Lasse wrote:

quick recheck then

02:06:448 - since you silenced other similar slidertails this should be too - Ah true, Fixed!
03:52:908 (3) - would add nc so 03:52:567 (1,2) - fits better with how you comboed he 1-2s before - Fixed!

Doyak wrote:

It's good too see a huge improvements overall. After fixing these, you can call the previous BNs to rebubble.

@Lasse, Azusa: There may be some more minor flaws I missed so hope you would take a look at the whole map once more before you renominate.

Pentori wrote:

very long irc

16:30 Pentori: can we irc?
16:30 Ambient: sure thang
16:31 Pentori: 00:01:419 (2) - should probably add clap here too, for the snare. and every other measure had claps here 00:02:783 (2) -
16:31 Pentori: u'll have to make the timing point S:C1 to get the custom clap
16:31 Pentori: 00:03:465 (7,8,9,10) - drums are quite prominent in the music so adding whistles would help with feedback
16:31 Pentori: 00:08:919 (4,5,6,7) - ^
16:31 Pentori: 00:10:965 (3) - clap
16:32 Pentori: 00:11:817 (8) - clap
16:33 Pentori: you might want to add a clap to 00:11:902 (9) - as well since its a triplet
16:33 Pentori: 00:14:374 (7,8,9,10) - and yeah whistles n stuff would be good here
16:34 Ambient: yuppo, all fixed
16:34 Pentori: 00:19:573 (4,5,6,7,8) - whistles
16:35 Pentori: 00:20:169 (1) - would look nicer if the bend was centred
16:36 Pentori: try ctrl shift s
16:36 Pentori: and scale by 1.1x
16:37 Ambient: fixxx
16:40 Pentori: 00:45:908 (1) - i think it'd be a lot nicer if you kept using those finishes here for the guitar
16:40 Pentori: like the ones used to stress 00:44:715 (1,2,3)
16:40 Pentori: so, on 00:45:908 - 00:46:590 - 00:47:101
16:41 Ambient: okie gotcha
16:41 Pentori: and yeah same for stuff like 00:48:635 (1) - 00:49:317 (1) - 00:49:829 (2)
16:42 Pentori: there are cymbal crashes in the music to support this kinda thing
16:42 Pentori: 00:48:806 - 00:48:891 (2,3,4,5,6) - whistles
16:43 Ambient: aight
16:43 Ambient: added hs that follows later on
16:43 Ambient: up till mophs part
16:43 Pentori: cool
16:43 Pentori: 00:51:022 (4) - should be clap?
16:43 Pentori: 00:51:533 - ^
16:44 Pentori: 00:54:772 -
16:44 Ambient: fixx
16:44 Pentori: did you hitsound mophs parts too?
16:45 Ambient: yep
16:45 Pentori: so i guess he wouldn't mind if you changed a few hitsounds for his parts
16:45 Pentori: 00:58:010 (4) - clap
16:47 Pentori: 01:30:397 (4,5,6,7) - the hitsound patterning here is whistle clap whistle clap
16:47 Pentori: try that instead
16:47 Pentori: 01:31:079 - dont need the clap here
16:48 Pentori: 01:32:272 (5) - clap
16:48 Pentori: 01:32:783 (4) -
16:48 Pentori: 01:33:294 (2,4) - i dont think you need the whistles here, claps work just fine since there are only snares
16:48 Pentori: 01:32:442 (1) - remove clap
16:49 Ambient: donezo
16:50 Pentori: 01:35:851 (3) - 01:37:215 (3) - see if you can remove the whistles when u see stuff like this
16:50 Pentori: the snare is much more dominant
16:51 Pentori: 01:37:726 (6,7) - claps
16:51 Pentori: 01:38:067 (2) - should be clap not whistle
16:51 Pentori: 01:38:238 (3) - ^
16:52 Pentori: 01:38:919 (3) - whistle instead of clap for kick drum
16:52 Pentori: 01:49:317 (3) - clap instead of whistle
16:53 Pentori: 01:49:488 (1,2,3,4) - the only clap here is on (3)
16:53 Pentori: you can make 01:49:658 (2,4) - whistles
16:53 Pentori: also add finish to 01:49:829 (3) - for cymbal crash
16:54 Pentori: actuallyyy.. eh
16:54 Ambient: fix^^
16:54 Pentori: the claps seemed to fit lol
16:54 Pentori: you can make 01:49:488 (1,2,3,4) - all claps
16:54 Pentori: but keep a finish on 01:49:829 (3) - to differentiate it
16:54 Ambient: :<<<<<<
16:55 Pentori: up 2 you
16:55 Ambient: reverted back
16:55 Ambient: plus finish
16:56 Ambient: wow hitsounding a chore lol
16:56 Ambient: soz
16:57 Pentori: lol
16:57 Pentori: no worries
16:58 Pentori: 02:09:772 (5,6,1,2,3) - hmm this doesnt seem right
16:59 Ambient: yeah ive had heaps of discussion over this
17:00 Pentori: having the strong clap on the reverse doesnt seem right 02:09:772 (5) -
17:00 Pentori: just trying to see what rhythm works
17:01 Ambient: mmm
17:04 Ambient: how about i make 02:09:772 (5) - 2 circles instead?
17:04 Ambient: http://puu.sh/uuPqQ/72be8a8944.jpg like that
17:05 Ambient: since you cant realllyyyyy mess up hitting 02:10:198 (7) -
17:06 Pentori: try something like http://puu.sh/uuPvm/d9e2693e81.jpg
17:07 Pentori: where 6 and 7 overlapped like before
17:07 Ambient: yup i gotchu
17:08 Pentori: 02:10:624 (1,2,3) - is also a bit confusing
17:09 Pentori: because the drum is on 02:10:709 -
17:09 Pentori: yet its clicked early 02:10:624
17:09 Ambient: http://puu.sh/uuPD3/39b495b3ac.jpg perhaps?
17:10 Pentori: oh yea that works
17:10 Pentori: and with 02:11:135 (4,5) -
17:10 Pentori: you should try make 02:11:306 - clickable
17:11 Pentori: since it sounds like it's grouped with 02:11:476 (5)
17:11 Pentori: maybe just use the 1/2 http://puu.sh/uuPHq/b6afaa116e.jpg
17:12 Pentori: if you wanted you could make it a triplet by mapping 02:11:221 - as well
17:14 Ambient: alrighty made it a 1/2 with the triple also
17:15 Pentori: 02:18:806 (1,2) - stacking might not be the best idea, since 02:19:147 (2) - is a clap
17:15 Pentori: 02:19:658 (5) - clap
17:16 Pentori: 02:20:681 - 02:21:022 - claps
17:16 Pentori: 02:20:851 - no clap here
17:16 Pentori: in fact, it might be worthwhile to ctrl g the rhythm here 02:20:851 (4,1) -
17:17 Pentori: so that the stronger beat is clicked
17:17 Ambient: okie will do
17:17 Pentori: 02:21:533 (3) - clap
17:18 Ambient: wew fixed
17:18 Pentori: 02:30:579 - no clap here
17:19 Pentori: 02:39:954 - the volume here is really low, u should raise it
17:20 Pentori: clap is on 02:40:380 - not 02:40:295 (4)
17:20 Pentori: dont need the whistle on (4) either
17:20 Pentori: 02:40:891 (9,1) - remove clap on (1) add clap on (9)
17:21 Pentori: 03:01:771 (2) - clap
17:22 Pentori: 03:05:351 (7) - clap
17:22 Pentori: 03:05:180 (6) - finish seems a bit random
17:23 Pentori: 03:05:521 - remove clap
17:23 Pentori: 03:05:692 - remove finish
17:23 Pentori: 03:05:862 (2) - clap
17:23 Pentori: 03:06:374 - clap
17:23 Pentori: 03:07:737 (4) - ^
17:23 Pentori: 03:07:908 (5) - dont need clap here
17:24 Pentori: 03:08:078 (6) - clap
17:24 Pentori: hmmm
17:24 Ambient: goodlord
17:24 Pentori: do you think you're getting the hang of it?
17:24 Pentori: cos like theres a lot more
17:25 Pentori: if you have effect volume turned down to 0%
17:25 Ambient: yeeaaah im sure i can manage
17:25 Pentori: kk
17:25 Pentori: see what you can do, and let me know when ur ready
17:25 Pentori: in the mean time i'll write up a mod for moph's part
17:27 Ambient: sure thing
17:31 Ambient: ok i think im good to go
17:32 Pentori: update i'll take a look
17:32 Ambient: http://puu.sh/uuQwI/90f547a8cf.txt
17:34 Pentori: 00:51:192 (5) - i probably missed this the first time
17:34 Pentori: should remove clap
17:35 Ambient: woops fixed
17:35 Pentori: 01:31:079 - remove clap
17:36 Pentori: 01:32:272 (5) - clap
17:36 Pentori: 01:32:783 (4) - clap instead of whsitle
17:37 Pentori: 02:11:306 (5) - clap
17:38 Pentori: 02:20:340 (3,4,5) - doesnt flow all that well, maybe place 4 around x158 y340
17:39 Pentori: actually this rhythm still kinda bugs me lel
17:39 Ambient: (
17:40 Pentori: 02:19:488 (4) - remove clap keep whistle
17:44 Pentori: aaa
17:44 Pentori: i cant come up with anything that suits your previous rhythms
17:44 Pentori: so maybe you can try something
17:44 Pentori: but the issue here
17:45 Pentori: is that the claps end up on all different objects
17:45 Pentori: so emphasis is everywhere
17:45 Pentori: eg. 02:20:340 (3) - the beat that it's clicked on is really weak
17:45 Pentori: this beat gets skipped 02:20:510 -
17:46 Pentori: and then it finishes on a really strong snare 02:20:681
17:46 Ambient: yeah i see whatchu mean
17:46 Ambient: i'll figure something out
17:47 Ambient: if you wanna continue go ahead, i'll work on this
17:47 Pentori: alright
17:47 Pentori: you can refer to what moph did maybe? 01:33:124 (1,2,3,4) - is a similar case
17:47 Ambient: mmm oiie
17:47 Ambient: okie
17:48 Pentori: 02:30:408 (2) - clap
17:49 Pentori: 02:52:055 (2) - clap
17:49 Pentori: 03:01:942 - dont think this needs any hitsounds
17:50 Pentori: keeping the finish is alright
17:50 Pentori: 03:02:453 - remove hitsounds
17:50 Pentori: 03:02:624 - clap
17:51 Pentori: 03:05:521 - remove clap
17:52 Pentori: 03:06:544 - ^
17:53 Pentori: 03:35:010 (4) - clap instead of w
17:53 Pentori: 03:35:862 (3) - clap finish
17:54 Pentori: 03:37:737 (4,5) - clap on 5 not 4
17:54 Pentori: 03:40:465 (4,5) - ^
17:55 Pentori: 03:44:896 (1) - clap on tail not head
17:56 Pentori: 03:58:021 (1,2) - whistles instead of claps
17:56 Ambient: ok im happy with what i got, i'll show you once we're done
17:56 Pentori: 03:58:533 (4) - remove clap
17:56 Pentori: alright
17:58 Pentori: 04:33:732 (6) - i dont think u need this note, since u normally had 5 note streams into downbeats
17:58 Pentori: its not supported by the music either
17:58 Pentori: 04:33:817 (7,8,9,10) - 04:39:271 (5,6,7,8) - and u should add whistles to these stuff
17:58 Ambient: oo ok
18:00 Pentori: 04:44:726 (1,2,3,4) - 04:49:840 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - whistles
18:00 Ambient: ahead of ya
18:00 Pentori: xd
18:00 Pentori: you might have to tweak the volumes a bit
18:01 Pentori: 04:49:840 - here
18:01 Ambient: tad lower?
18:01 Pentori: yeah, maybe 55 - 50
18:02 Ambient: done
18:03 Pentori: 04:53:249 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - how come the density suddenly lowers?
18:04 Ambient: thats....thats a good question
18:04 Pentori: lol
18:04 Pentori: the music sounds the same as other sections so yea
18:04 Pentori: i think you should fill up the rhythms a bit more
18:04 Ambient: well its following the drums
18:04 Ambient: and the drums died down
18:04 Ambient: but yeah i got nothing
18:05 Ambient: rip
18:05 Pentori: :p
18:06 Pentori: since u mapped 04:55:976 - with high intensity i think its better to have consistent densities
18:09 Ambient: okkkkkk done
18:09 Ambient: http://puu.sh/uuRVC/a14000f9eb.txt
18:12 Pentori: why does the tilde in the title look corrupted
18:12 Pentori: is that actually the sign used in the title??
18:12 Ambient: yup
18:12 Ambient: according to lasse
18:13 Pentori: shouldn't it be the same tilde as the one in the source
18:13 Pentori: like this ～
18:13 Ambient: t/496364/start=30
18:13 Pentori: isnt that the source?
18:14 Ambient: yup
18:14 Pentori: http://puu.sh/uuS5K/82bcf753df.png
18:14 Pentori: just worried cos that
18:14 Pentori: ~ looks weird
18:15 Pentori: lasse gave you source
18:15 Ambient: uhh what do
18:15 Pentori: i'm looking for title
18:16 Pentori: oh wait
18:16 Pentori: alright nvm all g
18:16 Pentori: found it
18:16 Ambient: phew
18:16 Pentori: lOL
18:17 Ambient: dont scare me like that
18:17 Pentori: well you had confirmation from kwan
18:17 Pentori: you could've just shown me that 8)
18:17 Ambient: o
18:18 Ambient: oh...
18:18 Ambient: (
18:18 Ambient: i forgot that was there
18:18 Ambient: :^)
18:22 Pentori: 05:02:112 (2,3,4) - add claps here?
18:22 Pentori: only on slider head
18:22 Ambient: yis
18:23 Ambient: dddone
18:23 Pentori: actually yeah might be worthwhile to have a clap on slider end too 05:02:368
18:24 Ambient: o m g
18:24 Pentori: and then remove the clap here 00:50:851 (3) -

in summary we fixed a lot of hitsounds, addressed some rhythms and added metronome resets to the section at 02:22:568 - since the downbeats were all over the place

[Moph]
02:32:793 (6,2) - found it really hard to read 02:33:134 (2) - since a lot of the slider was concealed by 02:32:793 (6) . probably better to avoid these reading hazards
02:57:338 (1,2,3,4) - felt quite awkward to suddenly map to the guitar here, previously you had things spaced to emphasise the claps 02:54:269 (4) - 02:55:292 (4,6) - so i reckon you should do the same with 02:57:508 (2)
03:02:962 (3) - 03:03:474 (1) - would be better to have the whistle/finish/clap on 03:02:792 (1) - and 03:03:303 (7) - instead as they are the emphasised beats in the music

thats all

My Angel Azusa wrote:

#2

Ambient wrote:

BUBBLES FOR DAYS

Metaku wrote:

Gratz!

Had waited for this