Let's see what can I do. Mod requested by Ari bb.
[Kantan]
[Kantan]
- 00:23:212 - I don't know if you're following the vocal, but this note sounds better here 00:23:412 - imo. You can ignore this dw.
- 00:29:612 - ^
- 00:49:612 - I would move this to 00:49:812 - because the vocal accentuates more here.
- 00:56:012 - Consider doing the same thing here.
- 00:39:012 - This note sounds better as d since it's the beginning of the vocal. Just my opinion tho.
- 00:50:612 - Consider removing this since the song supports it, and since you have a lot of 1/2.
- 00:54:612 - ^
- 00:55:812 - ^ This pattern is too long, I strongly suggest deleting this one.
- 00:57:812 - ^
- 01:02:212 - ^ as before, this is too long.
- 01:03:812 - ^ and change 01:03:612 - to d so it fits better.
- 01:10:612 - ^
- 01:13:812 - ^
- 01:19:812 - ^
- 00:46:312 - I don't think this fits, there is no sound to justify where it is right now. The vocal is here 00:46:212 - so move it there and change 00:46:412 - to make it fit better.
- 00:53:912 - I think deleting this triplet will be the best for the gap. You have a lot of triplets already and this one is not needed imo.
- 01:00:712 - Same here, nothing really strong to support the triplet. You can also change 01:00:612 - to k.
- 01:05:512 - I hear nothing here, so it would be best if you deleted this note.
- 01:12:512 - Same as before, the sound doesn't ask for a triplet here. To not make the 1/2 boring, I would suggest you do k k d from here 01:13:212 -
- 01:16:112 - ^
- 01:18:112 - Nothing to justify this triplet imo.
- 00:06:812 - I honestly think k ddd d will sound better. You can decide whether to ignore this or not.
- 00:10:012 - ^
- 00:13:212 - I think kdd k ddd sounds better as it fits the music and the background vocals imo. Might just be me tho.
- 00:16:412 - ^
- 00:21:212 - kkd fits more as it accentuates more the vocal.
- 00:27:612 - ^
- 00:38:212 - You can add a k here for the bass.
- 00:46:712 - This note is not needed imo. Muzu has triplets and stuff but it's really simple, so I just suggest to delete this note for gap purposes.
- 00:52:812 - In my opinion k k d ddk follows better the vocals, what you have here sounds weird imo.
- 00:57:612 - I would do ddddk since I know why the k is at the end, but the drum sounds are the same.
- 01:09:112 - I think you can delete this triplet to make the gap between Oni and Muzu not so big, plus, I think it sounds better without this note.
- 01:16:712 - Same here, this note is not needed imo.
- 01:22:812 - This 5plet should not be here, but it should be at 01:23:212 - as kkkkd, following the drums correctly.
- 01:24:012 - This triplet does not fit with what you mapped before. Move this note 01:24:112 - here 01:23:912 -
- 01:26:712 - There's still one drum here, why not adding a d?