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Myxo

osu! Alumni

Joined December 2012

Myxo 2017-02-04T17:22:18+00:00

Hobbes2 wrote:
- Desp's Normal -

00:13:473 (1,3) - the sharp curve on the wave sliders doesn't really make this look nice, looks like its trying to be a blanket but it isn't one. That being said, this isn't inherently a problem necessarily so feel free to not do anything. Just mentioning in case you can come up with a good fix for it. hmm yeah but changing the shape would make it out of place in the map and they don't follow directly after each other so it should be fine

00:27:460 (1,2,3) - I think you should match the curve formed by these three objects with 00:29:768 (4,5,6). I think its weird going from curved to straight like that. yep fixed

00:36:114 (4,5) - This blanket can be improved, the tail is closer to 4 then the rest of the slider tried

00:38:422 (1,2) - I don't really like this, it's meh flow (which isn't a problem on its own) combined with bigger spacing making this pretty challenging for the player. 00:41:306 (1,2,3) - Same for these, I think these would be fine if you lowered the spacing a bit. umm i don't think the flow is meh at all o: also the spacing is slightly higher to keep the visual distances consistent

00:51:760 (1,2) - I get what you're trying to do but this isn't really the same as a normal stack. A player can read a normal stack but I don't think they can read this. An osu! stack is 4 pixes left/right and 4 pixels up/down, this is much more than that and I'm not sure the player is ready to be able to read this. newbies treat osu! stacks as gimmicks similar to this thing, actually, as long as i don't mix both up it should be fine to read (also 4 pixels or a bit more doesn't really make a difference)

00:58:960 (1,2) - On the flipside I'm actually not sure about this one. I think it's fine but I might be wrong.

01:09:760 (1,2,3) - Same points I mentioned above, I think you should to a normal osu stack.

01:10:360 (3,1) - This overlap is kinda weird, would rather you just seperate these objects fixed

MrSergio wrote:
Desp:
- nothing much actually, just that manual stack that might be a bit confusing but I'm not sure myself since I can read it properly lol (reference: 00:51:760 (1,2) - ) as i explained to hobbes, it should be fine to read

Thanks a lot! :3

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Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Mao 2017-02-05T12:22:36+00:00

Andrea

Andrea wrote:
~Collab Easy~
01:20:860 (2,3,4) - I kinda dislike that the (3) goes almost in the same place where (1) is, you could do this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7061445 Flows better and (3) isn't too close on where (1) is. But that's not even visible ingame o:

Hobbes

Hobbes2 wrote:
- Hard -
01:26:917 - I don't think this is necessary. I know there's a sound there, but the lack of circle also fits because the trumpet or w/e that is stops I did this for the buildup

Sergio

MrSergio wrote:
Hard:
- 01:34:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'm not sure why this last part is all with 1/2 sliders tho, I mean, you kept using the trumpet (not sure that's the right instrument) for the whole map and ignoring the pauses at 01:34:417 - and at 01:36:148 - feels a bit strange imo (ignore in this case means "you map them although they should be blank") But in this part these "ghostly strings" kinda stick out much more and I followed them all the way in this section with 01:28:936 (4) - and 01:30:667 (1,2,3,4,1) - . In this case these ""strings" land on all the white ticks and are kinda held hence I used 1/2 sliders.

Easy:
- Mao: 00:48:806 (2,3) - minor, but I would use a slider instead for consistency with the rest I made this circle heavy on intention to contrast the long slider afterwards.

Everything not mentioned was fixed. Also @Bakari the sliders at the end all play kinda same as the distances make no big differences, it's more about the movement.
Thanks guys owo/

ZekeyHache

3,316 posts

Joined October 2009

ZekeyHache 2017-02-06T01:28:04+00:00

Well, my stuff was just remapping my shitmapping into something less shitty, I hope it's good enough this time~
@Mao Feel free to insert breaks between my sliders or add/remove ncs as you wish in case you find it necessary~

Shitmapping 2.0 by ezek

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Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Mao 2017-02-06T01:35:13+00:00

Updated! I have removed all breaks between the sliders in Easy because well, adding one between 00:54:160 (1,1) - is not possible without editing it manually :/

Seijiro

osu! Alumni

3,438 posts

Joined April 2013

Seijiro 2017-02-08T10:56:28+00:00

yeah, the new part feels way better now and breaks are not needed imo, considering the low AR
Bul~

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Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Mao 2017-02-08T11:32:56+00:00

Thank you <3

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,060 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2017-02-09T13:58:01+00:00

Yo.

[Collab Easy]

00:23:999 - concurrent volume levels here. Please make the values equal or remove the green line.
00:34:383 (1) - any reason for this to be a single object combo? Given that it's the only one in the difficulty it does stand out quite a lot.
01:37:590 (1,1) - even though the spinner does not require much reading skill placing it so soon after the previous the previous object may suprise beginners a little. Besides, it does not actually start on anything, so just starting it 1/4 earlier and removing the circle would make a lot more sense.

[Hard]

00:16:436 (10,1,2) - given that this is the first time a jump gets introduced I would lower the DS to make it more distinguishable from 1/1 spacings. Given that it's built around symmetry and 00:15:251 (7,8) - were 1/1 apart this could get a bit confusing.
00:32:364 (5) - shouldn't it be of the same length as 00:30:633 (11) - since they follow similar things?

Fix the lines and I'll rebub.

ZekeyHache

3,316 posts

Joined October 2009

ZekeyHache 2017-02-09T17:36:18+00:00

Everything was applied~
I wasn't the one who set the lines so it was Mao's fault I guess ?) I fixed that too anyway~

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495,243,43614,2,0,P|501:184|485:124,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
398,44,44768,5,4,0:0:0:0:
325,147,45345,2,0,B|302:182|302:222|302:222|302:262,1,120,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,373,46499,1,4,0:0:0:0:
209,262,47075,2,0,B|209:222|209:222|209:182|187:147,1,120,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,84,48229,5,4,0:0:0:0:
193,21,48806,1,2,0:0:0:0:
319,21,49383,1,4,0:0:0:0:
428,83,49960,2,0,B|435:126|397:163|355:162|352:159|349:156|307:154|268:192|276:235,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,336,51760,1,4,0:3:0:0:
104,184,54160,6,0,B|160:172|204:144|176:48|176:48|256:120|336:48|336:48|308:144|352:172|404:184,1,540
296,360,58960,6,0,B|296:300|296:300|336:300|336:300|352:252|316:204|256:188|196:204|160:252|176:300|176:300|216:300|216:300|216:360,1,480,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,32,63760,6,0,B|216:88|216:88|156:128|168:232|256:257|344:232|356:128|296:88|296:88|368:32,1,540,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,192,69760,5,4,0:0:0:0:
320,304,70360,2,0,P|368:312|408:304,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,292,72160,1,0,3:0:0:0:
72,192,72760,1,0,3:0:0:0:
194,168,73360,5,4,0:0:0:0:
259,268,73936,2,0,P|323:291|378:281,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
451,192,75090,1,4,0:3:0:0:
373,100,75667,2,0,P|314:93|259:116,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,233,76821,6,0,B|207:268|153:268|125:236|125:233|125:228|96:197|43:197|18:233,1,240,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
63,344,78552,1,4,0:3:0:0:
182,355,79129,2,0,P|238:349|293:315,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,201,80283,5,4,0:3:0:0:
364,152,80860,2,0,B|364:96|364:96|364:56|341:37,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,124,82013,1,4,0:3:0:0:
170,37,82590,2,0,B|148:56|148:96|148:96|148:152,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,272,83744,5,4,0:3:0:0:
212,372,84321,2,0,B|236:360|256:332|256:332|276:360|300:372,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,264,85475,2,0,P|256:203|160:264,1,240,4|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,356,87206,5,4,0:0:0:0:
28,252,87783,1,2,0:0:0:0:
28,132,88360,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,28,88936,2,0,L|324:28,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,80,90667,6,0,P|444:136|432:196,2,120,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,140,92398,2,0,P|316:196|328:256,1,120,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,324,93552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,356,94129,6,0,B|256:377|256:377|200:356,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,268,95283,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,180,95860,2,0,B|256:159|256:159|312:180,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,97590,12,4,99423,0:0:0:0:

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Mao

Elite Mapper II

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Mao 2017-02-10T18:25:22+00:00

Fixed everything but the spinner, talked about that one to Bakari ingame. o/

riffy

osu! Alumni

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Joined December 2010

riffy 2017-02-10T18:42:43+00:00

Looks good to go.

Rebubbled.

Mao

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Mao 2017-02-10T18:43:45+00:00

Thanks <3

ZekeyHache

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ZekeyHache 2017-02-11T21:19:29+00:00

~~*insert MrSergio's qualification post below*~~
Ay Bonsy, now I don't look cool :'c

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Bonsai

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Joined July 2011

Bonsai 2017-02-11T21:30:56+00:00

ezek wrote:
*insert MrSergio's qualification post below*

DENIED >:D

I have one quick thing I mentioned to Mao privately but it seems like he didn't notice it, so before this is qualified I'd like to post it here again:
In the highest diff, I find the shape 00:22:257 (1) bad for two reasons: 1) In my opinion, the 'smoothness' of this slider doesn't match what's going on in the song at all, which is the piano playing a lot of notes wildly and quickly; and 2) It's the exact same shape as 00:54:160 (1,1) which are mapped to something completely different, a single long note, which is very fitting there, but it's easily noticable that that's just the same shape reused. -> I'd suggest to come up with a different shape for the spot where this slidershape is used for the first time

We chatted some more about hitsounding and stuff, here's some points that are changeworthy

Raise volume of all 10%- and 20%-sections by 5% bc it's audible but not really having an effect rn
00:48:662 - You forgot to make this slidertail quieter
01:01:360 - Raise volume of this note already since it's the same intensity as the next note

Mao

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Mao 2017-02-16T13:44:34+00:00

Applied everything o/

Stefan

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Stefan 2017-02-16T13:50:10+00:00