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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 星期二 2017年7月4日 at 11:04:47

Artist: Nanahira
Title: Youkoso JAPARI PARK e
Source: けものフレンズ
Tags: kemono friends opening はちぷよ hachipuyo すみじゅん sumijun Nico Nico Douga Tofu1222
BPM: 170
Filesize: 11338kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy - 4Key (1.36 stars, 294 notes)
  2. JAPARIPA! - 4Key (3.8 stars, 1038 notes)
  3. Normal - 4Key (2.14 stars, 547 notes)
  4. Tofu's Hard - 4Key (2.75 stars, 740 notes)


Download: Nanahira - Youkoso JAPARI PARK e
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Thanks
Special thanks:
1164530434 Check and Fix The Piano hitsound 重组了破碎的梦想
Guest Diff by Tofu1222
Nominator friends:
Rivals_7 / Yahao
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Can i GD for Easy diff?
posted

Ridho 2307 wrote:

Can i GD for Easy diff?

thank you. But I have finished it. Maybe next time :o
posted
ay exneko n tofu o//
Full Mod
[General]

Uncheck widescreen support

od hp
ez 7 6 | nm 7 7 | hd 8 7 | mx 8 8

[Easy]

00:37:328 (37328|2,37681|1,38034|2) - i suggest to remove this n make LN 00:37:504 (37504|0) - till 00:37:857 -

[Normal]

i think ur normal little bit hard, i wanna help to nerf it

00:06:887 (6887|2) - remove it, not much loud

00:07:151 - if u use double here, u have to 00:07:857 - 00:08:563 - double this too

00:12:534 - maybe add LN to cover roll sound

00:13:857 - same ^

00:17:916 (17916|3) - remove no sound n 00:18:004 (18004|2,18092|1) - move to right side

00:18:445 - double for cymbal

00:21:975 (21975|3,22504|2) - double too, consistency with 00:21:269 -

00:22:857 (22857|1,22945|2,23034|3) - change to one LN n 00:23:210 (23210|0,23298|1) - this too

00:26:210 (26210|1,26387|3) - change to 1 LN too n make it double note, same as 00:25:857 -

00:29:210 (29210|1) - remove n re arrange some note

00:30:622 - add note here, same 00:30:798 -

00:32:210 - add note col 3

00:32:387 - add note col 2

00:37:504 (37504|2) - remove

00:39:269 (39269|3) - remove, it make harder to hit for beginner player

00:42:181 (42181|1) - remove

00:43:857 - okay :'v i gave up for this pattern

00:47:563 (47563|2) - remove

00:52:151 - add note

01:02:034 (62034|1) - move to 01:01:857 -

01:17:916 (77916|3) - remove not loud much

01:23:563 (83563|2) - same ^

[Tofu Serval]

00:25:504 (25504|3,25681|3,25857|3,26034|3,26210|3) - oh man jack ;w; maybe ra arrange for this

00:27:269 (27269|0) - move to col 3 for balance

00:33:798 (33798|2) - remove

00:15:092 (15092|2,15269|0,15445|2) - change to LN to cover piano sound

00:30:975 (30975|1) - etc. 1/4 ? i suggest to make 1/2 LN, it better than 1/4

[Japaripa]

00:01:328 - u can start mapping this from here, it has a lot of trumpet

00:05:916 (5916|1) - move to col 3

00:06:269 - triple for cymbal

00:09:534 - add note

00:12:534 - add note

00:13:945 - add note

00:21:004 - 00:21:181 - add note, i hear sound here

00:21:975 - double

00:22:504 - double

00:26:387 (26387|0) - remove, not loud

00:27:092 - add note for vocal

00:29:298 (29298|1,29387|2) - double

00:54:092 (54092|0) - move to col 4

01:01:857 - cymbal here

01:29:740 - no LN ?

01:30:092 (90092|2) - better to remove it,

Good Luck both of u exneko n tofu >w<
posted

Syadow- wrote:

ay exneko n tofu o//
Full Mod
[General]

Uncheck widescreen support

od hp
ez 7 6 | nm 7 7 | hd 8 7 | mx 8 8

[Easy]

00:37:328 (37328|2,37681|1,38034|2) - i suggest to remove this n make LN 00:37:504 (37504|0) - till 00:37:857 -

ok

[Normal]

i think ur normal little bit hard, i wanna help to nerf it

00:06:887 (6887|2) - remove it, not much loud

00:07:151 - if u use double here, u have to 00:07:857 - 00:08:563 - double this too

I changed to double

00:12:534 - maybe add LN to cover roll sound

No, I dont like this way

00:13:857 - same ^

00:17:916 (17916|3) - remove no sound n 00:18:004 (18004|2,18092|1) - move to right side

well

00:18:445 - double for cymbal

00:21:975 (21975|3,22504|2) - double too, consistency with 00:21:269 -

00:22:857 (22857|1,22945|2,23034|3) - change to one LN n 00:23:210 (23210|0,23298|1) - this too

00:26:210 (26210|1,26387|3) - change to 1 LN too n make it double note, same as 00:25:857 -

NO

00:29:210 (29210|1) - remove n re arrange some note

00:30:622 - add note here, same 00:30:798 -

00:32:210 - add note col 3

00:32:387 - add note col 2

00:37:504 (37504|2) - remove

00:39:269 (39269|3) - remove, it make harder to hit for beginner player

I think it's not hard As long as the press the button at the same time, will not appear 200 (although I changed it

00:42:181 (42181|1) - remove

00:43:857 - okay :'v i gave up for this pattern

00:47:563 (47563|2) - remove

00:52:151 - add note

01:02:034 (62034|1) - move to 01:01:857 -

01:17:916 (77916|3) - remove not loud much

01:23:563 (83563|2) - same ^

[Japaripa]

00:01:328 - u can start mapping this from here, it has a lot of trumpet

no

00:05:916 (5916|1) - move to col 3

00:06:269 - triple for cymbal

00:09:534 - add note

00:12:534 - add note

00:13:945 - add note

00:21:004 - 00:21:181 - add note, i hear sound here

00:21:975 - double

00:22:504 - double

00:26:387 (26387|0) - remove, not loud

No, I think they are the same loud 00:26:210

00:27:092 - add note for vocal

00:29:298 (29298|1,29387|2) - double

00:54:092 (54092|0) - move to col 4

01:01:857 - cymbal here

01:29:740 - no LN ?

01:30:092 (90092|2) - better to remove it,

I keep it


no reply=fix

Good Luck both of u exneko n tofu >w<


thank you Sya :)

Updated!
posted
Hi~
1|2|3|4|
Japaripa!
00:06:622 (6622|0,6622|1) - 你看,这跟后面的音不太协调啊。00:06:798 (6798|0,6798|3,6887|2,6887|1,6975|0,6975|3) -
00:09:887 - ……
00:14:740 (14740|0) - 移到3
00:23:651 (23651|1) - 移到3https://puu.sh/uGOxI/bcb9181f33.jpg感觉这样更好
00:25:504 (25504|3,25504|2,25681|0,25857|3,25857|2,26034|0,26210|3,26210|1,26387|2,26387|0,26563|3,26563|1,26740|2,26740|0,26916|1,26916|3) - 不明所以
00:33:092 (33092|0,33092|1,33269|2,33269|1,33445|2) - 感觉有问题
00:38:563 (38563|0) - 结束点应放在00:38:916 - https://puu.sh/uGOGt/6216d0bb01.jpg这样,这三个滑条就更统一
00:39:225 (39225|2) - ^
00:43:857 (43857|2,43857|3,44034|1,44210|0) - ……不太好01:09:975 (69975|1,69975|0,70151|2,70328|3) -
00:50:563 (50563|0,50740|3) - 我就只听到了wu no 这个音
01:02:034 (62034|3) - ^
01:29:740 (89740|0) - 可以改成LN到01:30:092 (90092|2) -
Tofu1222's Serval
00:10:151 (10151|3) - 移到3 https://puu.sh/uGPxz/2d118e416c.jpg 与后面的相照应,并且你这一段也使用了上述排列00:12:798 (12798|3,12798|0,12975|2,13063|1,13151|3,13151|0,13328|1,13416|2,13504|0,13504|3) -
00:18:975 (18975|0) - 同上
00:23:916 (23916|1,24092|3) - Ctrl+j
00:25:504 (25504|3,25681|3,25857|3,26034|3,26210|3) - ……^
00:38:563 (38563|0) - 结束点应放在00:38:916 - https://puu.sh/uGOGt/6216d0bb01.jpg这样,这三个滑条就更统一
00:43:151 (43151|3) - 移到3,效果https://puu.sh/uGPPN/7a39649e5e.jpg
00:48:092 (48092|3) - 移到3,效果https://puu.sh/uGPSQ/ec53dd54f7.jpg
00:53:916 (53916|1,54092|2,54269|1,54269|0,54269|3,54445|2,54622|0,54622|1) ^https://puu.sh/uGPVa/69c7caf44e.jpg
01:00:798 - more
01:29:740 (89740|3,89740|0) - LN的结尾好像有些问题
:D
Good luck!
posted
coming~ |1|2|3|4|
Easy
  1. 00:23:740 (23740|2) - wrong position? maybe here 00:23:740 (23740|2) -
  2. 00:37:857 - LN stop at here might more reasonable and easier for beginner
  3. 00:46:857 (46857|1,47034|0,47210|3) - is not same 00:47:563 (47563|1,47740|2,47916|0) - so why 00:41:210 - to 00:42:269 - they are same? It's similar part of music
  4. 01:20:916 - I think it's ok that there have two notes
Normal
  1. 00:17:916 - you should add a note, this note can not be ignore. Catch them all or ignore them
  2. 00:23:387 - add a note at col [4] accroding to 00:21:975 - and 00:22:504 - they are heavy tone, if you do, then you should 00:23:651 (23651|3,23916|0) - make these Ctrl+H to avoid double-hit
  3. 00:39:225 (39225|3) - emmm, idk it's good or not for NM player to hit a 1/8 LN
  4. 01:00:798 (60798|1) - move to col [3] for pattern balence
Tofu1222's Serval
  1. 00:18:975 (18975|0) - move to col [2]
  2. 00:22:857 (22857|0,22945|2,23034|0) - move to col [2] [4] [2], make staggered with 00:23:210 - for better hit feeling
  3. 00:36:622 (36622|2) - move to col [2] for pattern balence
  4. 00:59:740 - IDK you should add a note here or not cuz Normal have 2 notes here
  5. 01:01:857 - have a cymbal
  6. 01:02:387 (62387|3) - move to col [3] for pattern balence
Japaripa!
  1. 00:11:122 - miss a note? Check your Serval diff at same position
  2. 01:03:357 - ^
That's all, great map set. GOOD LUCK :)
posted
Hi Syadow, I have taken all your advice of my diff except the 3rd one, since I clearly hear a sound that it should be a single note here, and also this can keep a pattern which I continue to use for a few bars.

Syadow- wrote:

ay exneko n tofu o//
Full Mod
[General]

Uncheck widescreen support

od hp
ez 7 6 | nm 7 7 | hd 8 7 | mx 8 8

[Easy]

00:37:328 (37328|2,37681|1,38034|2) - i suggest to remove this n make LN 00:37:504 (37504|0) - till 00:37:857 -

[Normal]

i think ur normal little bit hard, i wanna help to nerf it

00:06:887 (6887|2) - remove it, not much loud

00:07:151 - if u use double here, u have to 00:07:857 - 00:08:563 - double this too

00:12:534 - maybe add LN to cover roll sound

00:13:857 - same ^

00:17:916 (17916|3) - remove no sound n 00:18:004 (18004|2,18092|1) - move to right side

00:18:445 - double for cymbal

00:21:975 (21975|3,22504|2) - double too, consistency with 00:21:269 -

00:22:857 (22857|1,22945|2,23034|3) - change to one LN n 00:23:210 (23210|0,23298|1) - this too

00:26:210 (26210|1,26387|3) - change to 1 LN too n make it double note, same as 00:25:857 -

00:29:210 (29210|1) - remove n re arrange some note

00:30:622 - add note here, same 00:30:798 -

00:32:210 - add note col 3

00:32:387 - add note col 2

00:37:504 (37504|2) - remove

00:39:269 (39269|3) - remove, it make harder to hit for beginner player

00:42:181 (42181|1) - remove

00:43:857 - okay :'v i gave up for this pattern

00:47:563 (47563|2) - remove

00:52:151 - add note

01:02:034 (62034|1) - move to 01:01:857 -

01:17:916 (77916|3) - remove not loud much

01:23:563 (83563|2) - same ^

[Tofu Serval]

00:25:504 (25504|3,25681|3,25857|3,26034|3,26210|3) - oh man jack ;w; maybe ra arrange for this

00:27:269 (27269|0) - move to col 3 for balance

00:33:798 (33798|2) - remove

00:15:092 (15092|2,15269|0,15445|2) - change to LN to cover piano sound

00:30:975 (30975|1) - etc. 1/4 ? i suggest to make 1/2 LN, it better than 1/4

[Japaripa]

00:01:328 - u can start mapping this from here, it has a lot of trumpet

00:05:916 (5916|1) - move to col 3

00:06:269 - triple for cymbal

00:09:534 - add note

00:12:534 - add note

00:13:945 - add note

00:21:004 - 00:21:181 - add note, i hear sound here

00:21:975 - double

00:22:504 - double

00:26:387 (26387|0) - remove, not loud

00:27:092 - add note for vocal

00:29:298 (29298|1,29387|2) - double

00:54:092 (54092|0) - move to col 4

01:01:857 - cymbal here

01:29:740 - no LN ?

01:30:092 (90092|2) - better to remove it,

Good Luck both of u exneko n tofu >w<
posted
Thanks, all mods for serval diff accepted

_Stan wrote:

coming~ |1|2|3|4|
Easy
  1. 00:23:740 (23740|2) - wrong position? maybe here 00:23:740 (23740|2) -
  2. 00:37:857 - LN stop at here might more reasonable and easier for beginner
  3. 00:46:857 (46857|1,47034|0,47210|3) - is not same 00:47:563 (47563|1,47740|2,47916|0) - so why 00:41:210 - to 00:42:269 - they are same? It's similar part of music
  4. 01:20:916 - I think it's ok that there have two notes
Normal
  1. 00:17:916 - you should add a note, this note can not be ignore. Catch them all or ignore them
  2. 00:23:387 - add a note at col [4] accroding to 00:21:975 - and 00:22:504 - they are heavy tone, if you do, then you should 00:23:651 (23651|3,23916|0) - make these Ctrl+H to avoid double-hit
  3. 00:39:225 (39225|3) - emmm, idk it's good or not for NM player to hit a 1/8 LN
  4. 01:00:798 (60798|1) - move to col [3] for pattern balence
Tofu1222's Serval
  1. 00:18:975 (18975|0) - move to col [2]
  2. 00:22:857 (22857|0,22945|2,23034|0) - move to col [2] [4] [2], make staggered with 00:23:210 - for better hit feeling
  3. 00:36:622 (36622|2) - move to col [2] for pattern balence
  4. 00:59:740 - IDK you should add a note here or not cuz Normal have 2 notes here
  5. 01:01:857 - have a cymbal
  6. 01:02:387 (62387|3) - move to col [3] for pattern balence
Japaripa!
  1. 00:11:122 - miss a note? Check your Serval diff at same position
  2. 01:03:357 - ^
That's all, great map set. GOOD LUCK :)
posted
谢谢,除了那个带省略号的mod我并不懂是干啥的之外其余serval难度全部接受

DustMoon wrote:

Hi~
1|2|3|4|
Japaripa!
00:06:622 (6622|0,6622|1) - 你看,这跟后面的音不太协调啊。00:06:798 (6798|0,6798|3,6887|2,6887|1,6975|0,6975|3) -
00:09:887 - ……
00:14:740 (14740|0) - 移到3
00:23:651 (23651|1) - 移到3https://puu.sh/uGOxI/bcb9181f33.jpg感觉这样更好
00:25:504 (25504|3,25504|2,25681|0,25857|3,25857|2,26034|0,26210|3,26210|1,26387|2,26387|0,26563|3,26563|1,26740|2,26740|0,26916|1,26916|3) - 不明所以
00:33:092 (33092|0,33092|1,33269|2,33269|1,33445|2) - 感觉有问题
00:38:563 (38563|0) - 结束点应放在00:38:916 - https://puu.sh/uGOGt/6216d0bb01.jpg这样,这三个滑条就更统一
00:39:225 (39225|2) - ^
00:43:857 (43857|2,43857|3,44034|1,44210|0) - ……不太好01:09:975 (69975|1,69975|0,70151|2,70328|3) -
00:50:563 (50563|0,50740|3) - 我就只听到了wu no 这个音
01:02:034 (62034|3) - ^
01:29:740 (89740|0) - 可以改成LN到01:30:092 (90092|2) -
Tofu1222's Serval
00:10:151 (10151|3) - 移到3 https://puu.sh/uGPxz/2d118e416c.jpg 与后面的相照应,并且你这一段也使用了上述排列00:12:798 (12798|3,12798|0,12975|2,13063|1,13151|3,13151|0,13328|1,13416|2,13504|0,13504|3) -
00:18:975 (18975|0) - 同上
00:23:916 (23916|1,24092|3) - Ctrl+j
00:25:504 (25504|3,25681|3,25857|3,26034|3,26210|3) - ……^
00:38:563 (38563|0) - 结束点应放在00:38:916 - https://puu.sh/uGOGt/6216d0bb01.jpg这样,这三个滑条就更统一
00:43:151 (43151|3) - 移到3,效果https://puu.sh/uGPPN/7a39649e5e.jpg
00:48:092 (48092|3) - 移到3,效果https://puu.sh/uGPSQ/ec53dd54f7.jpg
00:53:916 (53916|1,54092|2,54269|1,54269|0,54269|3,54445|2,54622|0,54622|1) ^https://puu.sh/uGPVa/69c7caf44e.jpg
01:00:798 - more
01:29:740 (89740|3,89740|0) - LN的结尾好像有些问题
:D
Good luck!
posted

DustMoon wrote:

Hi~
1|2|3|4|
Japaripa!
00:06:622 (6622|0,6622|1) - 你看,这跟后面的音不太协调啊。 这不挺好么、我保留

(6798|0,6798|3,6887|2,6887|1,6975|0,6975|3) -
00:09:887 - ……
00:14:740 (14740|0) - 移到3 好的
00:23:651 (23651|1) - 移到3https://puu.sh/uGOxI/bcb9181f33.jpg感觉这样更好 ^
00:25:504 (25504|3,25504|2,25681|0,25857|3,25857|2,26034|0,26210|3,26210|1,26387|2,26387|0,26563|3,26563|1,26740|2,26740|0,26916|1,26916|3) - 不明所以
00:33:092 (33092|0,33092|1,33269|2,33269|1,33445|2) - 感觉有问题
00:38:563 (38563|0) - 结束点应放在00:38:916 - https://puu.sh/uGOGt/6216d0bb01.jpg这样,这三个滑条就更统一
00:39:225 (39225|2) - ^
00:43:857 (43857|2,43857|3,44034|1,44210|0) - ……不太好01:09:975 (69975|1,69975|0,70151|2,70328|3) -
00:50:563 (50563|0,50740|3) - 我就只听到了wu no 这个音 好的,我把短滑条删了
01:02:034 (62034|3) - ^
01:29:740 (89740|0) - 可以改成LN到01:30:092 (90092|2) -


多谢摸图大佬 :)

_Stan wrote:

coming~ |1|2|3|4|
Easy
  1. 00:23:740 (23740|2) - wrong position? maybe here 00:23:740 (23740|2) - 好的
  2. 00:37:857 - LN stop at here might more reasonable and easier for beginner ^
  3. 00:46:857 (46857|1,47034|0,47210|3) - is not same 00:47:563 (47563|1,47740|2,47916|0) - so why 00:41:210 - to 00:42:269 - they are same? It's similar part of music
  4. 01:20:916 - I think it's ok that there have two notes
Normal
  1. 00:17:916 - you should add a note, this note can not be ignore. Catch them all or ignore them 上一个modder说去掉的……不过我信你
  2. 00:23:387 - add a note at col [4] accroding to 00:21:975 - and 00:22:504 - they are heavy tone, if you do, then you should 00:23:651 (23651|3,23916|0) - make these Ctrl+H to avoid double-hit
  3. 00:39:225 (39225|3) - emmm, idk it's good or not for NM player to hit a 1/8 LN 改成了单note
  4. 01:00:798 (60798|1) - move to col [3] for pattern balence
Japaripa!
  1. 00:11:122 - miss a note? Check your Serval diff at same position
  2. 01:03:357 - ^ 好的、都改了
That's all, great map set. GOOD LUCK :)


no reply=fix

多谢斯坦哥 :D
posted
哈喽,M4M。

Japaripa!
  1. hmm...这个难度可以考虑把HPOD调到8以上
  2. 00:14:034 (14034|0,14034|1,14122|2,14122|3) - 这两个声音和前一个note没区别,用一个note就好了
  3. 00:21:798 - 加一个note
  4. 00:22:151 - ^
  5. 00:23:034 (23034|0,23034|1) - 镲声比较轻,一个note够了
  6. 00:24:975 (24975|1,24975|0) - 删掉一个note,鼓声还没开始
  7. 00:32:563 - 这里听不到什么声音,为嘛放两个note
  8. 00:33:445 (33445|2) - Ghost note?
  9. 00:35:563 (35563|1) - ^
  10. 00:36:445 - 可以对着鼓加一个note
  11. 00:45:092 - 钢琴声一个note就够了吧
  12. 00:46:857 - 00:47:210 - 不考虑在这段做鼓声吗?
  13. 00:49:681 - 加一个note,这声和00:49:857 - 这段差不多
  14. 00:50:651 - 加一个note
  15. 00:53:210 - ^
  16. 00:54:269 - ^
  17. 01:17:916 - 把一个note往上移一格
摸这个难度时我整个人都是,人声和乐器一起做感觉有点乱所以我就没碰。

祝好运吧,作图真心累。。。
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dkingo wrote:

哈喽,M4M。

Japaripa!
  1. hmm...这个难度可以考虑把HPOD调到8以上
    不了、我觉得8/8就很好
  2. 00:14:034 (14034|0,14034|1,14122|2,14122|3) - 这两个声音和前一个note没区别,用一个note就好了
  3. 00:21:798 - 加一个note 好的
  4. 00:22:151 - ^ ^
  5. 00:23:034 (23034|0,23034|1) - 镲声比较轻,一个note够了
  6. 00:24:975 (24975|1,24975|0) - 删掉一个note,鼓声还没开始 这段我觉得这样摆很好、但其实我也不知道跟的是什么,人声吗?
  7. 00:32:563 - 这里听不到什么声音,为嘛放两个note 删了
  8. 00:33:445 (33445|2) - Ghost note?
  9. 00:35:563 (35563|1) - ^ 这个删了
  10. 00:36:445 - 可以对着鼓加一个note
  11. 00:45:092 - 钢琴声一个note就够了吧
  12. 00:46:857 - 00:47:210 - 不考虑在这段做鼓声吗? ^
  13. 00:49:681 - 加一个note,这声和00:49:857 - 这段差不多
  14. 00:50:651 - 加一个note ^
  15. 00:53:210 - ^
  16. 00:54:269 - ^
  17. 01:17:916 - 把一个note往上移一格
摸这个难度时我整个人都是,人声和乐器一起做感觉有点乱所以我就没碰。

祝好运吧,作图真心累。。。


感谢 :)
posted
hi neko x tofu~
m4m from neko's queue
----
|1|2|3|4|
feel free to reject this is just my pov

here we go :3

easy
00:08:563 (8563|0,8916|2,9269|1,9622|3,9975|0) - ctrl+h cuz it feels heavy on the left hand 00:07:857 (7857|0,8210|1,8563|0) -

00:10:681 (10681|3,11034|1) - better if u switch
00:16:328 (16328|2,16857|3) - move to |2| and |3|

00:22:857 - how about u try this :D

feels more balance imo

00:37:857 (37857|2) - change to LN up to the next note
normal
00:39:269 -
theres somehing wrong in this part~ check aimod

00:43:857 (43857|3,44034|2,44210|1,44387|0) - i believe this kind of pattern is too much to normal~ i dont hate it but i suggest to change it to normal notes like


00:44:740 - if u agree^


01:14:916 -


01:26:210 - can be the mirror of 01:14:916 -
tofu's serval
00:14:916 - try this to give this part 00:15:622 - a chance to get hit :D


00:51:445 - should be doubles only~ same sound as 00:35:916 (35916|3,35916|2) -

00:54:269 - ^

00:55:328 - ^

01:01:857 (61857|3,62210|3) - would be cool if you change this to LN

01:10:416 - missing note?

01:20:475 - ^

01:24:710 - ^

01:28:857 - add for impact

01:29:740 - ^
japaripa
00:04:328 (4328|0,4328|3,4857|0,4857|3,5563|3,5563|0) - i think its fine to be 3 notes like 00:06:269 (6269|2,6269|3,6269|0) -

00:25:504 - add

00:46:945 - missing note :3 its worthy to map that sound as well imo

00:47:034 - delete one note then add another here 00:47:122 - if u accept ^


gl both ^^/
posted
all accepted

tofu's serval
00:14:916 - try this to give this part 00:15:622 - a chance to get hit :D


00:51:445 - should be doubles only~ same sound as 00:35:916 (35916|3,35916|2) -

00:54:269 - ^

00:55:328 - ^

01:01:857 (61857|3,62210|3) - would be cool if you change this to LN

01:10:416 - missing note?

01:20:475 - ^

01:24:710 - ^

01:28:857 - add for impact

01:29:740 - ^


thanks!
posted

- Ly0572 - wrote:

hi neko x tofu~
m4m from neko's queue
----
|1|2|3|4|
feel free to reject this is just my pov

here we go :3

easy
00:08:563 (8563|0,8916|2,9269|1,9622|3,9975|0) - ctrl+h cuz it feels heavy on the left hand 00:07:857 (7857|0,8210|1,8563|0) -

00:10:681 (10681|3,11034|1) - better if u switch
00:16:328 (16328|2,16857|3) - move to |2| and |3|

00:22:857 - how about u try this :D

feels more balance imo

00:37:857 (37857|2) - change to LN up to the next note

All accepted!
normal
00:39:269 -
theres somehing wrong in this part~ check aimod

00:43:857 (43857|3,44034|2,44210|1,44387|0) - i believe this kind of pattern is too much to normal~ i dont hate it but i suggest to change it to normal notes like


No, I keep it

00:44:740 - if u agree^


01:14:916 -


01:26:210 - can be the mirror of 01:14:916 -
japaripa
00:04:328 (4328|0,4328|3,4857|0,4857|3,5563|3,5563|0) - i think its fine to be 3 notes like 00:06:269 (6269|2,6269|3,6269|0) -

00:25:504 - add

00:46:945 - missing note :3 its worthy to map that sound as well imo No

00:47:034 - delete one note then add another here 00:47:122 - if u accept ^


gl both ^^/


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Thanks mod, gl :)

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Hii !
i'm From your Queue
this your M4M

I just do Short Mod

1|2|3|4

Japaripa!
I see this map much not at vocal and make it bad i thought
1. 00:01:328 (1328|0,1681|3,2210|0,2563|1,3092|2) add long note >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7594494
2. 00:05:210 (5210|1,5387|2) << thats Vocal ? better if you remove it
3. 00:15:798 (15798|2,15975|3,16151|0) ^
4. 00:16:592 (16592|2) no sound here ?? remove
5. 00:21:004 (21004|2,21004|3,21181|2,21181|3) remove ? its ghosting >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7594187 beter ?
6. 00:21:445 (21445|2) remove ?
7. 00:58:681 (58681|1) add note to 2
8. 01:01:151 (61151|1) move to 1
9. 01:01:328 (61328|1) add note to 2
10. 01:30:092 (90092|1) add note to 2 for symbal :>


Don't forget Mod my map TRUE - Soundscape

KEEP LOVE ILLYASVIEL VON EINZBERN

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OMGitsRaMayu wrote:

Hii !
i'm From your Queue
this your M4M

I just do Short Mod

1|2|3|4

Japaripa!
I see this map much not at vocal and make it bad i thought
1. 00:01:328 (1328|0,1681|3,2210|0,2563|1,3092|2) add long note >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7594494 I don't like it
2. 00:05:210 (5210|1,5387|2) << thats Vocal ? better if you remove it
3. 00:15:798 (15798|2,15975|3,16151|0) ^
4. 00:16:592 (16592|2) no sound here ?? remove
5. 00:21:004 (21004|2,21004|3,21181|2,21181|3) remove ? its ghosting >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7594187 beter ?
ok
6. 00:21:445 (21445|2) remove ?
7. 00:58:681 (58681|1) add note to 2
8. 01:01:151 (61151|1) move to 1
9. 01:01:328 (61328|1) add note to 2
10. 01:30:092 (90092|1) add note to 2 for symbal :>


Don't forget Mod my map TRUE - Soundscape

KEEP LOVE ILLYASVIEL VON EINZBERN




No reply=reject

Thank you for your mod :o


Updated!
posted
Hello m4m from your queue uwu
Take note, everything I suggest will be based on my personal preferences so if you don't like the suggestions you don't need to apply/give kds.
Anyway, here's the short mod (I can only mod easy and normal since I'm not experienced with 4k mapping)

1|2|3|4
Easy
00:05:210 (5210|1,5387|0,5563|2) - move to the right
00:06:269 (6269|3) - move to 1 so it will mirror the pattern ^
00:11:740 (11740|3) - move to 2
00:15:622 (15622|3) - move to 3 for better "feel" since you previously used ln in 4th column
00:30:622 - you forgot a note here
00:53:210 (53210|0,53387|1) - ctrl+j
01:02:210 (62210|0) - move to 2
01:07:504 (67504|3,67857|1) - ctrl+j
01:20:916 - add note for consistency
01:28:504 (88504|3) - delete? i don't hear a sound there
Normal
00:05:387 (5387|0,5563|1) - ctrl+j for better flow
00:17:828 - there should technically be a note there though its only a personal preference
00:35:740 - why not delete a note here and add 2 notes in 00:35:916 - since the sound is stronger
00:37:504 - add note for drum/piano sound
00:25:063 - add note here and 00:25:240 - so it will be consistent with 00:24:445 (24445|0,24534|1,24622|3,24710|2,24798|1) -
00:43:857 (43857|3,44034|2,44210|1,44387|0) - move the ends to the next 2(1/4)lines so it wont be awkward to release
00:47:563 - 00:48:092 - make it into single note stream?
01:18:092 - add note for consistency
01:23:740 - ^
01:27:975 (87975|3) - better turn it into an ln
posted

-BlueFire- wrote:

Hello m4m from your queue uwu
Take note, everything I suggest will be based on my personal preferences so if you don't like the suggestions you don't need to apply/give kds.
Anyway, here's the short mod (I can only mod easy and normal since I'm not experienced with 4k mapping)

1|2|3|4
Easy
00:05:210 (5210|1,5387|0,5563|2) - move to the right
00:06:269 (6269|3) - move to 1 so it will mirror the pattern ^
00:11:740 (11740|3) - move to 2
00:15:622 (15622|3) - move to 3 for better "feel" since you previously used ln in 4th column
00:30:622 - you forgot a note here
00:53:210 (53210|0,53387|1) - ctrl+j
01:02:210 (62210|0) - move to 2
01:07:504 (67504|3,67857|1) - ctrl+j
01:20:916 - add note for consistency
01:28:504 (88504|3) - delete? i don't hear a sound there

All accepted!
Normal
00:05:387 (5387|0,5563|1) - ctrl+j for better flow
00:17:828 - there should technically be a note there though its only a personal preference no, i keep it
00:35:740 - why not delete a note here and add 2 notes in 00:35:916 - since the sound is stronger
00:37:504 - add note for drum/piano sound
00:25:063 - add note here and 00:25:240 - so it will be consistent with 00:24:445 (24445|0,24534|1,24622|3,24710|2,24798|1) -
00:43:857 (43857|3,44034|2,44210|1,44387|0) - move the ends to the next 2(1/4)lines so it wont be awkward to release No
00:47:563 - 00:48:092 - make it into single note stream?
01:18:092 - add note for consistency no
01:23:740 - ^ ^
01:27:975 (87975|3) - better turn it into an ln


No reply=fix

Thank you very much, your mod makes me feel good :)

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