YaHao wrote:

The BG scares me

ajeemaniz wrote:

sy is dangerous

grats usagi

Todestrieb wrote:

The Kiai on the Grand Crown difficulty feels inconsistant. For example, at 01:34:846 -, there isn't any note but the sound is audible at 25% rate. Same for 01:39:873 - (you did put one at 01:41:129 (101129|0) - tho, and It's exactly the same thing).

I also don't understand why the section starting at 01:41:051 - should have 4 mini-jacks, It's exactly the same as the first section of the kiai.

Also, watch out for anchors here, here and here.

I understand why you put a long trill in the middle section after the little break, but these don't follow anything in particular.

Aras25 wrote:

Where is my LN galore? D:<

in Standard diff, - 01:09:637 (69637|3,70265|2,70893|1,71522|0) - I think from those 4 LN these 2 LN 01:10:265 (70265|2,71522|0) - can be removed, the sounds you followed there is not too audible to map in this diff, also I see that in Hyper diff you completely ignore this sound which will be contradicting the diff spread

as for Beginner diff, I think this note 00:20:003 (20003|2) - should be removed, I don't hear something significant aside from the 1/2 kick that were started here 00:19:375 (19375|0) -
maybe you're simplifying it to 2/1 there, but still I think it is inappropriate

still in Beginner diff, 00:24:401 (24401|1,25501|0) - and 00:27:700 (27700|0,28171|2) - I think both of them should share the same LN pattern as they both have that 1/2 gap actually

ajeemaniz wrote:

- the anchor are fine as i put them for hand strain, yes im that evil so sorry not that sorry, but basically it layers most of the kick sound like how you see the anchors in IIDX charts, and i love the anchor in the last part as the addition for the climax

Todestrieb wrote:

ajeemaniz wrote:

- the anchor are fine as i put them for hand strain, yes im that evil so sorry not that sorry, but basically it layers most of the kick sound like how you see the anchors in IIDX charts, and i love the anchor in the last part as the addition for the climax

I still feel they aren't placed coherently.
-In this first case, 2nd and 3rd column are way, way more denser than the 1st and 2nd, without any kick sound and without following the pitch, It's just here for being here, without any reason explaining this placement with the music, and thus destroying the trill which is actually placed following the music.
-In this second case, if you wanted to follow the kick effectively, you should have started with the 4th column the white tick, and the overall flow of the pattern could still be improved without the (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7676995).
-And in the last big anchor at the end, It's also here for the purpose of putting an long anchor, the kick sounds stop earlier than the anchor and It's extended by both the kick and the stream (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7677008, kicks in blue), so there isn't any sound justifying this. I think you should put a stop to this one after the jumptrill, because It will be more pleasant to play, and will give a better feeling of the actual real kick accentuation. The density of the part is also enough to give a climatic effect, without resorting to this.

YaHao wrote:

...

AncuL wrote:

w0w i just wanted to make a 7k mapset and this appeared

Surono wrote:

ooo da powar of 69% anikis _-

Rivals_7 wrote:

yo M4M

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

SPOILER

[7K Another]

00:18:119 (18119|4,18276|4) - think you shouldnt stack here. be consistent with - 00:17:490 (17490|5,17647|3) - 00:16:862 (16862|1,17019|3) -

00:51:260 - eee how about this

sounds the piano would be more intuititve if the double were splitted

00:56:757 (56757|0) - you forgot W i guess. see your "Glorious" diff

01:16:548 (76548|3,76783|3,76941|3,77098|3) - this anchor tho

01:24:873 (84873|2,84951|3,84951|5,85030|2) - somethings wrong here. the C should have the double too.

[7K Hyper]

00:41:993 (41993|0) - would probably move to 2 so it wont contradict with the low pitch piano - 00:42:307 (42307|0) -

00:47:176 (47176|6) - double here. just like you do at - 00:45:763 (45763|0,45763|3,45920|0,45920|3) - 00:46:391 (46391|1,46391|2,46548|1,46548|2) - since they're on the same piano pitches

00:50:160 (50160|3) - double? piano sounds quite louder

01:34:768 (94768|0,94768|2,95003|3,95003|1) - 01:36:024 (96024|4,96024|6,96260|3,96260|5) - should have been stacked. consistency with - 01:39:794 (99794|6,99794|4,100030|4,100030|6) - 01:41:051 (101051|3,101051|0,101286|3,101286|0) - for the same piano pitch

01:54:087 (114087|6) - move to 5? contracdicted with the high piano pitch above it

[7K standard]

00:45:763 (45763|1,45920|1,46077|0) - transition from midfing to pinky are quite odd imo. i would move this to the right one step. also reflect what you did at - 00:46:391 (46391|5,46548|5,46705|4) -

00:53:302 (53302|1) - move to 4? give some freedom of intuitive pattern. :u

[7K Beginner]

01:39:166 (99166|0,99480|0) - hmm i dont think i see the reason why is this stacked tho.

pro diffs. GL o/

MEGAtive wrote:

xi - Grand Chariot

[7K Glorious Queen]
*ahem*ripping off Glorious Crown for diffname since this song's title is Grand Chariot aha I get it. // ya

Mods

1. 00:01:469 - Well this starts with pitch increasing, so why don't you try something like https://rhythmega.s-ul.eu/Svxx9va2 ? Your current pattern would make it feel it's increasing and then decreasing. // mm a little bit arranged
   
2. 00:02:255 - Pitch wise I think https://rhythmega.s-ul.eu/GW72l2bn is better in covering the melody. // na, it looks like the next pattern
   
3. 00:06:496 (6496|2,6535|3,6574|4,6613|5,6653|6,6653|0,6731|1) - Would executed better if Ctrl+H. Your current pattern makes it heavy on left hand.
   
4. 00:26:443 - https://rhythmega.s-ul.eu/xSx8nfvf more comfy IMO. // i kept this to separate left & right hand
   
5. 00:41:208 - Don't you think this is a bit anticlimatic? Maybe triple here still fine. And Another is actually using Triple so why not
   
6. 00:57:071 (57071|0,57071|1,57071|2,57229|2,57229|0,57386|2,57386|0,57543|3,57543|0,57543|2,57700|0,57700|1,57700|2,57857|0,57857|2,58014|2,58014|0,58171|0,58171|2,58249|3,58328|0) - Eh really? Maybe 00:57:543 (57543|3,57700|1) - better off in right column. God dem hammering ;w; // im teh evil one
   
7. 01:32:569 - Better off with https://rhythmega.s-ul.eu/gNKVL12S tho. Pitch are going down here so making it stair to the right just felt awkward. Also as an aftermath of this, 01:33:825 (93825|4) - Move to |6| to make pattern looks cleaner. (|7||3||6||2| broken stair thingy).
   
8. TBH kiai felt fine but aren't consistent in structure so I think I should tweak this.
   
   1. I'm confused with 01:35:239 - 01:36:496 - compared with 01:37:752 - 01:39:009 - 01:40:265 - 01:41:522 - . The first two are using a succession of |14||25| etc., while the other's are using minijack.
      
      1. If I'm going to assume that it's for variety, then 01:40:265 - 01:41:522 - should be reverting to the same as 01:35:239 - 01:36:496 -
      2. Otherwise you can change 01:37:752 - 01:39:009 - to the same as 01:35:239 - 01:36:496 - so the minijack section starts at 01:40:265 -
         Though I prefer the first one but it's up to you.
   2. Now let's talk about 01:35:003 - 01:40:030 - compared with 01:36:260 - 01:37:516 - 01:38:773 - and also compared with 01:41:286 - . The first two are having the notes minijack'd, while the second three are in |14||25| succession (IDK what to call this tho. I'd say gallop or ministair but it just doesn't fall right to the term lel.) and the third one is only having one note jack'd. Actually my suggestion would revolve on something like "2 instance, change pattern execution" but it's up to you though. Like 01:36:260 - minijack, 01:41:286 - both notes minijack'd. Yea something like that.

Actually if this mod sounds weird, don't mind me since I took two different days to mod this lol.

// the way i vary the jackhammer placement is basically more of this reason :
jacks made as marking for transitioning to the next part, building up and making it harder towards the end.. basically to heaten up per each stanza, each part getting more jacks from first section to the next one, and they are more became harder too, from single hand jack to 2 hand jack, so instead of making every same sound jack'd, i made it sightly raising instead for, rather playing experience.. not so much into prprpr

another thing, unless its allowed to, its kind of contradict to put more jack as it raises the gap more from another to glorious queen

[7K Another]

Mods

1. 00:19:061 (19061|5,19061|3,19218|5,19218|1) - Ctrl+H so the pattern is actually balanced. Also pattern became more interesting lel
2. 00:20:946 - Actually I kinda against simplification of 1/8 using 1/4 here since it would be misleading but w/e it's still UTY though.
3. 00:40:972 (40972|3,41208|2) - Ctrl+J? So 00:40:736 - 00:41:365 - would get same treatment of being hammered.
4. 00:42:150 - Well you can map the piano here. It's not that hurt right?
5. 01:33:511 (93511|2,93668|4,93825|3,93982|5) - You can move these to the right once to make 01:33:197 - left hand less cluttered.

Segini dulu dah. Ntar dilanjut lagi.

Eclipse- wrote:

RANK THIS MAP PLS

from no queue I don't even mod my boy

I'm the playability guy tbw, lots upon lots of 2017 mapping criticism incoming

nothing to mod in 4k beginner tbh

4k Standard

POTENTIAL ERRORS
00:06:338 (6338|0,6496|3,6496|0) - ...I don't like that. It's an awkward pattern from a beginner's point of view. hitting the same note twice whilst adding another note to the second one doesn't suit the diff even if it's slow imo // fixed this
00:18:747 (18747|2,18747|3,18904|3) - it's like the error before but faster and the other way around lol // the double meant for the kick & cymbal, but moved some anchor i suppose
00:41:208 (41208|1,41208|0,41365|0,41836|3,41993|3,41993|2) - risky risky pattern for that diff // will keep the anchor for variation
01:42:621 (102621|3,102778|1,102778|3,103092|2,103249|2,103249|0,103564|1,103721|1,103721|3,104035|0,104192|3,104192|0) - maybe? this is much more acceptable since it's the densiest part of the song but I'd still consider that. // as you said, dense pattern for the climax

ERRORS
01:54:715 (114715|0,114873|0,114873|1) - density definitely not sufficient to place that here. // mm keep, rather minor and it meant for the kick

CRITICAL ERRORS
none

4k Hyper

POTENTIAL ERRORS
00:02:962 (2962|2,3040|3,3040|1) - wrong level for this after a burst tbh // mm good point
00:26:600 (26600|3,26600|2,26757|3) - insufficient density for something like that. // mmm i don't think so, double kick
00:31:234 (31234|3,31312|0,31312|2) - look 1st error // too minor for either change or keeping, keep
00:35:396 (35396|2,35396|0,35553|1,35553|0) -
00:35:867 (35867|3,36024|0,36024|3) - you sure? // ofc, 1/2 anchor adds variation to the flow
00:49:846 (49846|1,49925|2,50003|0,50082|3,50160|2) - doesn't this burrst look at least weird to you? // nah, meant for l r l r
00:59:270 (59270|2,59349|0,59427|1,59506|3,59585|0,59585|2) - remember, it's over 190bpm bursts when the map isn't even 3 stars, make them simpler. // i could but i think this one doesn't really that hard to execute
01:04:140 (64140|0,64218|3,64297|1,64375|2,64454|1,64532|3) - again // intended trill
01:14:506 (74506|3,74663|0,74663|3) - another calm part and this // same pitch


ERRORS
00:48:276 (48276|2,48276|0,48433|0,48590|3,48590|1,48747|3,48904|1,48904|0,49061|0,49218|3,49218|2,49375|3) - this HURTS in a relatively calm part of the song. Mind that it's not even a 3 star diff and relevance matters. // moved some notes but keep the anchor as it meant to be
01:22:438 (82438|3,82516|2,82595|0,82674|3,82752|1,82831|0) - relevance again, this is in the middle of a short stream, how is a player supposed to hit that having been recently introduced to simple streams? // that's the challenge, the 3/4 beat supports the transition tho, also too minor to affect playability :3
01:23:694 (83694|0,83773|2,83852|3,83930|0,84009|1,84087|3,84166|0) - again // ^



CRITICAL ERRORS
01:45:605 (105605|1) - MERCILESS. in the chorus part where you introduce a player to doubles and triples with a frequent need to jack (and only fillers if single notes) then you get a jack from that singkle filler note, how is a player on that level supposed to hit that? // mm i can't see why i should unjack them, also i think if its 'normal or below' then it would be too hard, hence, 'Hyper'.
01:48:119 (108119|0) - again

also one point, this diff is already a little broken as it comes to relevance, since the doubles and triples in the chorus part are already wayy above the average for this star rating but it isn't a particular error because I don't know how else I'd do this anyway // it meant for the climax so i use triples and simple anchors, hey they are fun for practice!

4k Another

POTENTIAL ERRORS
00:19:375 (19375|2,19375|3,19375|1) - why a triple here? and even if you have a good reason for it, it would play better for the single note after it to be in the first column imo // because of 00:19:689 (19689|2,20003|2,20318|1) -
00:19:375 (19375|2,19375|3,19375|1) - I don't hear this note? // try 25% playback rate
01:27:307 (87307|2,87386|3) - I don't hear those two? // try 25% playback rate
01:47:804 (107804|1,107804|2,107883|0,107962|2,108040|3,108040|1,108119|0) - consider simplifying. This pattern doesn't play well at all. // mm too subjective, i'll keep this

ERRORS
00:06:103 (6103|3,6181|1,6181|2,6260|3) - don't do that. It's evil on this and many higher levels. Playability hurts at this point. // its like 00:05:475 (5475|1,5553|0,5632|1) - but only flipped, keep this

00:47:019 (47019|0,47176|0) - a player has just hit a stream, let them chill. // same piano pitch, keep this

00:59:427 (59427|0) - should be in the 3rd column, since this made a trill, as always relevance and playability // except you forgot it will create longer trill and break the playability itself xD, keep

01:00:527 (60527|0,60605|1,60684|0) - have mercy. this is in the middle of a stream. It's easy to hit, but not by a player who is on this level. // its not hard .-. its insane difficulty as it meant to be, keep

01:01:626 (61626|3,61705|2,61783|3) - again
01:14:820 (74820|0) - 3rd error again
01:16:077 (76077|0) - and again
01:16:077 (76077|0,76391|3) - aaaaaand again
01:22:045 (82045|3) - yet again
01:22:045 (82045|3) - guess what? again
01:37:438 (97438|0,97516|2,97516|3,97595|0,97674|2,97752|0,97752|1) - ...what? This pattern is so weird that I even choked here xd but honestly it plays really bad, shouldn't be there // you bet
01:40:422 (100422|0,100501|3,100501|1,100579|0) - 1st error repeats
01:45:448 (105448|0,105527|3,105527|1,105605|0) - and again
01:46:705 (106705|1,106783|3,106783|2,106862|1) - yet again
01:49:218 (109218|1,109297|3,109297|2,109375|1) - ...again


CRITICAL ERRORS
01:31:705 (91705|1,91705|0,91783|1,91783|0) - NONONONONNONONONONONOOONO even if it's single this is a whole other level. Only in grand crown this could be acceptable // mm keep

// i don't know how to summarize this, but 'Another' meant for 'Insane' difficulty, i don't want to lower it just for playability, i consider the music flow more than anything

Will mod Grand Crown when I feel like it