SadKangaroo wrote:

[Normal]
00:39:737 (1) - Make some similar timing sections with different voume.And increase it step by step. ok!!
[Hard]
01:13:679 (3,4) - Stack with slider. fixed

orioncomet wrote:

Sorry for really delay modding T-T my exam just over.

just some suggestions about hitsound

[Easy]
00:19:165 (1) - add sound finish

[Normal]
00:18:480 (5) - add sound finish at begin of silder and end of silder

[Hard]
00:18:480 (1,3) - add sound finish ~

[Teras' Insane]
- why different preview point >_<?

other thing seem fine.. >A< star

H-boy wrote:

star~

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi banvi ~

General;
- Use another BG for Teras' Insane ??
- Umm, when you use normal whistles, I think they're too loud and I can't listen very well to the song ...

Easy;
- 00:06:298 (4,5,6) >> add whistle to (4,6), remove whistle from (5)
- 00:09:990 >> silence this spinner end or silence the whole spinner ??
- 00:34:080 >> add whistle
- 01:16:422 (4-1) >> remove clap from (4) and add finish OR add finish to (1)
- 01:22:594 (1,2) >> add whistle ??
- 01:22:080 >> kiai time ends here ON ALL DIFF. Check kiai time on all diff.

Normal;
- 00:09:990 >> silence this spinner end or silence the whole spinner ??
- 00:50:194 >> add a note with whistle no...
- 01:28:765 >> remove whistle

Hard;
- The only thing I didn't like are the claps in the short sliders are the start of the song, is a very quiet start but the clap sounds are too much for it.

Teras' Insane;
- 00:04:683 >> remove whistle from the body of the slider, just add it on the start and end of it.
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KLong977 wrote:

No offence to however suggested this, but:

[Hard]
00:29:841 (12) I'm not a huge fan of the finish here, I feel like a clap might be more appropriate here. Just a suggestion.

Great map! You got a star!

James2250 wrote:

Put 2 second lead-in time
Audio sounds slightly loud on kiai, lower it by a tick or 2

Easy:
Use claps on kiai time, not whistles (sounds better to me) for 01:05:794 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)
Same for 01:17:108 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ (you don't need to remove all whistles, just make the one every 2 white ticks be a clap
00:27:394 (4) - nazi: could be slightly more symmetrical
01:16:422 (4) - add clap
01:19:508 (5) - extend to red tick

Normal:
01:20:708 (4,5,6,7,8) - this sounds odd when all the notes before this have followed the music (white ticks) and this switches to red...I would map this part on white ticks ummm.I tried but I wanna keep this.
01:28:080 (1) - I would prefer if this note was more centered for a Normal

Hard:
Raise hp so it is higher than Normal?
00:09:298 - add another small slider here like the others
00:39:737 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - use timing sections like on Normal to make this gradually get louder?
01:11:280 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - add some hitsounds here

Teras' Insane:
Start of the map sounds slightly empty, add some more whistles?
00:37:337 (7,1) - anti jump doesn't feel good

Looks pretty nice
*star*

James2250 wrote:

Teras' Insane:
Start of the map sounds slightly empty, add some more whistles? Nah, I'm bad with normal whistles gah.
00:37:337 (7,1) - anti jump doesn't feel good Fixed, I think it should be better now..I mapped this a "long" time ago so I don't really like the map too much. But dah, fixed this atleast and added one or two notes to some empty places.

Looks pretty nice

Sakura Hana wrote:

1st Offset -6 ms done
2nd Offset -16ms done
Some tags would be nice done
I'm not sure, does the BPM really have that much of a jump? by soradg123
Remove audo from the video to reduce filesize. removed audio

[Normal]
01:20:708 (4) - Why not align this slider start with (2)? fixed

Fix and i'll bubble

Alace wrote:

Second offset:+12ms and resnap all notes

<Normal+Hard+Insane>
Use BPM 65 for the first offset and remove the green line

Larto wrote:

Easy:
Make the first BPM 65 instead of 130. You can easily change that, as you don't even have sliders in that part.

Fix and I rank. This map is really good, when it's ranked, I might even nominate it for the next charts!