Hello, sorry for the looong wait.
[General]
Searched online and couldn't find anything, but are there no other tags you want? If the song comes from a specific album, it'd be nice to add that to the tags. However like I said, I couldn't actually find... well... anything on this song by searching, so I don't really know of anything that could be added.
[Cup]
00:03:972 (1) - Considering this sound is stronger than previous ones (You even used a finish hitsound), a higher distance would be nice, try x:320.
00:07:282 (1) - Again, current distance to this feels very low considering the strength of the sound, try something like x:96 instead.
00:10:593 (1) - And with this one too, higher distance would be nicer for more emphasis, and also keeping movement to the right here would feel nice to avoid it feeling too repetitive, try x:496 maybe?
00:17:213 (1) - Distance to this one feels kinda small, and also again, movement feels quite repetitive, try making it go to the right, and move it to x:192.
00:27:144 (1) - Again higher distance please, x:448.
00:30:455 (1) - Higher distance please for more emphasis on the start of the kiai here, x:480 feels great.
00:33:765 (1) - Try moving it to x:128 and doing a shape like this to put extra emphasis on the high pitched and stronger vocal on this slider head.
00:37:075 (1) - More emphasis on start of kiai would be nice, x:32.
00:50:316 (1) - Add more distancing for the strong sound here, try x:224.
01:01:075 (2) - This doesn't really sound like it deserves any extra distancing, and it could also be nice to put to the right to avoid the repetitive feeling at this point, try x:496.
01:03:558 (1) - Could do with some extra emphasis for the change in section, x:224 and then a shape like this works nicely.
01:30:041 (1) - Higher distance would be good for vocal emphasis, try x:128.
01:45:072 (3,1) - Note to spinner distance is unrankable as it is now due to the ranking criteria, it needs to be 1/1 distance between note and spinner, start spinner on the next white tick instead.
[Salad]
00:06:868 (3,1) - Would be nice to add a dash to 1 here for emphasis on the change in section here, maybe try 3 on x:352 and then 1 on x:32.
00:11:213 (2,3) - Kinda difficult for a salad player to get to 2 right now without dashing, yet there was no dash on the previous section so it's best to not have one here either, try x:352 on this part. Also move 00:10:592 (1) - to x:192 to make this movement easier.
00:13:903 (1) - Could have a dash to it for a change in section, maybe try x:304.
00:27:144 (4,1) - Try 4 on x:32 to make a dash to it from the previous note, and then move 1 to x:288 to make the next movement more comfortable.
00:30:455 (1) - Move it to x:496 to make it more obvious that it's a dash.
00:37:075 (1) - Try x:96 to make the dash to it more obvious for a salad player.
00:43:696 (1) - Again, do x:496 to make sure it's obvious to a salad player that they should dash here. (Also move 00:43:075 (5) - to x:272 to make sure).
00:45:351 (1) - Difficult for a movement not intended to be a dash, which this shouldn't be for consistency with earlier and later sections, try x:400 on it.
00:50:110 (3,1) - Try 3 on x:384 for easier movement to it from the previous note, and then 1 on x:176 to add a dash for the change in section.
00:56:937 (1) - Do x:16 to make the intended dash here for the section change more obvious.
01:01:903 (1) - More distance for a higher emphasis on this vocal pitch increase would be nice, do x:272.
01:03:558 (1) - Could try a dash to this for the strong cymbal, try ctrl+H and then x:304 maybe?
01:13:489 (1) - Try x:496 to make sure a salad player knows to dash to this.
01:20:110 (1) - A dash to this would be nice, so try x:384 with a shape like this to keep flow after the slider nice.
01:23:420 (1) - Try x:160 just to make sure this higher pitch vocal is geting the emphasis it deserves.
01:26:730 (1,2) - Move 1 to x:272 to add a dash to it for the strong kiai entrance and section change, and then move 2 to x:352 to keep nice flow afterwards.
01:33:351 (1) - Move it to x:144 to make sure salad players know to dash.
01:39:972 (1) - Maybe do x:352 and have it go to the right instead? I feel like it'd play nicely whilst also adding a dash to this.
01:43:282 (1,2,3) - Move 1 to x:80, as a dash for emphasis on this final slowdown would be nice, and then try 2 at x:400 and 3 at x:48 for a backforth for the emphasis on the ending.
01:45:072 (3,1) - This note-spinner distance also isn't allowed on a salad I'm afraid start the spinner on the next white tick.
[Platter]
00:16:179 (2) - Whilst it's just a minor point, I think it'd be nicer to have a non-dash movement to this, as the sound isn't really strong enough to represent a strong movement here, try x:192.
01:03:144 (6,7,8,1) - Could be nice to add a HDash to 1 here for the strong sound and for consistency, try x:288 on 6, x:320 on 7, and x:288 on 8, and then move 1 to x:16 with this kind of shape.
01:20:730 (3) - Feels a bit easy to overmove it with how the placement is now, maybe increase it to like x:192, to miss this flowbreak?
I actually really like this platter, pretty good!
[Rain]
00:05:627 (1) - Considering there was a much stronger distance to a similar sound earlier, the weak distance to this feels odd. Maybe move it to x:16 instead to make it seem more consistent?
00:09:765 (3) - Again, distancing feels weak considering previous distancing, maybe try x:32 on this one.
00:15:144 (4) - Maybe do x:112 for more of a curved movement?
01:13:903 (2) - Distance to this feels a lot smaller than it should, leaving flow feeling kinda awkward here. Maybe try x:288?
Love how that ending is mapped <3
Alright done! Amazing song
[General]
Searched online and couldn't find anything, but are there no other tags you want? If the song comes from a specific album, it'd be nice to add that to the tags. However like I said, I couldn't actually find... well... anything on this song by searching, so I don't really know of anything that could be added.
[Cup]
00:03:972 (1) - Considering this sound is stronger than previous ones (You even used a finish hitsound), a higher distance would be nice, try x:320.
00:07:282 (1) - Again, current distance to this feels very low considering the strength of the sound, try something like x:96 instead.
00:10:593 (1) - And with this one too, higher distance would be nicer for more emphasis, and also keeping movement to the right here would feel nice to avoid it feeling too repetitive, try x:496 maybe?
00:17:213 (1) - Distance to this one feels kinda small, and also again, movement feels quite repetitive, try making it go to the right, and move it to x:192.
00:27:144 (1) - Again higher distance please, x:448.
00:30:455 (1) - Higher distance please for more emphasis on the start of the kiai here, x:480 feels great.
00:33:765 (1) - Try moving it to x:128 and doing a shape like this to put extra emphasis on the high pitched and stronger vocal on this slider head.
00:37:075 (1) - More emphasis on start of kiai would be nice, x:32.
00:50:316 (1) - Add more distancing for the strong sound here, try x:224.
01:01:075 (2) - This doesn't really sound like it deserves any extra distancing, and it could also be nice to put to the right to avoid the repetitive feeling at this point, try x:496.
01:03:558 (1) - Could do with some extra emphasis for the change in section, x:224 and then a shape like this works nicely.
01:30:041 (1) - Higher distance would be good for vocal emphasis, try x:128.
01:45:072 (3,1) - Note to spinner distance is unrankable as it is now due to the ranking criteria, it needs to be 1/1 distance between note and spinner, start spinner on the next white tick instead.
[Salad]
00:06:868 (3,1) - Would be nice to add a dash to 1 here for emphasis on the change in section here, maybe try 3 on x:352 and then 1 on x:32.
00:11:213 (2,3) - Kinda difficult for a salad player to get to 2 right now without dashing, yet there was no dash on the previous section so it's best to not have one here either, try x:352 on this part. Also move 00:10:592 (1) - to x:192 to make this movement easier.
00:13:903 (1) - Could have a dash to it for a change in section, maybe try x:304.
00:27:144 (4,1) - Try 4 on x:32 to make a dash to it from the previous note, and then move 1 to x:288 to make the next movement more comfortable.
00:30:455 (1) - Move it to x:496 to make it more obvious that it's a dash.
00:37:075 (1) - Try x:96 to make the dash to it more obvious for a salad player.
00:43:696 (1) - Again, do x:496 to make sure it's obvious to a salad player that they should dash here. (Also move 00:43:075 (5) - to x:272 to make sure).
00:45:351 (1) - Difficult for a movement not intended to be a dash, which this shouldn't be for consistency with earlier and later sections, try x:400 on it.
00:50:110 (3,1) - Try 3 on x:384 for easier movement to it from the previous note, and then 1 on x:176 to add a dash for the change in section.
00:56:937 (1) - Do x:16 to make the intended dash here for the section change more obvious.
01:01:903 (1) - More distance for a higher emphasis on this vocal pitch increase would be nice, do x:272.
01:03:558 (1) - Could try a dash to this for the strong cymbal, try ctrl+H and then x:304 maybe?
01:13:489 (1) - Try x:496 to make sure a salad player knows to dash to this.
01:20:110 (1) - A dash to this would be nice, so try x:384 with a shape like this to keep flow after the slider nice.
01:23:420 (1) - Try x:160 just to make sure this higher pitch vocal is geting the emphasis it deserves.
01:26:730 (1,2) - Move 1 to x:272 to add a dash to it for the strong kiai entrance and section change, and then move 2 to x:352 to keep nice flow afterwards.
01:33:351 (1) - Move it to x:144 to make sure salad players know to dash.
01:39:972 (1) - Maybe do x:352 and have it go to the right instead? I feel like it'd play nicely whilst also adding a dash to this.
01:43:282 (1,2,3) - Move 1 to x:80, as a dash for emphasis on this final slowdown would be nice, and then try 2 at x:400 and 3 at x:48 for a backforth for the emphasis on the ending.
01:45:072 (3,1) - This note-spinner distance also isn't allowed on a salad I'm afraid start the spinner on the next white tick.
[Platter]
00:16:179 (2) - Whilst it's just a minor point, I think it'd be nicer to have a non-dash movement to this, as the sound isn't really strong enough to represent a strong movement here, try x:192.
01:03:144 (6,7,8,1) - Could be nice to add a HDash to 1 here for the strong sound and for consistency, try x:288 on 6, x:320 on 7, and x:288 on 8, and then move 1 to x:16 with this kind of shape.
01:20:730 (3) - Feels a bit easy to overmove it with how the placement is now, maybe increase it to like x:192, to miss this flowbreak?
I actually really like this platter, pretty good!
[Rain]
00:05:627 (1) - Considering there was a much stronger distance to a similar sound earlier, the weak distance to this feels odd. Maybe move it to x:16 instead to make it seem more consistent?
00:09:765 (3) - Again, distancing feels weak considering previous distancing, maybe try x:32 on this one.
00:15:144 (4) - Maybe do x:112 for more of a curved movement?
01:13:903 (2) - Distance to this feels a lot smaller than it should, leaving flow feeling kinda awkward here. Maybe try x:288?
Love how that ending is mapped <3
Alright done! Amazing song