1|2|3|4
That's all! nice map!
NM
00:15:844 (15844|2) - move to 4, looks better
00:31:376 (31376|2) - should be on 1 imo
00:35:312 (35312|0,35472|1) - should be on same column, preferably 1
00:52:387 (52387|2,52546|3,52706|2) - into 432?
01:02:121 (62121|3) - this is mapped to vocal, something you don't on this diff. Do a single.
01:08:504 (68504|0) - this is only 1/2 length, also add the crash chord
01:39:461 - missed a note?
00:31:376 (31376|2) - should be on 1 imo
00:35:312 (35312|0,35472|1) - should be on same column, preferably 1
00:52:387 (52387|2,52546|3,52706|2) - into 432?
01:02:121 (62121|3) - this is mapped to vocal, something you don't on this diff. Do a single.
01:08:504 (68504|0) - this is only 1/2 length, also add the crash chord
01:39:461 - missed a note?
HD
00:14:807 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4162601 I feel that this is better.
00:20:312 - add 1 and 00:20:472 (20472|0,20551|1) - ctrl+J. Anyway, the double should be in that place.
00:30:844 (30844|0,30924|1,31004|0,31083|1) - well I also would make a two-handed trill here, it's up to you
00:42:014 (42014|1) - to 4, too much stuff on left hand
00:49:355 - you forgot a chord sir
00:49:993 - ^
00:50:791 (50791|3) - this is a short note
01:02:121 (62121|0) - hm don't know, you map things to vocal on the hardest diff but here's the same problem as NM
01:08:504 (68504|0) - this is only 1/2 length, add a note on crash to make a triple
01:13:929 (73929|1) - to 4?
01:17:440 - add 4
01:19:355 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4162601 try this, due to repeated [34] chord which is inconsistent.
01:22:865 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4162686 maybe this? the [34]212[34] is a strange combination.
01:25:738 - add 1
01:26:376 - add 1 and 01:26:535 (86535|2,86615|1,86695|2,86695|3) - into 32[34]
00:20:312 - add 1 and 00:20:472 (20472|0,20551|1) - ctrl+J. Anyway, the double should be in that place.
00:30:844 (30844|0,30924|1,31004|0,31083|1) - well I also would make a two-handed trill here, it's up to you
00:42:014 (42014|1) - to 4, too much stuff on left hand
00:49:355 - you forgot a chord sir
00:49:993 - ^
00:50:791 (50791|3) - this is a short note
01:02:121 (62121|0) - hm don't know, you map things to vocal on the hardest diff but here's the same problem as NM
01:08:504 (68504|0) - this is only 1/2 length, add a note on crash to make a triple
01:13:929 (73929|1) - to 4?
01:17:440 - add 4
01:19:355 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4162601 try this, due to repeated [34] chord which is inconsistent.
01:22:865 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4162686 maybe this? the [34]212[34] is a strange combination.
01:25:738 - add 1
01:26:376 - add 1 and 01:26:535 (86535|2,86615|1,86695|2,86695|3) - into 32[34]
Cirno's Hot Spring
nice sv
00:21:589 (21589|0,21589|3) - I would see this a 1/4 LN.
00:22:546 (22546|1) - I would delete one of there to introduce 3-chord at 00:22:865 - .
00:31:376 (31376|3,31376|2) - doing this on the same hand as two other chords would make it cool
01:00:764 (60764|0,60764|3,60844|1,61004|0,61004|3) - [12]4[12]?
01:08:504 (68504|0,68504|3,68823|2,68823|1) - same as in HD
01:19:195 (79195|2) - move to 2, avoid anchors
01:22:865 - suggesting this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4162740
01:25:738 - add 1
01:26:376 (86376|2) - suggest either removing the LN, or add LN everywhere earlier with that sound.
01:27:014 (87014|0,87094|1,87174|0,87254|1,87333|2,87333|3) - ctrl+H, and place all 2-chords on the same hand, OR move 01:27:546 (87546|0,87546|1) - to [34]. Either works.
01:28:610 - map 1/4s here please
01:39:461 - missed a chord
00:21:589 (21589|0,21589|3) - I would see this a 1/4 LN.
00:22:546 (22546|1) - I would delete one of there to introduce 3-chord at 00:22:865 - .
00:31:376 (31376|3,31376|2) - doing this on the same hand as two other chords would make it cool
01:00:764 (60764|0,60764|3,60844|1,61004|0,61004|3) - [12]4[12]?
01:08:504 (68504|0,68504|3,68823|2,68823|1) - same as in HD
01:19:195 (79195|2) - move to 2, avoid anchors
01:22:865 - suggesting this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4162740
01:25:738 - add 1
01:26:376 (86376|2) - suggest either removing the LN, or add LN everywhere earlier with that sound.
01:27:014 (87014|0,87094|1,87174|0,87254|1,87333|2,87333|3) - ctrl+H, and place all 2-chords on the same hand, OR move 01:27:546 (87546|0,87546|1) - to [34]. Either works.
01:28:610 - map 1/4s here please
01:39:461 - missed a chord
That's all! nice map!