haitai hai hai hai
[Normal]
00:07:378 (7378|1,7619|2,7860|0) - I recommend the pattern to be 3-1-2, mainly because this is where the music transitioned itself into new section at 00:07:860 - to kiai, it just feels really awkward having 00:07:137 (7137|3,7378|1,7619|2,7860|0) - having the almost same pattern as 00:07:860 (7860|0,8101|2,8342|1,8463|3) - , differentiate them would be intuitively better imo.
00:10:872 - Is there any reason the col 4 be made empty here? since it get noticeably really inbalanced with 00:10:872 (10872|1,10993|0,11475|1,11716|0,12198|1,12439|0) - even in my first try.. I suggest move 00:11:234 (11234|2,11475|1,11595|2) - to the right 1x? it should alleviate the biases.
00:17:981 (17981|1,18222|2) - moving to col 4 and col 2 should follow PR better.
00:20:872 (20872|2,20993|1) - I prefer switch column between these notes, these way, you got the reverse stairs of 00:21:957 - which give a better flow imo.
[Hard]
00:08:463 (8463|2,8583|1,8583|3,8704|2,8704|0) - the pattern somehow awkwardly flow towards 00:08:824 - because of col 3 stack i think.. move 00:08:463 (8463|2) - to col 4, and then Ctrl+H 00:08:583 (8583|3,8583|1,8704|0,8704|2) - should make it flow better imo.
00:11:354 - I think this snare should be double if seeing how you doubling the weaker sound at 00:10:631 -
00:15:210 - feels like too repetitive from 00:14:728 - , I think you can arrange it a bit so it has different impression from the previous stairs for this continuous snare stream, like
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/756286500:22:318 - tbh, i know the jack want to follow the rule consequence of after the double having 2 jack, but i still think from here, you can follow jack for every same instrument of deep drum / snare sound instead of the current one, i mean something like
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/756290000:26:656 (26656|1,26776|2) - i think you can jack these for the same deep drum sound.. similar like how you jack other clap sound at 00:28:824 (28824|1,28945|1) -
[Insane]
00:07:047 (7047|1,7107|3) - I listen this a couple of time, but don't really find things that justify that 1/8.. the thing that's noticeable for me is the 1/4, and it is also noticeably a lot calmer compared with 00:06:896 - , the notes should be deleted here.. if you need to rearrange, i suggest
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7562990 , this should be comfortable.
00:12:680 - 00:12:921 - should be single if following how you mapped at 00:09:065 - 00:09:306 -
00:13:162 -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7563017 a bit suggestion to make it a lot more comfortable to hit..
00:23:282 - somehow i always miss here even after i comboing the previous jack and svs.. i will assume it's because of 00:23:282 (23282|2,23403|3,23403|2,23523|3,23643|2,23764|3,23764|2) - thingy... i suggest
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7563045 ..
call me if you've done..