1. Forgotten Shoujo (4.92 stars, 417 notes)
2. Fuujin Shoujo (4.81 stars, 382 notes)
3. Mystica's Kaze (4.43 stars, 343 notes)
4. Tori no Uta (2.46 stars, 182 notes)

mystica wrote:

嗯 大体的看了一下说几个问题好了._.嘛 just suggestion
slider最好消音..然后BPM是128.00不要用128.02
要是我的话KIAI用应该是在00：45：893的位置开始 当然你那地方可以二次kiai来瞎眼
如果不是做fullver就可以考虑把后面副歌切掉保证在4MIN或者一下最好嗯
Fuujin的00：58：079 这个snap变的感觉没有什么意义什么的.
bpm和offset应该没什么问题嗯
加油吧><
有可能我会蛋疼做个HARD不知道行不._.

mystica wrote:

done.
放到歌曲文件夹下面 然后timing里面勾上C1就好 具体可以看我GD的timing做法.
嘛 GD做的不是很好越做感觉越卧槽3分拍什么的最讨厌了哼.
我做了2MIN左右如果需要做完的话PM我我再去继续做嗯.
Good Luck~[attachment=0:c409d]Guest diff And Hitsound.rar[/attachment:c409d]

scarlethana wrote:

mystica wrote:

done.
放到歌曲文件夹下面 然后timing里面勾上C1就好 具体可以看我GD的timing做法.
嘛 GD做的不是很好越做感觉越卧槽3分拍什么的最讨厌了哼.
我做了2MIN左右如果需要做完的话PM我我再去继续做嗯.
Good Luck~[attachment=0:a7635]Guest diff And Hitsound.rar[/attachment:a7635]

辛苦了 其实看了这个我反而感到压力很大口牙
满满的全是正义绿线什么的真是最糟糕了

顺便更新了mp3文件 记得重新下一下
用cool edit干掉了2:14:492-3:59:492这整整1分45秒

以前的offset不太准了 先 + 60调调看 (有可能是用cool edit重新生成的mp3导致的)

mystica wrote:

OFFSET 你调完然后resnap all就可以了 还有提醒下最好不要乱改GD的里面各种 一般都是留给GD自己去改.
这样子容易引起人家反感什么的 当然我那个你改了无所谓嗯.....
越看做出来的东西越蛋疼

shabao_pig wrote:

Mystica's Kaze

2分14秒结束太突然了，可以往后做到2分50秒那里 好吧前面我不知道做多少就按照别的playtime做了2:14 现在做完了

00:06:583 (2,3,4) - 不建议这种排列…… fix 原本不是这种音效
00:44:083 (1,2) - 坑爹……spacing, 还有这一串音量太小了我 (2)消失了卧槽
00:59:552 (4) - 音量相比前面太小 这效果刚刚好 大了听起来难受
01:46:895 (3) - 这个奇怪的哨音哪来的…… 好吧 其实我没听见那声音

impossiblexu wrote:

~STAR~

Zelos wrote:

as requested :3

Your mp3 is 320 kpbs, which is not allowed.
I can re-encode it to 128 kpbs which follows the 192 kpbs rule.
If you want me to, forum pm or irc pm me.

I am a big spacing nazi. i can tell where something is intentional or not.

Tori no uta:

00:15:960 (1,2,3,4) - the spacing between 1 and 2 are different from the spacing between 3 and 4. fix that. fixed

00:19:710 (5) - suggestion: start a new combo here maybe? fixed

00:34:710 (1,2,3) - not quite sure if this is such a big deal but the spacing between notes 1 and 2 are different from 2 and 3. fixed

00:47:835 (1,2,3,4) - spacing changes. fix that. fixed

01:16:897 (3,1,2,3) - spacing changes among these(suggestion maybe) fix fixed

01:44:553 (1,2,3) - spacing changes among these. fix that. fixed

Mystica's kaze:

00:11:505 (1,2,3,4) - make this symmetrical. it would look nicer.

01:19:708 (7,8) - was this spacing un-avoidable? if it was then disreguard this. otherwise try to fix.

01:25:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - why i dont like this. the first 6 half notes are just as close together as the 3 slider whole notes spacing wise.

02:34:005 (4,5) - lower these down one square on the grid.

02:34:474 (6) - lower this down 2

02:45:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - spacing among these change pretty often.

Fuujin Shoujo:

00:23:460 (1,2,3,4) - this sounds like a rather wierd beat. maybe fix this? fixed

01:27:210 (1,1,1) - I SHOULD DEVOUR YOU FOR THIS! you cannot separate spinners an 1/8th apart. separate them at least 1/2 note apart. i don't think so and there're similar spinners in some ranked beatmaps

01:55:100 (2,3,4,5) - in my opinion, those kinda beats do not play well with this song. fixed

Forgotten Shoujo:

I saw no issues with this. nice job.

I see a lot of potential in this map.

You got my star.

Please kudosu this if you make use of this mod.

Qrool wrote:

I feel the best offset 982
good map! Star★

wmfchris wrote:

Air ?!?!

[Forgotten Shoujo]
0:18:303 (2) try x:389 y:304? fixed
0:23:928 (2) last slider fixed point adjust to x:328 y:168 fixed
0:26:272 (4,5) (4) up 1 grid, (5) right+up 1 grid fixed
0:27:913 (7,8) spacing fixed
0:38:225 (!,3) no need to 1/8? i'll ask be forgott for detail
1:06:819 (4,7) down 1 grid? fixed
1:23:225 (2) right 1 grid fixed
2:41:506 (4,5) right 1 grid fixed

[Fuujin]
0:26:506 (2) left 1 grid fixed
1:27:210 (s,s,s) I'm not sure but these spinners are too short. i think it's a bit short but still acceptable
1:36:350 (4,1) adjust the direction of slider so that it fits the stream spacing fixed
2:35:413 (2) x:268:y:296? fixed

nice song, star~

kino77 wrote:

Hi~

[General]
offset:980,长白线处是重音的说~

[Tori no Uta]
Combo - 因为是EASY的难度,所以combo尽量规律,一般为8拍一个new combo.
00:25:357 (3) ~ 00:41:763 (6) - 按照前面的(在第三跟白线处加whistle)下hitsound?其余部分在第二根白线和第四根白线处加clap?
00:45:982 ~ 01:14:107 - KIAI time?
01:45:982 ~ 02:14:575 - ^

[Mystica]
音效下的不错,就是整体音量偏大了点.
00:43:168 (1) - 太短了,用note代替?
01:24:886 - 加一个note?
01:30:042 - ^
02:24:300 - ^
02:31:800 - ^
02:39:300 - ^
00:45:982 ~ 01:14:107 - KIAI time?
01:45:982 ~ 02:14:575 - ^
Combo mod~

SPOILER

00:47:855 (7,1) - 交换new combo?
00:49:730 (6) - New combo?
00:53:480 (4) - ^
00:54:887 (1) - 去掉new combo?
00:55:355 (3) - New combo?
00:59:105 (3) - ^
01:02:855 (5) - ^
01:06:605 (5) - ^
01:10:355 (5) - ^
01:19:730 (7) - ^
01:27:230 (7) - ^
01:30:512 (1,2) - 交换new combo?
01:38:246 (1,2) - ^
01:42:230 (5,1) - ^
01:43:168 (7,1) - ^
01:53:480 (4) - New combo?
02:06:605 (3) - ^

[Fuujin Shoujo]
音量大了些,clap显得吵
New combo尽量设在长白线处
00:42:232 (1) - 在00:44:107这里结束?
02:17:388 - 加一个note?
02:47:857 (1) - 在02:49:732这里结束?
00:45:982 ~ 01:14:107 - KIAI time?
01:45:982 ~ 02:14:575 - ^

[Forgotten]
像00:29:575这样的空白处都可以填上,note的密度大些会增加图的可玩度.
适量添加hitsound.
02:44:575 - 加一个note?
02:45:044 - 加一个note?
02:45:278 (1) - 移至02:45:982?
02:45:513 - 加一个note?
00:45:982 ~ 01:14:107 - KIAI time?
01:45:982 ~ 02:14:575 - ^

STAR~!

Hijiri Tezuka wrote:

Orz I can't mod this! It's poerfect.

James2250 wrote:

Make sure the offset is the same on every difficulty then resnap all notes

Tori no Uta:
Looks good

Mystica's Kaze:
Odd to have very low hp and high OD and AR but ok? Maybe raise hp slightly and lower other ones Drain+1 OD&AR-1 fixed
00:07:777 (6,1) - switch new combo fixed
00:43:168 (1) - seeing as this is a "Hard" kind of short fixed
00:45:043 (9,1) - decrease jump slightly as its after a long slider? fixed
01:00:043 (8,1) - ^ fixed
01:44:105 (8,1) - ^ fixed

Fuujin Shoujo:
Beginning could use slightly more hitsounds fixed
01:27:232 (1,1,1) - kind of mean don't know how to fix >.>
02:01:919 (5) - sliders like this that are silenced around the map sound odd, they don't need it? fixed
02:38:950 (2,3) - slight spacing error? fixed

Forgotten Shoujo:
Add hitsounds
01:31:897 (4) - hidden repeat, move it somehow fixed

Nicely done
*star*

kino77 wrote:

[Mystica]
音效下的不错,就是整体音量偏大了点. 咦很大么 我觉得还好 实在不行会选择降低的
00:43:168 (1) - 太短了,用note代替? 觉得note不是很舒服 但是已经被改了就无所谓了
01:24:886 - 加一个note? 绝对这样比较好 sorry
01:30:042 - ^
02:24:300 - ^
02:31:800 - ^
02:39:300 - ^
00:45:982 ~ 01:14:107 - KIAI time? 咦有KIAItime么 有的话就加上好了
01:45:982 ~ 02:14:575 - ^
Combo mod~

SPOILER

00:47:855 (7,1) - 交换new combo?
00:49:730 (6) - New combo?
00:53:480 (4) - ^
00:54:887 (1) - 去掉new combo?
00:55:355 (3) - New combo?
00:59:105 (3) - ^
01:02:855 (5) - ^
01:06:605 (5) - ^
01:10:355 (5) - ^
01:19:730 (7) - ^
01:27:230 (7) - ^
01:30:512 (1,2) - 交换new combo?
01:38:246 (1,2) - ^
01:42:230 (5,1) - ^
01:43:168 (7,1) - ^
01:53:480 (4) - New combo?
02:06:605 (3) - ^
fix some parts

James2250 wrote:

Mystica's Kaze:
Odd to have very low hp and high OD and AR but ok? Maybe raise hp slightly and lower other ones Yeah.scarlethana has fixed it.
00:07:777 (6,1) - switch new combo ^
00:43:168 (1) - seeing as this is a "Hard" kind of short finally use a note
00:45:043 (9,1) - decrease jump slightly as its after a long slider? uh......according to the distance snap.It's Ok.But for the difficult,I will think about it.
01:00:043 (8,1) - ^ ^
01:44:105 (8,1) - ^^

Zelos wrote:

as requested :3


Mystica's kaze:

00:11:505 (1,2,3,4) - make this symmetrical. it would look nicer. yeah.

01:19:708 (7,8) - was this spacing un-avoidable? if it was then disreguard this. otherwise try to fix. As a matter of fact,This part use the 0.5X,so It's may no problem.I will ask others about this.

01:25:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - why i dont like this. the first 6 half notes are just as close together as the 3 slider whole notes spacing wise. uh.......I think it's ok. Sorry

02:34:005 (4,5) - lower these down one square on the grid. It's a part of diff.Sorry

02:34:474 (6) - lower this down 2 fixed

02:45:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - spacing among these change pretty often. Yeah.Fixed

mystica wrote:

kino77 wrote:

[Mystica]
音效下的不错,就是整体音量偏大了点. 咦很大么 我觉得还好 实在不行会选择降低的
00:43:168 (1) - 太短了,用note代替? 觉得note不是很舒服 但是已经被改了就无所谓了
01:24:886 - 加一个note? 绝对这样比较好 sorry
01:30:042 - ^
02:24:300 - ^
02:31:800 - ^
02:39:300 - ^
00:45:982 ~ 01:14:107 - KIAI time? 咦有KIAItime么 有的话就加上好了
01:45:982 ~ 02:14:575 - ^
Combo mod~

SPOILER

00:47:855 (7,1) - 交换new combo?
00:49:730 (6) - New combo?
00:53:480 (4) - ^
00:54:887 (1) - 去掉new combo?
00:55:355 (3) - New combo?
00:59:105 (3) - ^
01:02:855 (5) - ^
01:06:605 (5) - ^
01:10:355 (5) - ^
01:19:730 (7) - ^
01:27:230 (7) - ^
01:30:512 (1,2) - 交换new combo?
01:38:246 (1,2) - ^
01:42:230 (5,1) - ^
01:43:168 (7,1) - ^
01:53:480 (4) - New combo?
02:06:605 (3) - ^
fix some parts

James2250 wrote:

Mystica's Kaze:
Odd to have very low hp and high OD and AR but ok? Maybe raise hp slightly and lower other ones Yeah.scarlethana has fixed it.
00:07:777 (6,1) - switch new combo ^
00:43:168 (1) - seeing as this is a "Hard" kind of short finally use a note
00:45:043 (9,1) - decrease jump slightly as its after a long slider? uh......according to the distance snap.It's Ok.But for the difficult,I will think about it.
01:00:043 (8,1) - ^ ^
01:44:105 (8,1) - ^^

Zelos wrote:

as requested :3


Mystica's kaze:

00:11:505 (1,2,3,4) - make this symmetrical. it would look nicer. yeah.

01:19:708 (7,8) - was this spacing un-avoidable? if it was then disreguard this. otherwise try to fix. As a matter of fact,This part use the 0.5X,so It's may no problem.I will ask others about this.

01:25:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - why i dont like this. the first 6 half notes are just as close together as the 3 slider whole notes spacing wise. uh.......I think it's ok. Sorry

02:34:005 (4,5) - lower these down one square on the grid. It's a part of diff.Sorry

02:34:474 (6) - lower this down 2 fixed

02:45:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - spacing among these change pretty often. Yeah.Fixed

karenying wrote:

Tori no Uta
如果是Easy,AR-1 fixed
這圖又有用了...
00:13:169(1) - 從00:12:232開始較好 fixed
00:15:982(1) - 加 finish,不要C1,音量約50~60% fixed
00:53:482(1) - 換成finish,不要C1,音量約50~60% fixed
01:03:325(6) - New combo fixed
01:06:607(5) - 加 finish,不要C1,音量約50~60% fixed
01:08:013(1) - ^ fixed
01:30:982(1) - 換成finish,不要C1,音量約60~70% fixed
01:44:107(7,1) - ^ fixed

Mystica's Kaze
不錯,可是finish(hitsound)太少 參巧上面的?
01:14:303 - 沒用的break,刪掉 fixed

kiddly wrote:

[General]
所有diff的offset统一在996ms. fixed

[Tori no Uta]
clap下在1/3拍不好听.请下在2/4拍. fixed

[Mystica's Kaze]
clap下的仍然不对.

00:45:043 (9) - 为什么在1/8拍处结束?拉这种slider的时候把时间轴倍率放大看清楚比较不容易出错. fixed
01:00:043 (5) - ^ fixed
01:44:105 (8) - 在蓝线上结束听上去不是很好. fixed
02:36:957 (4) - 往后放1/4拍. fixed

[Fuujin Shoujo]
00:15:982 (1) - 这个3连没什么意义. fixed
00:18:325 (2) - 这一段的几个clap都没有必要.一直到00:45:982下clap才比较好. fixed
还有就是clap的问题.所有diff都有这问题,其实我建议你直接重新下音效. all fixed
02:16:567 (2) - 删掉这个. fixed

[Forgotten Shoujo]
AR8真的很有必要吗,这歌只有128BPM.
00:59:085 (1) - 从这个地方开始clap错位了,下clap的时候一定要注意背景音的clap. fixed

kanpakyin wrote:

Mod..
---------------------------------
藍色=意見而已
紅色=我覺得你要修改這項
---------------------------------
General
到audio裏set下Lead-in

[Tori no Uta]
00:42:246(x)把轉盤完結移到00:44:121 fixed
01:00:527(2)這類的slider顯得太僵,把圖的美觀性拉低,把它換回Bezier fixed
01:01:993(4)^ fixed
01:03:339(1)^ fixed
01:04:746(3)^ fixed
01:18:339(2.3)間距 fixed
01:42:246(7)太多反覆,變成2個slider? fixed
01:44:706(x)把這條綠線移到01:44:355 fixed
01:47:871(5)左移一格(grid LV3) fixed

[Mystica's Kaze]
重新snap所有note
AR.OD-1
Circle size+1
00:31:933(2)向右移一格
00:41:308(4)把這slider曲起來
00:45:058(9)用1/6比較好?
01:00:058(5)^
01:19:746(7)間距
01:23:496(3)^
01:27:246(1)^
01:38:261(1)add finish
01:44:121(8)用1/6
01:51:621(x)這裡放轉盤怪怪的..remove之後放個slider在這裡
02;15:761(3)把whistle去掉

[Fuujin Shoujo]
00:27:246(1~3)這個組合我只能._. fix janai ._.
00:55:371(9)new combo fixed
01:11:308(7)^ fixed
01:21:855(3)和(1)對稱 fixed
01:22:792(3)^ fixed
02:47:402(4)和(2)對稱 翅膀向下这还是鸟吗...

最後一個難度沒什麼特別要挑
順便吐糟下只有一個不像easy的easy,完全不顧新手._< 新手我错了! (认罪

IceBeam wrote:

Consider cutting-off MP3 file.

[Tori no Uta]
There're some finishes you missed,I won't point out each one,they're perfectly basic to hear.
Like this:
00:45:996 - You hear a hitsound in the song,eh? Yes,add finish. added finish
01:00:996 - ^ added finish
01:08:496 - ^ added finish
And so on,following this sound up to the end. most of them are fixed

Also,there're some similar hitsounds,however,it's not necessary to add them,but you might:
01:06:621 - Yeah,I see,you have finishes,so you got it.
01:08:027 -

Technically seems fine,just few things:
01:20:214 (2) - I don't like slider shape,it doesn't really fit with the whole mapping style. fixed
01:45:996 (5) - New combo? fixed

[Kaze]
Resnap All Notes
00:44:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - If this diff is normal,you should remap this pattern,reduce spacing,or use some sliders instead,but it shouldn't be that streamy.
01:36:855 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Same.
01:42:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
01:44:105 (8) - It doesn't fit,btw.There're only 2 notes:

01:44:121 - Here.
01:44:589 - And here.
Also,both notes need finishes.
02:47:855 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Yeah.

If this diff works like Hard,you may skip stream suggestions.

[Fuujin]
Nothing major.Good job.

[Forgotten Shoujo]
02:28:886 (1,2,3,4,5) - At first,if it was a pentagon shape,then make it properly.And the second is that spacing between (1) and (2) shouldn't be similar to other.That's not right.

That's it.
Star~

samiljul wrote:

hi o_o/
May i make taiko diff?

mystica wrote:

233 GD基本成型已经可以交给你了 剩下的一些部分你根据mod自己改就可以了>_<

• - 感覺你用default的finish也很好聽了...而且你是依普通finish的下法來處理這個custom finish, 效果不是太好 XD
  - 02:14:824 - .........:D 銀松你又搞什麼

• - OAD比AR高Q_Q? OAD -1~2

• - 大寫M是故意的嗎o.o
  - 果然是大note愛好者 (筆記)

• - 音效方面可以參考我在Easy說的...

• - 稍微overmap了

Pokie wrote:

General

• - 感覺你用default的finish也很好聽了...而且你是依普通finish的下法來處理這個custom finish, 效果不是太好 XD我会适当做修改
  - 02:14:824 - ......... 銀松你又搞什麼 是我用cooledit把这之后到鸟之诗旋律的很长一段全砍掉了

Tori no Uta

• - OAD比AR高Q_Q? OAD -1~2

oad-1
00:15:982, 00:16:099 - 無用綠線, 刪掉o.ofixed
00:25:371 (3) - 好突然的clap...換成whistle比較好聽 fixed
00:26:777 (4,5) - ^ fixed
00:30:996 ~ 嗯..這段開始都24clap了, 我覺得24clap還是留到00:38:496 - 這裡開始比較好些 fixed
00:44:589 ~ 建議副歌段可以換一個custom clap, 比如附件裡的
00:51:621 (4) - finish可以拿掉 fixed
00:53:482 - 這條綠線沒用? 刪掉吧o.o fixed
00:56:308 (5) - 結尾去clap whistle, 換finish? fixed
00:57:714 (1) - 去finish fixed
01:08:027 (1) - 去clap fixed
01:08:496 (2) - 開頭finish可以不用下吧o.o fixed
01:12:246 (1) - 同去finish, 類似這樣spinner接的custom finish 我覺得都可以不用下 XD fixed
01:27:246 (5) - 第五個折返加finish? 只是覺得那邊加上也可以... fixed
01:33:339 - 漏拍o.o? fixed
01:37:089 - ^
01:37:558 - ^, 依照你24下法 這些地方都補note比較好吧... 我觉得这里做个小break也不错啦
01:45:996 (1) - slider開頭少了finish XD? fixed
01:52:558 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 上移一格 fixed
02:00:022 - 無用綠線._. fixed
02:12:246 (1) - 完結在02:14:121 - ? fixed
02:17:835 - 噗...歌完結後出現的綠線._. 刪 fixed



好包

• - 大寫M是故意的嗎o.o 啊拉 pokie老师你就不要特地吐槽大写的"M"了嘛
  - 果然是大note愛好者 (筆記)

00:00:292 (1,2,3) - 類似這樣的3連whistle, 其實whistle只下在(3)這個高音就可以? fixed
00:00:996 - 降低音量至60左右
00:02:167 (1,2,3) - 這裡下在(2) fixed
00:04:042 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed
00:06:152 ~
00:07:089 (3,4) - whistle位置互換 fixed
00:25:839 (2,3,4) - 間距不等 fixed
00:31:933 (2) - 改成1/1拍? fixed
00:43:183 (6) - 建議..finish fixed
00:43:906 - 綠線._. fixed
00:44:121 (1) - 建議finish fixed
00:44:589 (5) - 建議^ fixed
00:45:058 (9) - 加長至00:45:878 - fixed
00:45:781 - 綠線._. fixed
00:45:898 - ^ fixed
00:46:003 - 這裡突然切N音效我...我覺得全首soft比較好...還有13 clap再見 fixed
01:44:121 (8) - ._. ...你這1/8敢短些嗎 ._.
01:45:527 ~ 01:45:878 - 這段1/8音反而最明顯



風神少女

• - 音效方面可以參考我在Easy說的...

套別人一句話...音效很有創造力
雖然我還是覺得soft好聽... 其实这个diff还是我第一次尝试normal音效啦



be forgott

• - 稍微overmap了

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歌很不錯聽, 雖然自己覺得sayuri不適合唱這種 XD

narakucrimson wrote:

This looks quiet ready to me

Saw just minor things, that weren't worth saying the, (I believe)

Here's my star

Hyguys wrote:

Overall
I suggest to you add kiai time here (01:45:996 - 02:49:749)

Easy
00:27:714 Remove whistle and add on slider end fixed
01:26:777 Clap fixed

Overlaps aren't good.

Mistyca's Normal
fine

Hard
fine too

Insane
where's hitsounds on start? lol
01:16:464 clap here and 01:17:402 here fixed
01:19:277 ^ fixed

star

Fight69 wrote:

Hello there o/

[Forgotten Shoujo]

02:45:996 (1) - Add a Finish ? fixed

Nice diff !

[Fuujin Shoujo]

00:27:246 (1,2,3) - Such a weird pattern eh
01:15:996 (1) - Add a finish here ? fixed
01:24:433 - Delete the clap here fixed
01:24:667 (8) - Add a clap ? fixed
02:00:996 (3) - Add a Finish ? fixed
02:47:871 (1) - Add a Finish ? fixed

[Mystica's Kaze]

01:44:121 (8) - New combo fixed

Try to add some finish (the standard one, not the custom hs) like in the diff Tori no Uta

It's a nice mapset !
~Starz'd !

thekillerhjkhjk wrote:

[forgotten shoujo]

fine

[fuujin shoujo]

00:27:714 (3) - move up one square

[mystia's kaze]

fine

[tori no uta]

also fine

-_- almost nothing here. star!

kioukiou wrote:

Lead-in只有在[Mystica's Kaze]有效果,在其他三個難度加上lead-in只是畫蛇添足,建議你關掉其他三個diff的lead-in

[Tori no Uta]

你的StoryBoard都做到 2:49:746了,這個Easy diff怎麼不試著做到同樣的地方結束呢?

試著做到跟其他難度一樣的地方結束?

當然這只是建議,要不要做完按你個人的意願去決定


其他沒有什麼問題可以挑剔

先star.

mystica wrote:

some parts fixed.And add some hitsound.
美观了下部分地方 加了点hitsound
不过总觉得offset有些问题？大概是你换回来音源了.嘛 如果是offset有些错误的话请修正下.

kioukiou wrote:

Bubbled.