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scarlethana
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scarlethana
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年1月20日 at 0:31:26

Artist: Silver Forest
Title: Kaze no Uta
Source: Touhou
Tags: sayuri shameimaru aya air mystica beren
BPM: 128
Filesize: 8232kb
Play Time: 02:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. Forgotten Shoujo (4.92 stars, 417 notes)
  2. Fuujin Shoujo (4.81 stars, 382 notes)
  3. Mystica's Kaze (4.43 stars, 343 notes)
  4. Tori no Uta (2.46 stars, 182 notes)
Download: Silver Forest - Kaze no Uta
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 2nd beatmap.
vocal by sayuri
Last full-submit in 2011.1.20 (Storyboard fix)

Original Theme:
TH 9.5 - Fuujin Shoujo(Theme of Syameimaru Aya)
AIR - Tori no Uta

Thanks for Mystica 's and Beren 's great diffs and Beren's lyrics.

-------> for the guest <-------

❤ Mystica's Kaze by Mystica

❤ Forgotten Shoujo by Beren
Last edited by scarlethana , edited 39 times in total.
Mystica
798 posts
Joined January 2010
Mystica
Just *star*
Beren
962 posts
Joined September 2009
Beren
:)
lkaxel
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Joined November 2009
lkaxel
:)
Mystica
798 posts
Joined January 2010
Mystica
嗯 大体的看了一下说几个问题好了._.嘛 just suggestion
slider最好消音..然后BPM是128.00不要用128.02
要是我的话KIAI用应该是在00：45：893的位置开始 当然你那地方可以二次kiai来瞎眼
如果不是做fullver就可以考虑把后面副歌切掉保证在4MIN或者一下最好嗯
Fuujin的00：58：079 这个snap变的感觉没有什么意义什么的.
bpm和offset应该没什么问题嗯
加油吧><
有可能我会蛋疼做个HARD不知道行不._.
scarlethana
149 posts
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Topic Starter
scarlethana

mystica wrote:

嗯 大体的看了一下说几个问题好了._.嘛 just suggestion
slider最好消音..然后BPM是128.00不要用128.02
要是我的话KIAI用应该是在00：45：893的位置开始 当然你那地方可以二次kiai来瞎眼
如果不是做fullver就可以考虑把后面副歌切掉保证在4MIN或者一下最好嗯
Fuujin的00：58：079 这个snap变的感觉没有什么意义什么的.
bpm和offset应该没什么问题嗯
加油吧><
有可能我会蛋疼做个HARD不知道行不._.
新人问下给slider消音 是怎么做的?

BPM:fixed
KIAI:我本来是一次都不想用的但是如果不用的话又总是有人说你应该至少加一个于是我先扔到一个非主流的地方哦~呵呵呵呵

后面副歌我其实也有切掉的想法但是我不知道自己的水平能不能把两个断面衔接好
一首曲子在2分半到3分钟的样子我自己打起来也是比较舒服的

[Fuujin Shoujo]
如果去掉了vocal的话在58秒的那个位置应该可以听到BGM里面有这样节奏的note所以我考虑先放到这里看看反响如何

话说回来guest diff大欢迎._.
Mystica
798 posts
Joined January 2010
Mystica
done.
放到歌曲文件夹下面 然后timing里面勾上C1就好 具体可以看我GD的timing做法.
嘛 GD做的不是很好越做感觉越卧槽3分拍什么的最讨厌了哼.
我做了2MIN左右如果需要做完的话PM我我再去继续做嗯.
Good Luck~Download: Guest diff And Hitsound.rar
scarlethana
149 posts
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Topic Starter
scarlethana

mystica wrote:

done.
放到歌曲文件夹下面 然后timing里面勾上C1就好 具体可以看我GD的timing做法.
嘛 GD做的不是很好越做感觉越卧槽3分拍什么的最讨厌了哼.
我做了2MIN左右如果需要做完的话PM我我再去继续做嗯.
Good Luck~[attachment=0:c409d]Guest diff And Hitsound.rar[/attachment:c409d]

辛苦了 其实看了这个我反而感到压力很大口牙
满满的全是正义绿线什么的真是最糟糕了

顺便更新了mp3文件 记得重新下一下
用cool edit干掉了2:14:492-3:59:492这整整1分45秒

以前的offset不太准了 先 + 60调调看 (有可能是用cool edit重新生成的mp3导致的)
Last edited by scarlethana , edited 3 times in total.
s349237524
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s349237524
加油 :D
Mystica
798 posts
Joined January 2010
Mystica

scarlethana wrote:

mystica wrote:

done.
放到歌曲文件夹下面 然后timing里面勾上C1就好 具体可以看我GD的timing做法.
嘛 GD做的不是很好越做感觉越卧槽3分拍什么的最讨厌了哼.
我做了2MIN左右如果需要做完的话PM我我再去继续做嗯.
Good Luck~[attachment=0:a7635]Guest diff And Hitsound.rar[/attachment:a7635]

辛苦了 其实看了这个我反而感到压力很大口牙
满满的全是正义绿线什么的真是最糟糕了

顺便更新了mp3文件 记得重新下一下
用cool edit干掉了2:14:492-3:59:492这整整1分45秒

以前的offset不太准了 先 + 60调调看 (有可能是用cool edit重新生成的mp3导致的)
OFFSET 你调完然后resnap all就可以了 还有提醒下最好不要乱改GD的里面各种 一般都是留给GD自己去改.
这样子容易引起人家反感什么的 当然我那个你改了无所谓嗯.....
越看做出来的东西越蛋疼
scarlethana
149 posts
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Topic Starter
scarlethana

mystica wrote:

OFFSET 你调完然后resnap all就可以了 还有提醒下最好不要乱改GD的里面各种 一般都是留给GD自己去改.
这样子容易引起人家反感什么的 当然我那个你改了无所谓嗯.....
越看做出来的东西越蛋疼
你的谱子我改了一点点 把往返条的次数缩短了一些 不然动辄4x 5x 6x的大跳跃一般人受不了
然后稍微修正了一下spacing 就这些 嗯
Sandpig
847 posts
Joined September 2010
Sandpig
hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


原来是这首山寨鸟之诗 lol


Comboburst 高度不要超过550


Fuujin Shoujo

既然是WIP就只看谱了

00:58:147 (5,6,7,8) - 再分开一些?
01:17:835 (1,2,3) - 调整一下,玩的时候堆放很难看
01:23:928 (7) - 做成一个一次往返的slider加一个circle?
01:43:967 (1) - 从白线开始(01:44:085)


Mystica's Kaze

2分14秒结束太突然了，可以往后做到2分50秒那里

00:06:583 (2,3,4) - 不建议这种排列……
00:44:083 (1,2) - 坑爹……spacing, 还有这一串音量太小了
00:59:552 (4) - 音量相比前面太小
01:46:895 (3) - 这个奇怪的哨音哪来的……


Tori no Uta

circle size +1?
clap听起来有点吵

00:14:085 (1) - 这个spinner太短了……新手估计反应不过来……
00:42:210 (1,1) - spinner和后面的note间隔太短
01:57:678 (1,1) - ^


加油 :)
Mystica
798 posts
Joined January 2010
Mystica

shabao_pig wrote:

Mystica's Kaze

2分14秒结束太突然了，可以往后做到2分50秒那里 好吧前面我不知道做多少就按照别的playtime做了2:14 现在做完了

00:06:583 (2,3,4) - 不建议这种排列…… fix 原本不是这种音效
00:44:083 (1,2) - 坑爹……spacing, 还有这一串音量太小了我 (2)消失了卧槽
00:59:552 (4) - 音量相比前面太小 这效果刚刚好 大了听起来难受
01:46:895 (3) - 这个奇怪的哨音哪来的…… 好吧 其实我没听见那声音
好吧 更新了 不知道为什么KIAI没用. 嘛 你继续加油
我控星在4.43了嗯

Download: Silver Forest - Kaze no Uta (scarlethana) [Mystica's Kaze].osu
scarlethana
149 posts
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Topic Starter
scarlethana
我这儿的2个难度也fix完成
关于comboburst图太大的问题回头我会想办法解决下暂时先搁置下

kiai我还是决定先全部diff取消
最后如果一定要加才给bubble或者rank的话再考虑加吧

to mystica:
控你妹的星啊 4.5星不到的曲子我都存活不能 呜呜呜
三分拍很美妙
Dotsu
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Dotsu
~STAR~
scarlethana
149 posts
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Topic Starter
scarlethana

impossiblexu wrote:

~STAR~
xu大 thx~
hikarizero_old
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Joined August 2010
hikarizero_old
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Zelos
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Joined May 2010
Zelos
as requested :3

Your mp3 is 320 kpbs, which is not allowed.
I can re-encode it to 128 kpbs which follows the 192 kpbs rule.
If you want me to, forum pm or irc pm me.

I am a big spacing nazi. i can tell where something is intentional or not.

Tori no uta:

00:15:960 (1,2,3,4) - the spacing between 1 and 2 are different from the spacing between 3 and 4. fix that.

00:19:710 (5) - suggestion: start a new combo here maybe?

00:34:710 (1,2,3) - not quite sure if this is such a big deal but the spacing between notes 1 and 2 are different from 2 and 3.

00:47:835 (1,2,3,4) - spacing changes. fix that.

01:16:897 (3,1,2,3) - spacing changes among these(suggestion maybe) fix

01:44:553 (1,2,3) - spacing changes among these. fix that.

Mystica's kaze:

00:11:505 (1,2,3,4) - make this symmetrical. it would look nicer.

01:19:708 (7,8) - was this spacing un-avoidable? if it was then disreguard this. otherwise try to fix.

01:25:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - why i dont like this. the first 6 half notes are just as close together as the 3 slider whole notes spacing wise.

02:34:005 (4,5) - lower these down one square on the grid.

02:34:474 (6) - lower this down 2

02:45:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - spacing among these change pretty often.

Fuujin Shoujo:

00:23:460 (1,2,3,4) - this sounds like a rather wierd beat. maybe fix this?

01:27:210 (1,1,1) - I SHOULD DEVOUR YOU FOR THIS! you cannot separate spinners an 1/8th apart. separate them at least 1/2 note apart.

01:55:100 (2,3,4,5) - in my opinion, those kinda beats do not play well with this song.

Forgotten Shoujo:

I saw no issues with this. nice job.

I see a lot of potential in this map.

You got my star.

Please kudosu this if you make use of this mod.
scarlethana
149 posts
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Topic Starter
scarlethana

Zelos wrote:

as requested :3

Your mp3 is 320 kpbs, which is not allowed.
I can re-encode it to 128 kpbs which follows the 192 kpbs rule.
If you want me to, forum pm or irc pm me.

I am a big spacing nazi. i can tell where something is intentional or not.

Tori no uta:

00:15:960 (1,2,3,4) - the spacing between 1 and 2 are different from the spacing between 3 and 4. fix that. fixed

00:19:710 (5) - suggestion: start a new combo here maybe? fixed

00:34:710 (1,2,3) - not quite sure if this is such a big deal but the spacing between notes 1 and 2 are different from 2 and 3. fixed

00:47:835 (1,2,3,4) - spacing changes. fix that. fixed

01:16:897 (3,1,2,3) - spacing changes among these(suggestion maybe) fix fixed

01:44:553 (1,2,3) - spacing changes among these. fix that. fixed

Mystica's kaze:

00:11:505 (1,2,3,4) - make this symmetrical. it would look nicer.

01:19:708 (7,8) - was this spacing un-avoidable? if it was then disreguard this. otherwise try to fix.

01:25:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - why i dont like this. the first 6 half notes are just as close together as the 3 slider whole notes spacing wise.

02:34:005 (4,5) - lower these down one square on the grid.

02:34:474 (6) - lower this down 2

02:45:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - spacing among these change pretty often.

Fuujin Shoujo:

00:23:460 (1,2,3,4) - this sounds like a rather wierd beat. maybe fix this? fixed

01:27:210 (1,1,1) - I SHOULD DEVOUR YOU FOR THIS! you cannot separate spinners an 1/8th apart. separate them at least 1/2 note apart. i don't think so and there're similar spinners in some ranked beatmaps

01:55:100 (2,3,4,5) - in my opinion, those kinda beats do not play well with this song. fixed

Forgotten Shoujo:

I saw no issues with this. nice job.

I see a lot of potential in this map.

You got my star.

Please kudosu this if you make use of this mod.
thanks for your modding

and you deserve to earn a kds~
Cuuuuri
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Cuuuuri
I feel the best offset 982
good map! Star★
scarlethana
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Topic Starter
scarlethana

Qrool wrote:

I feel the best offset 982
good map! Star★
yeah you're right

thank you!

and also thanks for your star
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
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wmfchris
Air ?!?!

[Forgotten Shoujo]
0:18:303 (2) try x:389 y:304?
0:23:928 (2) last slider fixed point adjust to x:328 y:168
0:26:272 (4,5) (4) up 1 grid, (5) right+up 1 grid
0:27:913 (7,8) spacing
0:38:225 (!,3) no need to 1/8?
1:06:819 (4,7) down 1 grid?
1:23:225 (2) right 1 grid
2:41:506 (4,5) right 1 grid

[Fuujin]
0:26:506 (2) left 1 grid
1:27:210 (s,s,s) I'm not sure but these spinners are too short.
1:36:350 (4,1) adjust the direction of slider so that it fits the stream spacing
2:35:413 (2) x:268:y:296?

nice song, star~
scarlethana
149 posts
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Topic Starter
scarlethana

wmfchris wrote:

Air ?!?!

[Forgotten Shoujo]
0:18:303 (2) try x:389 y:304? fixed
0:23:928 (2) last slider fixed point adjust to x:328 y:168 fixed
0:26:272 (4,5) (4) up 1 grid, (5) right+up 1 grid fixed
0:27:913 (7,8) spacing fixed
0:38:225 (!,3) no need to 1/8? i'll ask be forgott for detail
1:06:819 (4,7) down 1 grid? fixed
1:23:225 (2) right 1 grid fixed
2:41:506 (4,5) right 1 grid fixed

[Fuujin]
0:26:506 (2) left 1 grid fixed
1:27:210 (s,s,s) I'm not sure but these spinners are too short. i think it's a bit short but still acceptable
1:36:350 (4,1) adjust the direction of slider so that it fits the stream spacing fixed
2:35:413 (2) x:268:y:296? fixed

nice song, star~
thx for wmf's modding and starring

air的歌词填到风神少女的曲子里面并没有违和感不是么 ;)
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
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wmfchris
很和諧無誤啊~
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
Hi~

[General]
offset:980,长白线处是重音的说~

[Tori no Uta]
Combo - 因为是EASY的难度,所以combo尽量规律,一般为8拍一个new combo.
00:25:357 (3) ~ 00:41:763 (6) - 按照前面的(在第三跟白线处加whistle)下hitsound?其余部分在第二根白线和第四根白线处加clap?
00:45:982 ~ 01:14:107 - KIAI time?
01:45:982 ~ 02:14:575 - ^

[Mystica]
音效下的不错,就是整体音量偏大了点.
00:43:168 (1) - 太短了,用note代替?
01:24:886 - 加一个note?
01:30:042 - ^
02:24:300 - ^
02:31:800 - ^
02:39:300 - ^
00:45:982 ~ 01:14:107 - KIAI time?
01:45:982 ~ 02:14:575 - ^
Combo mod~
SPOILER
00:47:855 (7,1) - 交换new combo?
00:49:730 (6) - New combo?
00:53:480 (4) - ^
00:54:887 (1) - 去掉new combo?
00:55:355 (3) - New combo?
00:59:105 (3) - ^
01:02:855 (5) - ^
01:06:605 (5) - ^
01:10:355 (5) - ^
01:19:730 (7) - ^
01:27:230 (7) - ^
01:30:512 (1,2) - 交换new combo?
01:38:246 (1,2) - ^
01:42:230 (5,1) - ^
01:43:168 (7,1) - ^
01:53:480 (4) - New combo?
02:06:605 (3) - ^
[Fuujin Shoujo]
音量大了些,clap显得吵
New combo尽量设在长白线处
00:42:232 (1) - 在00:44:107这里结束?
02:17:388 - 加一个note?
02:47:857 (1) - 在02:49:732这里结束?
00:45:982 ~ 01:14:107 - KIAI time?
01:45:982 ~ 02:14:575 - ^

[Forgotten]
像00:29:575这样的空白处都可以填上,note的密度大些会增加图的可玩度.
适量添加hitsound.
02:44:575 - 加一个note?
02:45:044 - 加一个note?
02:45:278 (1) - 移至02:45:982?
02:45:513 - 加一个note?
00:45:982 ~ 01:14:107 - KIAI time?
01:45:982 ~ 02:14:575 - ^

STAR~!
scarlethana
149 posts
Joined November 2009
Topic Starter
scarlethana

kino77 wrote:

Hi~

[General]
offset:980,长白线处是重音的说~

[Tori no Uta]
Combo - 因为是EASY的难度,所以combo尽量规律,一般为8拍一个new combo.
00:25:357 (3) ~ 00:41:763 (6) - 按照前面的(在第三跟白线处加whistle)下hitsound?其余部分在第二根白线和第四根白线处加clap?
00:45:982 ~ 01:14:107 - KIAI time?
01:45:982 ~ 02:14:575 - ^

[Mystica]
音效下的不错,就是整体音量偏大了点.
00:43:168 (1) - 太短了,用note代替?
01:24:886 - 加一个note?
01:30:042 - ^
02:24:300 - ^
02:31:800 - ^
02:39:300 - ^
00:45:982 ~ 01:14:107 - KIAI time?
01:45:982 ~ 02:14:575 - ^
Combo mod~
SPOILER
00:47:855 (7,1) - 交换new combo?
00:49:730 (6) - New combo?
00:53:480 (4) - ^
00:54:887 (1) - 去掉new combo?
00:55:355 (3) - New combo?
00:59:105 (3) - ^
01:02:855 (5) - ^
01:06:605 (5) - ^
01:10:355 (5) - ^
01:19:730 (7) - ^
01:27:230 (7) - ^
01:30:512 (1,2) - 交换new combo?
01:38:246 (1,2) - ^
01:42:230 (5,1) - ^
01:43:168 (7,1) - ^
01:53:480 (4) - New combo?
02:06:605 (3) - ^
[Fuujin Shoujo]
音量大了些,clap显得吵
New combo尽量设在长白线处
00:42:232 (1) - 在00:44:107这里结束?
02:17:388 - 加一个note?
02:47:857 (1) - 在02:49:732这里结束?
00:45:982 ~ 01:14:107 - KIAI time?
01:45:982 ~ 02:14:575 - ^

[Forgotten]
像00:29:575这样的空白处都可以填上,note的密度大些会增加图的可玩度.
适量添加hitsound.
02:44:575 - 加一个note?
02:45:044 - 加一个note?
02:45:278 (1) - 移至02:45:982?
02:45:513 - 加一个note?
00:45:982 ~ 01:14:107 - KIAI time?
01:45:982 ~ 02:14:575 - ^

STAR~!
非常感谢kino的mod~
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Hijiri Tezuka
Orz I can't mod this! It's poerfect.
scarlethana
149 posts
Joined November 2009
Topic Starter
scarlethana

Hijiri Tezuka wrote:

Orz I can't mod this! It's poerfect.

thank you all the same ;)

for your star
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
Make sure the offset is the same on every difficulty then resnap all notes

Tori no Uta:
Looks good

Mystica's Kaze:
Odd to have very low hp and high OD and AR but ok? Maybe raise hp slightly and lower other ones
00:07:777 (6,1) - switch new combo
00:43:168 (1) - seeing as this is a "Hard" kind of short
00:45:043 (9,1) - decrease jump slightly as its after a long slider?
01:00:043 (8,1) - ^
01:44:105 (8,1) - ^

Fuujin Shoujo:
Beginning could use slightly more hitsounds
01:27:232 (1,1,1) - kind of mean
02:01:919 (5) - sliders like this that are silenced around the map sound odd, they don't need it?
02:38:950 (2,3) - slight spacing error?

Forgotten Shoujo:
Add hitsounds
01:31:897 (4) - hidden repeat, move it somehow

Nicely done
*star*
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