2 weeks late lol also rip my headphones
also slider track override is not consistent through the diffs.
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unused hitsound: soft-sliderslide.wav
you can enable epilepsy warning since the sb contains few strobes.
[sb]
unused files (probably):
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[akitoshi's normal]
00:10:922 (3) - blanket.
00:53:704 (5) - nc for better readability and remove the nc from 00:54:226 (1) - .
nice diff
[joker-'s hard]
00:43:531 (2) - would prefer to use just a regular 1/4 offbeat slider since that one with repeat doesn't fit pretty well imo.
00:45:878 (2) - tbh, having this slider as an 1/4 slider and adding a note on 00:46:139 - would work with the instruments much better than before tbh.
00:46:661 (4) - it kinda disturbs me to see that 1/4 tick which is the strongest is not clickable. you can replace this 1/4 offbeat slider with two notes instead in order to make that stronger 1/4 tick clickable.
00:47:183 (6,1) - this rhythm sounds pretty weird imo. moreover, that 1/4 tick is pretty stronger and it needs more emphasis and (6)'s tail doesn't not evem give enough emphasis. try this rhythm for instance http://puu.sh/ukPIP/6ef4391d3f.jpg. (1) is supposed to start from that 1/4 tick to make the stronger vocal more noticeable and (6)- can be only a note so this rhythm would work pretty well imo.
00:47:965 (2) - having a rhythm like this would work pretty well because having (4)'s tail on that stronger 1/4 tick you will make the vocals more noticeable imo. http://puu.sh/ukQDi/8c6a0ec72d.jpg
00:50:444 (3,4,5) - to make the both vocal and instruments more noticeable, doing a rhythm like this one http://puu.sh/ukR9C/56de40b712.jpg would work much better because you'll give more emphasis to that 1/4 tick which is pretty stronger.
pretty nice diff but the rhythms in kiais needs to be improved tbh.
[insane]
00:05:183 (3,4) - idk why the spacing of this pattern is more higher in comparison with 00:03:096 (3,4) -. the snares are the same at the both patterns: they're not really stronger so consider lowering a bit the spacing here.
00:23:965 (3,4) - tbh, this doesn't flow pretty well if you see how the cursor's movement looks a bit weird. just ctrl+g (4) and then move it to 80|292 for instance to get a better flow but don't forget to fix the spacing between 00:24:226 (4) - and 00:24:487 (1) - afterwards!
00:45:357 (1,2) - i think this is the only 1/4 stack in this whole diff if i'm not wrong so maybe unstack (2) from (1)'s tail just to avoid any confuse?
00:46:270 - that 1/4 tick is pretty louder and the vocal tho which makes me kinda sad to not see it clickable which would have given more emphasis. just move the end of 00:46:009 (4) - to 00:46:139 - and then put on that 1/4 tick an note to make that tick clickable and giving more emphasis to the vocal.
00:46:661 (2,3) - the spacing between 00:46:400 (1) - and 00:46:661 (2) - is kinda equal but between these sliders idk why the spacing became more and more bigger. maybe make the spacing lower as you did for 00:46:400 (1) - and 00:46:661 (2) -? because (3)- makes part of 00:46:400 (1) - and 00:46:661 (2) - pattern tbh.
00:47:444 (1) - the nc shouldn't be here because i don't see any new stanza here tbh. it should be on 00:47:313 (5) - instead.
00:50:444 (1) - if you listen carefully the vocals you'll need two 1/4 sliders instead of a 2/4 offbeat slider which slightly ignores the vocals and the instruments tho. having a rhythm like this https://puu.sh/ul5ML/30e2a24e24.jpg would work pretty well with both the instruments and vocal and it won't ignore the vocal anymore.
00:58:791 (1,2) - better get rid of this 1/2 stack as you did for 01:00:878 (1,2) - .
01:03:617 (3,4) - pretty weird to see that you used big spacing where the snares are not stronger enough. i would suggest to make the spacing more lower since here's stronger to give more emphasis and more build-up effect.
[koiyuki's extra]
00:00:617 (2,3,4,5) - on the triplets, the drums are more dominant than the drum from 00:00:617 (2) - which is not kinda pretty louder tbh so that's why having the spacing between (2) and the triplets more lower than (1) and (2) so consider making the jumps between the triplets and (2)- bigger in order to give more emphasis to the dominant drums.
00:02:444 (3,1) - suggest to swap the ncs here since the new stanza is on 00:02:444 (3) -.
00:04:531 (3) - same^
00:41:183 (1,2,1,2) - the instruments are not really stronger here so better avoid doing screen jumping which does not even fit the music's pace here. same goes for 00:42:748 (1,2,3,4) -.
00:52:531 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - i know that you wanted to make this pattern gimmicky but don't you think it could confuse the player? it took me few times to get used with this pattern to be honest plus because of low stack leniency it could trick some players because of its readability so better find another way to make a pattern which should be more readable imo.
[my angel azusa]
can't find anything here. a pretty funny diff to play tbh.
that's all for now. a good map nothing else to say but pay more attention on rhythm in higher diffs.
good luck!
edit: no kudosu please.
also slider track override is not consistent through the diffs.
[general]
unused hitsound: soft-sliderslide.wav
you can enable epilepsy warning since the sb contains few strobes.
[sb]
unused files (probably):
SB\button\0069.png
SB\button\006b.png
SB\button\0070.png
SB\button\0073.png
SB\lyrics\_000.png
SB\lyrics\_001.png
SB\lyrics\_002.png
SB\lyrics\_003.png
SB\lyrics\_004.png
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SB\lyrics\_00a.png
SB\lyrics\_00b.png
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SB\lyrics\_00e.png
SB\lyrics\glow\_000.png
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SB\lyrics\glow\_008.png
SB\lyrics\glow\_009.png
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SB\lyrics\glow\_00b.png
SB\lyrics\glow\_00c.png
SB\lyrics\glow\_00d.png
SB\lyrics\glow\_00e.png
[akitoshi's normal]
00:10:922 (3) - blanket.
00:53:704 (5) - nc for better readability and remove the nc from 00:54:226 (1) - .
nice diff
[joker-'s hard]
00:43:531 (2) - would prefer to use just a regular 1/4 offbeat slider since that one with repeat doesn't fit pretty well imo.
00:45:878 (2) - tbh, having this slider as an 1/4 slider and adding a note on 00:46:139 - would work with the instruments much better than before tbh.
00:46:661 (4) - it kinda disturbs me to see that 1/4 tick which is the strongest is not clickable. you can replace this 1/4 offbeat slider with two notes instead in order to make that stronger 1/4 tick clickable.
00:47:183 (6,1) - this rhythm sounds pretty weird imo. moreover, that 1/4 tick is pretty stronger and it needs more emphasis and (6)'s tail doesn't not evem give enough emphasis. try this rhythm for instance http://puu.sh/ukPIP/6ef4391d3f.jpg. (1) is supposed to start from that 1/4 tick to make the stronger vocal more noticeable and (6)- can be only a note so this rhythm would work pretty well imo.
00:47:965 (2) - having a rhythm like this would work pretty well because having (4)'s tail on that stronger 1/4 tick you will make the vocals more noticeable imo. http://puu.sh/ukQDi/8c6a0ec72d.jpg
00:50:444 (3,4,5) - to make the both vocal and instruments more noticeable, doing a rhythm like this one http://puu.sh/ukR9C/56de40b712.jpg would work much better because you'll give more emphasis to that 1/4 tick which is pretty stronger.
pretty nice diff but the rhythms in kiais needs to be improved tbh.
[insane]
00:05:183 (3,4) - idk why the spacing of this pattern is more higher in comparison with 00:03:096 (3,4) -. the snares are the same at the both patterns: they're not really stronger so consider lowering a bit the spacing here.
00:23:965 (3,4) - tbh, this doesn't flow pretty well if you see how the cursor's movement looks a bit weird. just ctrl+g (4) and then move it to 80|292 for instance to get a better flow but don't forget to fix the spacing between 00:24:226 (4) - and 00:24:487 (1) - afterwards!
00:45:357 (1,2) - i think this is the only 1/4 stack in this whole diff if i'm not wrong so maybe unstack (2) from (1)'s tail just to avoid any confuse?
00:46:270 - that 1/4 tick is pretty louder and the vocal tho which makes me kinda sad to not see it clickable which would have given more emphasis. just move the end of 00:46:009 (4) - to 00:46:139 - and then put on that 1/4 tick an note to make that tick clickable and giving more emphasis to the vocal.
00:46:661 (2,3) - the spacing between 00:46:400 (1) - and 00:46:661 (2) - is kinda equal but between these sliders idk why the spacing became more and more bigger. maybe make the spacing lower as you did for 00:46:400 (1) - and 00:46:661 (2) -? because (3)- makes part of 00:46:400 (1) - and 00:46:661 (2) - pattern tbh.
00:47:444 (1) - the nc shouldn't be here because i don't see any new stanza here tbh. it should be on 00:47:313 (5) - instead.
00:50:444 (1) - if you listen carefully the vocals you'll need two 1/4 sliders instead of a 2/4 offbeat slider which slightly ignores the vocals and the instruments tho. having a rhythm like this https://puu.sh/ul5ML/30e2a24e24.jpg would work pretty well with both the instruments and vocal and it won't ignore the vocal anymore.
00:58:791 (1,2) - better get rid of this 1/2 stack as you did for 01:00:878 (1,2) - .
01:03:617 (3,4) - pretty weird to see that you used big spacing where the snares are not stronger enough. i would suggest to make the spacing more lower since here's stronger to give more emphasis and more build-up effect.
[koiyuki's extra]
00:00:617 (2,3,4,5) - on the triplets, the drums are more dominant than the drum from 00:00:617 (2) - which is not kinda pretty louder tbh so that's why having the spacing between (2) and the triplets more lower than (1) and (2) so consider making the jumps between the triplets and (2)- bigger in order to give more emphasis to the dominant drums.
00:02:444 (3,1) - suggest to swap the ncs here since the new stanza is on 00:02:444 (3) -.
00:04:531 (3) - same^
00:41:183 (1,2,1,2) - the instruments are not really stronger here so better avoid doing screen jumping which does not even fit the music's pace here. same goes for 00:42:748 (1,2,3,4) -.
00:52:531 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - i know that you wanted to make this pattern gimmicky but don't you think it could confuse the player? it took me few times to get used with this pattern to be honest plus because of low stack leniency it could trick some players because of its readability so better find another way to make a pattern which should be more readable imo.
[my angel azusa]
your diff's name is related to sahuang's new username so consider changing it to 'Joy' for instance.Ranking Criteria wrote:
A difficulty's name must indicate its level of difficulty, with the exception of the hardest level of difficulty in a set. The mapset's hardest difficulty may use an appropriate custom difficulty name, unrelated to a username. Mapsets may also use a complete set of custom difficulty names that clearly indicate their level of difficulty to the player. Marathon maps with a single difficulty may use free naming.
can't find anything here. a pretty funny diff to play tbh.
that's all for now. a good map nothing else to say but pay more attention on rhythm in higher diffs.
good luck!
edit: no kudosu please.