DustMoon wrote:

Hi~
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Japaripa!

00:06:622 (6622|0,6622|1) - 你看，这跟后面的音不太协调啊。00:06:798 (6798|0,6798|3,6887|2,6887|1,6975|0,6975|3) -
00:09:887 - ……
00:14:740 (14740|0) - 移到3
00:23:651 (23651|1) - 移到3https://puu.sh/uGOxI/bcb9181f33.jpg感觉这样更好
00:25:504 (25504|3,25504|2,25681|0,25857|3,25857|2,26034|0,26210|3,26210|1,26387|2,26387|0,26563|3,26563|1,26740|2,26740|0,26916|1,26916|3) - 不明所以
00:33:092 (33092|0,33092|1,33269|2,33269|1,33445|2) - 感觉有问题
00:38:563 (38563|0) - 结束点应放在00:38:916 - https://puu.sh/uGOGt/6216d0bb01.jpg这样，这三个滑条就更统一
00:39:225 (39225|2) - ^
00:43:857 (43857|2,43857|3,44034|1,44210|0) - ……不太好01:09:975 (69975|1,69975|0,70151|2,70328|3) -
00:50:563 (50563|0,50740|3) - 我就只听到了wu no 这个音
01:02:034 (62034|3) - ^
01:29:740 (89740|0) - 可以改成LN到01:30:092 (90092|2) -

Tofu1222's Serval

00:10:151 (10151|3) - 移到3 https://puu.sh/uGPxz/2d118e416c.jpg 与后面的相照应，并且你这一段也使用了上述排列00:12:798 (12798|3,12798|0,12975|2,13063|1,13151|3,13151|0,13328|1,13416|2,13504|0,13504|3) -
00:18:975 (18975|0) - 同上
00:23:916 (23916|1,24092|3) - Ctrl+j
00:25:504 (25504|3,25681|3,25857|3,26034|3,26210|3) - ……^
00:38:563 (38563|0) - 结束点应放在00:38:916 - https://puu.sh/uGOGt/6216d0bb01.jpg这样，这三个滑条就更统一
00:43:151 (43151|3) - 移到3，效果https://puu.sh/uGPPN/7a39649e5e.jpg
00:48:092 (48092|3) - 移到3，效果https://puu.sh/uGPSQ/ec53dd54f7.jpg
00:53:916 (53916|1,54092|2,54269|1,54269|0,54269|3,54445|2,54622|0,54622|1) ^https://puu.sh/uGPVa/69c7caf44e.jpg
01:00:798 - more
01:29:740 (89740|3,89740|0) - LN的结尾好像有些问题

Good luck!

DustMoon wrote:

Hi~
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Japaripa!

00:06:622 (6622|0,6622|1) - 你看，这跟后面的音不太协调啊。 这不挺好么、我保留

(6798|0,6798|3,6887|2,6887|1,6975|0,6975|3) -
00:09:887 - ……
00:14:740 (14740|0) - 移到3 好的
00:23:651 (23651|1) - 移到3https://puu.sh/uGOxI/bcb9181f33.jpg感觉这样更好 ^
00:25:504 (25504|3,25504|2,25681|0,25857|3,25857|2,26034|0,26210|3,26210|1,26387|2,26387|0,26563|3,26563|1,26740|2,26740|0,26916|1,26916|3) - 不明所以
00:33:092 (33092|0,33092|1,33269|2,33269|1,33445|2) - 感觉有问题
00:38:563 (38563|0) - 结束点应放在00:38:916 - https://puu.sh/uGOGt/6216d0bb01.jpg这样，这三个滑条就更统一 不
00:39:225 (39225|2) - ^
00:43:857 (43857|2,43857|3,44034|1,44210|0) - ……不太好01:09:975 (69975|1,69975|0,70151|2,70328|3) -
00:50:563 (50563|0,50740|3) - 我就只听到了wu no 这个音 好的，我把短滑条删了
01:02:034 (62034|3) - ^
01:29:740 (89740|0) - 可以改成LN到01:30:092 (90092|2) - 不

多谢摸图大佬

_Stan wrote:

coming~ |1|2|3|4|

Easy

1. 00:23:740 (23740|2) - wrong position? maybe here 00:23:740 (23740|2) - 好的
2. 00:37:857 - LN stop at here might more reasonable and easier for beginner ^
3. 00:46:857 (46857|1,47034|0,47210|3) - is not same 00:47:563 (47563|1,47740|2,47916|0) - so why 00:41:210 - to 00:42:269 - they are same? It's similar part of music
4. 01:20:916 - I think it's ok that there have two notes

Normal

1. 00:17:916 - you should add a note, this note can not be ignore. Catch them all or ignore them 上一个modder说去掉的……不过我信你
2. 00:23:387 - add a note at col [4] accroding to 00:21:975 - and 00:22:504 - they are heavy tone, if you do, then you should 00:23:651 (23651|3,23916|0) - make these Ctrl+H to avoid double-hit
3. 00:39:225 (39225|3) - emmm, idk it's good or not for NM player to hit a 1/8 LN 改成了单note
4. 01:00:798 (60798|1) - move to col [3] for pattern balence

Japaripa!

1. 00:11:122 - miss a note? Check your Serval diff at same position
2. 01:03:357 - ^ 好的、都改了

That's all, great map set. GOOD LUCK

dkingo wrote:

哈喽，M4M。

Japaripa!

1. hmm...这个难度可以考虑把HPOD调到8以上
   不了、我觉得8/8就很好
2. 00:14:034 (14034|0,14034|1,14122|2,14122|3) - 这两个声音和前一个note没区别，用一个note就好了 不
3. 00:21:798 - 加一个note 好的
4. 00:22:151 - ^ ^
5. 00:23:034 (23034|0,23034|1) - 镲声比较轻，一个note够了 不
6. 00:24:975 (24975|1,24975|0) - 删掉一个note，鼓声还没开始 这段我觉得这样摆很好、但其实我也不知道跟的是什么，人声吗？
7. 00:32:563 - 这里听不到什么声音，为嘛放两个note 删了
8. 00:33:445 (33445|2) - Ghost note? 不
9. 00:35:563 (35563|1) - ^ 这个删了
10. 00:36:445 - 可以对着鼓加一个note 好
11. 00:45:092 - 钢琴声一个note就够了吧 不
12. 00:46:857 - 00:47:210 - 不考虑在这段做鼓声吗？ ^
13. 00:49:681 - 加一个note，这声和00:49:857 - 这段差不多 好
14. 00:50:651 - 加一个note ^
15. 00:53:210 - ^
16. 00:54:269 - ^
17. 01:17:916 - 把一个note往上移一格 不

摸这个难度时我整个人都是，人声和乐器一起做感觉有点乱所以我就没碰。

祝好运吧，作图真心累。。。

- Ly0572 - wrote:

hi neko x tofu~
m4m from neko's queue
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feel free to reject this is just my pov

here we go :3

easy

00:08:563 (8563|0,8916|2,9269|1,9622|3,9975|0) - ctrl+h cuz it feels heavy on the left hand 00:07:857 (7857|0,8210|1,8563|0) -

00:10:681 (10681|3,11034|1) - better if u switch
00:16:328 (16328|2,16857|3) - move to |2| and |3|

00:22:857 - how about u try this

feels more balance imo

00:37:857 (37857|2) - change to LN up to the next note

All accepted!

normal

00:39:269 -
theres somehing wrong in this part~ check aimod

00:43:857 (43857|3,44034|2,44210|1,44387|0) - i believe this kind of pattern is too much to normal~ i dont hate it but i suggest to change it to normal notes like


No, I keep it

00:44:740 - if u agree^


01:14:916 -


01:26:210 - can be the mirror of 01:14:916 -

japaripa

00:04:328 (4328|0,4328|3,4857|0,4857|3,5563|3,5563|0) - i think its fine to be 3 notes like 00:06:269 (6269|2,6269|3,6269|0) -

00:25:504 - add

00:46:945 - missing note :3 its worthy to map that sound as well imo No

00:47:034 - delete one note then add another here 00:47:122 - if u accept ^

gl both ^^/

OMGitsRaMayu wrote:

Hii !
i'm From your Queue
this your M4M

I just do Short Mod

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Japaripa!

I see this map much not at vocal and make it bad i thought
1. 00:01:328 (1328|0,1681|3,2210|0,2563|1,3092|2) add long note >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7594494 I don't like it
2. 00:05:210 (5210|1,5387|2) << thats Vocal ? better if you remove it
3. 00:15:798 (15798|2,15975|3,16151|0) ^
4. 00:16:592 (16592|2) no sound here ?? remove
5. 00:21:004 (21004|2,21004|3,21181|2,21181|3) remove ? its ghosting >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7594187 beter ?
ok
6. 00:21:445 (21445|2) remove ?
7. 00:58:681 (58681|1) add note to 2
8. 01:01:151 (61151|1) move to 1
9. 01:01:328 (61328|1) add note to 2
10. 01:30:092 (90092|1) add note to 2 for symbal :>

Don't forget Mod my map TRUE - Soundscape

KEEP LOVE ILLYASVIEL VON EINZBERN

-BlueFire- wrote:

Hello m4m from your queue uwu
Take note, everything I suggest will be based on my personal preferences so if you don't like the suggestions you don't need to apply/give kds.
Anyway, here's the short mod (I can only mod easy and normal since I'm not experienced with 4k mapping)

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Easy

00:05:210 (5210|1,5387|0,5563|2) - move to the right
00:06:269 (6269|3) - move to 1 so it will mirror the pattern ^
00:11:740 (11740|3) - move to 2
00:15:622 (15622|3) - move to 3 for better "feel" since you previously used ln in 4th column
00:30:622 - you forgot a note here
00:53:210 (53210|0,53387|1) - ctrl+j
01:02:210 (62210|0) - move to 2
01:07:504 (67504|3,67857|1) - ctrl+j
01:20:916 - add note for consistency
01:28:504 (88504|3) - delete? i don't hear a sound there

All accepted!

Normal

00:05:387 (5387|0,5563|1) - ctrl+j for better flow
00:17:828 - there should technically be a note there though its only a personal preference no, i keep it
00:35:740 - why not delete a note here and add 2 notes in 00:35:916 - since the sound is stronger
00:37:504 - add note for drum/piano sound
00:25:063 - add note here and 00:25:240 - so it will be consistent with 00:24:445 (24445|0,24534|1,24622|3,24710|2,24798|1) -
00:43:857 (43857|3,44034|2,44210|1,44387|0) - move the ends to the next 2(1/4)lines so it wont be awkward to release No
00:47:563 - 00:48:092 - make it into single note stream?
01:18:092 - add note for consistency no
01:23:740 - ^ ^
01:27:975 (87975|3) - better turn it into an ln

Tofu1222 wrote:

Japaripa：

00:17:828 - miss notes No

00:24:357 (24357|2) - no need for this one i think ok

00:33:445 (33445|2) - ^ ^

00:33:798 - better to add one no

00:50:651 - 00:50:740 - maybe u can revise here since these two time has two notes

01:01:328 - add one

01:26:651 - miss note

01:27:181 - ^

01:28:504 - no need

01:29:563 - u can choose to add or not. If u want to emphasize voice here then don't catch it

一点小摸：3 有什么问题请指出

SwitchAxe wrote:

m4m from my delicious mania queue

normal

* 00:43:857 (43857|3,44034|2,44210|1,44387|0) - i'd like to begin with this pattern, i find this way too hard for a play on this skill level. on top of this there are theese notes 00:44:563 (44563|3,44740|2) - making it way too hard. if you apply go ahead with ln pattern.
note: when looking at 00:14:740 (14740|1,14916|3,14916|2,15269|0) - i find this one again a bit too hard ln pattern , but i won't ask you to take it out since its fitting and justified for being an increasing intro (and its nice to see people trying to make different stuff for easier diffs and not making them just to fill spread)

i keep

* 00:25:504 (25504|0,25504|1,25857|2,25857|3) - this snaping may confuse a normal skill player, why dont you go for some 1/1 chained ln? i don't want to kill the idea you had while choosing to set a gap between lns but also think its the only place where you used this snaping making it kinda inconsistent

ok

* 01:14:916 (74916|3,74916|1,75092|0,75269|2,75445|1) - too hard ln pattern for normal , theese ln lift / hold challenge is way too much for this skill level

no

* 01:16:328 (76328|2,76328|1,76504|2,76681|1,76681|0,76857|0,77034|3,77034|2,77210|3,77387|2,77387|1,77563|1,77740|3,77740|0,78004|3,78092|1,78269|1,78445|0,78445|3,78622|0,78798|1,78798|2,78975|2) - here i like the pattern but then this section 01:19:151 (79151|1,79151|0,79328|1,79504|3,79504|0,79681|3,79857|1,79857|2,80034|2,80210|0,80210|1,80387|1) - gets the same (refering to notes repeating only not full pattern) try to differentiate that vocal-oriented section
if you dont apply then take a look at 01:18:092 (78092|1,78269|1) - and see if you change to a non jack pattern since there is no vocal ( lala lala) guiding to a repeated column pattern

I want to use jack to express this effect, in fact it makes me very satisfied

* 01:24:798 (84798|0,84798|2,84975|2,85151|1,85151|3,85328|3,85504|2,85504|0,85681|0,85857|1,85857|2,86034|1) - here the same as previous one, no jack mood in the section and will help varying the pattern this is too jack heavy

Good, I have changed it

* 01:29:387 - note missing here . if you add it will make an unconfortable jack so figure out a way to solve this if apply, changing pattern to something like this https://puu.sh/v45Hf.png or https://puu.sh/v45IV.png is a way.

^

* i wouldn't say that you cant have five notes streams, but be careful with this one 00:47:563 (47563|3,47651|2,47740|0,47828|1,47916|3) - take in count that if you use a more than 3 notes 1/4 it should be at the highest density section of the normal diff at least, wich isn't the case imo.

keep

* 01:00:798 (60798|3,61504|0) - ctrlh h for pitch relevancy

ok

easy

* you used jumps only at the kiai, i will recomend you to fill some strong beats that would justify double noting for an easy diff
other reason for this is that the kiai becomes kinda spiky if you dont balance this
1) 00:16:328 (16328|1,16857|2) - √
2) 00:30:975 (30975|3,31328|2,31681|0,32034|1) - not all of them of course, but starting and ending beats can be jump, or well you should choose wich √
3) 00:48:092 (48092|3,48445|2,48798|0,49151|1) - same as second spot
4) 01:29:740 - ending maiiiibe justifies to have lift and two notes on easy? not sure on this one at all

* 00:24:445 - why no ln to match the following two lns 00:24:798 (24798|1,25151|3) - ? its either a 3/1 ln or three 1/1 lns
it sounds like a long sound starting there

Here, I follow the laughter

* 00:42:445 (42445|2,42798|1,43151|3,43504|0) - here too, starting beat can be double
* if this 00:55:857 (55857|3) - is for vocal it should end at 00:56:210 - √
* sudden diff rise at 00:57:269 (57269|1,57445|0,57622|2,57798|1,57975|3,58151|1,58328|2) - when music dosen't justify it
* 00:26:210 (26210|3,26563|0,26916|1) - this is too hard for an easy considering double lift and note isn't justified by any difficulty rise on music, wouldn't mention this if it really fit the music on a really hard section of the chart. this pattern also happens only once in the diff thats makes it kinda inconsistent since there are some other similar sections with other ln pattern this is too hard for an easy considering double lift and note isn't justified by any difficulty rise on music, wouldn't mention this if it really fit the music on a really hard section of the chart. this pattern also happens only once in the diff thats makes it kinda inconsistent since there are some other similar sections with other ln pattern
* 01:03:622 (63622|2,63975|0,64328|3,64681|1) - this pattern was used for way different sounds (00:43:857 (43857|2,44210|0,44563|3,44916|1) - ) i'd change it to differentiate

liked doing this mod, hope it helps and good luck
normal was nicest to play

DoNotMess wrote:

m4m queue!!

JAPARIPA
00:07:151 - maybe 3 notes because this is crash ok
00:16:592 (16592|2,16857|0) - if these are ln 00:16:328 (16328|3) - maybe this should be too ^
00:20:916 - 3 ntoes because it's louder than the rest no
00:22:328 - add 3 for synth nice catch
00:24:269 - add 2 for guitar no
00:29:563 (29563|2) - 2 for kick good
00:33:445 (33445|2) - ghost note ^
00:46:945 - 00:47:122 - maybe add something here for the percussion roll xxxxx
00:50:740 (50740|2) - what is this ln for i remove it
00:52:945 (52945|2) - i would prefer jack but up to u no
01:10:681 (70681|1,70769|2) - ctrl h this would be nice for the flow o
01:19:328 (79328|0,79328|2) - 1 note is enough because no kick reject
01:24:975 (84975|1,84975|0) - ^ ^

normal
00:22:240 (22240|1) - the kick supposed to be 00:22:151 - here
00:24:975 (24975|3,25063|2,25151|0,25240|1,25328|2) - maybe this one should be nerfed because the piano is kinda inaudible and it's too hard for normal player
01:14:916 - really tricky for nm player...maybe un stack the ln would do
01:19:328 (79328|1) - maybe no need because no kick ^
01:24:975 (84975|3) - ^ ^

thats all, hope it is helpful!! goodluck!

Well, that's all I can suggest. . . nothing to see here, hope it helps. Goodluck & thank you for choosing M4M

JooF12 wrote:

Hii hii. . . from

Say HI Mania Modding Queue M4M Contract

|1| |2] |3| |4|
So here's my mod:

JAPARIPA

00:10:504 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7718009 1st suggestion, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/77180133 2nd suggestion
00:12:445 (12445|1,12534|2) - ctrl + h
00:12:798 - since you add F here, shouldnt this triple?
00:29:563 - should double
00:33:798 - add note NO
00:38:210 - observe this part, I hear a double sound in this section. . I think it would be 00:38:254 - consider add note x
00:39:622 - triple?
00:42:092 (42092|2,42092|3,42181|0,42181|1,42269|2,42269|3) - using [13][24] jumpthrills here would be good
00:43:416 - hithat here, add note? (if you consider mapping them, do also the same in the others) x
00:47:916 - I believe theres no sound here, remove those x
00:49:857 (49857|2,49857|3,49945|1,49945|0,50034|2,50034|3) - same as 00:42:092 (42092|2,42092|3,42181|0,42181|1,42269|2,42269|3) - x
00:51:092 - add note?
00:57:092 - 00:58:504 - why double?
01:05:387 - to 01:09:269 - dunno if its just me but this kind of stream kinda like uh whut to me coz there are some parts that already formed thrills like 01:06:534 (66534|1,66622|0,66710|1,66798|0,66887|1) - & 01:08:740 (68740|2,68828|3,68916|2,69004|3,69092|2) - . well if its not intentional, x
01:29:563 - add note

Well, that's all I can suggest. . . nothing to see here, hope it helps. Goodluck & thank you for choosing M4M

M4M Contract END

Well, that's all I can suggest. . . nothing to see here, hope it helps. Goodluck & thank you for choosing M4M

1. Tofu1222's Serval is not the hardest difficulty, therefore a unique naming is not allowed. Please change it into Hard

1. Following parts need additional note for the cymbal sound; feel free to reject any of these:
   
   1. 00:07:308 -
   2. 00:08:720 -
   3. 00:11:544 -
   4. 00:17:191 -
   5. 00:18:602 -
   6. 00:18:955 -
   7. 00:21:249 -
   8. 00:22:838 -
   9. 00:24:249 -
   10. 00:24:602 -
   11. 00:24:955 -
   12. 00:25:661 -
   13. 00:31:132 -
   14. 00:32:720 -
   15. 00:34:132 -
   16. 00:49:661 -
   17. 00:51:073 -
   18. 00:52:485 -
   19. 00:55:308 -
   20. 01:00:955 - Re-arranging would help: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7767176
2. 00:09:073 (9073|0,9117|1,9161|2) - These are at 1/6
3. 00:27:955 - Snare sound, so add one more note
4. 00:36:073 - Add a note? There's a bass sound
5. 00:45:691 - Drum roll here, how about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7767171
6. 01:03:779 - Not sure of this pattern, since the song does not contain such sounds, and would be considered as ghosts (like these: 01:03:867 (63867|0,64044|2,64220|2,64397|3) - ). Ask a BN about this

1. 00:20:985 (20985|1) - Not a correct pattern. Delete this and add notes at 00:20:897 - / 00:21:073 -
2. 00:24:955 (24955|3) - Move to col 1
3. 00:25:132 - Add a note at 2? Bass sound
4. 00:36:955 - The sound is not large enough for triple. Delete one
5. 00:41:191 - 00:44:014 - 00:46:838 - 00:55:308 - 00:58:132 - Add notes for cymbal
6. 01:00:073 - Add note for the guitar sound

Lude wrote:

Lude's Requested Modding
1 / 2 / 3 / 4

[General]

1. Tofu1222's Serval is not the hardest difficulty, therefore a unique naming is not allowed. Please change it into Hard
   
   
   
   keep

[JAPARIPA!]

1. Following parts need additional note for the cymbal sound; feel free to reject any of these:
   
   1. 00:07:308 -
   2. 00:08:720 -
   3. 00:11:544 -
   4. 00:17:191 -
   5. 00:18:602 -
   6. 00:18:955 -
   7. 00:21:249 -
   8. 00:22:838 -
   9. 00:24:249 -
   10. 00:24:602 -
   11. 00:24:955 -
   12. 00:25:661 -
   13. 00:31:132 -
   14. 00:32:720 -
   15. 00:34:132 -
   16. 00:49:661 -
   17. 00:51:073 -
   18. 00:52:485 -
   19. 00:55:308 -
       
       All accept
       
   20. 01:00:955 - Re-arranging would help: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7767176
2. 00:09:073 (9073|0,9117|1,9161|2) - These are at 1/6
3. 00:27:955 - Snare sound, so add one more note No, Their volume is different
4. 00:36:073 - Add a note? There's a bass sound ^
5. 00:45:691 - Drum roll here, how about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7767171
6. 01:03:779 - Not sure of this pattern, since the song does not contain such sounds, and would be considered as ghosts (like these: 01:03:867 (63867|0,64044|2,64220|2,64397|3) - ). Ask a BN about this
   
   
   keep

~_~

Lude wrote:

Lude's Requested Modding
1 / 2 / 3 / 4

[Tofu1222's Serval]

1. 00:20:985 (20985|1) - Not a correct pattern. Delete this and add notes at 00:20:897 - / 00:21:073 - I catch singer's vioce here, so i keep
2. 00:24:955 (24955|3) - Move to col 1 ok
3. 00:25:132 - Add a note at 2? Bass sound not so clear, i keep
4. 00:36:955 - The sound is not large enough for triple. Delete one ok
5. 00:41:191 - 00:44:014 - 00:46:838 - 00:55:308 - 00:58:132 - Add notes for cymbal ok
6. 01:00:073 - Add note for the guitar sound ok

~_~

1164530434 wrote:

ExNeko wrote:

Updated!

last hitsound version(maybe抓音辛苦了Mapper

and tofu's gd update

快看！是作图很厉害脸上满是麻子的friends哦！
你好,ExNeko^^
我是玩家1164530434，这是我第一次mod国人的图，不足之处还请多多指教哦
Poor Arrangement

SPOILER

Tofu2222‘s Serval

01:10:328 Strange here try move 1→2 or http://puu.sh/vbgZl/249a153cfe.jpg I dont think here matters really, try to give me reason so i can change it, now i will keep

Nice map and cute song by nanahira I like it
Thanks for making this mapset! Take your star~

1164530434 wrote:

ExNeko wrote:

Updated!

last hitsound version(maybe抓音辛苦了Mapper

and tofu's gd update

快看！是作图很厉害脸上满是麻子的friends哦！
你好,ExNeko^^
我是玩家1164530434，这是我第一次mod国人的图，不足之处还请多多指教哦
Here random HS mod

SPOILER

00:05:014 Add F J/N/E/S

00:10:838 W Easy

00:11:544 Del one W here Normal

00:27:073 Add W J/N/E/S

00:37:308 Wrong stuff Del 69-80-81 three HS J/N/S

00:51:955 W Easy

00:54:602 Add W J/N/E/S

00:56:544 W Easy

00:57:955 W Easy

00:58:132 Add F Normal/Easy

01:20:367 Add F will better J/N/E/S

01:27:073 Add F will better J/N/E/S

01:27:602 Change C to F Serval

01:28:485 Add F J/N/E/S

all accept

Poor Arrangement

SPOILER

JAPARIPA

00:14:740 Hmm...finger cut? Not feeling well try http://puu.sh/vbfbc/4883507688.jpg

不改

I found that you have add Pianosound in diff "JAPARIPA!"previous version.There is some wrong melody catch.But now It's gone
So I return back to the version which have PS and pick it up.辛辛苦苦抓的音就这样浪费真的好吗？
This time I have a idea.Why not make a HS Storyboard for only pianosounds to all the diff.Instead of just only one diff ?
If you have this intention,Plz read this

Storyboard for PS

SPOILER

I think the stuff would better let you know

-Fixing the melody in some wrong way basis on the mapper catching
-Change the piano Keysounds and adding something extra
-Beatmap Timing Version 2017/4/8

DL link:http://puu.sh/vdA8I/1ed219bf1d.zip

You can use this tool for more convenient
p/5392330

If you have question which incomprehension and confused about this Plz PM me.

把OP的video放上来？（好像曲风画风又不太一样233）

Nice map and cute song by nanahira I like it
Thanks for making this mapset! Take your star~

Litharrale wrote:

NM from my queue
1|2|3|4
Your BG sux

here's a better one

thank you!

click for better BG

Your audio also really sux too, enough that I think it's unrankable but luckily for you, I'm not the UBKRC

Toggle OFF widescreen support done

japaripa

00:05:897 (5897|2,6073|2,6249|3,6426|3,6602|0,6779|0,6955|1,7132|1) - I like what you've done here, why'd you stop it though when the LNs came even though the lyrics kept going in the same pattern? i removed lns
00:08:897 (8897|1,8897|0,8985|2) - Ghost notes no
00:09:073 (9073|0,9073|3) - This stream pattern actually starts 1/4 of a beat earlier ^
00:10:397 (10397|1) - What's this meant to be mapping? the "hoot" lyric? really out of place considering all previous blue ticks have a strong guitar sound to go with them ^
00:11:191 (11191|3,11191|2,11279|1,11279|0,11367|3,11367|2,11455|0,11455|1,11544|3,11544|2) - Consider remapping to give the last crash more emphasis
00:12:161 (12161|3) - Hard to tell if this is a ghost note or not because the audio quality is so low, I think there's something there? Still feels just like dump mapping though
00:13:220 (13220|2) - Why is this here? whatever you answer is, use it to explain why there's nothing here 00:13:397
00:15:955 (15955|2,16132|1) - same pitch, different column? good
00:23:720 (23720|0,23720|1) - This shouldn't be a double, there's no bass here ^
00:37:308 (37308|1,37661|0,37661|1,37970|2,38014|3) - missed opportunity here with the lyrics
00:39:073 (39073|1) - 100% ghost note
00:38:367 (38367|2) - why is there no kiai here? speaking of kiai, what's going on with it in this map? Well, where use the kiai is decided by me, isn't it? I think this is not the question you should be concerned about
01:04:926 (64926|2) - This whole section is an overmapped mess

This map is super rough but has potential if you put a lot of work into it, good luck!

1. 00:05:014 (5014|0) - to 4
   
2. 00:05:367 (5367|1) - https://puu.sh/vrsgr/284573ff86.png
   
3. 00:12:955 (12955|3,13661|0,14367|3,14367|2,15073|0,15073|1,15602|3,15602|2) - ctrl+h
   
4. 00:23:191 (23191|2,23544|1,23897|3,24249|0) - 2|4|1|3
   
5. 00:29:720 (29720|3,30426|3) - barely nothing to emphasize so i dont think this are worth to be doubled
   
6. 00:41:897 (41897|0) - 00:47:544 (47544|0) - no emphasize here too
   
7. 00:49:661 (49661|3) - could be doubled for crash emphasize
   
8. 00:50:191 - 00:50:544 - 00:50:720 - too loud to be ignored. add a note and probably a W?
   
9. 00:54:955 - would probably add a note for a better approach towards the next note
   
10. 01:00:955 (60955|1) - would probably double here for crash too
    
11. 01:02:367 (62367|2,62720|0) - 01:03:073 (63073|3,63426|1) - merge each of them as one LN. more convenience for newbies
    
12. 01:03:779 (63779|3) - double for crash
    
13. 01:15:073 (75073|1) - ^
    
14. 01:25:661 (85661|3,86014|1) - 2|4

1. 00:24:249 (24249|0,24602|2) - would probably change those to normal double notes. each LN transition are probably too tricky for this tier
   
2. 00:24:955 (24955|1) - https://puu.sh/vrthO/f4a6ccad67.png something like this are more simple to follow
   
3. 00:58:661 - there's should be another here. the scheme you were trying to map are following the drum bass kick so ignoring this are quite awkward in flow
   
4. 01:22:838 (82838|2,83014|2,83191|3,83367|3) - might probably rearrange this. jacking 2 times in a row at the same hand are probably too tricky to execute for newbies
   
5. 01:27:249 (87249|1) - no vocal here
   
6. 01:28:132 (88132|2,88308|1,88485|2) - 4|3|2 for hand balance

1. 00:11:279 (11279|2,11367|3) - ctrl+g. hand balance issues
   
2. 00:18:073 - suggestion for variation https://puu.sh/vrurQ/1e384e89a9.png
   
3. 00:24:161 (24161|2) - doesnt seem to be a part of the stream noise you were following. probably delete
   
4. 00:36:955 (36955|0) - delete. as the impact arent big enough for triple
   
5. 00:45:691 - add note at 4 for drumroll
   
6. 01:06:426 (66426|3,66602|3) - there's nothing in particular that fit to these jacking so move one of them somewhere
   
7. 01:09:073 (69073|0,69249|0,69426|0,69602|0,69779|1,69955|1) - why
   
8. 01:12:249 - prettier pattern suggestion here
   https://puu.sh/vrwP2/e9476f2e5e.jpg
   
9. 01:13:308 (73308|3,73485|3,73661|3) - asadfadhasjda aaaaaaa there's nothing in particular :''''uu
   
10. 01:15:426 (75426|3,75602|3,75779|3) - serval gonna kick you for this :>>
    
11. 01:16:485 (76485|3,76661|3,76838|3) - she's gonna hit you twice
    additionaly, this - 01:16:661 (76661|3) - could be deleted as they are the part of this kick-kick-snare with 1/4 distance each. think about the playability
    
12. 01:22:132 (82132|0,82308|0,82485|0) - REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
    
13. 01:28:132 (88132|3) - why are you even need triples for a normal snare?

1. 00:08:720 (8720|1,8720|3,8720|0) - I believe some of those notes involved on 1/4 stream are not even represent the sound in the song itself (read: ghost notes)ex: - 00:08:985 (8985|1,9161|0) - 00:09:514 (9514|2) - etc. there's no guitar nor cuckoo sound you were actually trying to map here so.....
   
2. 00:24:161 (24161|0) - ghost here
   
3. 00:25:132 (25132|2) - normal note? its different from the LNs you were trying to map here - 00:24:249 (24249|3,24602|0,24955|1) -
   
4. 00:30:426 (30426|1) - should be a short LN. the instrument is being prominent here so would be the best to map it instead the vocal
   
5. 00:34:661 (34661|1) - should be an LN around here idk. since the other LN follow vocal
   
6. 00:37:308 (37308|1) - col3. high pitch
   
7. 01:00:955 (60955|3,60955|0,60955|2) - 1/4 thingy as i pointed first
   
8. 01:03:779 (63779|3,63779|2) - oh noes
   really i dont think they're prominent to have a full stream here. try to hear this part carefully
   
9. 01:27:249 (87249|3) - delete. better to focus vocal here
   
10. 01:28:838 (88838|2) - whats with the extra note here?

Tamoiru wrote:

活捉小姐姐

1|2|3|4

Tofu's Hard

00:17:191 (17191|1) - double
00:19:308 (19308|1,19308|0,19485|1,19485|0,19661|2,19661|3,19838|2,19838|3) - 不合适吧，建议remap
00:30:779 (30779|0) - 移到col2吧
00:37:308 (37308|0,37661|1) - 我是觉得：要么就用note、要么就一样长？我觉得这样用LN玩起来更舒服
00:45:867 (45867|1) - 删掉
00:46:573 (46573|3) - 这里加个note
00:48:249 (48249|0,48779|0,48955|0) - 这样有点不合适、分开它们
00:58:485 (58485|1,58485|3,58661|3,58661|1,58838|0,58838|2,59014|0,59014|2,59191|1,59191|3,59367|1,59367|3) - remap 这儿的sound还是这种pattern毕竟搭配一点
01:00:955 (60955|0) - double
01:03:779 (63779|0) - ^