
Rebubbled as both issues are fixed
a
Topic Starter
bpishifat wrote:
a
cKyuukai wrote:
bpishifat wrote:
a
eChalwa wrote:
c
just wanted to say that voice on 00:20:551 and 00:48:243 sounds half a tone lower than the keysounds ( C5 instead of C#5 ) to me
Topic Starter
It actually EXACTLY sound like the piano of the song atm lolAyanokoRin wrote:
just wanted to say that voice on 00:20:551 and 00:48:243 sounds half a tone lower than the keysounds ( C5 instead of C#5 ) to me
yay grats 
yeah nevermind I tried putting a C5 keysound and it sounds way worseKyuukai wrote:
It actually EXACTLY sound like the piano of the song atm lolAyanokoRin wrote:
just wanted to say that voice on 00:20:551 and 00:48:243 sounds half a tone lower than the keysounds ( C5 instead of C#5 ) to me
I thought so cause voice does a weird thing here that it doesn't do at 00:06:705 so yeah
gratz
