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HXJ_Crafter
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HXJ_Crafter
irc, Feb.13
16:45 HXJ_Crafter: hey ajee
16:46 ajeemaniz: hallo!
16:46 HXJ_Crafter: I rename my editing version to the regular one
16:47 ajeemaniz: done already?
16:47 HXJ_Crafter: yes
16:48 *ajeemaniz is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1208887 BlackY vs. Yooh - XROSS INFECTION [GRAVIXY Lv.16]] <osu!mania> |4K|
16:48 *HXJ_Crafter is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1208887 BlackY vs. Yooh - XROSS INFECTION [GRAVIXY Lv.16]]
16:48 HXJ_Crafter: lel
16:50 ajeemaniz: yass
16:50 ajeemaniz: ok that's totally harder than infinite now
16:51 HXJ_Crafter: lol, now need some warm up
16:52 HXJ_Crafter: it's quite harder
16:52 HXJ_Crafter: than the origin
16:56 ajeemaniz: o btw
16:56 ajeemaniz: mind if i ask favor?
16:56 HXJ_Crafter: hmm
16:57 HXJ_Crafter: Idk, my English is bad you know :3
16:57 HXJ_Crafter: oh, I understand
16:57 HXJ_Crafter: sure!
16:58 *ajeemaniz is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1183584 xi - Grand Chariot [Grand Crown]]
16:59 ajeemaniz: can you take a look at 01:34:768 (94768|2) -
16:59 HXJ_Crafter: I know this
16:59 *HXJ_Crafter is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1183584 xi - Grand Chariot]
16:59 ajeemaniz: do you think there's some overnote / ghost notes that should be removed?
17:00 ajeemaniz: i checked the IIDX ver, some sound looks missing
17:02 ajeemaniz: also the bg is mess
17:02 HXJ_Crafter: i don't really know.. maybe it's OK
17:04 HXJ_Crafter: 01:38:459 -
17:05 ajeemaniz: hoo missing
17:06 ajeemaniz: added
17:07 HXJ_Crafter: btw, is jack better here? 01:40:501 -
17:07 ajeemaniz: oh yes
17:07 ajeemaniz: added
17:08 HXJ_Crafter: and you know, 01:41:757 -
17:08 ajeemaniz: added already, lol nice catch
17:10 HXJ_Crafter: lol, if I do, I'll just do like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7302388
17:13 ajeemaniz: alright, some notes reduced like your screen shot
17:13 HXJ_Crafter: damn my father is smoking ;w;
17:13 ajeemaniz: more evil jack ww
17:13 HXJ_Crafter: ww
17:13 HXJ_Crafter: 01:52:006 (112006|3) -
17:13 HXJ_Crafter: this sound is not exist?
17:15 ajeemaniz: i don't like when my father smoking too
17:15 ajeemaniz: -A-
17:15 ajeemaniz: there is 1/8 burst
17:15 ajeemaniz: in iidx too
17:16 HXJ_Crafter: hmm, but I just hear the first, second and the third
17:16 ajeemaniz: use 25% playback rate?
17:16 ajeemaniz: i hear that
17:16 HXJ_Crafter: ye
17:18 HXJ_Crafter: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7302427
17:18 HXJ_Crafter: lol
17:19 ajeemaniz: so pro
17:19 ajeemaniz: will update after downloading android custom rom
17:19 HXJ_Crafter: i love these cool patterns
17:19 ajeemaniz: hopefully my phone doesn't bricked www
17:19 ajeemaniz: woh thanks
17:19 ajeemaniz: can you post the IRC?
17:19 HXJ_Crafter: irc?
17:19 HXJ_Crafter: hmm
17:20 HXJ_Crafter: is this enough?
17:20 ajeemaniz: type "/savelog"
17:20 HXJ_Crafter: lol, I know this
17:20 ajeemaniz: if you want to help me more, i won't reject :3
17:20 HXJ_Crafter: :3
17:21 ajeemaniz: i just aware some bn will see many ghost notes & overmapping
17:21 ajeemaniz: that's why i ask you first
17:24 HXJ_Crafter: 00:19:375 -
17:24 HXJ_Crafter: 1/4 right?
17:25 HXJ_Crafter: tho I don't know how to add these note and make it not so full uwu..
17:26 ajeemaniz: wait
17:26 ajeemaniz: me too, i dont want to make it too full in every part
17:26 ajeemaniz: trying to use full pattern in ending part only
17:27 HXJ_Crafter: 00:04:061 -
17:28 HXJ_Crafter: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7302476
17:29 HXJ_Crafter: oh Can I ask a question?
17:29 ajeemaniz: done
17:29 ajeemaniz: sure
17:29 HXJ_Crafter: 00:15:448 (15448|2) - to which sound?
17:30 ajeemaniz: 00:12:935 (12935|3) - guitar string like this
17:30 ajeemaniz: really faint but im sure its repeating for 2 measure
17:32 HXJ_Crafter: ok. tho I still don't hear ;w;
17:32 HXJ_Crafter: 00:21:574 -
17:33 HXJ_Crafter: is double note here better?
17:34 ajeemaniz: 00:21:574 (21574|1,21888|2) - between this
17:34 ajeemaniz: which you think fit with double because both are strong sound lol
17:36 HXJ_Crafter: 00:21:574 -
17:36 HXJ_Crafter: oh sorry
17:37 HXJ_Crafter: it's not strong as 00:21:417 - , I think

Feb.21
[Crown]
00:24:401 (24401|1) - LN move to 3 and 00:24:558 (24558|3) - move to 1, may look good
00:45:448 - maybe you can add one note to follow the drum right? Obviously that you catch some drum sound before like 00:44:820 -
00:45:684 - I'll add if the map is mine :3
00:59:820 - why not add a note in col 2? fit this part more and also can be mapped to a normal sound
[Another]
00:04:061 - tbf... I really don't know how to deal with this sound ;w; it should be double note but it may cause some trouble playing for 4-star players cause putting a really difficult pattern at the beginning with 191 BPM uwu
00:28:799 (28799|3,28956|0,29113|3) - Ctrl+H better.
00:30:213 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7382360 and 00:30:841 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7382364 (00:31:312 (31312|2,31548|2) - these two up to u.)
01:12:150 - for this part, I suggest you to catch these sound till 01:14:663 -just like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7382404 lol, my pattern is bad so I just make it like this. and for the next part, catch less vocal like 01:15:605 - . I suggest to delete one note and leave one. Because this part is SO PRO ,even much more harder than the kiai
01:34:140 - these two LN? I would choose note because they are quite different from 01:34:454 (94454|3) -
01:40:579 (100579|0) - move to col 2 sliply
damn the only time I focus on the two hard diffs
I prefer easy diffs better
Last edited by HXJ_Crafter , edited 1 time in total.
Arzenvald
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Topic Starter
Arzenvald
desu! thanks for the mod <3
AyeAries
880 posts
Joined June 2015
AyeAries

Mod for Mod Request



[General]
  1. BPM: OK
  2. Offset: OK
  3. AiMod: OK
  4. Audio: OK
  5. Background: OK
  6. Preview Point: OK
4k P A T T E R N - | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

[Standard]
  1. 00:10:579 (10579|1) - i think much better if you change it into LN. If you accept, then transfer this note 00:10:422 (10422|2) - to column 2 and 00:10:579 (10579|1) - this one (supposedly LN if you agree) in the column 3
  2. 00:23:616 (23616|2,23773|2) - i guess it's confuse to have this kind of note that not have similar hit sound.
  3. 00:33:668 (33668|2,33825|2) - this one too. i guess you have to consider to change the pattern for these notes.
  4. 00:45:763 (45763|0,45920|1) - and i think it's more fit to be minijacks than the 2 notes you patterned as minijacks.
  5. 00:46:391 (46391|3,46548|2) - this one too.
  6. 01:14:977 (74977|2) - move this note to column 4 for the good start of this part
  7. 01:27:464 (87464|1,87935|2) - why not add one note here?
[Hyper]
  1. 00:01:469 (1469|0,1548|2,1626|1,1705|0) - i think it's better to use stairs in starting point. If you agree, just move this note 00:01:469 (1469|0) - to column 4.
  2. 01:40:030 (100030|0,100030|1) - move to columns 3 and 4.
[Another]
  1. 00:09:794 (9794|1) - add one note here. they have similar sound here 00:10:422 (10422|0,10422|3) -
Sorry for late mod and thanks again for mod my map. Good luck :)
Arzenvald
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Topic Starter
Arzenvald

Shiro-neechan wrote:

Mod for Mod Request



[General]
  1. BPM: OK
  2. Offset: OK
  3. AiMod: OK
  4. Audio: OK
  5. Background: OK
  6. Preview Point: OK
4k P A T T E R N - | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

[Standard]
  1. 00:10:579 (10579|1) - i think much better if you change it into LN. If you accept, then transfer this note 00:10:422 (10422|2) - to column 2 and 00:10:579 (10579|1) - this one (supposedly LN if you agree) in the column 3 // good idea! applied
  2. 00:23:616 (23616|2,23773|2) - i guess it's confuse to have this kind of note that not have similar hit sound. // nah, it has same pitch & its Normal diff and these kind of mini jack won't bother
  3. 00:33:668 (33668|2,33825|2) - this one too. i guess you have to consider to change the pattern for these notes. // same pitch like before
  4. 00:45:763 (45763|0,45920|1) - and i think it's more fit to be minijacks than the 2 notes you patterned as minijacks. // :^) applied
  5. 00:46:391 (46391|3,46548|2) - this one too. // ya
  6. 01:14:977 (74977|2) - move this note to column 4 for the good start of this part // i want to make 3232 trill, so keep
  7. 01:27:464 (87464|1,87935|2) - why not add one note here? // nah, it would be as hard as hyper that way
[Hyper]
  1. 00:01:469 (1469|0,1548|2,1626|1,1705|0) - i think it's better to use stairs in starting point. If you agree, just move this note 00:01:469 (1469|0) - to column 4. // nah, it will create ambiguous difficulty gap between normal & hyper
  2. 01:40:030 (100030|0,100030|1) - move to columns 3 and 4. // fixed the whole anchor instead
[Another]
  1. 00:09:794 (9794|1) - add one note here. they have similar sound here 00:10:422 (10422|0,10422|3) - // mm keep this one to make it consistent between hyper & grand chariot
Sorry for late mod and thanks again for mod my map. Good luck :)
thank you for the mod! its helpful :D
Illya X Ram Li
Illya X Ram Li
hello pak :
this your M4M
saya just do short Mod :v

sorry kalo lama :>
don't open

1|2|3|4

Another
00:12:935 (12935|0) LN ? Kayak di diff "Grand crown"
00:34:061 (34061|2,34061|0) hapus ?
00:34:140 (34140|1) upps :v ? missing one note ?
00:44:820 (44820|2,46077|3,46705|2) sengaja cuma 1 note ya ? ga lebih ena ena 2 ? :v
01:07:124 (67124|2) - 01:07:438 LN ?

Grand Crown
00:19:611 miss a note
00:52:359 (52359|2,52674|3) double note ?
00:53:930 (53930|3) ^
00:54:873 (54873|3,55187|1,56129|0) ^
01:07:124 (67124|3) - 01:07:438 LN ?


KEEP LOVE ILLYASVIEL VON EINZBERN

Arzenvald
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Topic Starter
Arzenvald

OMGitsRaMayu wrote:

hello pak :
this your M4M
saya just do short Mod :v

sorry kalo lama :>

1|2|3|4

Another
00:12:935 (12935|0) LN ? Kayak di diff "Grand crown" // oke
00:34:061 (34061|2,34061|0) hapus ? // hmm itu buat synthesizer,
00:34:140 (34140|1) upps :v ? missing one note ? // dan yg ini gk di emphasize, rearranged instead
00:44:820 (44820|2,46077|3,46705|2) sengaja cuma 1 note ya ? ga lebih ena ena 2 ? :v // ngga, buat piano cukup 1
01:07:124 (67124|2) - 01:07:438 LN ? // sengaja kosong biar konsisten sama semua diff

Grand Crown
00:19:611 miss a note // keep
00:52:359 (52359|2,52674|3) double note ? // yg snare ini sengaja 1, gk perlu double
00:53:930 (53930|3) ^
00:54:873 (54873|3,55187|1,56129|0) ^
01:07:124 (67124|3) - 01:07:438 LN ? // keep juga


KEEP LOVE ILLYASVIEL VON EINZBERN


thanks m4m nya ya!

updated, think its ready for bn check now
Kawawa
Kawawa
USAUSAMIMI
19:32 ajeemaniz: wawa wawa
19:33 ajeemaniz: '3' are you busy
19:40 Kawawa: i'm so sleepy
19:40 ajeemaniz: go sleep
19:40 ajeemaniz: w
19:40 Kawawa: okay
19:40 Kawawa: so what's up
19:40 Kawawa: dude
19:40 *ajeemaniz is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1183585 xi - Grand Chariot [Another]]
19:45 Kawawa: hey
19:45 Kawawa: bg is not good to me
19:45 Kawawa: this girl
19:45 Kawawa: hahaha
19:45 ajeemaniz: =A=
19:45 ajeemaniz: western style face
19:45 Kawawa: yes.
19:45 ajeemaniz: can't find cute gurl bg
19:45 Kawawa: you like it?
19:46 ajeemaniz: i think its fit
19:46 ajeemaniz: space gurl
19:46 Kawawa: depend on
19:46 Kawawa: but no cute
19:46 Kawawa: loli is okay
19:46 ajeemaniz: but xi
19:46 Kawawa: anyway move on 
19:46 *Kawawa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1184055 xi - Grand Chariot [Beginner]]
19:46 ajeemaniz: not nanahira
19:46 ajeemaniz: okee
19:47 Kawawa: 00:10:579 (10579|1) - what do you think? make it LN like standard diff.
19:47 ajeemaniz: [http://konachan.com/post/show/227728/cangkong-headphones-loli-long_hair-pink_eyes-pink_ this one is cute]
19:47 ajeemaniz: done
19:47 Kawawa: I can't see the link
19:47 Kawawa: .png
19:47 Kawawa: https://puu.sh/auJOgs/5869710e1b.png
19:48 Kawawa: because of this
19:48 Kawawa: blocked
19:48 ajeemaniz: lmao
19:48 ajeemaniz: ya konachan is blocked in here as well
19:48 ajeemaniz: im using vpn
19:48 Kawawa: can you puush
19:48 ajeemaniz: https://puu.sh/uJOjQ/e28bbe0c48.jpg
19:49 Kawawa: 00:26:914 (26914|1) - I think It should be ended here 00:26:914 (26914|1) -  // And 00:27:700 - Add a LN here till  00:28:014 - 
19:49 ajeemaniz: or this https://puu.sh/uJOlG/4ba168a587.jpg
19:49 Kawawa: this is better rhythm than bundle expression.
19:49 Kawawa: oh.
19:49 ajeemaniz: done
19:49 Kawawa: both are fine I mean image.
19:50 Kawawa: good.
19:52 ajeemaniz: >A< i prefer the current bg somehow
19:52 ajeemaniz: the face looking at the viewer
19:52 Kawawa: okay good rhythm. this diff.
19:52 *Kawawa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1183755 xi - Grand Chariot [Standard]]
19:53 Kawawa: 00:01:469 - why you not used this rhythm?
19:53 ajeemaniz: my friend said, eye talks better than lips.. so the current bg could be a good bait for players to remember this map
19:53 Kawawa: 00:01:469 - all difficulties are started from.
19:53 Kawawa: at least you can put LN here 
19:53 ajeemaniz: oh added
19:53 ajeemaniz: my bad lol
19:53 Kawawa: like beginner diff
19:53 Kawawa: yeah.
19:54 Kawawa: 00:02:726 - same too
19:54 Kawawa: for consitency your diff
19:54 ajeemaniz: 00:02:726 - added
19:54 ajeemaniz: oh
19:54 ajeemaniz: xD
19:56 Kawawa: 01:54:558 - 01:54:715 - add some notes?
19:57 Kawawa: because beginner used this section
19:57 Kawawa: can consider it once again.
19:57 ajeemaniz: added
19:57 *Kawawa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1183754 xi - Grand Chariot [Hyper]]
19:58 ajeemaniz: 00:21:653 (21653|3,21731|2,21810|1) - removing these to make it consistent with another & grand crown btw
19:58 Kawawa: ok
20:00 Kawawa: 00:56:443 - ~ 00:57:071 - add some notes
20:00 Kawawa: consider it.  you used some drum here in standard diff.
20:01 ajeemaniz: added
20:01 Kawawa: 01:33:511 - ~01:34:454 -  can consider it too.
20:01 Kawawa: same reason with above.
20:02 ajeemaniz: 01:03:197 (63197|0,63276|1) - im rearranging this first, feels odd somehow
20:02 Kawawa: okay.
20:03 Kawawa: 01:48:433 - is that intention you used 1 note only here? // seems same section with  01:45:920 -  01:47:176 - 
20:03 ajeemaniz: added
20:03 ajeemaniz: woops added
20:04 *Kawawa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1183585 xi - Grand Chariot [Another]]
20:05 ajeemaniz: 00:33:825 (33825|0) - moving this to 4 for different pr
20:05 ajeemaniz: lel
20:05 Kawawa: 00:09:794 -  make it 2note here? this section is same with 00:10:422 - 
20:05 ajeemaniz: sure
20:06 Kawawa: 00:27:778 (27778|2) - is intention?
20:06 ajeemaniz: ya, there's a 1/4 right?
20:06 ajeemaniz: 00:24:401 (24401|3,25030|3) - moved these to 2 btw, feels too biased in right hand
20:07 Kawawa: yeah.
20:08 Kawawa: 00:42:778 (42778|1,42857|2) -  // 00:47:883 (47883|2,47883|3,47962|0) - 
20:08 Kawawa: you can compare this two part.
20:08 Kawawa: I mean 00:42:778 (42778|1,42857|2,42935|0) - 
20:08 Kawawa: 00:47:883 (47883|3,47883|2,47962|0) - 
20:09 ajeemaniz: yeah it was intended to be different
20:09 Kawawa: oh.
20:09 Kawawa: I see.
20:09 Kawawa: gj.
20:09 Kawawa: 00:54:323 - add a note. hyper diff used.
20:11 ajeemaniz: added. also at 00:56:600 - i added note here to emphasize the skipped 1/8 burst
20:11 Kawawa: okay
20:11 *Kawawa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1183584 xi - Grand Chariot [Grand Crown]]
20:11 ajeemaniz: wee
20:12 Kawawa: 00:03:982 - ~ 00:04:140 - wanna ignore 1/8 drum?
20:12 Kawawa: because this one is last diff
20:12 ajeemaniz: finally someone asked to map that 1/8
20:13 ajeemaniz: lol
20:13 Kawawa: lol
20:14 ajeemaniz: added similar 1/8 at 00:06:496 (6496|3) -
20:14 Kawawa: btw It seems missed a hitsound "W"
20:14 Kawawa: 00:26:757 - 
20:14 Kawawa: at here.
20:14 Kawawa: oh.
20:14 Kawawa: no.
20:14 ajeemaniz: done
20:15 Kawawa: "W" was main melody.
20:15 Kawawa: I misunderstood that was a kick drum
20:15 Kawawa: so nvm now.
20:15 Kawawa: don't add.
20:15 ajeemaniz: add or skip works xP
20:16 ajeemaniz: but ya i don't really want to put any kicks in this part
20:16 Kawawa: 00:40:422 - ~~ 00:40:579 - 1/8
20:16 Kawawa: up to you
20:17 ajeemaniz: added
20:19 Kawawa: 01:27:032 - hope add a 1/8 here
20:20 Kawawa: like? https://puu.sh/uJQ1B/dbab49ac14.jpg
20:22 ajeemaniz: im dead
20:22 ajeemaniz: www
20:22 Kawawa: dc?
20:23 ajeemaniz: test
20:23 ajeemaniz: no
20:23 ajeemaniz: the burst
20:24 Kawawa: 01:44:349 -  feedback :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7570235
20:26 ajeemaniz: ok added, but sightly more different
20:26 Kawawa: okay that's all.
20:28 Kawawa: update 
20:28 Kawawa: I will post rn
20:28 ajeemaniz: oh
20:28 ajeemaniz: wait
20:30 ajeemaniz: applied suggestion at 01:44:506
20:30 ajeemaniz: but with no triplets since its gonna be too overkill x-x
20:30 Kawawa: it's okay
20:30 Kawawa: anything fine.
Confirmed. And Gratz! :)
Arzenvald
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Arzenvald
bubbla!!
ok hype, thanks wawa <3
Sandalphon
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Sandalphon
The BG scares me
Arzenvald
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Arzenvald

YaHao wrote:

The BG scares me
nuke

edit: gdi nuked
Sandalphon
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Sandalphon
Actually catch me if you see me online, want to do irc instead of thread mod xp
Sandalphon
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Sandalphon
USAUSAMIMI
2017-03-27 18:33 YaHao: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1184055 xi - Grand Chariot]
2017-03-27 18:34 ajeemaniz: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1183584 xi - Grand Chariot [Grand Crown]]
2017-03-27 18:34 ajeemaniz: caught any error in general stuff?
2017-03-27 18:34 YaHao: checking
2017-03-27 18:35 YaHao: nope
2017-03-27 18:36 ajeemaniz: 1920x1080 hype
2017-03-27 18:36 YaHao: hype
2017-03-27 18:36 ajeemaniz: anything else?
2017-03-27 18:36 YaHao: nah, checking pattern now
2017-03-27 18:37 ajeemaniz: even i'v done many rechecks, i always nervous with DQ
2017-03-27 18:37 YaHao: chill
2017-03-27 18:37 ajeemaniz: uwu!
2017-03-27 18:38 YaHao: 00:09:951 (9951|2,10187|2,10579|1) - want to swap the col so the 1/2 jack can place on diff hand with 00:09:323 (9323|3,9558|3) - 
2017-03-27 18:38 YaHao: a little bit of contrast
2017-03-27 18:38 ajeemaniz: which diff
2017-03-27 18:39 YaHao: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1184055 xi - Grand Chariot [Beginner]]
2017-03-27 18:39 ajeemaniz: done
2017-03-27 18:42 YaHao: ok next diff
2017-03-27 18:42 YaHao: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1183755 xi - Grand Chariot [Standard]]
2017-03-27 18:44 YaHao: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7669095
2017-03-27 18:44 YaHao: 00:41:365 - 
2017-03-27 18:44 YaHao: how that look to you
2017-03-27 18:44 YaHao: easier to notice the different snap between
2017-03-27 18:45 ajeemaniz: nice
2017-03-27 18:45 ajeemaniz: nice
2017-03-27 18:45 YaHao: k
2017-03-27 18:46 YaHao: 00:53:302 (53302|0) - isnt this finish at 00:53:930 - 
2017-03-27 18:46 YaHao: i can hear a new long sound here00:53:930 - 
2017-03-27 18:46 ajeemaniz: should i short every ln on every diff
2017-03-27 18:47 ajeemaniz: *shorten
2017-03-27 18:47 YaHao: yea
2017-03-27 18:48 YaHao: 01:23:302 - not going to add note for main sound like you did 01:22:045 - 01:20:789 - ?
2017-03-27 18:49 ajeemaniz: my bad
2017-03-27 18:51 YaHao: next diff
2017-03-27 18:52 YaHao: btw, isnt that weird to use Beginner and Standard as diff name?
2017-03-27 18:52 YaHao: since the source is IIDX
2017-03-27 18:52 ajeemaniz: btw fixed the LN in all diffs
2017-03-27 18:52 YaHao: k cool
2017-03-27 18:52 ajeemaniz: hmm?
2017-03-27 18:52 ajeemaniz: should i rename?
2017-03-27 18:52 ajeemaniz: i following bms stuff
2017-03-27 18:53 YaHao: Beginner Normal Hyper Another
2017-03-27 18:53 ajeemaniz: so just rename standard to normal
2017-03-27 18:53 YaHao: but beginner with N icon and normal with H icon will be weird
2017-03-27 18:53 YaHao: hmmmmm
2017-03-27 18:53 ajeemaniz: don't follow web icon
2017-03-27 18:53 ajeemaniz: but again
2017-03-27 18:54 ajeemaniz: to avoid confusing better just to use standard
2017-03-27 18:54 YaHao: up to you, both fine, as long as it repersent the diffculty
2017-03-27 18:54 YaHao: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1183754 xi - Grand Chariot [Hyper]]
2017-03-27 18:54 YaHao: move on
2017-03-27 18:54 ajeemaniz: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1183754 xi - Grand Chariot [Hyper]]
2017-03-27 18:59 YaHao: man i cant find anything
2017-03-27 18:59 YaHao: on this diff
2017-03-27 19:00 ajeemaniz: u know hyper is heavily inspired from meow's diff on your rche
2017-03-27 19:00 YaHao: idk even how what he mapped on my map
2017-03-27 19:00 YaHao: lmao
2017-03-27 19:00 YaHao: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1183585 xi - Grand Chariot [Another]]
2017-03-27 19:03 YaHao: 00:09:323 (9323|1,9323|0,9558|2,9558|3) - not gonna jack them like you did to other diff?
2017-03-27 19:03 YaHao: 00:09:951 (9951|0,9951|2,10187|3,10187|1) - 
2017-03-27 19:04 ajeemaniz: hmmmmmm
2017-03-27 19:04 ajeemaniz: was thinking to do that
2017-03-27 19:05 ajeemaniz: ok jacked
2017-03-27 19:06 YaHao: 00:20:553 - hmmmm
2017-03-27 19:06 ajeemaniz: 00:20:946 (20946|0) - add one
2017-03-27 19:07 YaHao: why not delete that so make the 1/4 stair start at 00:20:632 - , like you can hear the main pitch change 
2017-03-27 19:07 YaHao: 00:20:553 (20553|0) - this i mean
2017-03-27 19:08 ajeemaniz: hmm?
2017-03-27 19:08 ajeemaniz: ok removed, was about to mimick how you stream on dignity
2017-03-27 19:08 ajeemaniz: lel
2017-03-27 19:10 YaHao: 00:23:694 - catchy piano
2017-03-27 19:10 ajeemaniz: 00:20:946 (20946|1) - btw made this double to follow the 1/8, is that ok?
2017-03-27 19:10 YaHao: yup
2017-03-27 19:11 YaHao: like instead of adding real 1/8 note, adding some 1/1 double to build up the intensity as the snap change to 1/8 is a good choice
2017-03-27 19:12 ajeemaniz: 00:32:569 (32569|0) - also i sightly change the jack arrangement, it doesn't feels fit
2017-03-27 19:12 YaHao: isnt this 00:34:061 (34061|0,34061|2,34140|1) - same as 00:23:930 (23930|2,24009|1,24009|3,24087|0) - 
2017-03-27 19:13 YaHao: yea thats cool
2017-03-27 19:13 ajeemaniz: yea
2017-03-27 19:13 ajeemaniz: i made it sightly different in both part
2017-03-27 19:13 ajeemaniz: it was intended
2017-03-27 19:16 YaHao: 01:17:490 - 01:17:962 - missing note for kick, intended?
2017-03-27 19:16 YaHao: for main sound as well
2017-03-27 19:17 ajeemaniz: it was from previous mods
2017-03-27 19:17 ajeemaniz: the pseudo quads feels 'too hard' he said
2017-03-27 19:17 ajeemaniz: for another
2017-03-27 19:17 ajeemaniz: but adding it again anywayssince i think its not that too hard lol
2017-03-27 19:18 YaHao: shhhhhhhhhhhhh
2017-03-27 19:18 YaHao: dont let wawa know
2017-03-27 19:19 ajeemaniz: hee
2017-03-27 19:19 ajeemaniz: LOL
2017-03-27 19:19 YaHao: 01:26:757 (86757|1,86836|0,86993|1,87032|0,87229|1,87307|0) - this pattern gay
2017-03-27 19:19 YaHao: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7669224
2017-03-27 19:19 YaHao: maybe try this 
2017-03-27 19:21 ajeemaniz: ok sightly different but i got the idea
2017-03-27 19:22 YaHao: yea, as long as its not too much stair
2017-03-27 19:25 ajeemaniz: dc
2017-03-27 19:25 YaHao: 01:50:946 (110946|2) - this to 1st col? otherwise 01:50:789 (110789|2,110946|2,111103|2,111260|2) - 
2017-03-27 19:26 ajeemaniz: hoo
2017-03-27 19:26 ajeemaniz: anchor
2017-03-27 19:26 ajeemaniz: ok
2017-03-27 19:26 ajeemaniz: wasn't aware the anchor since it feels so 'climax' towards the end
2017-03-27 19:26 YaHao: kek
2017-03-27 19:26 YaHao: ok last diff
2017-03-27 19:26 ajeemaniz: moved anyway
2017-03-27 19:27 ajeemaniz: sightly different but i got the idea
2017-03-27 19:28 YaHao: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1183584 xi - Grand Chariot [Grand Crown]]
2017-03-27 19:30 YaHao: 00:19:061 - will say reduce one note here, leave the triple for the cymbal here 00:19:375 - 
2017-03-27 19:30 ajeemaniz: ok
2017-03-27 19:32 YaHao: 00:27:700 (27700|2,27778|2) - to 2nd col maybe, because most of the previous notes are on the 3 4 col
2017-03-27 19:32 YaHao: 00:26:600 (26600|3,26757|3,26914|3,27071|2,27229|3,27386|2,27543|3,27700|2,27778|2,27857|3) - 
2017-03-27 19:35 ajeemaniz: ok
2017-03-27 19:35 YaHao: 00:34:454 (34454|1,34454|0,34611|3) - CTRL+H this? you get the idea
2017-03-27 19:36 YaHao: 00:46:234 (46234|1,46391|1,46548|1,46705|1,46862|1,47019|1) - 
2017-03-27 19:36 ajeemaniz: 00:34:061 (34061|2,34061|3,34297|2,34297|1,34454|0,34454|1) - well i actually wants to make these double descending from right to left
2017-03-27 19:37 YaHao: thats fine
2017-03-27 19:37 ajeemaniz: ok done with 00:46:234 (46234|1) -
2017-03-27 19:38 ajeemaniz: 01:38:066 (98066|1,98145|2,98223|0,98223|1,98380|2,98380|1,98537|2) - btw i ctrl+H this to make the LN different
2017-03-27 19:39 YaHao: have check there yet lol
2017-03-27 19:41 YaHao: 01:19:375 - 
2017-03-27 19:41 YaHao: like i mention in hype
2017-03-27 19:41 YaHao: hyper
2017-03-27 19:42 ajeemaniz: which?
2017-03-27 19:42 YaHao: reduce one note
2017-03-27 19:42 YaHao: use triple for cymbal here 01:19:689 - 
2017-03-27 19:42 ajeemaniz: oh
2017-03-27 19:42 YaHao: to show the difference
2017-03-27 19:42 ajeemaniz: ohhhh
2017-03-27 19:43 ajeemaniz: you didn't mod anything in hyper lmao
2017-03-27 19:43 ajeemaniz: yeah reduced
2017-03-27 19:43 YaHao: oh
2017-03-27 19:43 YaHao: another
2017-03-27 19:43 YaHao: my bad
2017-03-27 19:44 YaHao: 01:36:260 (96260|0,96338|0) - 01:40:030 (100030|0,100030|1,100108|0) - 
2017-03-27 19:44 YaHao: smh dont think they should be jacked
2017-03-27 19:45 YaHao: shouldnt
2017-03-27 19:45 YaHao: cant hear same pitch main sound
2017-03-27 19:45 ajeemaniz: ok
2017-03-27 19:46 ajeemaniz: 01:36:024 - made the jack in this one instead
2017-03-27 19:47 YaHao: \01:40:030 (100030|0,100030|1,100108|0) - 
2017-03-27 19:47 ajeemaniz: 01:50:318 - added some more audible 1/4
2017-03-27 19:47 YaHao: 01:43:956 - 
2017-03-27 19:47 YaHao: slowdown lol
2017-03-27 19:48 ajeemaniz: gg
2017-03-27 19:48 ajeemaniz: what about 1:40?
2017-03-27 19:49 YaHao:  https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7669355
2017-03-27 19:49 ajeemaniz: 1 hand jack is bae
2017-03-27 19:50 ajeemaniz: i will get miss in that LOL, applied btw
2017-03-27 19:50 YaHao: beside the last jack, the current pattern not really balanced
2017-03-27 19:51 YaHao: 01:50:318 - to 23, 01:50:789 - to 13. Because the 1and 4 col are really heavy
2017-03-27 19:52 ajeemaniz: the jack?
2017-03-27 19:52 ajeemaniz: also the 1&4th column are intentionally anchored
2017-03-27 19:52 YaHao: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7669385
2017-03-27 19:52 ajeemaniz: for the last pattern
2017-03-27 19:53 YaHao: ok fair enough
2017-03-27 19:56 YaHao: ok all good
2017-03-27 19:56 ajeemaniz: update again?
2017-03-27 19:56 ajeemaniz: i should get rest soon, start cold sweating again
2017-03-27 19:56 YaHao: update

Here is your heart <3
Arzenvald
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sy is dangerous

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ajeemaniz wrote:

sy is dangerous

grats usagi
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Todestrieb
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The Kiai on the Grand Crown difficulty feels inconsistant. For example, at 01:34:846 -, there isn't any note but the sound is audible at 25% rate. Same for 01:39:873 - (you did put one at 01:41:129 (101129|0) - tho, and It's exactly the same thing). I also don't understand why the section starting at 01:41:051 - should have 4 mini-jacks, It's exactly the same as the first section of the kiai. Also, watch out for anchors here, here and here. I understand why you put a long trill in the middle section after the little break, but these don't follow anything in particular.
Arzenvald
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Todestrieb wrote:

The Kiai on the Grand Crown difficulty feels inconsistant. For example, at 01:34:846 -, there isn't any note but the sound is audible at 25% rate. Same for 01:39:873 - (you did put one at 01:41:129 (101129|0) - tho, and It's exactly the same thing).

I also don't understand why the section starting at 01:41:051 - should have 4 mini-jacks, It's exactly the same as the first section of the kiai.

Also, watch out for anchors here, here and here.

I understand why you put a long trill in the middle section after the little break, but these don't follow anything in particular.
wee feedback <3 thanks

- although there's audible stuff and so on, the way i map this initially follows how the rhythm made in the IIDX chart and mix it, the spacing was intended and i made it in the first measure and the next 4th measure in the kiai to create a break between the first 4 measure and the next one.. stanza thing..

- the 4 jacks made as marking for transitioning to the next part tho, building up and making it harder towards that part, basically to heaten up stuff before the next jump and hand stream
but if the solution is to make everything has 4 jacks like this, that doesn't sounds bad tho, though i prefer my current build-up design instead

- the anchor are fine as i put them for hand strain, yes im that evil so sorry not that sorry, but basically it layers most of the kick sound like how you see the anchors in IIDX charts, and i love the anchor in the last part as the addition for the climax

- trills, would've made it 2 3 1 4 2 3 1 4 like in the IIDX but its 4K most Insane diff, and trill doesn't that hurt in 191 bpm so ye

any further discussion is still open.
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Where is my LN galore? D:<

in Standard diff, - 01:09:637 (69637|3,70265|2,70893|1,71522|0) - I think from those 4 LN these 2 LN 01:10:265 (70265|2,71522|0) - can be removed, the sounds you followed there is not too audible to map in this diff, also I see that in Hyper diff you completely ignore this sound which will be contradicting the diff spread

as for Beginner diff, I think this note 00:20:003 (20003|2) - should be removed, I don't hear something significant aside from the 1/2 kick that were started here 00:19:375 (19375|0) -
maybe you're simplifying it to 2/1 there, but still I think it is inappropriate

still in Beginner diff, 00:24:401 (24401|1,25501|0) - and 00:27:700 (27700|0,28171|2) - I think both of them should share the same LN pattern as they both have that 1/2 gap actually
Arzenvald
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Aras25 wrote:

Where is my LN galore? D:<

in Standard diff, - 01:09:637 (69637|3,70265|2,70893|1,71522|0) - I think from those 4 LN these 2 LN 01:10:265 (70265|2,71522|0) - can be removed, the sounds you followed there is not too audible to map in this diff, also I see that in Hyper diff you completely ignore this sound which will be contradicting the diff spread

as for Beginner diff, I think this note 00:20:003 (20003|2) - should be removed, I don't hear something significant aside from the 1/2 kick that were started here 00:19:375 (19375|0) -
maybe you're simplifying it to 2/1 there, but still I think it is inappropriate

still in Beginner diff, 00:24:401 (24401|1,25501|0) - and 00:27:700 (27700|0,28171|2) - I think both of them should share the same LN pattern as they both have that 1/2 gap actually
- it doesn't make sense to justify removing these notes just because the other difficulty has different pattern, plus the cue sound is there
- it doesn't make sense as well to put long 1/2 kicks on beginner. the spacing & LN made as i designed this 'Beginner' chart for 'Beginner friendly' while maintaining it to be reasonable as possible.
- if possible i'd rather variate a thing rather than repeat it twice, + i aware about this already, that the time reaction of release-push in the 2nd LN would be harder because its shorter.

i appreciate the feedback, but btw the way you said 'inappropriate' does stand nothing but biased personal opinion that doesn't backed up by proper reasoning and against the current RC lol, no hard feeling taken but be careful we have modding CoC here. *wags*
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still better than that old bg

and hey, my samples
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Gratz :3
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ajeemaniz wrote:

- the anchor are fine as i put them for hand strain, yes im that evil so sorry not that sorry, but basically it layers most of the kick sound like how you see the anchors in IIDX charts, and i love the anchor in the last part as the addition for the climax
I still feel they aren't placed coherently.
-In this first case, 2nd and 3rd column are way, way more denser than the 1st and 2nd, without any kick sound and without following the pitch, It's just here for being here, without any reason explaining this placement with the music, and thus destroying the trill which is actually placed following the music.
-In this second case, if you wanted to follow the kick effectively, you should have started with the 4th column the white tick, and the overall flow of the pattern could still be improved without the (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7676995).
-And in the last big anchor at the end, It's also here for the purpose of putting an long anchor, the kick sounds stop earlier than the anchor and It's extended by both the kick and the stream (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7677008, kicks in blue), so there isn't any sound justifying this. I think you should put a stop to this one after the jumptrill, because It will be more pleasant to play, and will give a better feeling of the actual real kick accentuation. The density of the part is also enough to give a climatic effect, without resorting to this.
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Todestrieb wrote:

ajeemaniz wrote:

- the anchor are fine as i put them for hand strain, yes im that evil so sorry not that sorry, but basically it layers most of the kick sound like how you see the anchors in IIDX charts, and i love the anchor in the last part as the addition for the climax
I still feel they aren't placed coherently.
-In this first case, 2nd and 3rd column are way, way more denser than the 1st and 2nd, without any kick sound and without following the pitch, It's just here for being here, without any reason explaining this placement with the music, and thus destroying the trill which is actually placed following the music.
-In this second case, if you wanted to follow the kick effectively, you should have started with the 4th column the white tick, and the overall flow of the pattern could still be improved without the (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7676995).
-And in the last big anchor at the end, It's also here for the purpose of putting an long anchor, the kick sounds stop earlier than the anchor and It's extended by both the kick and the stream (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7677008, kicks in blue), so there isn't any sound justifying this. I think you should put a stop to this one after the jumptrill, because It will be more pleasant to play, and will give a better feeling of the actual real kick accentuation. The density of the part is also enough to give a climatic effect, without resorting to this.
- it would have been another mainstream stream with double kicks each 1/1 if i mapped as you pointed out but sorry i didn't fond with that mainstream mapping approach because its kind of lame.
and yes i intentionally didn't map the kicks for sake of emphasizing the synthesizers with doubles 01:19:689 (79689|0,79689|2,79925|3,79925|1,80160|3,80160|1,80396|0,80396|2,80632|1,80632|3,80789|2,80789|3) -
i could reduce the trills amount as solution of those minor trills at 2 & 3 without changing the rest of the structure

- could do that, but initially i put 00:19:375 (19375|2,19532|2,19689|1,19846|1,20003|0,20160|0,20318|3,20475|3) - as kicks unlike the other anchors, changing or not, either way this minor intro wouldn't that hurts

- i realized that tho, the initial pattern was like https://puu.sh/v1HTx/de1aa807a4.png but i didn't feel the climax is enough lol
i did intentionally move the anchors from 2nd col to 1st when people modded this long before nomination, moved this to reduce the 232323 trills in the 01:52:359 - hand part. i could revert the pattern as the solution

feels like 50:50 to agree or not to agree with the other points, at least could mostly agree with the last one
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Hello!

Disqualified on Mappers request.
It seems ajeemaniz did agree with some points Todestrieb did bring up.
Arzenvald
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what changed :
added 1 LN in all diffs to make it consistent before kiai lmao
fixed what tode's pointed out plus the jacks in kiai, it should be more spamable and hand balance wise while retaining the whole current difficulty structure
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lol, it's not my personal taste or opinion or what you name it
it is diff spread consistency, imagine, in the same time stamp but different diff, the easier diff had 1/4 pattern while the harder diff uses 1/2, that's just "eh?" of course this is just example
and also sorry for that "inappropriate" word uwu, I just don't know other way to express it
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4K should be ready again
added 7K lol
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Arzenvald
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YaHao wrote:

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w0w i just wanted to make a 7k mapset and this appeared
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AncuL wrote:

w0w i just wanted to make a 7k mapset and this appeared
you're late about 6 hours after dq
speedmapping gg
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cant speedmapping = ban xi -_--
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i see inb4 this qualify, and i now i see 7K mapset

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yo M4M

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

SPOILER
[7K Another]

00:18:119 (18119|4,18276|4) - think you shouldnt stack here. be consistent with - 00:17:490 (17490|5,17647|3) - 00:16:862 (16862|1,17019|3) -

00:51:260 - eee how about this

sounds the piano would be more intuititve if the double were splitted

00:56:757 (56757|0) - you forgot W i guess. see your "Glorious" diff

01:16:548 (76548|3,76783|3,76941|3,77098|3) - this anchor tho

01:24:873 (84873|2,84951|3,84951|5,85030|2) - somethings wrong here. the C should have the double too.

[7K Hyper]

00:41:993 (41993|0) - would probably move to 2 so it wont contradict with the low pitch piano - 00:42:307 (42307|0) -

00:47:176 (47176|6) - double here. just like you do at - 00:45:763 (45763|0,45763|3,45920|0,45920|3) - 00:46:391 (46391|1,46391|2,46548|1,46548|2) - since they're on the same piano pitches

00:50:160 (50160|3) - double? piano sounds quite louder

01:34:768 (94768|0,94768|2,95003|3,95003|1) - 01:36:024 (96024|4,96024|6,96260|3,96260|5) - should have been stacked. consistency with - 01:39:794 (99794|6,99794|4,100030|4,100030|6) - 01:41:051 (101051|3,101051|0,101286|3,101286|0) - for the same piano pitch

01:54:087 (114087|6) - move to 5? contracdicted with the high piano pitch above it

[7K standard]

00:45:763 (45763|1,45920|1,46077|0) - transition from midfing to pinky are quite odd imo. i would move this to the right one step. also reflect what you did at - 00:46:391 (46391|5,46548|5,46705|4) -

00:53:302 (53302|1) - move to 4? give some freedom of intuitive pattern. :u

[7K Beginner]

01:39:166 (99166|0,99480|0) - hmm i dont think i see the reason why is this stacked tho.

pro diffs. GL o/
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Rivals_7 wrote:

yo M4M

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

SPOILER
[7K Another]

00:18:119 (18119|4,18276|4) - think you shouldnt stack here. be consistent with - 00:17:490 (17490|5,17647|3) - 00:16:862 (16862|1,17019|3) -

00:51:260 - eee how about this

sounds the piano would be more intuititve if the double were splitted

00:56:757 (56757|0) - you forgot W i guess. see your "Glorious" diff

01:16:548 (76548|3,76783|3,76941|3,77098|3) - this anchor tho

01:24:873 (84873|2,84951|3,84951|5,85030|2) - somethings wrong here. the C should have the double too.

[7K Hyper]

00:41:993 (41993|0) - would probably move to 2 so it wont contradict with the low pitch piano - 00:42:307 (42307|0) -

00:47:176 (47176|6) - double here. just like you do at - 00:45:763 (45763|0,45763|3,45920|0,45920|3) - 00:46:391 (46391|1,46391|2,46548|1,46548|2) - since they're on the same piano pitches

00:50:160 (50160|3) - double? piano sounds quite louder

01:34:768 (94768|0,94768|2,95003|3,95003|1) - 01:36:024 (96024|4,96024|6,96260|3,96260|5) - should have been stacked. consistency with - 01:39:794 (99794|6,99794|4,100030|4,100030|6) - 01:41:051 (101051|3,101051|0,101286|3,101286|0) - for the same piano pitch

01:54:087 (114087|6) - move to 5? contracdicted with the high piano pitch above it

[7K standard]

00:45:763 (45763|1,45920|1,46077|0) - transition from midfing to pinky are quite odd imo. i would move this to the right one step. also reflect what you did at - 00:46:391 (46391|5,46548|5,46705|4) -

00:53:302 (53302|1) - move to 4? give some freedom of intuitive pattern. :u

[7K Beginner]

01:39:166 (99166|0,99480|0) - hmm i dont think i see the reason why is this stacked tho.

pro diffs. GL o/
gg all apply except 01:24:873 - gotta emphasize the synth with no snare there
thanks! wait for the m4m
MEGAtive
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xi - Grand Chariot

[7K Glorious Queen]
*ahem*ripping off Glorious Crown for diffname since this song's title is Grand Chariot aha I get it.
Mods
  1. 00:01:469 - Well this starts with pitch increasing, so why don't you try something like https://rhythmega.s-ul.eu/Svxx9va2 ? Your current pattern would make it feel it's increasing and then decreasing.
  2. 00:02:255 - Pitch wise I think https://rhythmega.s-ul.eu/GW72l2bn is better in covering the melody.
  3. 00:06:496 (6496|2,6535|3,6574|4,6613|5,6653|6,6653|0,6731|1) - Would executed better if Ctrl+H. Your current pattern makes it heavy on left hand.
  4. 00:26:443 - https://rhythmega.s-ul.eu/xSx8nfvf more comfy IMO.
  5. 00:41:208 - Don't you think this is a bit anticlimatic? Maybe triple here still fine. And Another is actually using Triple so why not
  6. 00:57:071 (57071|0,57071|1,57071|2,57229|2,57229|0,57386|2,57386|0,57543|3,57543|0,57543|2,57700|0,57700|1,57700|2,57857|0,57857|2,58014|2,58014|0,58171|0,58171|2,58249|3,58328|0) - Eh really? Maybe 00:57:543 (57543|3,57700|1) - better off in right column. God dem hammering ;w;
  7. 01:32:569 - Better off with https://rhythmega.s-ul.eu/gNKVL12S tho. Pitch are going down here so making it stair to the right just felt awkward. Also as an aftermath of this, 01:33:825 (93825|4) - Move to |6| to make pattern looks cleaner. (|7||3||6||2| broken stair thingy).
  8. TBH kiai felt fine but aren't consistent in structure so I think I should tweak this.
    1. I'm confused with 01:35:239 - 01:36:496 - compared with 01:37:752 - 01:39:009 - 01:40:265 - 01:41:522 - . The first two are using a succession of |14||25| etc., while the other's are using minijack.
      1. If I'm going to assume that it's for variety, then 01:40:265 - 01:41:522 - should be reverting to the same as 01:35:239 - 01:36:496 -
      2. Otherwise you can change 01:37:752 - 01:39:009 - to the same as 01:35:239 - 01:36:496 - so the minijack section starts at 01:40:265 -
        Though I prefer the first one but it's up to you.
    2. Now let's talk about 01:35:003 - 01:40:030 - compared with 01:36:260 - 01:37:516 - 01:38:773 - and also compared with 01:41:286 - . The first two are having the notes minijack'd, while the second three are in |14||25| succession (IDK what to call this tho. I'd say gallop or ministair but it just doesn't fall right to the term lel.) and the third one is only having one note jack'd. Actually my suggestion would revolve on something like "2 instance, change pattern execution" but it's up to you though. Like 01:36:260 - minijack, 01:41:286 - both notes minijack'd. Yea something like that.
Actually if this mod sounds weird, don't mind me since I took two different days to mod this lol.

[7K Another]
Mods
  1. 00:19:061 (19061|5,19061|3,19218|5,19218|1) - Ctrl+H so the pattern is actually balanced. Also pattern became more interesting lel
  2. 00:20:946 - Actually I kinda against simplification of 1/8 using 1/4 here since it would be misleading but w/e it's still UTY though.
  3. 00:40:972 (40972|3,41208|2) - Ctrl+J? So 00:40:736 - 00:41:365 - would get same treatment of being hammered.
  4. 00:42:150 - Well you can map the piano here. It's not that hurt right?
  5. 01:33:511 (93511|2,93668|4,93825|3,93982|5) - You can move these to the right once to make 01:33:197 - left hand less cluttered.

Segini dulu dah. Ntar dilanjut lagi.
Arzenvald
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MEGAtive wrote:

xi - Grand Chariot

[7K Glorious Queen]
*ahem*ripping off Glorious Crown for diffname since this song's title is Grand Chariot aha I get it. // ya

Mods
  1. 00:01:469 - Well this starts with pitch increasing, so why don't you try something like https://rhythmega.s-ul.eu/Svxx9va2 ? Your current pattern would make it feel it's increasing and then decreasing. // mm a little bit arranged
  2. 00:02:255 - Pitch wise I think https://rhythmega.s-ul.eu/GW72l2bn is better in covering the melody. // na, it looks like the next pattern
  3. 00:06:496 (6496|2,6535|3,6574|4,6613|5,6653|6,6653|0,6731|1) - Would executed better if Ctrl+H. Your current pattern makes it heavy on left hand.
  4. 00:26:443 - https://rhythmega.s-ul.eu/xSx8nfvf more comfy IMO. // i kept this to separate left & right hand
  5. 00:41:208 - Don't you think this is a bit anticlimatic? Maybe triple here still fine. And Another is actually using Triple so why not
  6. 00:57:071 (57071|0,57071|1,57071|2,57229|2,57229|0,57386|2,57386|0,57543|3,57543|0,57543|2,57700|0,57700|1,57700|2,57857|0,57857|2,58014|2,58014|0,58171|0,58171|2,58249|3,58328|0) - Eh really? Maybe 00:57:543 (57543|3,57700|1) - better off in right column. God dem hammering ;w; // im teh evil one
  7. 01:32:569 - Better off with https://rhythmega.s-ul.eu/gNKVL12S tho. Pitch are going down here so making it stair to the right just felt awkward. Also as an aftermath of this, 01:33:825 (93825|4) - Move to |6| to make pattern looks cleaner. (|7||3||6||2| broken stair thingy).
  8. TBH kiai felt fine but aren't consistent in structure so I think I should tweak this.
    1. I'm confused with 01:35:239 - 01:36:496 - compared with 01:37:752 - 01:39:009 - 01:40:265 - 01:41:522 - . The first two are using a succession of |14||25| etc., while the other's are using minijack.
      1. If I'm going to assume that it's for variety, then 01:40:265 - 01:41:522 - should be reverting to the same as 01:35:239 - 01:36:496 -
      2. Otherwise you can change 01:37:752 - 01:39:009 - to the same as 01:35:239 - 01:36:496 - so the minijack section starts at 01:40:265 -
        Though I prefer the first one but it's up to you.
    2. Now let's talk about 01:35:003 - 01:40:030 - compared with 01:36:260 - 01:37:516 - 01:38:773 - and also compared with 01:41:286 - . The first two are having the notes minijack'd, while the second three are in |14||25| succession (IDK what to call this tho. I'd say gallop or ministair but it just doesn't fall right to the term lel.) and the third one is only having one note jack'd. Actually my suggestion would revolve on something like "2 instance, change pattern execution" but it's up to you though. Like 01:36:260 - minijack, 01:41:286 - both notes minijack'd. Yea something like that.
Actually if this mod sounds weird, don't mind me since I took two different days to mod this lol.

// the way i vary the jackhammer placement is basically more of this reason :
jacks made as marking for transitioning to the next part, building up and making it harder towards the end.. basically to heaten up per each stanza, each part getting more jacks from first section to the next one, and they are more became harder too, from single hand jack to 2 hand jack, so instead of making every same sound jack'd, i made it sightly raising instead for, rather playing experience.. not so much into prprpr

another thing, unless its allowed to, its kind of contradict to put more jack as it raises the gap more from another to glorious queen

[7K Another]
Mods
  1. 00:19:061 (19061|5,19061|3,19218|5,19218|1) - Ctrl+H so the pattern is actually balanced. Also pattern became more interesting lel
  2. 00:20:946 - Actually I kinda against simplification of 1/8 using 1/4 here since it would be misleading but w/e it's still UTY though.
  3. 00:40:972 (40972|3,41208|2) - Ctrl+J? So 00:40:736 - 00:41:365 - would get same treatment of being hammered.
  4. 00:42:150 - Well you can map the piano here. It's not that hurt right?
  5. 01:33:511 (93511|2,93668|4,93825|3,93982|5) - You can move these to the right once to make 01:33:197 - left hand less cluttered.

Segini dulu dah. Ntar dilanjut lagi.
unreplied = done, thx mega <3
Arzenvald
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lets move this, removed std versi maksa why did i upload that anyway lmao
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ini map msih idup gk? mau mod gratis nih biar stay on the graveyard pit XD
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revived ; ;
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