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https://osu.ppy.sh/s/440885)
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[General]
> Custom color is not necessary.
[Kantan]
> Kantan 1.79*... Maybe it should be slightly nerfed.
> 00:20:212 (22) - delete as you using 1/2 at previous notes, you should provide enough break for beginner player.
> 00:27:212 (34) - same as above.
> 00:31:612 (4) - can be deleted as you mainly follow the vocal(?), you can ignore this beat in kantan.
> 00:38:412 (10) - a sudden kat appeared, you should not using this note as this is the calmest part of this song.
> 00:46:612 (20) - Unnecessary note here, I know you're following vocal(?), but it is too hard in Kantan. For another way, you can remove 00:46:412 (19) - if you really want to follow vocal. Maybe if you remove 00:46:612, you can move 00:47:212 to 1/2 ticks before (00:47:012)
> 00:53:012 (33) - same as above, if applied,move 00:53:612 (34) to 1/2 ticks before. If not, you can remove 00:52:812 (32) - for vocal.
> 01:02:412 (49) - same as previous situation, Or 01:02:612 (50) - for vocal
> 01:05:612 (56) - same, Or 01:05:812 (57) - for vocal.
> 01:08:812 (63) - Repeat again. Or 01:09:012 (64) - for vocal.
> 01:26:212 (6) - delete, too hard for beginner or this 01:25:812 (5) - .
>> Can be improved more, but most of the notes is appropriate and well placed.
[Ayy's Futsuu]
> Nice difficulties, well done.
> 00:19:811 (31) - I suggest you to remove this because you're repeating the pattern before, you place this note will confuse player.
> 00:23:411 (43) - Can be deleted, not necessary note, following the vocal will be better.
> 00:26:211 (50) - Same as (31) if you applied.
> 00:29:811 (62) - Same as (43) if you applied.
> 00:30:411 (63,64) - Ctrl+G with these note, the pitch of "hola" is same, and you should remove (63), thats mean remove (63) and change (64) to kat
> 00:32:611 (69) - Start from here, it should be a calm part, you should reduce the notes density. Here is some example:
> 00:33:011 (71) - Remove because you use 00:34:211 (73,74,75) - d k d here.
> 00:35:211 (76) - can be Remove as you didn't place a note before.
> 00:39:011 (86) - can be moved to 00:39:411 for vocal
> Nice structured Futsuu kiai, but a thing to remind you:
> 00:58:311 (146) - 1/4? Not suggested, I suggest you to move like this
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6299177> 01:26:611 (231) - Can be removed.
[Ayy's Muzukashii]
> I've checked the mapset and here is no big problems and it is nice to play.
[Oni]
> Clean oni! Nice job!
> 00:18:012 (52,53,54) - kkd seems better because you use 00:11:812 (21,22,23) - here.
> 00:42:012 (155,156,157) - you use D D K in Kantan, but why you use K K K here.
> 00:45:212 (162) - K will be better, the pitch is different(higher) than 00:45:012 (161) - .
> 00:46:412 (168,169,170) - kkd seems better as the reason before.
> 00:58:312 (238) - suddenly a following bg music note here, maybe remove for break too?
> 00:59:012 (241,242,243,244,245) - I don't think it is ddddk, maybe more complex notes?
> 01:26:812 - placing a don here, missing a note.
>> Nice and clean work! (*´∀`)~♥
Edit: Combined the new post into one.